Strategi Menulis Artikel Jurnal
Internasional Bereputasi
Untuk Meraih Guru Besar
Semarang, 27 Juni 2020•
Prof. Dr. Rudi Hartono, S.S., M.Pd.
•
Tasikmalaya, September 7, 1969
•
S-1 (English Linguistics-UNPAD Bandung)
•
S-2 (English Education-UPI Bandung)
•
S-3 (Linguistics: Translation Studies-UNS Surakarta)
•
English Lecturer of UNNES Semarang
•
Translation Analyst & Textbook Writer
•
Mobile Phone: 082137054727
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E-mail:
Intention Professorship Rank Research Results PREWRITING DRAFTING REVISING 1 EDITING 1 SUBMITTING PROOFREADING JOURNAL EDITOR REVISING/EDITING 2 PUBLISHING Published Rejected Accepted Plagiarism Checking Journal Article
Strategi Menulis Artikel Jurnal
q PREWRITING
ü Menyiapkan hasil penelitian (Jika artikelnya research-based). q DRAFTING
ü Mengeksekusi hasil penelitian menjadi article draft.
q REVISING 1
ü Menyempurnakan article draft dari kelemahan content. q EDITING 1
ü Memperbaiki kesalahan tata bahasa, tata kalimat, kosakata/istilah, ejaan, tanda baca, gaya selingkung, dll. Kasus-kasus writing mechanism, plagiarism checking (<25-30%).
q SUBMITTING
ü Menentukan jurnal yang akan dituju (Indexer, Open Access, berbayar, Predator, Expired?).
q REVISING 2
üMemperbaiki isi berdasarkan saran journal reviewer(s) atau editor(s) setelah ada feedback(s) dari mereka.
q EDITING 2
ü Memperbaiki tata tulis berdasarkan feedback(s) dari reviewer(s) atau editor(s).
q RESUBMITTING
ü Accepted atau jika major or minor revision kembali Revising & Editing.
q PUBLISHING
PREWRITING
u
Menyiapkan hasil penelitian (Jika artikelnya
research-based
)
u
Membaca sejumlah referensi terkait dengan topik
draft
u
Diskusi dengan teman sejawat, pakar, peneliti dalam
bidang terkait
u
Mewawancarai para tokoh dan narasumber terkait
bidang kajian
u
Searching, browsing information related to our
topics
DRAFTING
u
Mengeksekusi hasil penelitian menjadi
draft
artikel
uMelihat
Guideline Submission for Authors
pada menu
jurnal yang dituju (Pastikan jurnal internasional
bereputasi (Web of Science/Scopus) dengan SJR jurnal di
atas 0,15 atau Q2 dengan SJR jurnal 0,10 atau memiliki
JIF WoS di atas 0,05. (Lihat PO PAK 2019)
u
Menulis draft sesuai dengan gaya selingkung jurnal yang
dituju (lihat article template yang sudah disediakan oleh
jurnal yang bersangkutan)
u
Alternatif 1: Ketik naskah dalam bahasa Indonesia,
terjemahkan sendiri dengan menggunakan mesin
penerjemah (misalnya
Google Translate + Grammarly
App).
u
Alternatif 2: Ketik naskah dalam bahasa Indonesia, kirim
REVISING 1
u
Menyempurnakan
draft
dari beberapa kelemahan
content
uMelihat kembali kesesuaian isi draft dengan topik.
u
Memperkuat isi draft dengan data dan fakta
u
Menguatkan dan mengaitkan isi draft dengan memperkaya
rujukan dari penelitian-penelitian sebelumnya (
Previous
studies
) dan konsep dasar berupa pendapat beberapa pakar
terkait (
theoretical foundations/reviews
)
u
Melakukan
Proofreading
dan
peer-checking
u
Mengecek kemiripan naskah dan kepatutan (
Plagiarism
Checking
) dengan menggunakan mesin pendeteksi plagiasi
(
Plagiarism Checker
), misalnya:
Unplad, WriteCheck,
Copyscape, Duplichecker, PlagScan, Viper anti-plagiarism
scanner, PlagTracker, Unicheck, PlagiarismChecker.com,
Quetext, Turnitin,
dll.
EDITING 1
u
Memperbaiki beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa,
tata kalimat, paragraf, ketelitian data dan fakta,
ejaan, tanda baca, dll. Yang bersifat mekanik
u
Mengecek kembali naskah artikel agar sesuai
dengan cara mengutip dan menulis daftar
rujukan sesuai gaya selingkung jurnal yang
dituju, misalnya menggunakan format terbaru
APA, MLA, Harvard
, dll.
u
Melakukan kutipan tidak langsung dengan cara
membuat parafrase (
paraphrasing
)
u
Mengedit naskah misalnya dengan
Grammarly
SUBMITTING
u
Menentukan jurnal yang akan dituju. Perhatikan
pengindeks (
Indexe
r), Gaya selingkung
(
Submission Guidelines for Authors
),
Open
Access
atau tidak, Berbayar atau
Free
,
Predator
,
Cancelled, Discontinued
?).
u
Lihat daftar jurnal internasional terindeks yang
diakui Kemdikbud per Mei 2020
(
https://nazroel.id/2020/05/29/daftar-jurnal-
internasional-dari-indonesia-terindeks-scopus-per-mei-2020/)
u
Lihat dan telusuri pada laman
https://www.scimagojr.com/journalrank.php?cou
ntry=ID
dan unduh datanya (pada sisi kanan).
