Bukti Korespondensi The Policy on the Development of Integrated Coastal and Livestock Area Based on Geospatial in East Kalimantan

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[Technium BioChemMed] Submission Acknowledgement

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[Technium BioChemMed] Revision request

Technium BioChemMed <[email protected]> Fri, Mar 05, 2021 at 10:37 AM To: Abdunnur <[email protected]>

Abdunnur:

The paper "The Policy on the Development of Integrated Coastal and Livestock Area Based on Geospatial in East Kalimantan" has been preliminarily reviewed.

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(i) All corrections as per the reviewers' comments and prepare a table / response letter showing corrections done. Your corrections will not be accepted in the absence of this response letter / table.

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Reviewer A

Overall, the study highlights the potential for developing the livestock sector in the coastal areas of East Kalimantan Province, Indonesia. It emphasizes the importance of using geospatial information and statistical data in decision-making for livestock development and suggests that livestock breeding in the coastal area can serve as an income substitution for communities and an alternative livelihood for fishermen.

o However, the paper lacks specific details and examples to support its claims. For instance, it does not provide any information on the availability of land and feed sources, the current status of the livestock sector in the region, or the potential economic and ecological benefits of developing the sector. Additionally, the study does not address any potential challenges or drawbacks of developing the livestock sector in the coastal area, such as environmental impacts or competition with other land uses.

o One potential improvement could be to provide more background information on the importance of livestock production in Indonesia, as this would help readers understand why this topic is important. Additionally, the introduction could benefit from more explicit links between the potential for livestock production in coastal areas and the overall goal of improving welfare and prosperity in Indonesia. Overall, the introduction sets up the main argument of the article well and provides readers with the necessary context to understand the potential of coastal areas for livestock development.

o The discussion provides an overview of the geographic conditions, natural resources, and potential for the development of East Kalimantan Province, particularly its coastal areas. The authors should also explain that the

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province has a diverse topography, ranging from lowland areas to high mountains and a tropical wet climate. They should also highlight coastal areas of East Kalimantan Province are strategic areas that have an important role for the community, especially as a livelihood, and have comparative and competitive advantages, making them potential areas for development.

o Furthermore, the paper could benefit from clearer and more concise language. The sentences are often long and complex, which can make it difficult for readers to follow the main points. Some of the sentences could be broken down into shorter, more easily digestible statements to improve readability and comprehension.

o Overall, while the paper highlights an interesting and potentially important topic, it would benefit from more specific and detailed information, as well as clearer and more concise language

o The topic of the paper is hot and interesting. I've read your article with a lot of interest. Overall, this paper has some practical innovations and also discusses the findings. Based on this reading, I'll start by providing some recommendations for improving the article:

Reviewer B

The manuscript presents a perspective on the potential of developing livestock in the coastal area of East Kalimantan Province, Indonesia. The author argues that the unique spatial characteristics of the region make it an ideal location for livestock breeding and that such an activity could provide an alternative livelihood for fishermen and improve the welfare of local communities.

ü While the idea of developing livestock in the coastal area of East Kalimantan Province may seem attractive, the critical analysis and empirical evidence to support the claims made in the manuscript are missing. For instance, the author claims that the physical and geographic advantages of the region make it suitable for livestock breeding. However, there is no discussion on the specific advantages of the region or how they compare to other regions in Indonesia or other countries with coastal areas.

ü Although the introduction provides a clear overview of the current situation in Indonesia and its potential for developing its coastal areas for livestock production, however, using statistics and data will add credibility to the presented argument. The authors should also highlight the importance of a regional approach and the need for accurate data to support policy-making and successful implementation.

ü There is a well-written discussion of the geographic conditions and potential of East Kalimantan Province, with a focus on the importance of coastal areas and their resources. The discussion provides a clear overview of the province's physical geography, climate, and natural resources, highlighting its potential for economic growth through livestock development and utilization of coastal resources. The article also stresses the importance of managing coastal areas sustainably and integrating the livestock sub-sector into coastal resource management.

ü The conclusion of the article must present a clear argument for the potential of developing the livestock sector in the coastal area of East Kalimantan Province. The author should highlight the importance of having a database with geospatial information and statistical data to guide decision-making in the development of livestock areas.

