Many, many students have improved their academic IELTS writing scores by using the techniques described in this book. This book will show you how to write each of these paragraphs to create a strong and coherent Task 2 essay.
Introduction
Supporting Paragraph #1
Supporting Paragraph #2
Conclusion
To date, globalization, or the merging of the world's cultures through information and communication technology, has both advantages and disadvantages. To summarize, globalization, or the merging of the world's cultures through information and communication technology, has both advantages and disadvantages.
Task Two Question 2
Planning Your Essay
Second, computerized translation software can help people translate foreign text or even talk to someone who speaks another language, but computers cannot communicate on a personal or cultural level. Second, computerized translation software can help people translate foreign text or even with a person who speaks another language, but computers cannot communicate on a personal or cultural level.
Task Two Question 3
The Introduction
It has been argued that the government should pay to promote the uniqueness of a country's culture by subsidizing the artists, musicians and actors who keep the culture alive. It has been argued that the government should pay to promote the uniqueness of a country's culture by subsidizing the artists, musicians and actors who keep the culture alive.
Task Two Question 4
Topic Sentences
First, fast food restaurants abound and provide takeout meals that can be eaten on the fly, so busy individuals do not have to sacrifice valuable time to eat their meals. First, fast food restaurants abound and provide takeout meals that can be eaten on the fly, so busy individuals do not have to sacrifice valuable time to eat their meals.
Another technique to keep in mind
For example, the child who has competitive spirit and words that are difficult to excel will create opportunities for himself and will be better equipped to handle challenges and find solutions. First, a child who learns to compete and succeed will have advantages over the child who shies away from competition.
Task Two Question 5
Supporting Your Topic Sentences
Use evidence and examples to support your opinion and strengthen the argument in the thesis statement. That's why, in my opinion, fatherhood is just as important as motherhood, because fathers and mothers play different roles in children's lives, and both influences are equally important for emotional health.
Task Two Question 6
Review
Finally, I agree that smoking should be banned in all public places because second hand smoke is almost as dangerous as first hand smoke. Finally, I agree that smoking should be banned in all public places because second hand smoke is almost as dangerous as first hand smoke.
Task Two Question 7
The Conclusion
As scientists study the causes and consequences of global warming, public awareness of this problem is increasing. Now that we realize the extent of the damage, we can take steps to slow the effects of global warming.
Task Two Question 8
Linking Words and Phrases
Firstly, computers have dramatically improved communication over the past decade and have now become an essential tool in many aspects of our daily lives, including. In conclusion, computers have revolutionized education and are taking over many of the roles of teachers in the classroom.
Task Two Question 9
Hint
Answering the Question
When you take 3-5 minutes to plan your essay, make sure you plan to answer all parts of the question asked. Discuss view no. 1: people who prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoid change.
Exercise
Make sure you answer the question
Task Two Question 10
Spelling
Genetic engineering has also been used to alter the biological composition of agricultural products. It is clear that there are both advantages and disadvantages to genetic engineering and I personally believe that genetic engineering should be used to modify pharmaceuticals, but not agricultural products.
Task Two Question 11
Punctuation
In our modern, fast-paced society, traditional food has often been replaced by fast food alternatives. In my opinion, while fast food is convenient and convenient, it is often unhealthy and expensive.
Task Two Question 12
Using Academic Vocabulary
On the next page, look at the list of vocabulary words relevant to Question 11. Others think that the true function of a university should be to provide, discuss and encourage knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the subject useful to an employer.
Nouns: Verbs: Adjectives
In short, while I agree that universities should provide knowledge and skills that are a.) employable, I believe that an equally important purpose of the university experience should be to explore many n.) tertiary education. In conclusion, while I agree that universities should provide knowledge and skills that are applicable to the workplace, I believe that an equally important purpose of the university experience should be to explore the many opportunities that tertiary education offers.
Task Two Question 13
Noun/Verb/Adjective/Adverb
Over the past decade, the popularity of mobile phones has increased exponentially, changing many aspects of the way people live. However, the excessive use of mobile phones can also have negative consequences for individuals and society.
Task Two Question 14
The Use of Articles
Many people think that keeping animals in cages is ________ cruel and unnatural, while others argue that zoos protect animals and that without zoos many _________ animals housed in them would be at risk of extinction. I believe that zoos are necessary to protect animals that would otherwise have no natural habitat and would therefore be endangered or extinct.
Task Two Question 15
Grammar
Apart from healthcare and education, other factors also contribute to the development of nations. In conclusion, in my opinion, quality health and education systems are equally important for the development of a strong nation.
