IMPROVING
STUDENTS’
ACHIEVEMENT IN WRITING
HORTATORY EXPOSITION TEXT BY APPLYING
CLUSTERING TECHNIQUE
A THESIS
Submitted to the English Department, in Partial Fulfillment of Requirement for the Degree of Sarjana Pendidikan
By:
EFRIYANTI SIREGAR
Registration Number: 209421011
ENGLISH AND LITERATURE DEPARTMENT
FACULTY OF LANGUAGES AND ARTS
ACKNOWLEDGMENT
The writing of this thesis is aimed to fulfill one of the academic
requirements for the degree of Sarjana Pendidikan at the English and Literature
Department, Faculty of Languages and Arts, State University of Medan.
The writer would like to express the greatest gratitude to Allah Subhanahu wata’ala, the most gracious, the most merciful for blessing to complete this thesis.
The writer would like to express a special gratitude to:
- Prof. Dr. Ibnu Hajar Damanik, M.Si., The Rector of State University of Medan.
- Dr. Isda Pramuniati, M.Hum., The Dean Faculty of Language and Arts, State University of Medan.
- Prof. Dr. Hj. Sumarsih, M.Pd., as the Head of English Department, Faculty of Languages and Arts.
- Rika, S.Pd.,M.Hum, as the Secretary of English and Literature Department. - Dra. Masitowarni Siregar, M.Ed., as the Head of English Education Study
Program.
- Dr. Anni Holila Pulungan, M.Hum., her Thesis Advisor for her great care, patience, comments and suggestions in guiding her in the process of preparing
this thesis until it appears as it should be.
- Drs. Johan Sinulingga, M.Pd., her Academic Advisor, for his suggestion, advice and his time spent supervising for this thesis.
- Drs. Willem Saragih, Dipp. Appl., M.Pd., her Examiner in proposal and thesis seminar, for his suggestion, comments and his time for this thesis.
- Drs. Sularno, M.P., The headmaster of SMA An-Nizam Medan, M. Guntar, S.Pd., the English teacher, and all the students in class XI-IPA.
- H. Maksum Siregar and Hj. Samaria Harahap, her parents for their never ending support, care, love and everything they have given to the writer.
- Ahmad Mukhtar Hrp, Siti Hamida, Nurhayani, Azrina Manja, Ika, Purnama, Eva Saskia Rahma, Sri Ernita, Ibu Eis, for their greatest support, care, suggestion, and love and all students of Reg B 09.
- Lastly, the writer offers her regards and blessing to all of those who supported her in any aspects during the completion of this thesis. May Allah Subhanahuwata’ala bless and guide you all.
Medan, Maret 2014
The writer,
Efriyanti Siregar
ABSTRACT
Siregar, Efriyanti. Improving Students’ Achievement in Writing Hortatory Exposition Text by Applying Clustering Technique. A thesis. English Department. Faculty of Language and Arts. State University of Medan. 2014.
This study attempted to improve students’ achievement in writing hortatory exposition text by applying clustering technique. It was conducted by applying classroom action research which consisted of two cycles in six meetings. Every meeting consisted of four phases. The subject of this study was class XI IPA of SMA An-Nizam Medan. The number of students was 29 students. The instruments for collecting data were writing test for quantitative data and observation sheet, questionnaire sheet and interview sheet for qualitative data. Based on the students’ test, the students’ score was improved in every test. In Test I, the mean score was 59,41. In the Test II, the mean score was 69, 65. In the test III, the mean score of the students was 78, 17. After applying clustering technique in each treatment, the mean of each test improves and gets better. The use of clustering technique tends to be more effective and to make students interest in studying English especially in writing hortatory exposition text.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
A. The Background of the Study... 1B. The Problem of the Study... 4
C. The Purpose of the Study ... 4
D. The Scope of the Study ... 4
E. The Significance of the Study ... 5
CHAPTER II. REVIEW OF LITERATURE A. Theoretical Framework ... 6
1. Achievement ... 6
2. Writing ... 7
3. The Assessment of Writing ... 8
4. Genre ... 9
5. Hortatory Exposition ... 11
a. Communicative Purpose of Hortatory Exposition Text ... 12
b. Rhetorical Structure of Hortatory Exposition Text ... 12
c. Grammatical Pattern of Hortatory Exposition Text ... 13
6. Technique ... 15
7. Clustering ... 15
a. The Work of Clustering ... 17
b. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Clustering ... 18
c. The Example of Clustering in Hortatory Exposition Text ... 19
B. Relevant Studies ... 21
C. Conceptual Framework ... 22
CHAPTER III. RESEARCH METHODOLOGY A. Research Design ... 24
B. The Subject of Research... 25
C. The Instrument of Data Collection ... 25
1. Source of Data ... 25
2. Data ... 26
D. The Procedure of Research ... 27
1. Cycle I ... 27
CHAPTER IV. DATA AND DATA ANALYSIS
A. The Data ... 34
1. The Quantitative Data ... 34
2. The Qualitative Data ... 35
B. The Data Analysis ... 36
1. Analysis of Quantitative Data ... 36
2. Analysis of Qualitative Data ... 42
a. Observation Sheet ... 42
b. Questionnaire Sheet ... 42
c. Interview Sheet... 42
C. Research Finding ... 43
D. Discussion ... 44
CHAPTER V. CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION A. Conclusion ... 46
B. Suggestion ... 46
REFERENCES ... 48
LIST OF TABLES
Pages
Table 1.1 The Means of Students’ Ability in Writing Taken from SMA
Negeri 1 Kotarih ... 2
Table 2.1 Assessment of Writing ... 9
Table 3.1 Teachers’ and Students’ Activities in Cycle I ... 28
Table 3.2 The Activities During Cycle II... 30
Table 3.3 Weigle’s Scoring Test for Writing ... 32
Table 4.2 The Range of Score Improvement ... 37
Table 4.3 The Percentage of Students Passing the Standard Test ... 39
LIST OF FIGURE
Page
LIST OF APPENDICES
Pages
Appendix A. Lesson Plan ... 50
Appendix B. The Students’ Test Score from Test I, Test II, Test III... 74
Appendix C. The Range of Score Improvement ... 75
Appendix D. Observation Sheet ... 76
Appendix E. Questionnaire Sheet ... 78
Appendix F. Interview Sheet ... 79
Appendix G. The Students’ Test Score Improvement ... 82
CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. The Background of the Study
Writing is a basic language skill that becomes the complex skill to master for
the learners. As we know that writing is a productive skill that involves the way to
generate and organize the ideas in written form. People need to learn English
writing because it is a process of transforming thought and ideas into written
language. Harmenita and Yuli (2013) also stated that writing is one of the
language skills that must be mastered by English learners. They have to able to
express their thoughts in writing to develop their ideas, and make readers interest
when their writing read. Through writing, they can also transfer information and
knowledge to others. In other words, writing can be said as a mean of
communication between the writer and the reader.
In fact, in Indonesia students’ writing skill in English language is very low. It
is found that most of Indonesian students are still difficult in comprehending the
text. The results of research Program for International Student Assessment (2010)
shows that Indonesian students just got the 39th rank from 42 surveyed countries
in Asia, slightly above Albania and Peru. It shows us that writing skill is still a
problem for Indonesian students.
SMA An-Nizam Medan has Minimum Mastery Criteria (MMC) of English
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Because we found that student has difficult to write a text well based on the genre.
It can be shown from the mean of student’s writing ability in the table below.
Table 1.1 The mean of students’ ability in writing taken from second grade of SMA An-Nizam Medan
Semester
Means of students’ ability in language skill
Reading Speaking Listening Writing
I 65 64 63 65
II 68 68 65 69
From the fact above, it supported the researcher to do an interview and
observation at SMA An-Nizam Medan.
According to Salam (2011), many problems faced by the teachers and the
students in learning writing. The problem is limited vocabularies, diffilculty in
organizing ideas, no ideas to write about, no motivation to write and lack of
confidence in grammar. Students might take much time to write down their ideas.
Teachers also need to give full attention to their students to show them how to
plan a piece of writing through prewriting, drafting, and revising activities. Then,
some teachers still use thetraditional method or technique and just give
explanation and exercises to their students. So it makes students less
comprehended, less interest in writing, and makes students bored. The effect can
be seen in English writing score, it is regarded as a main problem in many school.
