Errors in using prepositions in the compositions made by the third semester students of the English Department of Widya Mandala Catholic University - Widya Mandala Catholic University Surabaya Repository

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The visitors ~ho stay in

Plough T nn in the r: i t.y

~hich is located across

of the fie]d seems re~lly

P.njoy to see the scene in front. of them.

One afternoon I ~as sitting

outside Qf the hotei.

On Saturday, ~hen I was on

holiday, I vi sHed tQ Pl ong}J

Inn hotel.

Beside Qf the Plough Inn,

there is a man who is riding a big, white, strong horse.

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The visitors who stay in

1 Plongh Tnn i.n the city

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of the f1e)rl seems really

I en.i oy to see the scene in

front 0f them.

One afternoon I ~as sitting

outsidP. the hotel.

On Saturday, when I

holiday, J visited

Inn hotel.

was on Plough

Beside the Plough Inn,

there is a man who is riding

1 a big, ~bite, strong horse.

The ranch man has ride his

hor·se around .tQ his ranch.

1 The ranch man has ride his

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There is a dog running aroundi

on that place, a duck ~alkingl

so slo~ly and many birds 1

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flying in the sky.

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1 t~o ~omen who has ,i Ufl t ma i l P.d

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When the ~iter observed the

canteen on Friday, 6th

December 1996 at 10.15-11.00

am, he could see that the

floor Qil there ~as quite

clean.

There is a dog nmning around

that place, a duck walking

so slo~ly and many birds flying in the sky.

In the past office there are

t~o women ~ho has .iust mailed·

their letter and then

standing outside the post

office and chatting to each other.

When the writer observed the 1

canteen on Friday, 6th

December HJ96 at 10.15-11.00

am, he could see that thP.

floor there was quite

9. We can eat, drink, talk. and laugh at there.

10. , Some group of students

sitting around long table and bench talking to each other and laughing sometimes they

shout to their friend in

across table.

11 . There are many wrappings and

food stuff in every where.

12. The position of canteen is

near

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parking area and

gate.

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The garbage littered QU the

f1oor.

The canteen will be busy and crowed, and there is no fan so we will feel hot at there.

Garbage was in every wherA

though there was a big box for ,gArhagA.

There were many people came

in like students, led.ureA,

parents who was waiting for their children.

If we came late in there

probably we could not R:et seat.

The waiters gives me some foods and drinks. After I

thank him, I began to watch

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the sea.

We can eat, drink, talk, and

laugh there.

Some group of students

sitting arotmd long table and ·bench talking to each other and laughing sometimes they

shout to their friend across table.

There are many wrappings and

food stuff every where.

The position of canteen is

near parking area and

gate.

The garbage littered floor.

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The canteen 1.1ill be busy and crowded. and there is no fan

so we will feel hot there.

Garbage waR though there

for garhagp_

PVery where was a big box

There were many people came like st.udent.A, lectures, parents who was waiting for ' their children.

If we came late there

probably we could not get seat.

The waiters gives me some foods and drinks. After I thank him, I began to watch

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a class and the library was

not. t.no many stu<ients. Tt. was

a large room than the other roum because there were many shelves. tables. chairs and we coul<i study in therP. without any disturb.

At that timP., T do not havP.

a class and the library was

not too many students. It was

a large room than the other room because there were many shelves. tables. chairs and

we could study there

without any disturb.

20. This place is very convenient This place is very convenie:,r.

because there is air ' because there is air

conditioner, so can make us 1 conditioner, so can make us

comfortable at there. comfortable there.

21. If you study in the Hbrary,

you will feel comfortable

because QD there has air

conditioner.

22. The library has six air

1 conditioner so that you don't

fee] hot and sweating. An<i

you can study without

stm-light in there because the

' library cover up with green curtain.

23. Our library is not big but

it is nice and comfortable

to sit Q.U there.

24. The smell of man's toilet in

upstairs is not amusing

because many students are not spray after pees.

25. This toilet is located on the

second floor and near tQ TU

office.

If you study in the library,

you will feel comfortable

because there has air

conditioner.

The library has six air

conditioner so that you don't feel hot and sweating. And you can study without

stm-light there because the

library cover up with green curtain.

Our library is not big but it is nice and comfortable

to sit there.