They should present how the availability of land and feed sources in the coastal area makes it a suitable location for livestock breeding, which can provide an alternative livelihood for fishermen during bad weather conditions.

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[Technium BioChemMed] Revision Submission Acknowledgement

Technium BioChemMed <[email protected]> Thu, Mar 25, 2021 at 08:12 AM To: Abdunnur <[email protected]>

Abdunnur:

Thank you for submitting revision of the manuscript, "The Policy on the Development of Integrated Coastal and Livestock Area Based on Geospatial in East Kalimantan" to

Technium BioChemMed.

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RESPONSE TO REVIEWER-A

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

Overall, the study highlights the potential for developing the livestock sector in the coastal areas of East Kalimantan Province, Indonesia. It emphasizes the importance of using geospatial information and statistical data in decision- making for livestock development and suggests that livestock breeding in the coastal area can serve as an income substitution for communities and an alternative livelihood for fishermen.

Thanks a lot, dear reviewer, valuable comments and suggestions.

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However, the paper lacks specific details and examples to support its claims. For instance, it does not provide any information on the availability of land and feed sources, the current status of the livestock sector in the region, or the potential economic and ecological benefits of developing the sector.

Additionally, the study does not address any potential challenges or drawbacks of developing the livestock sector in the coastal area, such as environmental impacts or competition with other land uses.

Many thanks for your kind suggestions. We have revised the introduction of the paper thoroghly.

Please see page 1

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One potential improvement could be to provide more background information on the importance of livestock production in Indonesia, as this would help readers understand why this topic is important.

Additionally, the introduction could benefit from more explicit links between the potential for livestock production in coastal areas and the overall goal of improving welfare and prosperity in Indonesia. Overall, the introduction sets up the main argument of the article well and provides readers with the necessary context to understand the potential of coastal areas for livestock development.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind remarks. We have

provided more background information on the importance of livestock production in Indonesia and also incorporated other changes.

Please see pages 1-6

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The discussion provides an overview of the geographic conditions, natural resources, and potential for the development of East Kalimantan Province, particularly its coastal areas. The authors should also explain that the province has a diverse topography, ranging from lowland areas to high mountains and a tropical wet climate. They should also highlight coastal areas of East Kalimantan Province are strategic areas that have an important role for the community, especially as a livelihood, and have comparative and competitive advantages, making them

Respected reviewer, Many thanks for your kind suggestions and guidelines. We have revised this part as suggested.

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RESPONSE TO REVIEWER-B

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

1. The manuscript presents a perspective on the potential of developing livestock in the coastal area of East Kalimantan Province, Indonesia.

The author argues that the unique spatial characteristics of the region make it an ideal location for livestock breeding and that such an activity could provide an alternative livelihood for fishermen and

improve the welfare of local communities.

Thanks very much, dear reviewer, for your kind remarks.

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While the idea of developing livestock in the coastal area of East Kalimantan Province may seem attractive, the critical analysis and empirical evidence to support the claims made in the manuscript are missing. For instance, the author claims that the physical and geographic advantages of the region make it suitable for livestock breeding. However, there is no discussion on the specific advantages of the region or how they compare to other regions in Indonesia or other countries with coastal areas.

Dear reviewer, we have revised the introduction as suggested

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Although the introduction provides a clear overview of the current situation in Indonesia and its potential for developing its coastal areas for livestock production, however, using statistics and data will add credibility to the presented argument. The authors should also highlight the importance of a regional approach and the need for accurate data to support policy-making and successful

Dear reviewer, many thanks for your kind suggestion. Following your kind instructions, we have

provided a clear overview of the current situation in Indonesia and its potential for developing its coastal areas for livestock production.

potential areas for development.

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Furthermore, the paper could benefit from clearer and more concise language. The sentences are often long and complex, which can make it difficult for readers to follow the main points. Some of the sentences could be broken down into shorter, more easily digestible statements to improve readability and comprehension.

Respected reviewer, Thank you

Done as suggested throughout the paper.

5.

Overall, while the paper highlights an interesting and potentially important topic, it would benefit from more specific and detailed information, as well as clearer and more concise language.

Done dear reviewer.

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implementation.

