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Themanuscriptprovidesaclearandconciseoverviewofthestudy,itsobjectives,andthemethodsused toachieve thoseobjectives.Theintroductionpresentsthebackgroundinformationandsetsthecontext forthestudy, highlightingthegrowingprevalenceofgadgetsinchildren'slivesandthepotentialnegative impactsofexcessive gadgetuse.Theliteraturegapandresearchquestionsareclearlystated,andthe specificobjectivesoftheresearch areoutlined.However,

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The abstract needs to effectively summarize the key findings and contributions of the study, namely the successful development of a prototype monitoring system for children's gadget use that meets the needs of Indonesian parents and aligns with Indonesian culture. The specific features of the system should be described, including social media monitoring, app blocking, location tracking, time management, and wireless signal deactivation.

The literature review should discuss the impact of gadgets on children's physical and mental health, including gadget addiction and the negative effects of excessive gadget use. The review must also highlight that the rise in gadget use among children still needs to be under the

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(i) All corrections as per the reviewers ' comments and prepare a table /response letter showing corrections done. Your corrections will not be accepted in the absence of this response letter/table.

All authors' names, emails and affiliations checked and corrected.

Add ORCID IDs of all authors.

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supervision of parents to mitigate the risks of cyberbullying, exposure to pornographic content, and other negative impacts.

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Another potential improvement could be to provide more information on the study's sample size and characteristics, as well as the specific methods used in the qualitative and quantitative data collection and analysis.

The analysis part must describe the findings of a study that aims to develop a prototype for parents to monitor their children's gadget activity while considering Indonesian culture.

Additionally, the manuscript could benefit from a more specific statements on the potential impact and implications of the study's findings, such as how the prototype monitoring system could contribute to reducing gadget addiction in children and promoting safer and more responsible gadget use.

Reviewer 2

The paper is well written. However, it needs some potential improvements before considering for publication.

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The introduction could be improved by discussing the limitations of the existing studies and identifying research gaps that the study aims to address.

The review concludes by highlighting the need for research and development of security systems that parents can use as monitoring tools.

The research methodology section outlines a mixed-method approach used in the study, including qualitative system requirements data collection, system development using the SDLC-Prototype, and quantitative system evaluation. The study's concept and scope need more discussion, including the identification of research problems and the need for a security system for gadget activities in children based on the needs of parents and Indonesian culture.

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analysis, making a prototype, coding system, system testing, and evaluation of prototypes.

The study must include several stages of analysis in a systematic manner, including needs 5. The authors should elaborate on how they developed a prototype based on the parents'

needs and concerns about their children's gadget activity. They should report prototype features such as Display Locked, Display Web History, Web Search Display, Schedule's View, App Management, and Daily Limits Display.

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Reviewer's Comment Response

The manuscript provides a clear and concise overview of the study, its objectives, and the methods used to achieve those objectives. The introduction presents the background information and sets the context for the study, highlighting the growing prevalence of gadgets in children's lives and the potential negative impacts of excessive gadget use. The literature gap and research questions are clearly stated, and the specific objectives of the research are outlined. However,

Thanks a lot, dear reviewer, for your kind and detailed review.

1 The abstract needs to effectively summarize the key findings and contributions of the study, namely the successful development of a prototype monitoring system for children's gadget use that meets the needs of Indonesian parents and aligns with Indonesian culture. The specific features of the system should be described, including social media monitoring, app blocking, location tracking, time management, and wireless signal deactivation.

Many thanks for your kind suggestions.

Done as suggested.

Please see page 1

2 The literature review should discuss the impact of gadgets on children's physical and mental health, including gadget addiction and the negative effects of excessive gadget use. The review must

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. We have discussed the impact of gadgets on children's physical and mental health, including gadget addiction and the negative effects of

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Response to Reviewer 2

also highlight that the rise in gadget use among children still needs to be under the supervision of parents to mitigate the risks of cyberbullying, exposure to pornographic content, and other negative impacts.

excessive gadget use. We have also highlighted that the rise in gadget use among children still needs to be under the supervision of parents to mitigate the risks of cyberbullying, exposure to pornographic content, and other negative impacts.

