Can you suggest any improvements to the paper or any parts that could be shortened or removed. B, according to the information technology-based address, was not reflected in what information technology method 4.
Overall quality of the work
Can you suggest any improvements to the
The city of Semarang is located on the northern coastline of the island of Java and is directly adjacent to the Java Sea. The graph of the population by age group and gender in Semarang Municipality is presented in Figure 2.
Using Information Technology
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Pernyataan Penulis dan Rekomendasi Reviewer
- Using Economics and Policy Systems
- Using Information Technology
- Is this topic A. Suitable for the journal?
- Of broad national
- Significant? yes The manuscript is significant to be
- Clarity of objectives
- Quality of methods
The disasters that occurred in the city of Semarang in 2012-2021 were fires, fallen trees, floods, landslides, hurricanes and collapsed houses. 2021) 'Can ICZM contribute to the mitigation of erosion and of human activities that threaten the natural and cultural heritage of the coastal landscape of Calabria?', Sustainability (Switzerland), 13(3), pp. 2004) 'Optimizing the Selection of Regional Earthquake Mitigation Strategies', in 13th World Conference on Earthquake Engineering.
B. To the point and
Written clearly using correct
- Are the approach, results
- Are the
B under the title based on information technology, it is not reflected what kind of information technology method.
Useful and all necessary?
- Overall quality of the
- Can you suggest any
- Reviewer’s decision
- Is this topic a. suitable for
- Clarity of
- Quality of
- Quality of data
- Is this paper a. properly organized?
- Are the approach,
- Is the title informative
- Are the
- Reviewer
- The words “Bappeda” is redundant in the abstract
- The reference should not be included in the abstract
- The keyword “disater” needs to be revised
- For the sentence “This menu displays the disaster GIS for 2019–2021, to display GIS on this menu, you can click on the image on each tab of the disaster menu in this web
- The other revision for the 1 st stage of my review have been corrected
However, a detailed image of the Semarang city map with most of the natural disasters found would help. However, there are still some issues worthy of in-depth discussion that can be displayed on the review page. Can you suggest any improvements to the paper improvements or any parts that could be shortened or removed.
Information about 2 reviewers can be posted as a comment: "Semarang City-Based Information Technology Disaster Mitigation Strategy". As it stands, there are some sentences that do not conform to English structure. For the sentence "This menu shows the disaster GIS to display the GIS in this menu, you can click the image on each tab of the disaster menu in this web in this menu, you can click the image in each tab of the disaster menu in this web GIS: https://sigtahanpangan .info/semarang/banjir.html.” on page 9.
I don't think we need to give the biggest part for the words "Sistem Informasi Geografis".
INDONESIAN JOURNAL ON GEOSCIENCE
- Of broad national interest?
- Significant? yes The manuscript is significant to be published in this
- Quality of data: B more complete data related to the Semarang city disaster
- Is this paper A. Properly
- To the point and concise
- Is the title informative and a
This study identifies disaster events that occurred in the city of Semarang from both strategies to deal with them in general and specifically with the help of information technology, namely GIS (Geographic Information System) maps. This study describes several disaster incidents that occurred in the city of Semarang and their mitigation, which is based on community empowerment, especially in communities. Point elements as cities, line elements as roads, and polygon elements as residential areas; and the number of landslides and floods in the city of Semarang.
The cause of the flooding is heavy rainfall, rainwater that is not absorbed in the upstream area (due to deforestation), rivers that experience narrowing or siltation (due to garbage and uncontrolled development), or topographical conditions in the form of basins that tend to become catchment areas (Aritama and Dharmadhiatmika, 2019). In this research, information technology was used, including GIS maps that visualize the number of disaster events in various sub-districts in the city of Semarang, which are presented in Figures 9 and 10. 2021) 'Can ICZM Contribute to the Mitigation of Erosion and of Human Activities Threatening the Natural and Cultural Heritage of the Coastal Landscape of Calabria?', Sustainability (Switzerland), 13(3), pp. 2017) 'Dynamics of agricultural land and the risk of food insecurity in the Niayes region of Diamniadio, Western Senegal', Jamba: Journal of Disaster Risk Studies, 9(1), pp. 2004) 'Dynamics of Agricultural Land and the Risk for Food Insecurity in the Niayes Region of Diamniadio, Western Senegal', in 13th World Conference on Earthquake Engineering.
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