REVISING/EDITING 2
u
Merevisi atau mengedit naskah dari
reviewer jurnal jika diterima dengan
minor
atau
major revision
u
Ikuti semua dan kalau bisa tidak komplain
atau membantah. Lakukan saja perbaikan
sesuai saran-saran reviewer(s)
u
Minor revision
: hal-hal kecil-kecil seperti
pemilihan kata, penulisn tabel)
u
Major revision
: mempertanyakan
results
and discussion
, atau menyarankan
penelitian lanjutan sebelum dipublikasikan)
u
Melakukan cek kemiripan terhadap
revised
draft
sebelum
resubmitting
PROSES REVIEW
PUBLISHING
u
Jika artikel kita
ACCEPTED
, maka artikel kita dimuat dan
dipublikasi pada jurnal yang dituju.
u
Open Access (OA)
literature is digital, online, free of
charge, and free of most copyright and licensing
restrictions”(Suber (2012, p. 4)
u
1.
Green OA: Open Access
yang hanya sebatas repository
perpustakaan PT.
u
2.
Gold OA: Open Access
yang memberikan kebebasan
untuk mengakses artikel-artikel yang terdapat pada
database yang melakukan
Open Access
.
u
3.
Hybrid OA: Open Access
yang dilakukan dengan
melanggan suatu jurnal dengan mengeluarkan biaya dan
pelanggan jurnal memberikan akses yang bebas kepada
siapa saja yang ingin menggunakan jurnal tersebut.
Lembaga Pengindeks Jurnal
Internasional Bereputasi
u
Portal Garuda, ISJD
u
Google Scholar (h-index, i-10 index)
u
EBSCO, Gale, ProQuest, CABI
u
Directory of Open Access Journal (DOAJ)
u
Cambridge Scientific Abstract (CSA), Inspec, Pubmed,
Chemical Abstract Services (CAS)
u
Elsevier Products: SCOPUS
, Compendex, Engineering Village,
Reaxys, EnCompassLit, EmbaseImpact Factor (SJR, SNIP)
u
Thomson Reuters
/
Web of Science
Impact Factor (IF)
u
Others: Index Copernicus, CiteULike, Mendeley, Open J-Gate,
Parameter Global Untuk
Mengukur Reputasi Jurnal Ilmiah
1. Impact Factor (Thomson Reuters)
2. Scimago Journal Rank (SJR)
3. Source Normalized Impact per Paper (SNIP)
(Scimago, SCOPUS)
4. H-index (SCIMAGO, SCOPUS, Google Scholar)
5. i10-index (Google Scholar)
Infact Factor (IF)
u Impact factor adalah salah satu cara untuk mengevaluasi kualitas jurnal
yang dilakukan oleh The Institute of Scientific Information (ISI) Journal Citation Reports (JCR).
u Contoh: Impact Factor 2020 adalah sitasi dalam 2020 pada artikel yang
dipublikasi pada 2018 dan 2019 dibagi dengan jumlah artikel yang dipublikasi pada 2018 dan 2019. Angka yang dihasilkan tersebut dapat dipandang sebagai jumlah sitasi rata-rata yang diterima artikel per tahun dalam dua tahun setelah tahun publikasi.
u Cara menghitung:
Sitasi pada 2020 terhadap artikel yang dipublikasi pada: 2019 = 258
2018 = 199 Jumlah = 457
Jumlah artikel yang dipublikasi pada: 2019 = 116
2018 = 71 Jumlah = 187
Scientific Journal Rankings (SJR)
SJR
adalah perangkingan jurnal yang menjelaskan jumlah
kutipan yang diterima oleh jurnal dan prestise jurnal dari
mana kutipan tersebut berasal. Melalui SJR, field subject,
kualitas dan reputasi jurnal memiliki efek langsung pada
nilai sitasi sebuah journal. SCIMAGO Journal and Country
Rank (SJR) adalah alternatif untuk melihat Impact Factor
(IF) sebuah jurnal. Seperti halnya IF, SJR menjadi dasar
perhitungan dari database
SCOPUS
di setiap jurnalnya
dengan perangkingan berdasarkan sistem kuartil (
Q1-Q4
).
q
Q1 menunjukkan 75-100% dari distribusi IF,
q
Q2 untuk posisi tengah-tinggi (antara 50% dan 75%),
qQ3 menengah ke posisi teratas (25% ke 50%), dan
qQ4 posisi terendah (kurang dari 25% distribusi IF)
H-Index
H-Index
merupakan indeks untuk mengukur baik
produktivitas maupun dampak dari karya terbitan seorang
ilmuwan. Seorang ilmuan dengan
indeks-h
telah menerbitkan
h
makalah yang masing masing telah dikutip oleh publikasi
lain setidaknya
h
kali. Jadi,
indeks-
h mencerminkan jumlah
publikasi dan jumlah kutipan per publikasi.