Please see pages 5-10 3 Another potential improvement could be

to provide more information on the study's sample size and characteristics, as well as the specific methods used in the qualitative and quantitative data collection and analysis.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. We have now provided more information about the study's sample size and characteristics, as well as the specific methods used in the qualitative and quantitative data collection and analysis.

Please see pages 11-12 4 The analysis part must describe the

findings of a study that aims to develop a prototype for parents to monitor their children's gadget activity while considering Indonesian culture.

Respected reviewer, Thank you Done as suggested

Please see pages 13-16

5 Additionally, the manuscript could benefit from a more specific statements on the potential impact and implications of the study's findings, such as how the prototype monitoring system could contribute to reducing gadget addiction in children and promoting safer and more responsible gadget use.

Thankyou dear reviewer. Done as suggested

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The paper is well written. However, it Thanks a lot, dear reviewer.

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needs some potential improvements before considering for publication.

1 The introduction could be improved by discussing the limitations of the existing studies and identifying research gaps that the study aims to address.

Many thanks for your kind suggestions.

We have now improved by discussing the limitations of the existing studies and identifying research gaps that the study aims to address.

Please see pages 2-5 2 The review should conclude by

highlighting the need for research and development of security systems that parents can use as monitoring tools.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. In review we have now highlighted the need for research and development of security systems that parents can use as monitoring tools

Please see pages 7-8 3 The research methodology section

outlines a mixed-method approach used in the study, including qualitative system requirements data collection, system development using the SDLC-Prototype, and quantitative system evaluation. The study's concept and scope need more discussion, including the identification of research problems and the need for a security system for gadget activities in children based on the needs of parents and Indonesian culture.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. W have added more discussion on concept and scope including the identification of research problems and the need for a security system for gadget activities in children based on the needs of parents and Indonesian culture

4 The study must include several stages of analysis in a systematic manner, including needs analysis, making a prototype, coding system, system testing, and evaluation of prototypes.

Dear reviewer, Thank you

We have now added several stages of analysis in a systematic manner, including needs analysis, making a prototype, coding system, system testing, and evaluation of prototypes. multimedia.

please see pages 13

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5 The authors should elaborate on how they developed a prototype based on the parent's needs and concerns about their children's gadget activity. They should report prototype features such as Display Locked, Display Web History, Web Search Display, Schedule's View, App Management, and Daily Limits Display.

Done dear reviewer. Done as suggested Please see page 13-15

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The needs analysis stage must present in detail hat how it includes data collection from 50 respondents and who are those respondents , i.e., parents and children , using direct observation and questionnaires.

Did authors use a coding system to facilitate parents ' monitoring and control of their children's gadget usage?

Overall, the text provides a clear and detailed description of the study's various stages and results . However , some technical terms and jargon might be challenging for readers without technical knowledge to understand.

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The paper "A Prototype for Parents to Monitor the Children’s use of Gadgets Applying Systems Development Life Cycle- Prototype: A Case of Indonesia" has been reviewed again.

Here are some minor comments to address from respected reviewers;

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Thankyouforsubmittingrevisionofthemanuscript"APrototypeforParentstoMonitortheChildren’s useof GadgetsApplyingSystemsDevelopmentLifeCycle-Prototype:ACaseofIndonesia"the

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Here are some minor comments to address from respected reviewers;

Thanks a lot, dear reviewer.

1 The needs analysis stage must present in detail hat how it includes data collection from 50 respondents and who are those respondents, i.e., parents and children, using direct observation and questionnaires.

Many thanks for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested.

Please see pages 12

2 Did authors use a coding system to facilitate parents' monitoring and control of their children's gadget usage?

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind comments. Addressed the point.

Please see page 13 3 Overall, the text provides a clear and

detailed description of the study's various stages and results. However, some technical terms and jargon might be challenging for readers without technical knowledge to understand.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested.

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