Indonesian Land Rights for Individual Limited Companies - Narotama University Repository

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Judul Artikel: Indonesian Land Rights for Individual Limited Companies Penulis:

Habib Adjie (Universitas Narotama, Surabaya, Indonesia; Email: [email protected]) Histori Publikasi

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10/11/2023,4:33 AM Gmail-[IJCC]Acknowledgmentofanewmanuscriptsubmission

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Title:IndonesianLandRightsforIndividualLimitedCompanies Author(s):HabibAdjie

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10/11/2023,4:34 AM Gmail-[IJCC]EditorDecision

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ThankyouforsubmittingthefollowingmanuscripttotheInternationalJournalofCyberCriminology.

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[IJCC] Editor Decision

DearDr.HabibAdjie,

WehavereachedadecisionregardingyoursubmissiontotheInternationalJournalofCyberCriminology,

"IndonesianLandRightsforIndividualLimitedCompanies".

Ourdecisionis:RevisionsRequired

Pleasereviseyourmanuscriptbasedonreviewers'commentsandsuggestions accordinglyandresubmityourrevisedmanuscriptnolaterthanonemonth.

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Decision:Majorrevisionsrequired

Your paper Indonesian Land Rightsfor Individual Limited Companies providesa comprehensive overview ofthe subjectmatter and purpose ofyour research,butthere are someareaswhereit canbe improvedforclarity and readerengagement:

While theintroduction provides anexcellent background onthetopicofland rightsinIndonesia andits complexities ,itcanbeabitlengthy.Considersummarizingkeypointsmoreconciselyandtransitioninto the main focusofyourresearch moresmoothly .Theprimarygoalofyourresearch isnotexplicitly stated . It's essential toclearly outlineyourresearch objectives orquestions inthepapersothatreaders immediately understandwhatthestudyaimstoachieve.

Sat, May 20, 2023 at 1:43 PM

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You mention that data was collected from primary and secondary sources , and content analysis was performed . However , it would be beneficial to briefly explain how these sources were selected and the approach you took to analyze the data. A sentence about the methodology can help readers understand your research process.

In your last paragraph , you briefly touch on the potential impact of your research on economic development . Consider expanding on this significance . Explain how your research findings might be applied in practice and why they are important for policy-makers, businesses, or the broader Indonesian community.

4. When you mention specific studies or authors, it's helpful to provide citations or references in the paper. This adds credibility to your work and allows readers to explore these sources further if they wish.

5. While the paper provides a good amount of information, it can be organized more clearly. Consider breaking it into sections or paragraphs, each focusing on one aspect, such as the background, objectives, methodology, significance, and key findings. This will make it easier for readers to follow your argument. Ensure that the

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paper is concise. While it'simportant to provide necessary information, aim to do so as efficientlyas possible.

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I havecarefullyreviewed your research paper andwould like to commend youfor your effortsin conducting this study. Yourresearch addresses animportant issuein thefield,and themethodologyemployed isrobust. I found the paperwell-structuredand theanalysis comprehensive.However, therearesomesignificantareasthat require attention.

Decision: Major revisions required Reviewer -B

1. Think about your target audience. Ensure that your paper is accessible to both experts in the field and those who may not be familiar with the specifics of land rights in Indonesia. Balance the use of technical terms with explanations where needed.

2. Maintain consistency in terminology and the use of abbreviations . For example, you mention "UUPA" as the Basic Agrarian Law ; consider using the full term upon the first mention and then use the abbreviation consistently.

3. The literature review contains a substantial amount of information and citations . It would be helpful to reorganize it into subsections or thematic groups to make it easier for the reader to follow.

4. While you've touched on the international context of land rights, it would be beneficial to provide more critical analysis and discussion of the key findings , insights , or controversies from these studies . This can help the reader understand the broader implications and debates.

5. The section on challenges faced by individual limited companies in Indonesia is informative. However, it might benefit from a summary or a more concise presentation of these challenges . You can then explore how your research addresses or contributes to the understanding of these challenges.

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10/11/2023,4:35 AM Gmail-[IJCC]Acknowledgmentofamanuscriptrevisionsubmission

[IJCC] Acknowledgment of a manuscript revision submission

DearDr.HabibAdjie,

ThankyouforsubmittingthefollowingmanuscriptrevisiontotheInternationalJournalofCyberCriminology.

Track:RegularTrack

Wehaveconfirmedandforwardedyourrevisionsubmissionforreviewingprocess.Furtherprogressonyour submissioncanbecheckedthroughthefollowingonlinesystem.

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Thu, Jun 08, 2023 at 9:53 AM

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Response to Reviewer 1

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

Your paper Indonesian Land Rights for Individual Limited Companies provides a comprehensive overview of the subject matter and purpose of your research, but there are some areas where it can be improved for clarity and reader engagement:

Thank you for your feedback on the paper.

1 While the introduction provides an excellent background on the topic of land rights in Indonesia and its complexities, it can be a bit lengthy. Consider summarizing key points more concisely and transition into the main focus of your research more smoothly. The primary goal of your research is not explicitly stated. It's essential to clearly outline your research objectives or questions in the paper so that readers immediately understand what the study aims to achieve.

Dear reviewer, thank you.

We have summarized key points more concisely and transition into the main focus of your research more smoothly.

We have now also clearly outline the research objectives in the paper so that readers immediately understand what the study aims to achieve.

