MALL or PARK?
Let’s discuss the homework...
http://en.tempo.co/read/news/2013/09/19/ 080514860/No-More-Building-Malls-in-Jakarta
http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2011/
Let’s paraphrase the article
1. Read the article about “Malls” again 3-2
Mall.doc (see pages 3-4) 2. Read paragraph 1.
3. Underline the most important sentence in paragraph 1.
4. Paraphrase that sentence in the right margin.
Remember: to paraphrase = to write with your own words.
A SUMMARY
It is a short version of a larger writing
(article, chapter, book, etc.)
Let’s write a summary
Based on your notes on the right margin,
write down a short summary (+/- 100
words) about the article titled “No More Building Malls in Jakarta”.
Remember: Always refer to your notes,
Let’s paraphrase the other article
1. Read the article about “Parks” again 3-3 Park.doc 2. On your notebook, make a table of the positive and
negative effects of malls. Remember to paraphrase.
Positive or negative? Who says that?
Discussion time...
Form small groups of 3 students.
Discuss whether we need (more) MALLS or PARKS. Use discussion skills. Select the Chairman, Secretary,
and Members.
Present the group’s opinion to the class.
Essay writing
Definition:
An academic writing that consists of more than 1 paragraphs.
Writing time...
Write an essay of the following topic: “Do we need
malls or parks?
Write 3 paragraphs:
1. Paragraph 1: The situation in Jakarta & how you feel about it.
2. Paragraph 2: Malls, its positive and negative effects
3. Paragraph 3: Parks, its positive and negative effects
Peer review & Revision
1. Exchange your writing with a friend. 2. Read your friend’s writing. Underline:
Your favorite sentence(s).
A sentence(s) that you do not really understand.
Sentences that need appropriate punctuation marks:
Capital letter
Fullstops
Commas
etc.
3. Return the paper to the owner.
Homework
On your notebook, answer the following questions
about our public transportaion: 1. Do you use public transport?
2. What do you think about our public transportation?
3. Do you think it is convenience? 4. What problems do we have?
