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1 Dear Dr Novita Dewi Kristanti,

Your Manuscript ID MH20210331030321-R2 with title "Encapsulated of Cassava, Skim Milk and Malto Dextrin symbiotic characteristic and their synergitic effects against Salmonella sp. Inhibition" has passed the initially quality checks and is now transferred to the Editor of the journal to be considered for review process.

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Dear Dr Novita Dewi Kristanti,

We have received reviewer's reports or editor's assessments for your Manuscript ID

MH20210331030321-R2 with title Encapsulated of Cassava, Skim Milk and Malto Dextrin symbiotic characteristic and their synergitic effects against Salmonella sp. Inhibition in Advances in Animal and Veterinary Sciences.

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The manuscript is with Editor to make final decision.

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3 July 6, 2021

Dear: Editorial Office

Nexus Academic Publishers (NAP)

Response letter for our manuscript’s review

Firstly, we sincerely apologize for the delay in response. We highly appreciate the thoughtful review of the manuscript for all the reviewers and editors. Their suggestions are vital for the improvement of our manuscript. We agree with almost all their

comments and, thus, we have revised our manuscript accordingly.

We respond below in detail to each of the reviewer’s comments. We hope that the reviewers will be satisfied with our responses. We are willing to finish the revised version of the manuscript, including any further suggestions that the reviewers may have.

You may read all of the comments followed with our responses in italic attached with this letter.

We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Novita dewi kristanti

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Editor’s comment

Comment 1. Review the peer review comments and requests carefully, and edit the manuscript accordingly.

Response.

The correction has been made. We have been accepted all changes in document.

Comment 2. Include a separate point-by-point response file addressing the reviewers comments along with an explanation of any request of the editor or the reviewers that you do not address in your revised manuscript. Your list of responses should be uploaded as a Cover Letter in addition to your revised manuscript.

Response.

As suggested, we have been arranged and uploaded the cover letter.

Comment 3. Please colour (e.g. red in contrast to black text) all changes in the revised manuscript, without such coloured changes the manuscript may be returned or rejected.

Response.

All corrections in manuscript have been made in red font.

Comment 4. Verify the placement and accuracy of each reference in your manuscript as well as the accuracy of all of the values in your tables and figures.

Response.

We have been verifying all the reference and numbers on the table or in pictures.

Comment 5. Please ensure that all author’s names and their affiliations are placed correctly.

Response.

Author’s name and the affiliation have been written and sorted correctly.

Comment 6. Make every effort to address the remaining concerns and to resubmit your manuscript. If you anticipate an additional delay, or if you do not wish to resubmit your manuscript, then please notify us as soon as possible.

Response.

We tried to do the best to fix our manuscript.

Comment 7. Please keep your coauthors apprised of the status of the article throughout the revision process.

Response.

We have been informed all co-authors about the status of our article and we have been working together to revise the manuscript.

Reviewer 1

Comment [d1]. If it is okay, can we change the title? ? To Characteristic of

Synbiotics from Local Materials, Which are Encapsulated Using Skim Milk and Malto Dextrin? Because the inhibition against salmonella was not performed in this study and even not mentioned in your objectives. We can just state in the discussion that the encapsulated synbiotics could be a potential alternative on salmonella reduction in chickens

Response.

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We have been change the title with ‘Encapsulated of cassava, Skim Milk and Malto Dextrin symbiotic characteristic and their synergitic effects against Salmonella sp.

Inhibition’. Because we have been added the inhibition against salmonella in this study and mentioned in our objectives.

Comment [d2]. Delete ‘word’.

Response.

As suggested, we have been deleted

Comment [d3]. You may state your abstract in shorter way or just direct to the point.

What was the general result?

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed the abstract in shorter Comment [d4]. Italize

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed to italize

Comment [d5]. Do you have limitations encountered of your study? You may also incorporate at least 1-2 sentences to give the readers the whole idea of the study that shows the methods, results and even possible recommendations based on the findings and or limitations of the present study

Response.

As suggested, we have been added sentences to the methods present that methods, results and even possible recommendations based on the study

Comment [d6]. Not italize Response.

As suggested, we have been changed to not italize Comment [d6]. Same comment with [d5]

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed to not italize Comment [d7]. Not italize

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed to not italize Comment [d8]. Not italize

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed to not italize

Comment [d9]. Please cite the author/s of this statements.

Response.

As suggested, we have been added cite the author/s of that statements in our manuscript Comment [d10]. Better if you can find a recent references.

Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript

Comment [d11]. Can you search a related study that uses symbiotic and state the effects against Salmonella sp. and the levels of combination. So that your introduction will really provide a strong articulation.

Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript about a related

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study that uses symbiotic and state the effects against Salmonella sp Comment [d12]. Delete ‘word’

Response.

As suggested, we have been deleted Comment [d13]. Synbiotic

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed with correct ‘word’

Comment [d14]. Why is this different from the Trichoderma presented in the introduction? I guess, you should be consistent

Response.