Plesae see pages 3-5

2 You mention that data was collected from primary and secondary sources, and content analysis was performed. However, it would be beneficial to briefly explain how these sources were selected and the approach you took to analyze the data. A sentence about the methodology can help readers understand your research process.

Many thanks dear reviewer.

Done as suggested.

Please see page 15-17

3 In your last paragraph, you briefly touch on the potential impact of your research on

Dear reviewer, thank you.

Done as suggested.

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economic development. Consider expanding on this significance. Explain how your research findings might be applied in practice and why they are important for policymakers, businesses, or the broader Indonesian community.

Please see pages 17-18 and 21-22

4 When you mention specific studies or authors, it's helpful to provide citations or references in the paper. This adds credibility to your work and allows readers to explore these sources further if they wish.

Dear reviewer, Thank you.

Done as suggested.

Please see pages 08-15

5 While the paper provides a good amount of information, it can be organized more clearly. Consider breaking it into sections or paragraphs, each focusing on one aspect, such as the background, objectives, methodology, significance, and key findings. This will make it easier for readers to follow your argument. Ensure that the paper is concise. While it's important to provide necessary information, aim to do so as efficiently as possible.

Dear reviewer, Thank you.

Done as suggested.

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Response to Reviewer 2

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

I have carefully reviewed your research paper and would like to commend you for your efforts in conducting this study. Your research addresses an important issue in the field, and the methodology employed is robust. I found the paper well-structured and the analysis comprehensive. However, there are some significant areas that require attention.

Many thanks respected reviewer for your kind remarks and suggestions.

1 Think about your target audience. Ensure that your paper is accessible to both experts in the field and those who may not be familiar with the specifics of land rights in Indonesia. Balance the use of technical terms with explanations where needed.

Many thanks for your kind suggestions. Done as suggested.

2 Maintain consistency in terminology and the use of abbreviations. For example, you mention "UUPA" as the Basic Agrarian Law;

consider using the full term upon the first mention and then use the abbreviation consistently.

Dear reviewer, following your kind guidelines.

Done as suggested.

3 The literature review contains a substantial amount of information and citations. It would be helpful to reorganize it into subsections or thematic groups to make it easier for the reader to follow.

Dear reviewer, Thank you for your kind suggestions.

Done as suggested.

Please see pages 07-15

4 While you've touched on the international context of land rights, it would be beneficial to provide more critical analysis

Respected reviewer, Thank you.

Done as suggested.

Please see pages 8and 21

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and discussion of the key findings, insights, or controversies from these studies. This can help the reader understand the broader implications and debates.

5 The section on challenges faced by individual limited companies in Indonesia is informative. However, it might benefit from a summary or a more concise presentation of these challenges. You can then explore how your research addresses or contributes to the understanding of these challenges.

Thank you, dear reviewer.

Done as suggested.

Plesae see pages 24-25

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[IJCC] Editor Decision

DearDr.HabibAdjie,

WehavereachedadecisionregardingyoursubmissiontotheInternationalJournalofCyberCriminology,

"IndonesianLandRightsforIndividualLimitedCompanies".

Ourdecisionis:RevisionsRequired

Pleasereviseyourmanuscriptbasedonthereviewers'commentsandsuggestions accordinglyandresubmityourrevisedmanuscriptnolaterthanonemonth.

Letmeknowifyouhaveanyquestions.

Bestregards,

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Sat, Jul 15, 2023 at 12:42 PM

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10/11/2023,4:39 AM Gmail-[IJCC]Acknowledgmentofamanuscriptrevisionsubmission

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[IJCC] Acknowledgment of a manuscript revision submission

DearDr.HabibAdjie,

ThankyouforsubmittingthefollowingmanuscriptrevisiontotheInternationalJournalofCyberCriminology.

Track:RegularTrack

Wehaveconfirmedandforwardedyoursubmissionrevisionforreviewingprocess.Furtherprogressonyour submissioncanbecheckedthroughthefollowingonlinesystem.

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Response to Reviewers

Sr. No. Reviewer's Comment Response

The recommendations and implications are well-structured and provide a clear roadmap for future research and policy development.

Many thanks, Respected Reviewer, for your kind appreciation.

1 The suggestion to simplify and harmonize property rules at different government levels is well-founded, as it can reduce administrative burdens and improve the business environment.

Many thanks for your kind comments.

2 The idea of focusing on legal changes to safeguard indigenous and regional groups' traditional land rights is important for addressing conflicts and protecting vulnerable groups.

Many thanks for your kind comments.

Done as suggested.

Please see pages 13-14

3 Your conclusion should provide a concise summary of the key findings and issues discussed in your study.

Many thanks for your kind comments.

The conclusion now provides a concise summary of the key findings and issues discussed in your study

Please see pages 23-25

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[IJCC] Editor Decision

DearDr.HabibAdjie,

Congratulations!thefollowingofyourmanuscript.

Track:RegularTrack

AffiliationofCorrespondingAuthor:UniversitasNarotama,Surabaya, Indonesia DateofManuscriptSubmission:10-April-2023(UTC) ThemanuscriptID:IJCC-525-2023

HasbeenacceptedforpublicationinInternationalJournalofCyberCriminology(Vol.17No.2,2023).Thankyou foryourinterestinourjournal.YourJournalpaperwouldbeindexedinScopus(Elsevier),GoogleScholar,Scirus, GetCited,Scribd,soon.

Welookforwardtoreceivingyoursubsequentresearchpapers.

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