Appendices
Appendix 1. List of Errors
Type 1. Quantifiers
Text Error identification Correction 1 29. Later, Timun Mas threw
some chili.
29. Later, Timun Mas threw some chilies.
20 28. Later, Timun Mas took and threw the second magic stuff which is some chili.
28. Later, Timun Mas took and threw the second magic stuff which is some chilies. 22 6. He said if the cucumber
seeds was planted it will grow to be some cucumber.
6. He said if the cucumber seeds was planted it will grow to be some cucumbers.
Type 1. Articles
Text Error identification Correction 2 3. He lived alone and
worked as farmer to support himself.
3. He lived alone and worked as a farmer to support himself.
4 15. The lake is now called a lake Toba.
15. The lake is now called Toba lake.
6 1. In one day, there is fisherman fishing in the river and then he get a goldfish.
1. In one day, there is a fisherman fishing in the river and then he get a goldfish. 7. And around the hills had
become a lake named the lake Toba.
7. And around the hills had become a lake named Toba lake.
8. In the middle of that, we have an island called it the island Samosir.
8. In the middle of that, we have an island called it island Samosir.
8 5. Buto Ijo gave her cucumber seed.
5. Buto Ijo gave her a cucumber seed. 9 19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became the island Samosir.
19. She turned into a fish again and the man became Samosir island.
to see beautiful girl inside the cucumber.
to see a beautiful girl inside the cucumber.
12 5. He said if the cucumber seed was planted it will grow to be big cucumber.
5. He said if the cucumber seed was planted it will grow to be a big cucumber. 15 4. The Professor of Fitting
has adopted son named Joko Tole.
4. The Professor of Fitting has adopted a son named Joko Tole.
17 10. Young man agreed terms.
10. The young man agreed the terms.
19 6. Suddenly, giant heard they pray when a giant passed their house.
6. Suddenly, a giant heard they pray when a giant passed their house.
27. It became sea. 27. It became a sea. 20 1. Once upon a time, there
lived husband and wife.
1. Once upon a time, there lived a husband and a wife. 37. It was shrimp paste,
called terasi.
37. It was a shrimp paste, called terasi.
21 13. But there is condition at her age of 17 years.
13. But there is a condition at her age of 17 years.
20. Couple was sad because the time of Timun Mas‟ departure is coming.
20. The couple was sad because the time of Timun Mas‟ departure is coming. 22. Giant waiting long time. 22. The giant waiting long
time. 26. Giant run chase
immediately Timun Mas.
26. The giant run chase immediately Timun Mas. 40. Giant again almost
catch her.
40. The giant again almost catch her.
22 1. Long time ago in small village lived an old woman, who named mbok Rondo.
1. Long time ago in a small village lived an old woman, who named mbok Rondo. 3. She very wanted to have
child.
3. She very wanted to have a child.
23 12. The ground with full of water became a lake in named the lake Toba.
12. The ground with full of water became a lake in named Toba lake.
13. In the middle of the lake, there is an island called it the island Samosir.
13. In the middle of the lake, there is an island called it Samosir island.
27 5. Buto Ijo will give her child if Mbok Rondho
agreed with the requirement. with the requirement. 8. Mbok Rondho was
confused why Buto Ijo give her cucumber seed.
8. Mbok Rondho was confused why Buto Ijo give her a cucumber seed. 28 24. That rain made the
ground got flooded and became lake.
24. That rain made the ground got flooded and became a lake.
25. She turned into a fish again and man became the island of Samosir.
25. She turned into a fish again and the man became the island of Samosir.
Type 1. Pronouns
Text Error identification Correction 3 11. The son ran home and
asked her mother.
11. The son ran home and asked his mother.
5 9. One day his daughter was so hungry and she ate his father’s lunch.
9. One day his daughter was so hungry and she ate her father’s lunch.
6 6. Her mom asked Samosir to run the hills.
6. His mom asked Samosir to run the hills.
9 13. The daughter ran home and asked his mother.
13. The daughter ran home and asked her mother. 13 43. Timun Mas and his
family lived happily together.
43. Timun Mas and her family lived happily together.
26 3. Candra Kirana was a very beautiful and kind girl but his sister was an evil.
