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TABLE OF CONTENTS

CHAPTER THREE: ANALYSIS OF MPD CASE OF THE PROTAGONIST IN ROBERT LOUIS STEVENSON’S THE STRANGE CASE OF DR JEKYLL AND MR HYDE The Portrayal of Dr Jekyll ……… 12

The Portrayal of Mr Hyde ……… 17

The Cause of Dr Jekyll’s Suffering of MPD ……… 20

CHAPTER FOUR: ANALYSIS OF MPD CASE OF THE PROTAGONIST IN STEPHEN KING’S THE DARK HALF The Portrayal of Thad Beaumont ………. 23

Biography of Robert Louis Stevenson ………. 42

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ABSTRACT

Dalam tesis ini, saya menganalisis penggambaran dua protagonis yang

memiliki kepribadian ganda dari novel The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr

Hyde karya R.L. Stevenson dan novel The Dark Half karya Stephen King. Dr

Jekyll, protagonis dari The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde, memiliki

kepribadian lain yang bernama Mr Hyde, sedangkan Thad Beaumont, protagonis

dari The Dark Half, memiliki kepribadian lain yang bernama George Stark.

Karakter Mr Hyde muncul karena dipicu oleh ramuan yang dibuat dan diminum

oleh Dr Jekyll sendiri, dan karakter George Stark muncul akibat dipicu oleh tumor

otak yang dideritanya. Namun ada faktor lain yang lebih penting dalam

kemunculan kepribadian ganda tersebut, yaitu faktor latar belakang keluarga dan

peranan orang tua.

Dalam menganalisis dua protagonis tersebut, saya menggunakan teori

Freud tentang id, ego, dan superego. Kepribadian lain yang muncul dari dalam diri

mereka merupakan pencerminan dari id mereka yang seharusnya berada pada

bagian paling bawah diantara ego dan superego. Namun ada hal-hal yang dapat

membuat id mereka muncul ke permukaan. Dalam kasus Dr Jekyll, karena ia

berasal dari kalangan aristokrat, ia sangat menekan idnya sehingga id sama sekali

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kecilnya diisi oleh pengalaman buruk akibat ayahnya yang kasar. Superegonya

menjadi lemah dan akhirnya ia memiliki kepribadian lain, karena Freud

mengatakan bahwa untuk sehat, seseorang harus memiliki ego yang kuat agar ego

dapat menyeimbangkan superego dan id.

Sebagai kesimpulan, penyebab munculnya kepribadian lain dari dalam diri

Dr Jekyll dan Thad bukan semata-mata akibat ramuan dan tumor otak, akan tetapi,

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APPENDICES

Summary of The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde

There is a lawyer whose name is Mr. Utterson. One day, his friend, Enfield

tells that a figure named Mr. Hyde tramples a young girl. He disappears for a

while and then come back to give her relatives with a check signed by Hyde. The

name rreminds him of one of Utterson’s clients and close friends, Dr. Jekyll, who

has written a will which says that he will transfer all his property to that name.

Mr. Utterson comes to visit Jekyll and their friend Dr. Lanyon because of

his curiosity.. Lanyon says that he never sees Jekyll again since they heve a

dispute over the Jekyll’s research. Utterson then points out a building that Hyde

visits which he later recognizes as a laboratory which is on the back of Jekyll’s

home.

In the following year, a servant witnesses Hyde beats an old man, Sir

Danvers Carew, to death. Once again he visits Jekyll, but now he claims to have

ended all relations with Hyde. He shows Utterson a note written by Hyde to

Jekyll. Utterson sees that the handwriting is similar to Dr. Jekyll’s handwriting.

For a few months, Jekyll acts friendly and sociably, but then Jekyll

suddenly begins to refuse visitors, and Lanyon dies from a shock that has a

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One day, Jekyll’s butler, Mr. Poole, visits Utterson to tell him that Jekyll

has isolated himself in his laboratory for several weeks, and the voice that comes

from the room is different from Jekyll’s voice. Utterson and Poole break into

Jekyll’s laboratory and find the body of Hyde, wearing Jekyll’s clothes and he

dies of suicide. They also find a letter from Jekyll to Utterson that promises to

explain everything.

