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Title: Evaluating the Convergence in International Human Rights and Criminal Procedures Law:An Indonesian case study

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Evaluating theConvergence inInternational Human RightsandCriminal Procedures Law : An Indonesian casestudy provides aconvergence analysis between International Human Rights Law (IHRL) andIndonesian Criminal Procedural Law (ICPL)regarding human rights concerns in criminal lawand investigation .Here'sacriticalreviewofthepaper:

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Reviewer- A

Decision: Major revisions required The study

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The introduction provides background on protecting human rights for fostering justice and equitable treatment . It should also mention the efforts of Indonesian institutions to enhance human rights protection in the criminal justice system.

The methodology briefly mentions that qualitative legal research was conducted using primary and secondary sources. However, providing more details on the specific research methods would be beneficial.

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The paper mentions the findings that ICPL and IHRLpromote human rights protection

during criminal investigations by granting the right to legal representation and averting discrimination . However , it should also highlight the negative impact of the

"new Indonesian Criminal Code"(KUHP ) on religious minorities and the absence of a

lawful detention period under ICPL.

The paper suggests recommendations to enhance human rights protection in ICPL-governed criminal investigations , such as drafting comprehensive laws prohibiting torture during investigations.

5. The paper does not provide specific details about these implications . It would be

helpful to briefly outlinethepotentialtheoretical andpracticalcontributionsofthe study.

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The provided excerpt presents a research study that aims to analyze the convergence between international human rights and Indonesian criminal procedure law . The study adopts a qualitative research design andutilizes various sources,including primary legal sources and secondary sources,such as books, journal articles,and online databases. The paper provides a concise overview of the study 's objectives , methodology ,and findings . However ,it could be improvedbyprovidingmorespecificdetailsontheresearch on the following;

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Reviewer -B

Decision: Major revisions required

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1. The objectives of the study need to be clearly stated , focusing on conducting a

convergence analysis between IHR and ICPLin terms of human rights protection during criminalinvestigations.

In the section discussing human rights concerns in criminal legislation , the authors effectively highlight the significance of human rights in all societies and the pillars on which human rights are based . The provision of up-to-date references to various international human rights instruments and their provisions will demonstrate a good understanding of the subject matter.

The sections on IHR and ICPLprovide an overview of their respective frameworks and how they address human rights in criminal investigations . The authors identify areas of convergence, such as the presumption of innocence, right to legal counsel, prohibition of torture , and privacy rights . However , the discussion of the limitations and potential violations of human rights in the Indonesian context ,particularly with the newCriminalCode,willadddepthtotheanalysis.

Additionally , a comprehensive review would require evaluating the entire study , including the research questions , data collection methods , analysis of findings , and conclusion . Furthermore , the critical review could be enhanced by examining the research's limitations , potential biases, and the overallsignificance ofthefindings inbroaderacademicandpracticalcontexts.

The conclusion section of the study needs to be comprehensive and covers key points discussed throughout the paper . There are a few areas where further clarification or elaboration could enhance theoverallcriticalreview.

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Response to Reviewer 1

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

The study Evaluating the Convergence in International Human Rights and Criminal Procedures Law: An Indonesian case study provides a convergence analysis between International Human Rights Law (IHRL) and Indonesian Criminal Procedural Law (ICPL) regarding human rights concerns in criminal law and investigation. Here's a critical review of the paper:

Thanks, dear reviewer.

1 The introduction provides background on protecting human rights for fostering justice and equitable treatment. It should also mention the efforts of Indonesian institutions to enhance human rights protection in the criminal justice system.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. In introduction we have now mentioned the efforts of Indonesian institutions to enhance human rights protection in the criminal justice system.

Please see pages 3-5 2 The methodology briefly mentions that

qualitative legal research was conducted using primary and secondary sources.

However, providing more details on the specific research methods would be beneficial.

Respected reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. We have now provided more details on the specific research methods.