3. Candra Kirana was a very beautiful and kind girl but her sister was an evil. 5.This engagement made
Dewi Galuh envi to his sister.
5.This engagement made Dewi Galuh envi to her sister.
28 16. Unfortunately, her father saw that her daughter ate all the food.
Type 1. Cardinal Number
Text Error identification Correction 26 2. He had two daughter
named Dewi Galuh and Candra Kirana.
2. He had two daughters named Dewi Galuh and Candra Kirana.
Type 2. Adjectives
Text Error identification Correction 4 3. One day he fished a fish
so beautiful.
3. One day he fished a beautiful fish.
15. The lake is now called a lake Toba.
15. The lake is now called Toba lake.
6 7. And around the hills had become a lake named the lake Toba.
7. And around the hills had become a lake named Toba lake.
8. In the middle of that, we have an island called it the island Samosir.
8. In the middle of that, we have an island called it Samosir island. 7 1. A long time ago, there
lived a young orphan farmer in the north of the island of Sumatra.
1. A long time ago, there lived an orphan young farmer in the north of the island of Sumatra.
9 19. She turned into a fish again and the man became the island Samosir.
19. She turned into a fish again and the man became Samosir island.
10 21. It means lake Bagendit. 21. It means Bagendit lake. 15 16. Finally the gate of a
beautiful and magnificent finished in one night.
16. Finally a beautiful and magnificent gate finished in one night.
16 3. A very blacksmith famous named Professor of fittings.
3. A very famous
blacksmith named Professor of fittings.
17 5. When he was holding it, the fish turned into a princess so lovely.
5. When he was holding it, the fish turned into a lovely princess.
18 15. “Go away you old lazy woman! Go out my house.”
15. “Go away you a lazy old woman! Go out my house.” 23 12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in named the lake Toba.
13. In the middle of the lake, there is an island called it the island Samosir.
13. In the middle of the lake, there is an island called it Samosir island.
24 7. It was the most big fish which he ever had in his life.
7. It was the biggest fish which he ever had in his life. 25 1. A long time ago, there
lived a young poor farmer in the north of the island of Sumatra.
1. A long time ago, there lived a poor young farmer in the north of the island of Sumatra.
28 22. Suddenly, there was clouds very dark in the sky.
22. Suddenly, there was very dark clouds in the sky.
Type 6. Plural Noun
Text Error identification Correction 1 35. She threw them and
become cucumber field.
35. She threw them and become cucumber fields.
Type 6. Nouns
Text Error identification Correction 10 6. One day, an old beggar
woman came to Nyai Bagendit‟s house and asked for some money and some food.
6. One day, an old woman beggar came to Nyai Bagendit‟s house and asked for some money and some food.
21 9. Giant then provide them with seeds cucumber.
9. Giant then provide them with cucumber seeds. 21. But they are not willing
if their child became food giant.
21. But they are not willing if their child became the giant food.
36. At one the tree bracken and sharp thorns hurt the giant, giant cried in pain.
Appendix 2. Total on The Use of Noun Phrases Text Sentences
in a Text
Sentences consist of NP
Sentences consist of
Correct NP Incorrect NP
1 41 37 35 2
2 21 18 17 1
3 16 15 14 1
4 15 15 12 3
5 13 13 12 1
6 8 10 4 6
7 23 20 19 1
8 25 18 17 1
9 19 19 16 3
10 21 18 16 2
11 40 35 34 1
12 22 16 15 1
13 43 38 37 1
14 20 18 18 0
15 17 13 11 2
16 18 15 14 1
17 20 20 18 2
18 34 27 26 1
19 38 34 32 2
20 40 37 34 3
21 40 33 25 8
22 27 20 17 3
23 13 15 11 4
24 21 18 17 1
25 20 20 19 1
26 22 18 15 3
27 31 21 19 2
28 25 23 19 4
Appendix 3. Percentage of Errors on The Use of Noun Phrase No Types of Errors Total errors Percentage
1. Quantifier „some‟ 3
2. Articles 28
3. Pronouns 8
4. Cardinal numbers
„two‟
1
5. Adjectives 16
6. Plural nouns 1
7. Nouns 4