Utterson takes the letter home. At first he reads Lanyon’s letter. It reveals

that Lanyon’s death is caused by the shock of seeing Mr. Hyde take a potion and

metamorphose into Dr. Jekyll. The second letter is a testament by Jekyll. It

explains how Jekyll, seeking to separate his good side from his darker side. He

finally discoveres a way to transform himself periodically into a monster free of

conscience,Mr. Hyde.

At first, Jekyll reports, he is delighted in becoming Hyde and rejoiced in

the moral freedom that the creature has. Eventually, however, he finds that he is

turning into Hyde in his sleep, even without taking the potion. One night the urge

grips him too strong, and after the transformation he immediately rushes out and

violently kills Sir Danvers Carew. Jekyll tries harder to stop the transformations,

and for a time he proves successful. One day, however, while sitting in a park, he

suddenly turns into Hyde, the first time that a metamorphosis happens while he

was awake.

The letter continues describing Jekyll’s cry for help. Far from his

laboratory and is hunted by the police as a murderer, Hyde needs Lanyon’s help to

get his potions and become Jekyll again. But when he transforms in front of

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Then Jekyll returns to his home, only to find himself even more helpless

and trapped as the transformations increased in frequency and necessitated even

larger doses of potion in order to reverse themselves. Eventually, the potion

begins to run out, and Jekyll was unable to find a key ingredient to make more.

His ability to change back from Hyde into Jekyll slowly vanishes. Jekyll writes

that even as he composes his letter he knows that he will soon become Hyde

permanently, and he wonders if Hyde will face execution for his crimes or choose

to kill himself.

Summary of The Dark Half

Thad Beaumont was still a young boy when two big things happened to

him. The first thing was he was awarded an Honorable Mention in the contest’s

Fiction category. His mother was very happy while his father only complained

because Thad did not receive money. The second thing was he occasionally had

terrible headaches which brought him to the operation room. He was diagnosed to

have a brain tumor. During surgery, it turns out that it is not a brain tumor. It was

his unborn twin which is thought to be absorbed into him and later removed from

his skull.

When Thad grows up, he becomes a writer. His own books are not really

successful, but under the pen name George Stark, he becomes a successful and

popular writer. He writes crime novels about a violent killer named Alexis

Machine. But when someone blackmails him, he “buries” George Stark publically

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But then the empty grave of George Stark is found to have been dug as if

someone gone out from there. From that point on a series of violent murder

happens and Thad becomes the prime suspect as his fingerprint is found at the

murder scene.

At first, Sheriff Alan Pangborn thinks that Thad is the killer as the

fingerprints that were found in place of evidence matched with Thad’s

fingerprints. But, then he realizes that Thad’s family also is in danger. The

murderer who is believed to be George Stark threatens Thad’s family. It is quite

strange that Stark’s voices and fingerprints are identical to Thad’s.

Finally it is revealed that the murderer is Thad’s alter ego that transforms

into a new person whose appearance is similar to Thad, except his bigger body

and blonde hairs. His name is George Stark, the name of Thad’s pseudonym.

Stark is mad and takes his wife and his twin children as a hostage. But in the end

Thad is successful in killing Stark that actually was never born.

Biography of Robert Louis Stevenson

Robert Lewis Balfour Stevenson was born in Edinburgh, Scotland, on 13

November 1850. He was the only son of Thomas Stevenson, a prosperous

joint-engineer to the Board of Northern Lighthouses, and Margaret Balfour, daughter of

a Scottish clergyman. It was from this side of the family that he inherited his love

of adventure, joy of the sea and for the open road. His maternal grandfather,

Lewis Balfour, was a professor of moral philosophy and a minister.

Since his childhood, Stevenson suffered from tuberculosis. During his

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learned to read. He produced a short historical tale at the age of sixteen. In 1867

he entered Edinburgh University to study engineering. Due to his ill health, he had

to abandon his plans to follow in his father's footsteps. Stevenson changed to law

and in 1875 he was called to the Scottish bar. By then he had already started to

write travel sketches, essays, and short stories for magazines. His first articles

were published in The Edinburgh University Magazine (1871) and The Portofolio

(1873).

Stevenson gained first fame with the romantic adventure story Treasure

Island, which appeared first serialized in Young Folks (1881-1882).

Stevenson often traveled abroad in search of more healthful climates. His

earliest works which are An Inland Voyage (1878) and Travels with a Donkey in

the Cevennes (1879) are descriptions of his journeys. His long journey finally

ended in Samoa, where he and his wife settled as a final effort to restore his

health.