As suggested, we have been consistent. The strain of Trichoderma is Trichoderma koningii

Comment [d15]. Its better I guess if you could provide at least 1-2 sentences here on pH test so that the reader will have an immediate idea how this being performed , though you have a citations, but much better to provide ideas on this

Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript about pH test Comment [d16]. Follow comment 14

Response.

As suggested, we have been followed, added and explained in our manuscript about proximate test

Comment [d17]. In past form Response.

As suggested, we have been changed Comment [d18]. Pamungkas et al. (2011), Response.

As suggested, we have been changed Comment [d19]. 6.20

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed Comment [d20]. 4.40-5.80

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed Comment [d21]. Use decimal Response.

As suggested, we have been changed

Comment [d22]. Same comment ‘Use decimal’

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed

Comment [d23]. Please use decimal all figures of this table Response.

As suggested, we have been used decimal all figures of our table

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Comment [d24]. decimal Response.

As suggested, we have been used decimal

Comment [d25]. What does this result mean? It’s better to elaborated what does it mean to decline? Or increase? Its better also to arrange the idea accordingly..

For example:

a. what is the general findings?

The results of the synbiotics was higher in…..as compare to…

b. why this is the result and the possible articulation?

The findings of this study suggest that….

c. what does it mean to have that result?

This means that …..

d. whom had related or inverse result?

This findings is in agreement/supported/coincided/related with the results of the study conducted by…..

Apply this throughout the discussion Response.

As suggested, we have been elaborated and explained the through out the idea on our manuscript

Comment [d26]. I think this can be deleted because this is part of proximate analysis Response.

As suggested, we have been deleted

Comment [d27]. Did Santoso (2011) mentioned up to what percentage of the DM could accelerate the accelerator?

Response.

As suggested, we have been accelerated Comment [d28]. Please indicate its source Response.

As suggested, we have been added the indicate

Comment [d29]. In my own opinion, and I hope I am correct, it’s not proper to claim as best treatment/combinations. It is safer to state the highest results or lowest was derived from…..

Apply this to the whole discussion.

Response.

As suggested, we have been applied and explained about treatment and combinations.

Comment [d30]. Use point/decimal/period, instead of comma. Apply this in the whole manuscript.

Response.

As suggested, we have been applied in our manuscript Comment [d31]. Use dot/decimal, not comma

Response.

As suggested, we have been applied in our manuscript

Comment [d32]. The encapsulated synbiotics based of the results could be a potential for reducing salmonella in chickens, however, the highlighted statement should not be included here because the test for salmonella using the encapsulated symbiotic was not performed in this study. Instead, state here that the findings of this study could be a potential for salmonella reduction. This is a good future research as alternative to antibiotic as you mentioned in the introduction.

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Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript about how The encapsulated synbiotics based of the results could be a potential for reducing Salmonella in chickens

Comment [d33]. This conclusion is too long. Please summarize this by stating the general findings or the highlight and the possible recommendation based on the findings and or limitations of the study.

Response.

As suggested, we have been made conclude and summarized short Comment [d34]. Enclose with parenthesis

Response.

As suggested, we have been Enclosed with parenthesis

Reviewer 2

Comment [YK1]. Encapsulated of cassava, Skim Milk and Malto Dextrin symbiotic characteristic and their synergitic effects against Salmonella sp. Inhibition Response.

As suggested, we have been changed

Comment [YK2]. Remove the ANOVA test in your result reportiing Response.

As suggested, we have been deleted

Comment [YK3]. Need to elaborate your result rather than reporting significantly difference or not. Use appropriate word which justif

Response.

As suggested, we have been elaborated and explained in our manuscript Comment [YK4]. Define what is RAK? pattern

Response.

As suggested, we have been added

Comment [YK5]. What about the bacterial inhibition potential of the symbiosis of the cassava, skim milk and malto dextrin ?

Response.

As suggested, we have been explained in our manuscript Comment [YK6]. Future tense

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed

Comment [YK7]. Indicate the specific humidity range at that time Response.

As suggested, we have been explained in our manuscript Comment [YK8]. Is this a proposal or article

Response.

As suggested, We have made corrections in the reference

Comment [YK9]. Should be written following the procedure indicated Rakhmani (2005)

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Response.

As suggested, We have made corrections in the reference Comment [YK10]. Use standard (SI unit) e.g. gram= g Response.

As suggested, we have been used

Comment [YK11]. Write in appropriate way of narrriating your report .. If the fungus grow in room temperature whay you said 25-370C

Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript Comment [YK12]. This is more of discussion not Methodology

Response.

As suggested, we have been change

Comment [YK13]. Following the procedure/formula of Bacteriological Analytical Manual, Husmaini (2012).

Response.

As suggested, We have made corrections in the reference

Comment [YK14]. What is your base to select the following ratio?

Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript Comment [YK15]. FIELD CODE CHANGED

Response.

As suggested, we have been changed

Comment [YK16]. This is direct speech. Please write in scientifical way of reporting speech Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript

Comment [YK17]. The collected data was subjected to ANOVA using SPSS version 17.

