Author response to Editors’ Comment
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Editors’ / reviewers’
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Response to comment Lines
1. Total tabel dan figure dalam satu manuskrip maksimal lima. Silakan disesuaikan.
The number of tables has been adjusted according to the reviewer’s suggestions
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2. Need to explain positive or negative relationship.
There was a positive relationship between age and lung capacity of cafe workers
This meant that the older a person was, the risk became greater of decreased lung function.
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3. In the results of the multivariate analysis, the OR is not significant, please check again
Based on bivariate and multivariate analysis: there was a positive relationship between age and lung capacity of cafe workers.
This meant that the older a person was, the risk became greater of decreased lung function.
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4. …….problems.1
Tidak perlu menggunakan tanda kurung. Tulis angka setelah tanda titik.
Occupational health and safety helps to achieve optimal work productivity so that every worker can work safely and avoid health problems.1
And so on, we have corrected the citation writing
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5. Please move the purpose of this research to the last sentence of the introduction
It’s been fixed according to the input
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6. Perhatikan penggunaan besar/kecilnya huruf dalam penulisan sub-judul
It’s been fixed according to the input
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7. Ini huruf M nya seharusnya besar. Silakan diperbaiki keseluruhan.
It’s been fixed according to the input
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8. Make Table in one space It’s been fixed according to the input
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9. Small letter n not capital letter N
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input 10. Do not repeat the results that
have been seen in the table.
Please write the percentage and a descriptive general description of the condition of most of the cafes in Pontianak.
Pontianak has a thick hangout culture. It is also known as the city with 1000 cafes. It’s not difficult to find a café here. Most of them provide coffee as their main commodity. The habit of hanging out and drinking coffee in Pontianak City is closely related to smoking culture. They do not enforce a smoking ban in public places.
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11. Make table in one space It’s been fixed according to the input
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12. Combine Table 2,3,4,5,6,7 become one table as bivariate analysis, write in one space in the table.
It’s been fixed according to the input
Become a table
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13. Table 2,3,4,5,6,7 : Add the CI CI has been added according to input
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14. Yang berpengaruh hanya ini ya?
Yes
15. Apakah ini mempengaruhi No
16. Please add some references and adjust it with the results of statistical tests and revised version of test results.
Smoking causes changes in the function of the human respiratory tract and disrupts lung function caused by hypertrophic mucosal cells and hyperplastic mucus glands resulting in mucus buildup which causes inflammatory cells to increase in the lungs and alveoli to be damaged.
(Saniman,2016) (Sholihah, 2015)
Reduced lung function is caused by a decrease in the elasticity of the tissue in the lungs. As a person ages, the respiratory muscles in the lungs, FEV1 and
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FVC, the vital capacity and antioxidant fluid of the
epithelium decrease
(Ahmed,2018).
17. Please adjust the results of bivariate and multivariate analysis
There is a relationship between exposure to cigarette smoke and lung capacity in workers with p- value = 0.028 and age with p- value = 0.006. Based on multivariate analysis, there was a relationship between age and lung capacity in cafe workers with p-value = 0.001 Based on the results of the study, the researchers suggested that cafe visitors be more positive in obeying the rules of the no- smoking area and for the Health Service and the Trade Industry Service to take preventive measures by making smoking protocols or rules in public rooms and monitoring the workplace environment.
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18. Use references based on online media (e-journal/e- book) and provide the URL/link each reference.
Write in VANCOUVER STYLE.
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