The smell of man's toilet upstairs is not amusing

because many students are not spray after pees.

This toilet is located second floor and near office.

on the!

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I looked

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the opposite of

Plough Inn, there was a post office and a car in front of it.

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opposite of Plough Inn,

there is a post office.

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the wall of the

I looked at the opposite of Plough Inn, there was a post

office and a car in front

of it.

At

opposite of Plough Inn.

' there is a post office.

canteen is full of vandalism,. faded paint and foot print.

And QD the wall of the

canteen is full of vandalism. faded paint and foot print.

4. But the writer limits his

observation by focussing

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one canteen only.

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the table, there are

many empty glasses, and plates, cigarettes packs and wrappings.

6. I am walking to the balcony

and looking

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the full moon

and to the pool tmder the palm trees.

7. *back of the hotel there

is a sea.

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He is sitting at the corner

close

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the park of the

roses.

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other side. I can see

a couple in the restaurant who are in love like me.

Our library is complete, if

you read some books you can

look

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the catalog.

But the writer limits his observation by focussing on one canteen only.

And Qll the table, there are

many empty glasses, and plates, cigarettes packs and wrappings.

I am walking to the balcony

and looking

at

the full moon

and to the pool tmder the palm trees.

At back of the hotel there is a sea.

He is sitting at the corner

close t.Q the park of the

roses.

And Qll other side. I can see

a couple in the restaurant who are in love like me.

Our library is complete, if

you read some hooks you can

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the other side, T alsn

saw a girl was riding a bicycle.

Another young man is entering the Plough Inn, he is quite handsome young man with a

hat on his head and cigarette

QU his mouth.

In thA left side of Plough Inn, there is a post of ficA.

4. Slowly, a baby in his four

, years old ,iust standing in

i the street near the Plough

) Inn with a ball Qn his hand.

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the left side of Plough

Inn, there is post office.

Many bird are flying on the blue sky.

In this case. the writer wants to observe how thA condition and the situation

about the canteen.

Canteen is one of the

facilities QU our campus to

relax for students, lectures. parent, or drivers.

9. The canteen Qil our campus j

is located beside the parking

lot in front of our campus. 1

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Qn the other side, I also saw a girl was riding a bicycle.

Another yotmg man is entering the Plough Inn, he is quite handsome ymmg man with a hat on his head and cigarette in his mouth.

On the left side of Plough Inn, there is a post of fice.

Slowly, a baby in his four years old ,iust standing in the street near the Plough

Inn with a ball in his hand.

Qn the left side of Plough

Inn, there is post office.

Many bird are flying in the

blue sky.

In this case, the writer wants to observe how the condition and the situation

.at tbe canteen.

Canteen is one of the

facilities in our campus to

relax for students, lectures. parent, or drivers.

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S<:·met im<:>s l:her'O' .:~re S•:·me

students studying Qll the

canteen if they didn't

have any class.

Eventhough our canteen has three bad

impressi-ons, it is al~ays the

first choice if ~e didn't

have any class. It sho~s

that ~e more enjoyable

to sit on the canteen.

Eventhough our canteen is dirty, very hot and noisy,

we can enjoyable to sit QD

the canteen and ~e can eat

many kinds of food what ~e

~ant.

Widya Mandala University at KalUudan has a

canteen.

There ~as a sotmd of

ma-chine ~aving through the

canteen. It makes the

situation

on

the canteen

more cro~ded and noisy.

Briefly. our canteen 21

Widya Mandala at Kalijudan was dirty, noisy, but it had good smelling

according to the writer's observation on T\1esday 17th December 1996.

The canteen .Q.ll. our campus

is dirty but cro~ded. _

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Then in the floor are root/ prints frc·m studo::nts.

lect.ure.3 and other guests. 1

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In tho:' ~all there is

·Jan-dalism and looked faded paint.

Sometimes there arlO' some

students studying t l the

canteen if they didn't have

any class.

Eventhough our canteen has three bad impressions, it

is al~ays the first choice

if we didn't have any

class. It sho~s that we

more enjoyable to sit at the canteen.

Eventhough our canteen is dirty, very hot and noisy,

we can enjoyable to sit .at

the canteen and we can eat many kinds of food what we

~ant.

Widya Mandala University QD

KalUudan has a cant.een.