q
H-Indeks 1 = ada 1 paper yang disitasi minimal satu kali
qH-Indeks 2 = ada 2 paper yang disitasi minimal dua kali
qH-Indeks 3 = ada 3 paper yang disitasi minimal tiga kali
qH-Indeks 4 = ada 4 paper yang disitasi minimal empat kali
qH-Indeks 5 = ada 5 paper yang disitasi minimal lima kali
qH-Indeks 6 = ada 6 paper yang disitasi minimal enam kali
38 Jurnal Ilmiah Indonesia
yang Terindeks
Scopus
1. Bulletin of Electrical Engineering and Informatics (BEEI)
http://beei.org/index.php/EEI
2. International Journal of Electrical and Computer Engineering (IJECE)
http://ijece.iaescore.com/index.php/IJECE/index
3. Indonesian Journal of Electrical Engineering and Informatics (IJEEI)
http://section.iaesonline.com/index.php/IJEEI/index
4. International Journal of Technology https://ijtech.eng.ui.ac.id/about/1/about-the-journal
5. HAYATI Journal of Biosciences https://journal.ipb.ac.id/index.php/hayati/index
6. International Journal of Power Electronics and Drive Systems (IJPEDS)
http://ijpeds.iaescore.com/index.php/IJPEDS/index
7. Telkomnika http://journal.uad.ac.id/index.php/TELKOMNIKA/index
8. Tropical Animal Science Journal https://journal.ipb.ac.id/index.php/tasj/index
9. Indonesian Journal of Applied Linguistics
https://ejournal.upi.edu/index.php/IJAL/index
11. Acta medica Indonesiana (Junal Q3)
http://www.actamedindones.org/index.php/ijim
12. Jurnal Pendidikan IPA Indonesia (Junal Q3)
https://journal.unnes.ac.id/nju/index.php/jpii
13. Indonesian Journal of Electrical Engineering and Computer Science (Junal Q3) http://ijeecs.iaescore.com/index.php/IJEECS
14. International Journal on Advanced Science, Engineering and Information Technology (Junal Q2) http://ijaseit.insightsociety.org/
15. Gadjah Mada International Journal of Business (Junal Q3)
https://jurnal.ugm.ac.id/gamaijb
16. Agrivita (Junal Q3 – Homepage)
https://agrivita.ub.ac.id/index.php/agrivita/index
17. Indonesian Journal of Chemistry (Junal Q3)
https://jurnal.ugm.ac.id/ijc
18. Journal of Engineering and Technological Sciences (Junal Q2)
http://journals.itb.ac.id/index.php/jets/index
19. Bulletin of Chemical Reaction Engineering and Catalysis (Junal Q3)
https://ejournal2.undip.ac.id/index.php/bcrec/index
21. Electronic Journal of Graph Theory and Applications (Junal Q4)
https://www.ejgta.org/index.php/ejgta/index
22. Indonesian Journal of Geography (Junal Q3)
https://journal.ugm.ac.id/ijg
23. Journal of the Indonesian Tropical Animal Agriculture (Junal Q3)
https://ejournal.undip.ac.id/index.php/jitaa
24. Indonesian Journal of Islam and Muslim Societies (Junal Q1)
https://ijims.iainsalatiga.ac.id/index.php/ijims/index
25. Studia Islamika (Junal Q3)
http://journal.uinjkt.ac.id/index.php/studia-islamika/index
26. Atom Indonesia (Junal Q4) http://aij.batan.go.id/index.php/aij
27. Journal of Mathematical and Fundamental Sciences (Junal Q3)
http://journals.itb.ac.id/index.php/jmfs
28. ASEAN Journal of Chemical Engineering (Junal Q4)
http://aseanjche.ugm.ac.id/index.php
29. Biotropia (Junal Q4)
https://journal.biotrop.org/index.php/biotropia
30. International Journal on Electrical Engineering and Informatics (Jurnal Q3) http://www.ijeei.org/
31. Kukila (Junal Q4) http://kukila.org/index.php/KKL
32. Journal of ICT Research and Applications (Junal Q4)
http://journals.itb.ac.id/index.php/jictra/index
33. Al-Jami’ah (Junal Q3)
https://www.aljamiah.or.id/index.php/AJIS
34. Journal of Indonesian Islam (Junal Q2)
http://jiis.uinsby.ac.id/index.php/JIIs
35. Medical Journal of Indonesia (Junal Q4)
http://mji.ui.ac.id/journal/index.php/mji
36. Indonesian Journal on Geoscience (Junal Q4)
http://ijog.bgl.esdm.go.id/index.php/IJOG
37. Indonesian Biomedical Journal (Junal Q4)
https://inabj.org/index.php/ibj
38. ndonesian Journal of Pharmacy (Junal Q4)
Cara Mencari Jurnal Terindeks Scopus https://www.scopus.com/sources
Cara Mencari Jurnal Terindeks Scopus https://www.scimagojr.com/
Struktur Artikel Jurnal Lengkap
ØTitle
ØAuthors
ØAbstract
ØKeyword
ØIntroduction
ØLiterature Review
ØMethods
ØResults
ØDiscussion
ØConclusion
ØReferences
ØAcknowledgements
ØAuthors’ Bio
ØAppendices
Ø
I
ntroduction:
What was the question?
