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THEMATIC STRUCTURES IN STUDENT
S’
RESEARCH
PAPERS AND ORAL PRESENTATIONS
(A Case Study of Postgraduate Program in English Education at UPI Bandung)
A Thesis
Submitted in partial fulfillment of the requirements
for Master’s Degree in English Education
Sidik Indra N
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DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION
SCHOOL OF POSTGRADUATE STUDIES
INDONESIA UNIVERSITY OF EDUCATION
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Thematic Structures in Student
s’
Research Papers and Oral
Presentations
(A Case Study of Postgraduate Program
in English Education at UPI Bandung)
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Thematic Structures in Students’ Research Papers and Oral Presentations
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ABSTRACT
This research aims to investigate the thematic structures in students’ research papers and oral presentations. Specifically, it focuses on two aspects, i.e. types of Theme and realizations of topical Theme in students’ research papers and oral presentations. It is qualitative in nature, and involves three students’ research papers and transcribed students’ oral presentations as the main research data. Findings from the research show differences of thematic structures in students’ research papers and oral presentations in terms of the types of Theme used and realizations of topical Theme. Firstly, the types of Theme used in students’ research papers and oral presentations were interpersonal, textual, and topical. Topical Theme was the most frequently used type of Theme, with the total of 72.7% and 56.3% in students’ research papers and oral presentations respectively. After topical Theme came textual Theme, constituting 26.1% and 39.5% of overall Themes in both types of text respectively. Finally, interpersonal Theme was the least common type of Theme found in students’ research papers (1.2%) and oral presentations (5.2%). Secondly, the topical Themes in both types of text were realized by relatively similar elements including nominal group with common or proper noun as Head, nominal group with personal pronoun as Head, nominal group with nominalization as Head, prepositional phrase, nominal group with proper noun as Head, dependent clause, adverbial group, non-representational it, reference item, existential, embedded clause, and question word. Of these twelve elements realizing the topical Themes, nominal group with common noun as head mostly occurred in students’ research papers (46.1%) and oral presentations (40.3%). Considering these findings, it is concluded that the variation regarding the types of Theme and realizations of topical Theme in both types of text may be attributed to the mode variation of the texts, i.e. distinction between spoken and written language. This variation of thematic structure is related to the role the language plays in the realization of the context of situation, in this case, students’ research papers and oral presentations. It is recommended that teaching on the way the message is organized in both written and spoken contexts of language use be given to students to improve coherence and cohesion of text.
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ABSTRAKSI
Penelitian ini bertujuan untuk menginvestigasi struktur tematis dalam tulisan ilmiah dan presentasi lisan mahasiswa. Secara spesifik penelitian ini menyoroti dua aspek, yakni, jenis Theme dan realisasinya dalam tulisan ilmiah dan presentasi lisan mahasiswa. Penelitian ini menggunakan metode kualitatif dan melibatkan masing-masing tiga tulisan ilmiah dan presentasi lisan mahasiswa sebagai data penelitian. Hasil analisis menunjukan perbedaan struktur tematis dalam tulisan ilmiah dan presentasi lisan mahasiswa. Pertama, jenis Theme yang digunakan dalam tulisan ilmiah dan presentasi lisan mahasiswa adalah interpersonal, textual, dan topical.