There ~as a sotmd of

ma-chine waving through the canteen. It makes the

situation

.at

the canteen

more crowded and noisy.

Briefly, our canteen at

Widya Handala on KalUudan was dirty, noisy, but it had a good smelling accord-ing to the writer's ob-servation on T\1esday 17th December 1996.

The canteen ,;U. our campus

is dirty but cro~ded.

Then on the floor are foot prints from students. lect.ures and other guests.

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In thR wall also full oi

poster like poster of singing groups.

The wall was faded paint and many vandalism and foot prints in it.

The ceiling made from asbes, there are four ceiling fans but only two which is on, and many advertisement hang

down at the ceiling.

In the table we could see there were many empty

glasses, plates, and bottles.

Wrapping almost in _every

tables.

The toilet was very smooth and many finger prints in the wall.

Suddenly the bell is ringing

and I _{can hear the voicP.}

that comes from the clock in top of the church.

It is a hot night and the city still look crowd. The

people is still busy Qil their

own business and their activities.

The sky is dark and there are so many stars and also a moon on the dark sky.

He is always QD my mind and

I can't throw his face away.

I am in _{the balcony of the}

Grand Park hotel.

Qn the wall also full of

poster like ~Jster of singing

groups.

The wall was faded paint and many vandalism and foot

prints Qll it.

The ceiling made from asbes, there are four ceiling fans but only two which is on, and many advertisement hang

down Qll the ceiling.

Qn the table we could see there were many empty

glasses, plates, and bottles.

Wrapping almost on every tables.

The toilet was very smooth

and many finger prints Qil

the wall.

Suddenly the bell is ringing i

and I can hear the voice

that comes from the clock Qll

top of the church.

It is a hot night and the city still look crowd. The

people is still busy Hith

their own business and their activities.

The sky is dark and there are' so many stars and also a moon:

in the dark sky. '

He is always in my mind and

I can't throw his face away.

30. 1 TherA are so many birds QO the blue sky.

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T can see a few people do the same thing, they are walking

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the balcony.

My watch is showing 11 o'clock, but I still can hear music from the room

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my left side.

There are so many lights as if they are stars Qll blue

skv.

Now T am standing in the balcony and seeing the beautiful view.

It is a very hot night in my room, so I think it is better for me to go into the

balcony. Then I am sitting in the corner.

After I had dinner T go to bed immediately, but after three hours Qll bed I still

can't sleep.

Tonight is a beautiful night and I am sitting

on

the front

of my room.

From this balcony, I can see that the guest next door is reading a thick book in front of the television while his little boy is

sleeping Ql1 bed.

I can see the moon and stars

on

the blue sky, all of them are very wonderful.

I am sitting in the baJ~ony

now, it is a very comfortable place.

There are so many birds in the blue skv.

I can see a few people do the same thing, they are walking

on

the balcony.

My watch is showing 11 o'clock, but I still can hear music from the room

on

my left side.

There are so many 1 ights as if they are stars in _blue

sky.

Now I am standing Qn the balcony and seeing the beautiful view.

It is a very hot night in wv , room, so l think it is bett~r\

for me to go QUtQ the balcony. Then I am sitting in the corner.

After I had dinner I go to bed immediately, but after three hours in bed I still can't sleep.

Tonight is a beautiful night and I am sitting in the front 1

of my room.

From this balcony, I can see that the guest next door is reading a thick book in

front of the television while his little boy is

sleeping in bed.

I can see the moon and stars

in the blue sky, all of them are very wonderful.

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The books are arrange in.

the shelf, catalog and the number of books.

The library .QD our campus

is coru·let.e.

We h01vo? a libr01ry on our campus is complete.

I like to study .21 the library, because the facilities is complete.

In every table you can see that every students are studying. reading a book or doing their homework.

I was looking for a book

story Qll the library.

The location of the

libra-ry is in the second floor.

The ceiling of the library is clean too. There is no spider web and hole at. it.

There is several libraries

in Sura\:.aya and roost of 1

them is usu:tlly on school.)

Thoso? are the condition ofi

the libr;:,ry on

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which is always clean and I

crowded but. not makl? r

noisy.

Next in the table. there is also no garbage.

no astray, but the t01ble

is full of books.

Then. in the wall there no poster and shoes prints.