During teaching practice (PPL),the researcher also found that the students
face the same problem in writing proficiency as the factors mentioned above. In
this study the researcher choose hortatory exposition text as the students’ genre
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a critical thinking, scientific ideas, and argumentative expression. By interviewing
some English teachers during teaching practice (PPL), a lot of students think that
it is a difficult writing assignment they have. They spend a lot of time focusing
only on how to start writing. This factor may come from the students’ experience
about hortatory exposition text is still low and it is a new thing for them. From
that case, both the teachers and the students need a significant way of teaching and
learning in order to improve student achievement in writing.
In the teaching-learning process, there are many ways that can help the
teacher to solve the students’ difficulties in writing by using technique and
strategy. Considering the facts above, the researcher chooses to conduct this study
by using clustering. Dietsch (2003:26) state that clustering is kind of prewriting
activity that enrich idea before students startwriting. Clustering produces an
overview of a subject, suggests specific topics, and yields related details. At the
beginning of writing activity, students have to find out the idea what they want to
write about. According to Rico (2000: 38) Clustering, the basic technique of
natural writing, can be used to generate ideas for writing of any form : essays,
poems, short stories, business reports, song lyrics, even novels.
Based on definition above, the researcher summarizes that clustering is
making visual map to produce a topic related to each other. Clustering technique
will stimulus students’ ideas and also they can make a good paragraph in every
types of writing. In addition, the use of appropriate technique can solve the
problems occurring in writing class and clustering technique gives a contribution
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In line with the explanation above, the researcher isinterested in conducting a
research on “Improving Students’ Achievement in Writing Hortatory Exposition
Text by Applying Clustering Technique”.
B. The Problem of the Study
In the relation to the background of the study, the research addresses the
following problem:
“Is there any improvement of student’s achievement in writing a hortatory text by
applying clustering technique?”
C. The Objective of the Study
Clustering is kind of prewriting activity that enrich idea before students start
writing. Its helps the students to produce an overview of a subject, suggests
specific topics, and yields related details. Based on the question formulated in the
problem of this study, the objective of the study is aimed to find out the
improvement of student’s achievement in writing hortatory exposition text by
applying clustering technique.
D. The Scope of the Study
The scope of this study is limited to investigate the student’s writing ability of
IX IPA students of SMA An-Nizam Medan in writing hortatory exposition text by
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E. Significance of the Study
The result of the study is expected to give some benefits theoretically and
practically:
1. Theoretically, the result of this study is expected to enrich the literature of the
teaching learning process and to give a better understanding. In addition, the
result can be used as a references for further study.
2. Practically, the result of this study are expected to give benefit for the
teachers, researchers, students, and institution.
a) For teachers, the result of this study will be directly intended to provide
them with more understanding of the effectiveness of teaching writing by
applying clustering.
b) For researchers, the result of this study is used as a reference in
conducting further research/study for obtaining better result.
c) For students, the result of this study can be used to encourage and
stimulate them in improving their writing ability.
d) For institution, it can be used to develop the teaching learning technique
CHAPTER V
CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS
A. Conclusion
After analyzing the data there was an improvement on students’ writing
hortatory exposition text by using clustering. The score of the students improved
from cycle I to cycle II. The improvement can be seen from the mean of students’
namely: the mean of test I (59,41 ), the mean of test II ( 69,65 ) and the mean of
test III( 78,17 ). Beside the mean of the score, there was percentage of the students
who got the score above 75. In test I there was 6,89% (2 students), in test II there
was 34,48% (10 students) and in test III there was 68,96% (20 students).
From the data can be concluded that teaching writing hortatory exposition
text by applying clustering technique can help the students to improve their ability
in writing. And the students were more enjoyable and interested in learning
hortatory exposition text by applying clustering technique.
B. Suggestion
Based on the result of this study, the use of clustering technique could
improve the students’ achievement on writing hortatory exposition text. The
following suggestions are offered:
1. To the students, they are suggested to use clustering technique while
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2. To the teachers, they are suggested to apply clustering technique so that
they can improve their students’ achievement in writing hortatory
exposition text.
3. To all the readers, may this research bring them into good understanding
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