Ø
M
ethods:
How did you try to answer it?
Ø
R
esults:
What did you find?
Ø
a
nd
Ø
D
iscussion:
What does it mean?
a. Tentukan objek yang akan diteliti (bidang pendidikan,
teknologi, kesehatan, pertanian, linguistik, dll.)
b. Temukan apa yang akan diteliti dari objek tersebut
(pengaruhnya, kualitasnya, manfaatnya, dll.).
c. Cari bagian mana dari objek yang akan diteliti.
d. Tentukan media, metode, teknik, pendekatan, strategi,
dll. (Ayunitami, 2019)
e. Perhatikan variabel penelitian.
Variabel merupakan sesuatu yang menjadi objek
pengamatan penelitian (independent, dependent, control, moderating variables) (Sari, 2018)
f. Tentukan metode dan setting penelitian.
g. Perhatikan diksi (Pilihan kata).
Diksi yang diperoleh merupakan diksi yang ilmiah namun tetap dapat dipahami pembaca.
h. Tulis langsung maksimal 15-20 kata (Gaya Selingkung).
Judul karya ilmiah ditulis secara langsung pada pokok permasalahan dan tidak bertele-tele.
Tambahan Info Judul (1)
Ø
The fewest possible words that
adequately indicate the contents of
the paper
Ø
Should not include extra words,
such as “A Study of” or
“Observations on”
Ø
Should be specific enough
Ø
Generally should not include
abbreviations
Tambahan Info Judul (2)
Examples of Four Forms (Mahmood, 2019)
¡
Nominal
Ø
Relationship of interns’ working hours to medical
errors
¡
Compound
Ø
Treatment effect of dietary fiber on serum
phosphorus and
quality of life in hemodialysis
patients
with
constipation:
A
randomized
controlled trial
¡
Full sentence
Ø
Full-face helmets provide greater protection in
motorcycle accidents than other helmet designs
¡
Question
Ø
Do full-face helmets provide greater protection in
a.
The Influence of Method X on Activity Y in the Z
Setting
u
The Influence of Direct Method on Students’
Speaking Skill of the Junior High Schools in
Indonesia
b.
The Correlation between X and Y in Z Setting
u
The Correlation between Reading Habits and
Students’ Writing Skill in Senior High School Level
c.
Improving Y by Using X in University Context
u
Improving Students’ Translation Quality by Using
E-Litrans Tool App in University X
d.
X in Y’s Product(s)
u
Grammatical and Mechanical Errors in Students’
English Composition
Criteria for Authorship
¡
Substantial contributions
to the conception or design of
the work; or the acquisition, analysis, or interpretation of
data for the work; AND
¡
Drafting the work
or
revising it critically
for important
intellectual content; AND
¡
Final approval
of the version to be published; AND
¡
Agreement to be
accountable for all aspects of the work
in ensuring that questions related to the accuracy or
integrity of any part of the work are appropriately
investigated and resolved.
(International Committee of Medical Journal Editors – ICMJE)
35
¡
Often listed from greatest contributions to least,
irrespective of academic status
¡
Order of the author should be a joint decision of the
authors
¡
A supervisor should be co-author, with the
student as first author, in a paper based on
thesis
¡
Mere possession of an institutional position on its
own, such as Head of the Research team, does not
justify authorship
¡
Field workers, language editors and statisticians
are not co -authors
¡
Important to list one’s name the same way on every
paper
¡
Also mention institutional affiliation of each author
¡Some journals also mention designation and
academic degrees
¡
Give contact detail of the corresponding author
Ketentuan umum terkait dalam membuat abstrak:
uJumlah kata sekitar 200-250 kata (sesuaikan
Gaya Selingkung)
u
Pilih
British English atau
American English
harus
konsisten.
u
Terdiri dari
introduksi/pendahuluan, tujuan
penelitian
,
metode
,
hasil dan pembahasan
(jika
perlu), dan
(Ke)simpulan
u
Tenses: Introduksi (Present), Tujuan penelitan
metode, dan hasil (Past), (Ke)simpulan (Present)
3. Abstrak
¡
An important part of the paper
Ø
Relatively widely read
Ø
Used to decide whether to read the rest of
the paper
Ø
Gives editors, reviewers, others a first
impression
¡
Briefly summarizes the paper
¡Usually a single paragraph
¡
Should be organized like the paper (for
example, in sort of a mini-IMRaD format)
Writing competence is one of significant and basic demands for teachers in delivering their profession as educators. Many teachers feel that writing a book is a pride but it is too difficult for them to do. Many factors influence them not to start to write, such as inner motivation, institution supports, ideas, materials, and opportunities. For examples, many of them are lack of motivation to be confident course book writers, their institutions do not support their efforts and facilitate them well, they have no idea what they are going to write, they are not accustomed to provide their own lesson materials for their daily instruction—only copying from books or other resources, and most of them do not have any opportunity at all to write a course book. Recently we revealed that OBOT has potential activities as an integrated program in preparing teachers to be professional course book writers. Therefore to create teacher-writers and produce course books in one school, One Book One Teacher (OBOT) program came as a solution. OBOT is a program designed for teachers to be a course book writer at schools. In this study, to dig up their responses on course book writing activity and OBOT implementation in their school, we conducted a descriptive survey and observation on 13 teachers in Senior High School Bina Amal Semarang. We distributed questionnaires, tabulated, analyzed and interpreted the data, then drew the conclusion. The research results show that significantly OBOT encourages teachers to write course book actively and leads them to be productive course book writers.