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The books are arrange Qil

the shelf, catalog and the number of books.

The library in our campus is complete.

We h01ve a libr3ry in our

campus is complet~?.

I like to study in the

library, because the facil-ities is complete.

On every table you can see that every students are studying, reading a book or doing their homework.

I was looking for a book

story in the library.

The location of the library

is QD the second floor.

The ceiling of the library is clean too. There is no spider web and hole on it.

TI1ere is several libraries in Surabaya and most of them is usually in school.

'Yhose are the condition of the library in my campus which is always clean and crowded but not make noisy.

Next .Q11 the table, there is

also no garbage. no astray,

but the table is full of

books.

TI1en. Qll _{the wall there is}

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In the floor there is no garbage, shoes prints and sand.

First, I want to tell you

about my clean library on my campus.

The first time when we enter the library, we have to write

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down our name .to thP. l1At and 1

sign it. '

The room was really clean and neat because books in

thP. shelves books rowing in the same -position.

Dn the floor there is no garbage, shoes prints and sand.

First. I want to tell you

about my clean library in

my campus.

The first time when we enter the library, we have to write· down our name .on the list and sign it.

The room was really clean

and neat because books QD

t.he she 1 ves books rowing in the same position.

Qn the ceiling there were 25

lamps which is always on

In thP. 8eiling there were 2fi

lamps which is always on

till the library is closed. , till the library is closed.

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the shelves there were

some souvenir, some charter and beautiful Christmas decorations too.

In the wall there were many

decorations because we were in Christmas month.

Let me tell you how T

deliberately got fired from

my ,iob. It happened a WP.ek

ago when I was working QD

Sinar Supermarket.

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Let me tell you how I

deliberately got fired from my job about three months ago

in Simbarco Kencana Comp!'Uly

Qll production section.

Qn the shelves there were

some souvenir, some charter and beautiful Christmas decorations too.

Qn the wall there were many

decorations because we were in Christmas month.

Let me t.ell you how J

deliberately got fired from

my ,iob. It hapJ:>ened a week

ago when I was working in

Sinar Supermarket.

Let me tell you how I

deliberately got fired from my ,iob about three months agG

in Simbarco Kencana C~mpany

62. Many mosquitos are dead at the water.

63. There is also sand in the

floor and hand writing on ' the wall.

64. There is also sand on the

floor and hand writing in the wall.

65. 1 The floor always wet and

' there is sand in it.

66. This toilet is located in

the second floor and near the TU office.

67. The floor in the man's toilet

is full of sand especially ' on the bathroom.

68. And the water on the bathroom

also full of sand and the color iB mud.

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Then in the wall found faded paint. vandalism and

footprint.

The lady's toilet found in

front of B49 class, near the

library, and the other .tD the second floor.

Many mosquitos are dead on the water.

There is also sand on the floor and hand writing on the wall.

There is also sand on the floor and hand writing on the wall.

The floor always wet and

there is sand QU it.

This toilet is located on

the second floor and near the TU office.

The floor in the man's toilet is full of sand especially in the bathroom.

And the watec in the bathroom

also full of sand and the color is mud.

Then on the wall fotmd faded paint, vandalism and

, footprint.

The lil.dy's toilet fotmd in

front of B49 class, near the

library, and the other Ql1

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1. SAconrl , the c<~.n teen is "'l sn crowded especially when during the break time.

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during the break time, , many students go to the

canteen to have hmch.

Correction

Second, the canteen is also crowded especially

during the break time.

During the break time, many students go to the canteen to have hmch.

I 3. I always ate in during office hour, whether that was snack, fried chicken, hamburger, etc.

I always ate during office hour. whether that

was snack, fried chicken, hamburger, etc.

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Our canteen in the campus was1 Our canteen in the campus was mv first observattnn. J went I my first obeervation. I went

there on Wednesday, 27 th 1

there on Wednesday. 27 th November at 10.30-Hl.fi~, am. November at 10.30-10.55 am. It was

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the break time. It was dnring the break time. When you r.ame to the crmt.een

after break time or -t

afternoon, you will see that the canteen is really dirty at that time.

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the break time, the canteen is always accept its customers.

The situation is always busy especially

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the break time.

When you c:ame to the canteen after break time or in

afternoon, you will see that the canteen is really dirty at that time.

