From: Hayriye Gül Kuruyer <noreply@kuramail.com>
Sent: Monday, November 15, 2021 6:17:38 PM
To: Erie Siti Syarah <ErieSitiSyarah_9920919003@mhs.unj.ac.id>; Mohamad Syarif Sumantri
<msyarifsumantri@unj.ac.id>; Yuli Rahmawati <ylrahmawati@unj.ac.id>; Fasli Jalal
<faslijalal@yahoo.com>; Elindra Yetti <elindrayeti@unj.ac.id>
Subject: [IEJEE] Editor Decision
Erie Siti Syarah, Mohamad Syarif Sumantri, Yuli Rahmawati, Fasli Jalal, Elindra Yetti:
We have reached a decision regarding your submission to International Electronic Journal of Elementary Education, "Dance to Thought for Children:
Working Memory, Inhibition, and Mental Flexibility".
Our decision is to: Editing Service is Required ....
- With a very quick review, it appears that the manuscript has some errors in grammar, typography, punctuation, syntax, and spelling in the manuscript.
Here are some (but not limited to) issues detected in the paper:
- Singular plural compatibility issues.
- Terminal/comma or/and comma issues
- Some inconsistences have been observed in preferred English.
- Inconsistent/incorrect use of en dash and hyphens -Missing pronouns
- Preposition and spelling issues.
- Missing verbs
- Incorrect capitalization -Incorrect use of quantifier
- Several incorrect in-text citations and references -Several APA formatting issues with reference list
-Incorrect formatting of tables that are not consistent with APA 7th edition - Some parts of the paper should be re-written to improve the standard of the academic writing of the document.
- With in-depth editing, a professional native speaker proofreader or an experienced doctorally qualified editor might spot more issues. Also, some changes can be made to improve the standard of the academic writing of the paper.
- Editor or proofreader should pay considerable attention to paragraph structure, internal consistency, tone, flow, accuracy, and grammar to guarantee that the manuscript is at its best.
It appears that the manuscript needs major proofreading and basic editing services.
The manuscript has also some APA formatting issues.
So, author(s) should have a basic editing service covering proofreading to fix the
formatting issues.
Hence, I suggest that the authors should hire a doctorally qualified professional editor/proofreader to fix the problems and make their paper ready for publication.
Before having any of the abovementioned services, it would be wise if they contact the editing company or editor to get more information on which service would be best suited for the paper.
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