English Gambits
Phrases of Research Objectives:
u The aim of the experiment is to compare __
u Our research aims at finding a solution for this challenging problem
of __
u There is no overall goal, apart from __
u We examine some previous work and propose a new method for __ u There are too many simultaneous goals making it difficult to __
u One of the major aims of this work was to create __
u The main objective is to investigate methods for improving __ u The objectives can be restated in the light of __
u The objective is to devise and implement a system for __
u The objectives were partially met by developing a method to __ u The objective is to demonstrate the feasibility of __
u One of the objectives is to improve the __
¡
3 to 10 keywords
¡
Selected from the title and abstract
¡
Can be selected from a standard
list (e.g., Medical Subject
Headings – MeSH)
Example 1: using comma (,)
One Book One Teacher, writing
competence, writing skill, course book
Example 2: using semicolon (;)
One Book One Teacher; writing
competence; writing skill; course book
4. Keywords
u
Purposes
¡
To provide background of the study
§
In order to help readers understand the paper
§In order to help readers appreciate the
importance of the research
¡
To identify the question(s) the
research addressed
§
Sometimes stated as a thesis or hypothesis
5. Introduction (1)
u
Contents
§
Information on importance of topic
§
Highlights of relevant previous research
§
Identification of what is lacking in the current
knowledge
§
Approach you used to fill the gap in
knowledge
§
In some cases, the main findings
5. Introduction (2)
Phrases of Previous Studies:
u These results go beyond previous reports, showing that __ u In line with previous studies __
u This result ties well with previous studies wherein __ u Contrary to the findings of __ we did not find __
u They have demonstrated that __
u Others have shown that __ improves __
u By comparing the results from __, we hope to determine __
u However, in line with the ideas of __, it can be concluded that __ u When comparing our results to those of older studies, it must be
pointed out that __
u We have verified that using __ produces similar results
u Overall these findings are in accordance with findings reported by
__
English Gambits
§
First paragraph
§
Middle paragraphs
§
Final paragraph
Topic of PaperLiterature
Review
Justification & Road Map5. Introduction (3)
(Mahmood, 2019)English Gambits
Phrases of Introduction:
• Research on __ has a long tradition
• For decades, one of the most popular ideas in __ literature is the
idea that____
• Recent theoretical developments have revealed that __ • A common strategy used to study __ is to __
• This research constitutes a relatively new area which has
emerged from __
• These approaches have been influential in the field because of __ • In the past several decades, __ have played an important role in __ • There are growing appeals for __
• This is the field of study that deals with __
• Most of the theories of __ are however focused on explaining __
Ø
Usually a part of ‘Introduction
’ but
sometimes, a separate section
Ø
Not a comprehensive review of
literature; only a few major papers
Ø
Try to use primary sources.
Ø
Mostly uses
past tense
Ø
Arrange mostly in chronological order.
Ø
Make logical connections between
studies.
Ø
Sometime, summary table is useful
for comparing studies
6. Literature Review
u
Purposes
Ø
To allow others to replicate what you did
§
In order to test it
§
In order to do further research
Ø
To allow others to evaluate what you did
§
To determine whether the conclusions seem
valid
§
To determine whether the findings seem
applicable to other situations
7. Methods (1)
u
Contents
Ø
Describe the context and setting of the study
ØSpecify the study design
Ø
Describe the ‘population’ (patients,
doctors, hospitals, etc.)
Ø
Describe the sampling strategy
Ø
Describe the intervention, if applicable
ØIdentify the main study variables
Ø
Describe data collection instruments and procedures
ØOutline data analysis methods
7. Methods (2)
u
Amount of Detail to Use
Ø
For well-known methods
§
Name of method, citation of reference
Ø
For methods previously described but not
well known
§
Brief description of method, citation of
reference
Ø
For methods that you yourself
devise
§
Relatively detailed description
7. Methods (3)
u
Guidelines
Ø
Should be written in
past tense
Ø
Some journals use subheads
Ø
May include tables and figures, for
example:
ü
Flowcharts
ü
Diagrams of apparatus
ü
Tables of experimental conditions
7. Methods (4)
English Gambits
Phrases of Research Methods/Designs
u We started by investigating …..
u We designed a new technique for …… u We used a new approach.
u These experiments were carried out to find out …..
u In order to verify the validity of the ….. method, we carried out
several experiments.
u All the tests/measurements were carried out at room temperature. u The (signals) were measured before and after …..
u To illustrate ….., a simulation was performed.
u The ….. analysis was performed in order to ….. We checked for the
presence of …..
u The increase in ….. was not caused by/was not due to a decrease in
……
u The (optimized condition) was obtained from ….