On 3 December 1894, Stevenson died of brain hemorrhage in Samoa and was

buried on a mountaintop behind Vailima, his Samoan home.

Biography of Stephen King

Stephen King was born in 1947 in Portland, Maine. He was the second son

of Donald and Nellie Ruth Pillsbury King. After his parents separated when he

was a toddler, he and his older brother, David, were raised by his mother in Fort

Wayne, Indiana. When Stephen was eleven, his mother brought her children back

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Stephen has been writing since an early age. When in school, he wrote

stories based on movies he had seen recently and sold them to his friends. At

around the age of thirteen, Stephen discovered a box of his father's old books at

his aunt's house, mainly horror and science fiction. After this, he started to love

that genre. His first published story was In a Half-World of Terror published in a

horror fanzine issued by Mike Garrett of Birmingham, Alabama.

Stephen attended the grammar school in Durham and then Lisbon Falls

High School, graduating in 1966. At the University of Maine at Orono, he wrote a

weekly column for the school newspaper, THE MAINE CAMPUS. He graduated

from the University of Maine in 1970, with a B.A. in English and qualified to

teach on the high school level.

He married Tabitha Spruce in January of 1971. As Stephen was unable to

find placement as a teacher immediately, his family lived on his earnings as a

laborer at an industrial laundry, and his selling his short stories to men's

magazines.

In the fall of 1971, Stephen began teaching high school English classes at

Hampden Academy. Writing in the evenings and on the weekends, he continued

to produce short stories and to work on novels.

In the spring of 1973, Doubleday & Co. accepted his novel Carrie for

publication. Then Stephen learned from his new editor at Doubleday, Bill

Thompson, that a major paperback sale would provide him with the means to

leave teaching and write full-time. Stephen has two pseudonyms which are

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Carrie was published in the spring of 1974. In the fall of the same year, the

Kings left Maine for Boulder, Colorado. They lived there for a little less than a

year, during which Stephen wrote The Shining, set in Colorado. They returned to

Maine in the summer of 1975.

In 1977, the Kings spent three months of a projected year- long stay in

England and returned home in mid-December, purchasing a new home in Center

Lovell, Maine. After living there one summer, the Kings moved north to

Orrington, near Bangor, so that Stephen could teach creative writing at the

University of Maine at Orono. The Kings returned to Center Lovell in the spring

of 1979.

The Kings have three children: Naomi Rachel, Joe Hill and Owen Phillip,

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CHAPTER ONE

INTRODUCTION

Background of the Study

Multiple personality disorder which is also known as dissociative

identity disorder is the existence in an individual of two or more different

personalities or ego-states, and to be qualified as dissociative identity disorder

there must be at least two personalities take control of the individual's behavior

regularly (Cherry).

Multiple Personality Disorder (MPD), is one of the topics which is

most talked about and the center of much debate and criticism. The cases of MPD

have increased in the past two decades, but there are many professionals who are

still doubtful about whether it even exists (Cherry). The case of multiple

personality disorder has also appeared in literature for some 300 years and is still

a mystery.

In this thesis, I want to analyze MPD which occurs to the protagonists

in the two novels that I choose as I found the case of MPD is a very interesting

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Psychological criticism is the most suitable approach for my thesis

since the case of MPD is a psychological case. MPD itself is a psychological

illness which is caused by psychological experiences in someone’s life. Through

this thesis, I want to analyze the protagonists in both novels who suffer from the

MPD. I use Freud theory which I will explain in the next chapter.

R.L Stevenson’s work titled The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr

Hyde portrays powers of invention and depth of psychological insight. As a

novelist, Stevenson has a skill defined by G.K. Chesterton as being able ‘to pick

the right word up on the point of his pen.’ (Penguin Popular Classics 3). His style

of writing is very captivating, like what the poet Gerard Manley Hopkins said that

‘Stevenson is a master of a consummate style, and each phrase is finished as in

poetry’ (Dury). The publisher Penguin Classics even said that Stevenson had

made an enormous contribution to the world of English literature with his novels,

poetry, and essays (Penguin Group (USA)).

As the comparison, I choose a contemporary American novelist,

Stephen King as he is the most productive and prominent horror writer of the 21st century. His profound influence on modern horror literature cannot be denied.