Even it is not dnring the break time. the canteen is always accept its customers.

The situation is always busy especially dnri ng the break

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Canteen is the interesting place to visit in my campus.

Recause many :people

especially students go there. it makes the canteen crowded.

especially

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the break

time, there are full o£ people.

6. T still didn't pay attentlon

to him and didn't do my job

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that day.

Canteen is the interesting place to visit in my campus.

Recause many people

especially students go there, it makes the canteen crowded, especially during the break

time, there are full of people.

I still didn't pay attention

to him and didn't do my job

well Qll that day.

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T felt happy when T sFiw so

many activities at that

evening.

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On Saturday, when it was in 1

holiday. I visi t.ed Plough Tnnl

hotel.

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~lr canteen is always crowded

Qll the break time.

All of them, our canteen are

crowded

at

break time.

Many pP.ople canteen but only htmgry drivers are

arP. comina to the in that time studentfl and coming.

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T

felt happy when

I

saw so

many activities in that

evening.

On Saturday. when it was Qll

holiday. I visited Plough Inn

hotel.

Canteen was crowded ffi1ring the break time.

Our canteen is always crowded during the break time.

All of them. our canteen are

crowded during break time.

Many people are coming to

canteen but at that time

~ only hungry students and

drivers are coming.

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~lr canteen was very crowdP.cl

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~1r canteen was very crowded

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Our canteen looks busy .at

break time because there are waitresses services the customer and students order , the menu.

At the office. especially QD

working hour, T alwAys went out with my friends without getting permission from mi'\Y hoss.

T m,qrie Rome t.rnuh 1 P. M

office hour, hy eating and chatting with my frienriR.

Sometimes if I woke up too

late, I would be absent at

that day.

Usually that company held a meeting twice a week. at Monday and Saturday at

1 o'clock in the middle of

the day.

The smell was not disgusting

in that time because I _~ould

still smell purge medicine,

Our canteen looks busy fulr:ing

hreak time because there are waitresses services the customer and students order

the menu.

At the office. especially in

working hour·. I always went

i out with my friends without

getting permission from may boss.

I made BnrnA trouble ili.u:.ing

office hour. by eating and chatting with my friends.

Sometimes if I woke up too

late, I would be absent QD

that day.

Usually that company held a

meeting twice a week, QD

Monday and Saturday at

1 o'clock in the middle of

the day.

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At that tim~. a girl is

riding hicycl~ t.ow<'ird .t..0 me

and there is a man standing in the middle of the door of Plough Inn.

A man iB entered .J& Plough

Inn, he was wearing a .jacket and bringing a stick.

A ymmg man was riding his bike when a child is walking through tQ garden.

A yotmg man watched .at them and looked very happy.

A girl is riding bicycl~

toward

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me and there is a

man is standing in the middle,

of the door of Plough Inn.

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At that time, a girl is

riding hicyr:Je t.owarrl mP

and there is a man standing in the midrl1e of the door of Plough Inn.

A man iB rmtered Plough

Inn. he was wearing a jacket and bringing a stick.

A yotmg man was riding his bike when a child is walking

through garden.

A Yotmg man watched them

and looked very happy.

A girl toward man is of the

is riding bicycle me and there is a Rt.!ffiding in the middle' door of Plough Inn.

A man i.s cheering t0 hiR

favorite team.

1 A man is cheering

favorite team.

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There iR a girl riding bicycle toward tQ me and a man riding a horse beside Plough Inn.

A woman who has already

entered iQ the pest office

and the man who is st..mding near the door of the post office bringing a hag.

There is a girl riding

I bicycle toward me and a

man riding a horse beside Plough Inn.

A woman who has already

entered the post office

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Two m,;t.nrt'l men ;n'e watchtnl!

at them. one of them is

wearing il coat Mri a hat.

and the other is drinking from a big glass.

When I see the couple. I

remember .:to rnv hoyfrier;rl anrl.

it makes me feel sad.

Two mature men are wat.c:hing them. one of them is

wearing a coat and a hat, and the other is drinking

from a big glass.

When I see the couple, I

remember my boyfriend and

it makes me feel sad.

I see the girl's hand is in

the boy's hand. Their I see the girl's hand is in

the boy's hand. Their laughing makes me remember

. ta

my boyfriend.