English Gambits
Phrases of Data Collection:
u There were __ participants in this sample.
u Participants first provided informed consent about __ u We performed additional data collection with __
u For this study, we analyzed the data collected from __ u Data were collected and maintained by __
u For this purpose, the researcher employed survey data collected
from __
u The analyzed data included: __
u The procedures of handling the data followed the suggestions of __ u Subsequently, __ were then used to elicit further data.
u Survey data were collected from __
u The sample was heterogeneous with respect to __
u The sample size in this study was not considered large enough
for__
u The sample of respondents included __
Ø
The core of the paper
Ø
Report on data collection and recruitment
(response rate, etc.)
Ø
Describe participants (demographic, clinical
condition, etc.)
Ø
Present key findings with respect to the
central research question
Ø
Present secondary findings (secondary
outcomes, subgroup analyses, etc.)
Ø
Often include tables and figures
Ø
Should present results but not comment on them
Ø
Some journals, however, combine the
Results and the Discussion
8. Results (1)
u
Verb Tense:
Past
u
Examples:
Ø
A total of 417 samples
were
analyzed.
Ø_____
increased
, but _____
decreased
.
Ø
The median salary of these surgeons
was
_____.
Ø
Three of the mixtures
exploded
.
Ø
This difference
was
not statistically
significant.
8. Results (2)
u
Tables and Figures
Ø
How much should the information in the text overlap
that in the tables and figures?
§
Not extensive overlap
§
In general, text should present only the main points
from the tables and figures
§
Also include a few of the most important data
§Detail should be clear from the table or figure
Ø
Remember to mention every table and figure in
the text.
§
Example:
Researchers who attended the workshop
published twice as many papers per year (Table 3)
.
8. Results (3)
Phrases of Describing Charts, Figures, and Graphs:
u Fig. 2 shows/presents/depicts/outlines/illustrates/represents ….. u Fig. 3 gives an example of …..
u Such cases are depicted in the following figures. u This is illustrated in Fig. 5.
u ….. is/are shown/given in Figs. 3 and 4. u ….. can be found in Fig. 8.
u As can be seen from Figs. 5 and 3, ….. u As shown in Fig. 1, …..
u As follows from the figures shown above, ….. u From this figure it can be seen that …..
u For the resulting plot, see Fig. 2. u Table II summarizes …..
u The graph/diagram suggests/indicates that …..
English Gambits
u
Common Mistakes
Ø
Illogical sequence of data presentation
Ø
Inaccurate data
Ø
Repetition of data
Ø
Misplaced information between the
methods and results sections
Ø
Inappropriate presentation of data –
overuse and abuse of tables and figures
Ø
Attempts to draw conclusions – this
should be covered in the discussion
section
8. Results (4)
Phrases of Research Results:
u From the short review above, key findings emerge: __
u This is an important finding in the understanding of the __ u A further novel finding is that __
u Together, the present findings confirm __
u The results demonstrate two things. First, __. Second, __ u The results of the experiment found clear support for the __ u This analysis found evidence for __
u Planned comparisons revealed that __ u Our results casts a new light on __
u This section summarizes the findings and contributions made. u This gives clearly better results than __
u From the results, it is clear that __
English Gambits
Ø
Is one of the most difficult parts
to write, because it has more
choice of what to say
Ø
Often should begin with a brief
summary of the main findings
Ø
Should answer the question(s) stated
in the introduction (or address the
hypotheses stated in the introduction
9. Discussion (1)
u
Possible Contents (1)
Ø
Strengths of the study
§
For example, superior methods, extensive data
Ø
Limitations of the study
§
Small sample size, short follow-up, incomplete
data, possible sources of bias, problems with
experimental procedures
§
If the limitations seem unlikely to
affect the
conclusions, can explain
why
9. Discussion (2)
u
Possible Contents (2)
Ø
Relationship to findings of other
research, for example:
§
Similarities to previous findings (your own
and others’)
§
Differences from previous findings
§Possible reasons for similarities and
differences
9. Discussion (3)
u
Possible Contents (3)
Ø
Applications and implications, for
example:
§
Possible uses of the findings in policy and
practice
§
Relationship of the findings to theories or
models:
§
Do the findings support them?
§Do they refute them?
§
Do they suggest modifications?
9. Discussion (4)
u
Possible Contents (4)
Ø
Other research needed, for example:
§
To address questions still unanswered
§To address new questions raised by the
findings
Ø
Sometimes, summary of findings and
recommendations form a separate
section as ‘Conclusion’
9. Discussion (5)
u
Common Mistakes
Ø
Repetition of data presented in the results
section
Ø
Incorrect interpretation of the findings
ØImportance of results inadequately
discussed or omitted
Ø
Conclusions not supported by findings
ØIrrelevant and faulty discussion points
ØFailure to identify any weakness
Ø
Omission of key and relevant references
ØExplanations are too long or verbose
9. Discussion (6)
u
Purposes
Ø
To give credit to others for their work
ØTo add credibility to your work by
showing that you used valid
information sources
Ø
To help show how your work is
related to previous work
Ø
To help readers find further information
10. References (1)
Format Sesuaikan Gaya
Selingkung Jurnal
Ø
Various formats exist for citation in text,
for examples:
§
Accuracy of references is important (Day & Gastel, 2011).
§Accuracy of references is important.
3Ø
Various formats exist for items in reference
lists:
§
Pineda D. 2003. Communication of science in Colombia.