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There is a well-written discussion of the geographic conditions and potential of East Kalimantan Province, with a focus on the importance of coastal areas and their resources. The discussion provides a clear overview of the province's physical geography, climate, and natural resources, highlighting its potential for economic growth through livestock development and utilization of coastal resources. The article also stresses the importance of managing coastal areas sustainably and integrating the livestock sub- sector into coastal resource management.

Respected reviewer, Many thanks for your kind remarks.

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The article's conclusion must present a clear argument for the potential of developing the livestock sector in the coastal area of East Kalimantan Province. The author should highlight the importance of having a database with geospatial information and statistical data to guide decision-making in the development of livestock areas. They should present how the availability of land and feed sources in the coastal area makes it a suitable location for livestock breeding, which can provide an alternative livelihood for fishermen during bad weather conditions.

Respected reviewer, Thank you

we have added a conclusion with suggested changes

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[Technium BioChemMed] Revision request

Technium BioChemMed <[email protected]> Thu, Apr 15, 2021 at 10:50 AM To: Abdunnur <[email protected]>

Abdunnur:

The paper "The Policy on the Development of Integrated Coastal and Livestock Area Based on Geospatial in East Kalimantan" has been reviewed again.

After a fruitful 1st round of review, here are some suggestions for 2nd round to enhance manuscript quality.

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However, some of the information presented in the introduction lacks proper citations or references. For instance, the statement that "the coastal area is very potential to be developed" is not backed by any sources. It would be more convincing if the author could provide evidence or studies that support this claim. Additionally, some of the language and sentence structures could be improved for clarity and readability.

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In the discussion section, the article should also provide information on the public uses, conservation areas, and special areas of the coastal zone. The article must highlight the need for integrated management that requires expertise from various disciplines, including agriculture, anthropology, policy analysis, ecology, oceanography, hydro-oceanography, engineering, economics, law, sociology, and animal husbandry.

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Finally, the article should mention the potential of the agricultural sector and the food processing industry to provide by-products and/or waste that can be used for animal feed.

Please ensure the submission of the revision within 1 month of receiving this mail either both as a reply to this mail and in the online system.

The paper can be resubmitted for a review after huge improvements, and this does not guarantee it will be approved.

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[Technium BioChemMed] Revision Submission Acknowledgement

Technium BioChemMed <[email protected]> Wed, May 05, 2021 at 11:01 AM To: Abdunnur <[email protected]>

Abdunnur:

Thank you for submitting revision of the manuscript, "The Policy on the Development of Integrated Coastal and Livestock Area Based on Geospatial in East Kalimantan" to

Technium BioChemMed.

Editor in Chief

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RESPONSE TO REVIEWER

No. Reviewer's Comment Response

After a fruitful 1st round of review, here are some suggestions for 2nd round to enhance manuscript quality.

Once again, many thanks for allowing us to revise the manuscript as per the standards of the prestigious journal. We have now revised the manuscript to meet your kind requirements.

1. However, some of the information presented in the introduction lacks proper citations or references. For instance, the statement that

"the coastal area is very potential to be developed" is not backed by any sources. It would be more convincing if the author could provide evidence or studies that support this claim. Additionally, some of the language and sentence structures could be improved for clarity and readability.

Dear reviewer revised the introduction as per your kind suggestion

2 In the discussion section, the article should also provide information on the public uses, conservation areas, and special areas of the coastal zone. The article must highlight the need for integrated management that requires expertise from various disciplines, including agriculture, anthropology, policy analysis, ecology, oceanography, hydro-oceanography, engineering, economics, law, sociology, and animal husbandry.

Following your kind guidelines, we have revised the discussion section.

3 Finally, the article should mention the potential of the agricultural sector and the food processing industry to provide by-products and/or waste that can be used for animal feed.

Dear reviewer, we have now mentioned the potential of the agricultural sector and the food processing industry to provide by-products and/or waste that can be used for animal feed Please see page 17

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[Technium BioChemMed] Acceptance Acknowledgment

Technium BioChemMed <[email protected]> Fri, May 21, 2021 at 01:10 PM To: Abdunnur <[email protected]>

Abdunnur:

Congratulations!

Your paper entitled, "The Policy on the Development of Integrated Coastal and Livestock Area Based on Geospatial in East Kalimantan" has been accepted for publication in

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(Vol. 2 No. 3, 2021).

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