Further Treatments mean differences were separated by using Duncan test.

Response.

As suggested, we have been added and explained in our manuscript Comment [YK18]. -

Response.

As suggested, we have been added’a’

Comment [YK19]. Of what?

Response.

As suggested, we have been explained in the title table 2. pH Synbiotics Cassava Flour Media

Comment [YK20]. Please make it short and conclude and summarized based on your main or important findings!

Response.

As suggested, we have been made conclude and summarized short

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AUTHOR QUERY FORM

Journal: AAVS

Article Name: Encapsulated of Cassava, Skim Milk and Malto Dextrin Symbiotic Characteristic and their Synergitic Effects against Salmonella sp. Inhibition

Corresponding Author: Novita Dewi Kristanti Author Queries:

1. During the process of final proofreading and typesetting of your manuscript, the following queries have arisen. The queries are related to RED text in the galley proof. Please check your typeset proof carefully against the queries listed below and make the necessary changes either on this query form or directly on the PDF galley proof. Watch short demo (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VsvY660PIok)or follow the page given beneath for making changes directly in the pdf.

2. No further changes will be allowed once article will be fully published.

Quer y Ref

Page number

Details required Author’s

response

AQ1

Please carefully check:

1) Names of all authors (First Name and Surname) 2) They are given in the correct order

3) Their affiliation are labelled and are given in the correct order Please note that once the article has been submitted the list of authorship is not liable to be changed. No additions, deletions or change in order will be accepted/allowed.

AQ2 Please check for the scientific names and confirm that they all are given in correct order and italic font style.

AQ3 Please go through the reference list and delete the references that are not cited in the text.

AQ4 All The references in red are not given in the reference section of the article. Please provide these.

AQ5 7 Please provide Novelty statement.

AQ8 6 Table 9 is not cited in the text please check.

Any query or additional file related to the article may be sent to email

[email protected]

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AUTHOR QUERY FORM

Journal: AAVS

Article Name: Encapsulated of Cassava, Skim Milk and Malto Dextrin Symbiotic Characteristic and their Synergitic Effects against Salmonella sp. Inhibition

Corresponding Author: Novita Dewi Kristanti Author Queries:

1. During the process of final proofreading and typesetting of your manuscript, the following queries have arisen. The queries are related to RED text in the galley proof. Please check your typeset proof carefully against the queries listed below and make the necessary changes either on this query form or directly on the PDF galley proof. Watch short demo (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VsvY660PIok)or follow the page given beneath for making changes directly in the pdf.

2. No further changes will be allowed once article will be fully published.

Quer

y Ref Page

number Details required Author’s response

AQ1

Please carefully check:

1) Names of all authors (First Name and Surname) 2) They are given in the correct order

3) Their affiliation are labelled and are given in the correct order

Please note that once the article has been submitted the list of authorship is not liable to be changed. No additions, deletions or change in order will be accepted/allowed.

Corrected name of author’s is KARTIKA BUDI UTAMI

(UTAMI KB)

AQ2

Please check for the scientific names and confirm that they all are given in correct order and italic font style.

Salmonella sp, Trichoderma and Salmonellosis are italic font style

AQ3 Please go through the reference list and delete the references that are not cited in the text.

We’ve deleted references that were not cited by marking them in red:

Husmaini (2012):

Purwoko (2007):

Rulinggar et al., 2017:

Saju et al. (2002):

Sudarmaji et al., 1984:

Penta

and Mujoko (2012):

Sitio and Alam, 2019:

Saono (1976):

Gray and Williams

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(1971):

Fardiaz, 1987:

Adriansyah et al., 2015:

AQ4 All

The references in red are not given in the reference section of the article. Please provide these.

We agree that all references are not given in the reference section of the article

AQ5 7 Please provide Novelty statement.

Novelty statement stated: “The development of Trichoderma

probiotics that are bred in local ingredients such as bran, corn and cassava which are available in Indonesia is expected to provide opportunities for farmers to be able to make their own synbiotics mixed in feed, so as to achieve independence in the provision of feed to increase the

availability of healthy animal protein”.

AQ8 6 Table 9 is not cited in the text please check. It’s clear that there is no Table 9 in the text.

Any query or additional file related to the article may be sent to email

[email protected]

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Dear Author,

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Novita Kristanti <[email protected]> Sen, 6 Sep21.23 kepada Nexus

Dear Editor

Thanks for your information.

Regard

Dari: Nexus Academics <[email protected]>

Date: Sab, 21 Agu 2021 22.14

Subject: Galley Proof of your Article (AAVS_MH20210331030321-R2_Kristanti et al) in Advances in Animal and Veterinary Sciences

To: Yendry Junaidi <[email protected]>, Rohaim, Mohammed

<[email protected]>

Dear Author,

Thank you very much for your contribution in AAVS.

We have now formatted your article according to the journal's format. Please take a good look before its final publication in full. There is a query form attached for the queries arose during type setting. You can

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