His works have been regarded as an insightful reflection of fears, anxieties, and

obsessions of the late twentieth century (enotes.com). Stephen King has written

more than forty novels and two hundred short stories. Since 1976, King has been a

nominee in many awards almost every year and often he becomes the winner of

the awards. He even becomes the recipient of Medal Distinguished Contribution

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The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde gives something different

compared with the other Stevenson’s works. This novel mixes psychological

aspect with science that emerged at Victorian era. It offers something new and of

course it is really interesting. Once again Penguin Classics gave their opinion

toward R.L. Stevenson’s The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde that said

‘Few Victorian mysteries are more haunting, sinister and profound than Dr Jekyll

and Mr Hyde’. (Penguin Popular Classics 100). This novel also has been made

into films with many versions (Dury).

The Dark Half, from many mystery novels written by Stephen King, is

the only one which tells about psychological matter that has always been debated

in decades, multiple personality disorder. This novel mixes mystery,

psychological aspect, and also medical science. Flint Journal said the novel as ‘A

knockout thriller…brilliant, compelling…grips you by the throat.’ And New York

Times Book Review said it as ‘A chiller.’ (Signet 2).

Both novels which I want to analyze have a case of MPD. There are

similarities in the novels. First, both of the protagonists in the novels, which are

Dr. Jekyll and Thad Beaumont, have double personality in one body. Dr. Jekyll

has Mr. Hyde and Thad Beaumont has George Stark. The second similarity is that

their alter egos are evil, compared to their conscious personalities.

There are also differences in both novels. The first difference is the

protagonist of The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, Dr. Jekyll is aware

that he has another unconscious personality in him and it also appears because he

wants it. He wants to separate the bad side of him from the good side. So, the alter

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different with the case in the novel The Dark Half. The protagonist in the novel,

Thad Beaumont, at first does not know that he has another personality. The alter

ego of him comes out accidentally. Second, the causes of their multiple

personality disorder are different. While the cause on the surface of the existence

of Mr. Hyde is a potion which is made by Dr. Jekyll to separate the bad side of

him, the cause of the emergence of George Stark is the tumor which is believed as

his unborn twin brother. The last difference is the setting of time; The Strange

Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde is in 19th century, while the setting of time in The Dark Half is in 20th century.

In this thesis, I want to prove that the causes of MPD in both the

novels are not simply the potion which was drunk by Dr. Jekyll or the brain

tumor, which is considered to be his unborn twin, in Thad’s head. I will propose

to analyze the cause of MPD case experienced by the two protagonists. According

to the psychological theory of MPD, the background of life, including the

psychological experience, plays important part in revealing the cause of MPD

case.

Statement of the Problem

1. How do the authors portray the protagonists who suffer from MPD in

these novels?

2. What are the causes of MPD suffered by the protagonists seen from

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Purpose of the Study

1. To show how the authors portray the protagonists who suffer from MPD in

these novels.

2. To show what the causes of MPD suffered by the protagonists seen from

Freud’s Theory of Mind.

Method of Research

In this major thesis, I use library and internet research. I use

psychological approach by Freud’s Theory of Mind: Topographical Models of

Personality and Structural Model of Mind. First, I read Stevenson’s The Strange

Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde, and as the comparison I also read King’s The

Dark Half. After reading both novels, I choose the most suitable approach to

analyze the MPD case in them which is psychological approach. Then, I choose

Freud’s Theory of Mind as I find it can explain the cause of MPD case from the

psychological perspective. I search the theory of Freud and MPD through internet

and by reading other sources. Then I make the conclusion.

The Organization of the Thesis

My major thesis is divided into five chapters. Chapter one is the

Introduction which contains Background of the Study, Statement of the Problem,

Purpose of the Study, Methods of Research and Organization of the Thesis.

Chapter two is Theoretical Background. Chapter three is the Analysis of MPD

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of MPD Case in The Dark Half. Chapter five consists of the Conclusion of the

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CHAPTER FIVE

CONCLUSION

MPD is the existence in an individual of two or more personalities. MPD

itself is still a mystery since many professionals are doubtful whether MPD really

exists or not. The case of MPD in literature has appeared since 300 years ago, and

both novels which I have analyzed are included in the literature which involves

MPD cases.