Please see pages 6-7

3 The paper mentions the findings that ICPL and IHRL promote human rights protection during criminal investigations by granting the right to legal representation and averting discrimination. However, it should also highlight the negative impact of the

"new Indonesian Criminal Code" (KUHP) on

Respected reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested by your kind self.

Please see pages 7-11

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Response to Reviewer 2

religious minorities and the absence of a lawful detention period under ICPL.

4 The paper suggests recommendations to enhance human rights protection in ICPL- governed criminal investigations, such as drafting comprehensive laws prohibiting torture during investigations.

Respected reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested by your kind self.

Please see pages 17-19

5 The paper does not provide specific details about these implications. It would be helpful to briefly outline the potential theoretical and practical contributions of the study.

Thank you, dear reviewer. Done as suggested by your kind self.

Plesae see pages 19-20

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

The provided excerpt presents a research study that aims to analyze the convergence between international human rights and Indonesian criminal procedure law. The study adopts a qualitative research design and utilizes various sources, including primary legal sources and secondary sources, such as books, journal articles, and online databases. The paper provides a concise overview of the study's objectives, methodology, and findings. However, it could be improved by providing more specific details on the research on the following;

Thankyou respected reviewer.

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1 The objectives of the study need to be clearly stated, focusing on conducting a convergence analysis between IHRL and ICPL in terms of human rights protection during criminal investigations.

Thank you, dear review. The objectives of the study are now clearly stated, focusing on conducting a convergence analysis between IHRL and ICPL in terms of human rights protection during criminal investigations.

Please see page 5 2 In the section discussing human rights

concerns in criminal legislation, the authors effectively highlight the significance of human rights in all societies and the pillars on which human rights are based. The provision of up-to-date references to various international human rights instruments and their provisions will demonstrate a good understanding of the subject matter.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested by your kind self.

Please see pages 16-19

3 The sections on IHRL and ICPL provide an overview of their respective frameworks and how they address human rights in criminal investigations. The authors identify areas of convergence, such as the presumption of innocence, right to legal counsel, prohibition of torture, and privacy rights. However, the discussion of the limitations and potential violations of human rights in the Indonesian context, particularly with the new Criminal Code, will add depth to the analysis.

Dear reviewer. Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as per suggestion.

Plesae see pages 14-16

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4 Additionally, a comprehensive review would require evaluating the entire study, including the research questions, data collection methods, analysis of findings, and conclusion. Furthermore, the critical review could be enhanced by examining the research's limitations, potential biases, and the overall significance of the findings in broader academic and practical contexts.

Dear reviewer. Done as per suggestion.

5 The conclusion section of the study needs to be comprehensive and covers key points discussed throughout the paper. There are a few areas where further clarification or elaboration could enhance the overall critical review.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested.

Please see pages 20-22

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We have reached a decision regarding your submission to theInternational Journal of Criminal Justice Sciences, "Evaluating the Convergence in International Human Rights and Criminal Procedures Law:An Indonesian case study".

Our decision is:Revisions Required

Please revise your manuscript based on the reviewers' comments and suggestions accordingly and resubmit your revised manuscript no later than one month.

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Response to Reviewers

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

Here are some minor suggestions for improving the study.

Thank you, respected reviewer.

1 Begin the conclusion by summarizing the main findings of the study concisely. This will provide a clear overview for readers and help them understand the significance of the research.

Thank you, dear review. Done as suggested by your kind self.

Please see pages 20-22

2 The recommendations provided in the study should be explicitly linked to the findings discussed throughout the paper. By clearly connecting the recommendations to the identified gaps or shortcomings, readers will better understand the rationale behind each recommendation.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested by your kind self.

Please see pages 17-19

3 It would be valuable to address potential challenges or obstacles that might arise during the implementation of the recommended changes. This will demonstrate a more realistic understanding of the complexities involved and make the recommendations more robust.

Dear reviewer. Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as per suggestion.

Please see pages 19-20

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Has been accepted for publication inInternational Journal of Criminal Justice Sciences (Vol. 17 No. 2, 2022).

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