Journal of Talent Development and Excellence-2020-03-12
Article Title: Embodiments of the Principles of Democracy in the Formation of Legislation in Indonesia Author: Sri KusriyahReviewer Recommendation Term: (Accept/Reject/Minor Revision/Major Revision)
Overall Reviewer Manuscript Rating: (1-100) 51
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The subject matter is accurate, current and complete. (Yes/No):
If Yes, please explain.
The subject matter is current, but it needs improvement in order to make it more readable for the intended audience
Whether appropriate references and resources are listed.
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No. There are so many statements in the manuscript that require
appropriate citations as expected in any research. E.g. the first four lines in the 2nd paragraph of the
introduction section. Most of your facts and figures lack evidences.
Please back them up with reliable sources.
The information is organized in a logical and appropriate format for the intended audience. (Needs
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The information is organized in a logical and appropriate format for a report
Illustrations are suitable for clarification and/or attractiveness.
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Needs improvement. As you mentioned in the abstract that you collected both quantitative and qualitative data. Please create a section stating the methodology adopted in this study and include the sources of your quantitative and qualitative data, as well as your target audience for this study.
Accurate and complete instructions/information are given.
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Brief Technical Comments to Author*:
Pros and Cons:
Dear Author : Sri Kusriyah,
1. The write-up is original because the Similarity result indicated 20%
2. However, the main problem intended to solve in this manuscript is not clear. The statement of research problem should be the reflection of the gaps identified in the existing literature, stating the problem(s) that these gaps are posing on the subject matter/the study area (Legislation Election in Indonesia). These would form the basis of the research objectives that will eventually become some of your major contributions to the existing findings in research.
3. This study did not provide any theoretical argument to show the necessity of it.
4. Your citation is poor. Kindly visit the website of this journal in order for you to know the appropriate citation and referencing styles.
5. What are the recommendations and implications for your study? Kindly attend to this.
6. Please, attend to all the comments and suggestions itemized, it will bring out the novelty of this work