Task Two Question 16
Increasingly, people feel that they need consumer goods such as iPhones and iPads because if they do not possess one, they may not be able to run their business in what is considered a modern, up-to -date approach. And while I agree that some of the popular consumer goods are not essential to daily life, items like mobile phones and computers have become increasingly necessary for business and communication.
Part TWO Task 1 Writing
Information about the Task 1 essay
Task One Question 1
Organising Your Essay
ACHIEVE IELTS Academic Writing Success will show you how to write each of these paragraphs to create a strong Task 1 essay.
Essay Template
Essay
The bar graph shows the percentage of people in New Zealand who use cheques, direct debit cards and credit cards to make payments, between 1993 and 2003. The bar graph shows the percentage of people in New Zealand who use cheques, direct debit cards and credit cards to make payments , between 1993 and 2003.
Task One Question 2
Introduction – First Sentence
- The first sentence of the Task 1 introduction should outline the details of the graph, chart or table being presented
For most Task 1 essays (excluding process essays, which will be discussed later in Part Two) the input format will be the same. TIP: The verbs "to show" and "to illustrate" are great for the first sentence of the Task 1 essay introduction.
Introduction – Second Sentence
The line graph shows the figures for video rentals and sales in the United States and the United Kingdom between 1997 and 2002. The bar graph illustrates Asian exports to the United States in 1992 as a percentage of total exports.
Task One Question 3
Reporting Data
The bar chart shows different subject areas of courses taken by students of different age groups at an unnamed university in 2002. The bar graph shows four different subject areas of courses taken by students of different age groups at an unnamed university in 2002.
Task One Question 4
Identifying Trends
Mexico City had the highest population in all five years, with 15.1 million people in 1970 and 32.2 million people in 2010, the highest number in the chart. According to the table, New York had the least population in all five years shown; In 1970, its population was 7 million, and in 2010 it increased to 18 million.
Task One Question 5
Comparing and Contrasting
In 2002, watching TV was overtaken as the favorite leisure activity by playing computer games, which was ranked as the favorite activity by the population of Britain. In 2002, watching TV was overtaken as the favorite leisure activity by playing computer games, which was ranked as the favorite activity by 29% of the British population.
Task One Question 6
Prepositions
Between November and December, the number of tourists visiting New Zealand dropped significantly, around two thousand at the end of the year. In general, the number of tourists was highest in July and lowest in December and January.
Task One Question 7
Sentence Structure
In 2000, there was a sharp decline in US GDP growth, to about 23 percent in 2001, at which time economic expansion began to pick up again, ending at about 25% growth in 2002. Finally, the GDP growth of other Asian countries started at about 8 percent in 1996, and rose to about 12 percent in 1998, where it remained stable for the next three years.
Task One Question 8
Verb tense
The line graph shows the figures for video rentals and sales in the United States and the United Kingdom between 1997 and 2002, measured in millions of units. The figures for video rentals in the United States were the highest of all figures during the six-year period and were on an upward trend.
Task One Question 9
About Subjects
- Business decreased between 1975 and 1990. YES NO _____________________________________________________
- The percentage of people studying law increased from 9% in YES NO 1975 to 10% in 1990
- Computer science increased dramatically between 1975 YES NO and 1990
- Humanities degrees increased in popularity between 1975 YES NO and 1990
- Medicine decreased by a small margin between 1975 YES NO and 1990
In 1975, law was chosen by 9% of the university population and remained relatively stable in its popularity until 1990. The least popular subject in 1990 was visual arts and music, the combined percentage of degrees gained was 3 % of the total number, with no change from 1975.
Task One Question 10
Vocabulary
The second bar graph shows the average temperature in degrees Celsius in the same four cities. New York showed the highest annual rainfall for all four years, starting at about 775 in 1985, dropping to about 600 millimeters in 1990, rising steadily to about 775 again in 2000.
Task One Question 11
Using “Respectively”
The largest share of the pie was spent on pensions, and it is worth noting that this figure is almost identical to the income from pension taxes (36%) shown in the first pie chart. The largest share of the pie was spent on pensions at 35% and it is worth noting that this figure is almost identical to the income from pension taxes (36%) shown in the first pie chart.
Task One Question 12
Adding a Conclusion to Increase Word Count
The proportion of highly skilled male employees (31%) of the unspecified Australian company was almost double that of highly skilled female employees (15%), the largest discrepancy between male and female groups in any field. Finally, unskilled female workers outnumbered their male counterparts by more than two to one; the proportion of unskilled female workers was 28% while the proportion of unskilled male workers was only 13%, a significant difference.