Sci. Ed. 26:91-92.
§
Pineda D. Communication of science in Colombia. Sci Ed
2003; 26:91-2.
u
Citation Management
Software
Ø
Examples: EndNote, Reference
Manager
Ø
Allows you to keep a database of
references
Ø
In many cases, provides the citations
and references in the proper format for
your target journal
10. References (3)
Ø
A place to thank people who helped
with the work but did not make
contributions deserving authorship
Ø
Sometimes the place where
sources of financial support
are stated
11. Acknowledgments
Checklist for Review of an Article
1.
Does the title reflect accurately the content of the
paper?
2.
Are the significant words in the title near the
beginning to catch a reader’s attention?
3.
Does the Introduction begin with the big issue
of topical/scientific interest and then narrow
down to the specific topic of the paper?
4.
Does the Introduction locate the study effectively
within the recent international literature in the
field?
5.
Does the Introduction highlight a gap that the
research fills, or present a need to extend
knowledge in a particular area? (Does it say why
the work was done?)
Checklist for Review of an Article
6.
Does the Introduction end with a clear statement
of the aim/hypothesis of the research or
summarize the main activity of the paper
(depending on the field and relevant journal
conventions)?
7.
Are the methods, including statistical analysis,
appropriate for the questions addressed and the
study conducted?
8.
Are the methods given in enough detail to convince a
reader of the credibility of the results?
9.
Do the results provide answers to the questions
raised in the Introduction, or fulfill the objectives
given?
10.
Are the results presented in a logical order (either
similar to the order of presenting the aims or
methods, or similar to the order in which the
Discussion is presented)?
Checklist for Review of an Article
11. Are all the tables and figures needed to tell the story of the
paper? Could any be combined or deleted?
12. Do all the tables and figures stand alone? ( e.g., can readers
understand them without going back to read the text of the paper?)
13. Does the Discussion begin with a reference to the
original aim/ hypothesis/ question?
14. Are the results compared with other relevant findings from
the literature? Are you aware of any other comparisons that could be made? Are appropriate explanations/ speculations included about reasons for observed similarities,
differences, and other outcomes?
15. Are appropriate statements made about the wider
significance of the results, their l imitations, and/ or their implications for practice and/ or future research directions?
16. Does the paper end with an appropriate concluding
paragraph or section that emphasizes the key message( s) and their significance to the field?
Checklist for Review of an Article
17. Is the list of references complete (all the works in the
list are referred to in the paper, and all the works referred to in the paper are in the list)?
18. Are the reference list and in-text references
formatted accurately and in the right style for the target journal?
19. Does the Abstract include all the information required
by the journal, and does it highlight appropriately the key results and their significance?
20. Does the Abstract adhere to the word limit and follow
the prescribed format of the target journal?
21. Are the selected keywords those that will best allow the
article to be located by the full range of its prospective readers?
22. What additional comments do you have for
strengthening the paper?
Pedoman Operasional Penilaian Angka Kredit Kenaikan Pangkat/Jabatan Akademik Dosen
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sekolah yang memperoleh ijazah/gelar dan Pendidikan dan Pelatihan (Diklat)
Prajabatan (sesuai lampiran II Permen PAN dan RB No. 46 Tahun 2013 dan lampiran
III Permen PAN dan RB No. 13 Tahun 2013); serta unsur penunjang paling banyak
dibutuhkan angka kredit 10% (sepuluh persen) atau boleh tidak ada.
Dalam penilaian kegiatan yang dilakukan untuk usul pengangkatan pertama dan
kenaikan jabatan akademik dalam hal-hal tertentu diberlakukan batas maksimal yang
diakui pada komponen-komponen tertentu. Batas maksimal diberlakukan dengan
tujuan untuk mendistribusikan tugas pokok dan fungsi dosen pada setiap sub unsur
kegiatan dalam satu unsur kegiatan maupun pendistribusian untuk masing-masing
unsur dan pada strata pendidikan (diploma/sarjana, magister dan doktor). Untuk
dapat menduduki jenjang jabatan akademik dan/atau pangkat tertentu, dosen wajib
memenuhi angka kredit kumulatif dengan distribusi unsur utama dan penunjang
tertentu (lihat Lampiran Permendikbud Nomor 92 Tahun 2014). Lebih lanjut,
distribusi unsur utama dalam setiap usul kenaikan jabatan akademik disajikan pada
Tabel 1.