1 laughing makes me remember

my boyfriend .

ERRORS OF (1MISION

Errors

Beside that I saw so many pP.oplP- walking arounrl thP. street and heard them were talking* onP. another.

In the post office, there are 1

two women who hils .iust mailed their letter and standing outside the post offir:R anrl

chatting

*

one another.

A woman ancl a man are talking.

to each other in front

*

the post office.

Some groups of stud•mts

si tt.ing armmd the long table' and bench talking to each other and laughing sometimes

they shout

*

their friends

!'!Cross table.

Correction

Beside that I saw so many people walking arotmd the street and heard them were talking to one another.

In the oost office. there are t.wo women who has ,iust mailed their letter md standing outside the post office and chatting to one another.

A woman and a man are talking

to each other in front of the post office.

Some groups of students

7.

8.

9.

10.

11.

There are some sturients are studying, sitting and

talking

*

Aach other.

I am walking to the balcony and looking at the full moon

and then

*

the pool under

the palm trees.

I smile

*

them hoping they

will have a nice relationship like me.

Two men beside me are talking

*

one another and an old

woman is ,iust standing. looking arotmd the hotel.

Then J saw people are talking

*

each other while they are I

en,1 oying the beil.utiful sky.

i

I In the lobby. there are a loti

of people are listening

*

1

!

music.

i

There is a couple are sitting/ down in the chair in the

middle of the yard, looking

*

the pond, talking and

smiling each other.

There are some students are studying, sitting and

talking to each other.

I am walking to the balcony and looking at the full moon and then to the pool under the palm trees.

I smile at them hoping they .

will have a nice relationship: like me.

Two men beside me are talking'., to one another and an old woman is ,iust standing, looking arotmd the hotel.

Then I saw people are talking to each other while they are ,

en,1oying the beautiful sky. /

In the lobby. there are a lot1

of people are listening to music.

No.

1.

2.

3.

4.

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I .

Fl.

9.

ERRORS OF SUBSTITUTION

Errors

In this quite afternoon the children usually come in the

field and together thP-y play something like baseball.

Four men are playing hockey, they are en.ioying the Play anrl Aeveral men are paying

attention

for

the play.

When you go .Ql1 our cA.nteen

arotmd 8. 00-9. 00 the weather

ifl cool.

When we looked in the

kitchen, we could see many flies and ants, and also the servants who were huAY to cook foods and made drinks.

When you came

at

the canteen

af~er break time or

afternoon, you will see that the canteen is really dirty at that. time.

I can't sleep even it is too

late. hecatme J am falling in.

love tQ someone.

J miss you anrl J realizerl

that I am in love with you.

1 Might he J haw~ to talk l:dth 1

you.

A rouple has .iust. come out

fnlm the car.

T also see some people are

came out fr:mn the hotel.

Correction

In this quite afternoon the

children usually come iQ the

field and together they play something like baseball.

Four men are playing hockey, they are enjoying the play and several men are paying

attention tQ the play.

When you go .to otir canteen

around 8.00-9.00 the weather

is cool.

When we looked int.Q the

kitchen, we could see many flies and ants, and also the servants who were busy to cook foods and made drinks.

When you carne .tD the canteen

after break time or

afternoon, you will see that the canteen is really dirty at that time.

I can't sleep even it is t.: ...

late, because I am falling in

love w~ someone.

J miss you and I realized

that I am in love with you.

Hight be I have to talk .tQ

you.

A couple has just come out

of the car.

I also see some people are

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11.

12.

13.

14.

I

15.

16.

Everybody is eating their food, but we are .iust staring

for ear.h other and makes ll.

little smile when my eyes struck to his eyes.

Then I looked down Qll the

street..

They sweep the floor. clean the hook shelves and setting

the book very neatly, so f

there is no slippery ceramics 1

and garbage. But there is only sand from people's shoes who came at the

library in the afternoon.

I hardly hear anything in this place, except the phone rang and a breeze which came out ir:Dm the air conditioner.

However, students just come

at

the library if they need

some books or doing their

hom~>.work.

The first thing if you come

in the Hbrary you will

feel cool, there are six air

conditioner which full Qf

library.

At last my boss fired me. I did it! I thought he will

get crazy if he still be

patient toward me.