After reading and analyzing the novel The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and

Mr Hyde and The Dark Half, I find that both protagonists suffer from MPD and

the causes of their MPD are not merely the potion that Dr Jekyll drank and the

brain tumor which Thad has. The role of their parents in shaping their superego is

also one of the causes and even the most important aspect that causes them to

suffer from MPD. According to Freud, in order to be a healthy person, one should

have strong ego so as to make a balance between superego and id. Superego and

id cannot be too strong or too weak because it can result in an imbalance between

them.

In the case of Dr Jekyll and Thad Beaumont, the problem is lies in their

superego. Dr Jekyll’s superego is dominant and his superego is the strongest

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his family background. Dr Jekyll comes from an aristocratic family that holds

firmly on the moral, norms, and rules. His parents teach him moral, norms and

rules and moreover, as an aristocrat, he is bound to behave strictly according to

them. His superego develops so well that it becomes dominant. Freud says that if

the superego becomes too strong, the person would be driven by rigid morals and

that is what happens to Dr Jekyll. Dr Jekyll behaves in accordance with the moral,

norms and rules that are valid in the society where he lives. He unconsciously

ignores his id which is his own basic instinct and he always represses his id. His

superego and id are imbalanced and as the result, he suffers from MPD which is

one of the forms of neurosis.

Thad Beaumont, on the other hand, has a weak superego. It is because he

has an unhappy childhood. His father is a drunkard and does not love nor care

about him. As a father who is supposed to be a leader and teach his child moral

values, he only acts as an irresponsible man. He does not contribute anything to

his child’s superego’s shaping. Thad’s mother, although she loves and cares about

him, cannot do anything to defend Thad as she is afraid of his father. When she is

supposed to defend Thad and she does not, it makes Thad confused about his

belief of right and wrong. Freud says that superego consists of two subsystems

which are the ego ideal and conscience. Children develop their ego ideal through

rewards from their parents when they do something good, while conscience

develops through parental punishment when the children do something bad. Thad

does not receive any rewards from his father when he does something good. In

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causes an imbalance in his superego, ego and id. Similar to Dr Jekyll’s case, Thad

also suffers from MPD that is a form of neurosis.

In the novel, it is believed that the cause of Dr Jekyll’s duality is a potion

that he makes to split his bad side and good side while the cause of Thad’s duality

is his brain tumor which is considered to be his unborn twin and later transforms

into a new character named George Stark. I think the potion that is made and

drunk by Dr Jekyll is just a trigger and it opens a door for his id to surface into

consciousness. The same with the potion, the brain tumor in Thad’s head is also a

trigger for his id to come out. George Stark is not his unborn twin as their

fingerprints and voiceprints are the same. It is said that even identical twins do not

have the same fingerprints and voiceprints. So, the potion and the brain tumor is

just triggers and the real cause is their family background.

Although the characteristics of Dr Jekyll and Thad Beaumont are different,

their alter egos have quite similar characteristics. They are portrayed as cruel men

who kill people violently, they are rude and egocentric. Their behaviors are driven

by their id which Freud refers as the psyche that does not take social norms into

account when thinking or acting. According to Freud, the id is actually the biggest

part of the psyche of human mind. So, although id is stored in the lower part of

human mind and most of the time is repressed because it is often times against the

morality, the id still can go to the surface and becomes dominant in one’s

alter-ego characteristics.

The authors have their own perception about the superego and the id in

human minds. They can be seen from the way the authors create the physical

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and positive psyche in the human mind as he portrays Dr Jekyll as a man with

perfect physical appearance. Stevenson also sees superego as a part of human

mind which satisfies what the society think good because whether he is handsome

or not is in accordance to what the society think. It is the society who evaluates

which physical appearance is good while others are bad, and they also judge upon

these subjectively.

Stevenson sees id as the bad part of human mind as he portrays Mr Hyde

as a man with an ugly and devilish face, he is also portrayed as a short and small

man and has unpleasant aura. But Stevenson also portrays Mr Hyde to be much

smaller, slighter and younger than Dr Jekyll which shows that Stevenson finds the

positive part of id which is freedom. Being smaller, slighter and younger gives me

impression of freedom and agility.

Different with Stevenson, Stephen King sees the positive part of the id. He

portrays Stark to have blonde hair and tanned skin which is more attractive than

Thad. I assume that King views the id as the more interesting part of human mind.

He also portrays Stark to have broad shoulder and bigger body than Thad which

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