Tabel 1. Jumlah Angka Kredit Kumulatif Paling Sedikit dari Unsur Utama dan Unsur Penunjang NO JABATAN KUALIFIKASI AKADEMIK UNSUR UTAMA UNSUR PENUNJANG PELAKSANAAN PENDIDIKAN PELAKSANAAN PENELITIAN PELAKSANAAN PENGABDIAN MASYARAKAT 1 Asisten Ahli
Magister ≥ 55% ≥ 25% Paling Sedikit 0.50ak dan ≤ 10%
≤ 10% 2 Lektor Magister ≥ 45% ≥ 35% Paling Sedikit
0.50ak dan ≤ 10% ≤ 10% 3 Lektor Kepala Magister/ Doktor ≥ 40% ≥ 40% Paling Sedikit 0.50ak dan ≤ 10% ≤ 10% 4 Profesor Doktor ≥ 35% ≥ 45% Paling Sedikit
0.50ak dan ≤ 10%
≤ 10%
5.1 Unsur Utama
Kegiatan-kegiatan yang termasuk dalam unsur utama pendidikan dan
pelaksanaan pendidikan meliputi tetapi tidak terbatas pada kegiatan-kegiatan yang
disajikan pada Tabel 2. Kegiatan lain yang tidak termuat pada Tabel 2 dapat diakui
sebagai kegiatan sub-unsur pendidikan sepanjang mempunyai fungsi pendidikan
formal dan/atau pelaksanaan pendidikan (pengajaran). Dengan kata lain, kegiatan
yang tidak tertulis pada Tabel 2 tetapi mempunyai fungsi yang sama dengan
Tahapan Pencapaian GB
Jumlah Angka Kredit Kumulatif Paling Sedikit dari Unsur Utama dan Unsur Penunjang
Catatan: Filing yang lengkap dan rapi sangat membantu
Tahapan Pencapaian GB
Persyaratan Khusus Karya Ilmiah
Pedoman Operasional Penilaian Angka Kredit Kenaikan Pangkat/Jabatan Akademik Dosen
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kegiatan ini antara lain adalah post-doctoral, scheme academic mobility exchange (SAME), pelatihan untuk meningkatkan kemampuan mengajar (seperti pengembangan keterampilan teknik instruksional (Pekerti) dan Applied Approach), dan lain-lain.
5.1.3 Pelaksanaan Penelitian
Seperti telah dijelaskan dalam sub bab sebelumnya bahwa aturan tentang jabatan akademik diharapkan mendukung program pencapaian tujuan pendidikan dan mengejar ketertinggalan dari negara-negara lain dalam produktivitas karya ilmiah. Oleh karena itu, jenis karya ilmiah sebagai syarat utama menduduki jenjang jabatan akademik tertentu dapat berbeda satu dengan yang lainnya. Selain itu, untuk karya ilmiah tertentu yang digunakan dalam kenaikan jabatan akademik diberlakukan batas paling tinggi yang diakui. Penentuan batas paling tinggi yang diakui disesuaikan dengan kriteria jabatan akademik. Tabel 6 menunjukkan tugas, tanggung jawab dalam publikasi karya ilmiah untuk kenaikan jabatan akademik tertentu. Jenis kegiatan, kriteria, angka kredit dan angka kredit paling tinggi pengajuan dalam penelitian dan penyebarluasan IPTEKS disajikan pada Tabel 7.
Tabel 6a. Tugas, Tanggung Jawab dalam Publikasi Karya Ilmiah untuk Kenaikan Jabatan Akademik Reguler sebagai Penulis Pertama dan sekaligus Penulis Korespondensi.
No Jabatan Akademik
Persyaratan Khusus Karya Ilmiah Jurnal Nasional atau Peringkat 3, 4, 5, dan 6 Jurnal nasional terakreditasi atau Peringkat Akreditasi 1 dan 2 Jurnal Internasional Jurnal Internasional bereputasi 1 Asisten Ahli W S S S 2 Lektor W S S S 3 Lektor Kepala/Magister S S W S Lektor Kepala/Doktor S W S S 4 Profesor S S S W
W : wajib ada, atau boleh digantikan dengan karya ilmiah yang angka kreditnya lebih tinggi S : disarankan ada
Catatan: Artikel jurnal internasional terindeks SCOPUS/WoS
merupakan syarat khusus dan wajib dipenuhi (walaupun hanya 1 artikel).
2 Kunci Utama Mencapai GB
1. Akademik
a. Melaksanakan Tridharma PT dengan timeline yang jelas
b. Rajin mengumpulkan surat tugas/sertifikat (filing yang baik)
Lakukan mapping kebutuhan angka kredit
c. Konsultasi dengan Tim PAK PT sendiri
d. Menyusun dokumen pengusulan Angka Kredit
2.
Non-Akademik
a. Berdo’a untuk kemudahan dan kelancaran ikhtiar
b. Shadaqah harta, tenaga, pemikiran/ilmu
c. Minta restu orangtua dan pimpinan/atasan
d. Silaturahmi kepada handai taulan, sahabat karib, dan teman
Akhmadi, H. (2019, August 9). Tips Menulis Paper/Artikel
Ilmiah Dalam Bahasa Inggris, PART 1: Useful Phrases for Academic Writing From Introduction
to Conclusion.
https://heriakhmadi.com/2019/08/09/tips-menulis-paper-artikel-ilmiah-dalam-bahasa-inggris/
Ayunitami, V.D. (2019, Juni 10). Cara Membuat Judul
Karya Ilmiah.
http://vionadewiayunitami.blogspot.com/2013/06/car a-membuat-judul-karya-ilmiah-ilmiah.html
Mahmood, K. (2019). How to Write a Journal Article. University of the Punjab.
Sari, E.Y. (2018, January 24). 6 Cara Menulis Judul Karya
Tulis Ilmiah. https://blog.typoonline.com/6-cara-menulis-judul-karya-tulis-ilmiah/