Everybody i.s eating their food, but we are just staring at each other and makes a little smile when my eyes struck to his eyes.

Then I looked down tQ the

street.

They sweep the floor, clean the book shelves and setting the book very neatly, so there is no slippery ceramics and garbage. But there is only sand from people's

shoes who came tQ the

library in the afternoon.

I hardly hear anything in this place, except the phone rang and a breeze which came out of the air conditioner.

However, students just come

tQ the library if they need

some books or doing their homework.

The first thing if you come

tQ the library you will

feel cool, there are six air

conditioner which full in

library.

At last my boss fired me. I did it! I thought he will

get crazy if he still be

TV. PREPOSITION OF MANNER ERRORS OF ADDITION

Errors

This child brought a ball

and joined Hith the other

children.

2.

Behind the post office there

is a badly man

Hith

wearing

slmglasses has just get in to the public phone.

3. Furthermore, beside the

canteen there are some

workers is work Hith using

generator machine.

4. The stars shine, like pieces

5.

fi.

7.

' of mirror reflects its light

;md the moon Jight shines Qn

brightly through the balcony ll.nri the street.

The woman is well dressed.

She is wearing a reo hn_t.

and Hith a blue t-shirt.

When my boss gave the letter which was said that I'm

fired I didn't feel sad

because however I hate Hith

my job. ·

I didn't like Hith my

partner, so I wanted to get out of my job.

Correction

This child brought a ball and joined the other children.

Behind the post office therf is a badly man wearing

Slmglasses has ,just get in to the public phone.

Furthermore, beside the canteen there are some workers is work using generator machine.

The stars shi.ne, like pieces of mirror reflects its light

and the moon light shines brightly through the balcony

and the street.

The woman is well dressed.

She is wearing a red hat

and a blue t-shirt.

When my boss gave the letter which was said that I'm

fired I didn't feel sad

because however I hate

my job.

I didn't like my

!

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I 2.

3.

4.

No.

1.

2.

3.

ERRORS OF OMISION

Errors

Recently my financial

was in dangerous so I

tried to get dirty money

*

corrupting my company's

money.

I made fatal mistake

*

corrupting my companies money.

I made fatal mistake

*

cornlpting my company's money, lots of money.

After that. I made fatal

mistake

*

didn't do my

job well.

Correction

1 Recently my financial wasj

in dangerous so I tried to get dirty money by corrupting my company's money.

I made fatal mistake by

corrupting my companies money.

I made fatal mistake by

corrupting my company's money, lots of money.

After that, I made fatal

mistake by didn't do my job well.

ERRORS OF SUBSTITUTION

Errors

The truth is, it is a ,joy

watching they happy children playing while seeing the

beautiful view Hilh fresh

air.

I sat on the chair in front of the hotel. There were several people HHh their activities.

Every time you go to thP. canteen you will see that people P.ating, talking and

laughing Hith a loud voice.

Correction

The truth is, it is a joy

watching the happy children playing while seeing the beautiful

view in fresh air.

I sat on the chair in front of the hotel.

There were several people

in their activities.

Every time you go to the canteen you will see

that people eating,

talking and laughing in

4.

5.

: 6.

7.

And the wall which is

separate canteen from parking

area was full R.i.th shoes

prints.

The table scattereri because Qf empty glasses. empty plates, wrappings and many flies.

Ther10 are many people inside

Rith their own activity.

There is a yotmg CGllP le who

have a nice dinner.

with

the

romantic song, make this night is really wonderfuL

And the wall which is separate canteen from parking area was full

i cl shoes prints.

The table scattered

by empty glasses,

empty plates, wrappings and many flies.

There are many people

inside in their own

ocUvit.y.

There is a young couple who have a nice dinner,

in _{the romantic song,}

make this night is really wonderful.

8. People are doing almost the ' People are doing almost

same thing like the couple

on:

the same thing like the

9.

10.

other trees. ' couple l.lJlder the other

At the corner I see a couple of teenager. They are very

happy, laughing and making a 1

joke together, and I can feel

l

how close they are en.ioying

the beautiful night

with

the

month· s warmth light.

Lihrary was the most

important part Qil studying.

trees.

At the corner I see a couple of teenager. They are very happy, laughing and making joke together,'

and I can feel how close they are enjoying the

beautiful night in

the month's warmth light.