Topical Theme merupakan jenis Theme yang paling banyak muncul, yaitu, 72,7%
dalam tulisan ilmiah siswa dan 56,3% dalam presentasi lisan mahasiswa. Berikutnya adalah textual Theme dengan persentase 26.1% dan 39.5% di kedua jenis teks secara berurutan. Interpersonal Theme adalah jenis Theme yang paling jarang muncul, dengan persentase 1,2% dalam tulisan ilmiah dan 5.2% dalam presentasi lisan mahasiswa. Kedua, topical Theme direalisasikan dengan elemen yang sama di kedua jenis teks termasuk nominal group with common or proper noun as Head, nominal
group with personal pronoun as Head, nominal group with nominalization as Head, prepositional phrase, nominal group with proper noun as Head, dependent clause, adverbial group, non-representational it, reference item, existential, embedded clause, and question word. Dari keduabelas elemen tersebut nominal group
merupakan elemen yang paling sering muncul, 46.1% kemunculan dalam tulisan ilmiah dan 40.3% dalam persentasi lisan. Dari temuan diatas dapat disimpulkan bahwa variasi jenis Theme dan realisasinya di kedua jenis teks dapat disebabkan oleh variasi modus di kedua jenis teks, yakni, bahasa tulis dan lisan. Variasi tematis berhubungan dengan peran bahasa dalam merealisasikan konteks situasi. Dalam pengajaran bahasa siswa harus diajarkan cara menyusun teks dalam kedua jenis modus, lisan dan tulisan, yang benar sehingga mereka mampu menulis teks yang kohesif dan koheren.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
ABSTRACT i
TABLE OF CONTENT ii
LIST OF TABLES v
LIST OF FIGURES vi
CHAPTER 1: INTRODUCTION
1.1Research background 1
1.2Research questions 3
1.3Aims of the research 4
1.4Significance of the research 4
1.5Definitions of terms 5
1.6Thesis organization 6
CHAPTER 2: LITERATURE REVIEW
2.1Introduction 7
2.2Systemic Functional Grammar (SFG) 8
2.3Language metafunctions 11
2.3.1 Interpersonal meaning (clause as exchange) 11
2.3.2 Ideational meaning (clause as representation) 12
2.3.3 Textual meaning (clause as message) 12
2.4The grammar of textual meaning: THEME 13
2.4.1 The system of Theme 13
2.4.2 Types of Theme 16
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2.4.2.2Interpersonal Theme 16
2.4.2.2.1 Finite (unfused) as interpersonal Theme 17
2.4.2.2.2 Mood Adjuncts as interpersonal Theme 17
2.4.2.2.3 Vocative Adjuncts as interpersonal Theme 17
2.4.2.2.4 Polarity Adjunct 17
2.4.2.2.5 Comment Adjunct 18
2.4.2.3Textual Theme 18
2.4.2.3.1 Continuity Adjunct as Theme 18
2.4.2.3.2 Conjunctive Adjunct as Theme 18
2.5Register variable of mode 19
2.5.1 Spatial/interpersonal distance 20
2.5.2 Experiential distance 19
2.6Academic language: functional perspective 24
CHAPTER 3: RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
3.1Research design 27
3.2Research site and participants 27
3.3Procedures of data collections 28
3.4Data analysis 29
CHAPTER 4 DATA PRESENTATIONS AND ANALYSIS
4.1Types of Theme get used in student’s research papers
and oral presentations 31
4.1.1 General findings: trend in the use of Themes
in student’s papers and oral presentations 31
4.1.2 Types of Theme in research papers 36
4.1.2.1Interpersonal Theme 36
4.1.2.2Textual Theme 39
4.1.2.3Topical Theme 46
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4.1.3.1Interpersonal Theme 49
4.1.3.2Textual Theme 53
4.1.3.3Topical Theme 59
4.2Realizations of topical Theme in student’s research papers
and oral presentations 62
4.2.1 General findings: trend in selections of topical Theme
in student’s research papers and oral presentations 62 4.2.2 Realizations of topical Theme in research papers 66
4.2.2.1Nominal group: common noun as Head 67
4.2.2.2Nominal group: personal pronoun as Head 68
4.2.2.3Nominal group: nominalizations as Head 69
4.2.2.4Prepositional phrase 70
4.2.3 Realizations of topical Theme in oral presentations 81
4.2.3.1Nominal group: common noun as Head 81
4.2.3.2Nominal group: personal pronoun as Head 82
4.2.3.3Nominal group: nominalization as Head 83
4.2.3.4Prepositional phrase 84
4.2.3.5Dependent clause 85
4.2.3.6Adverbial group 88
4.2.3.7Existential 89
4.2.3.8Embedded clause 90
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CHAPTER 5 CONCLUSION AND RECOMMENDATION
5.1 Conclusion 98
5.2 Recommendation 101
BIBLIOGRAPHY 103
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CHAPTER 1
INTRODUCTION
This chapter provides the general issues related to the current research. It includes
background of the study, research question, purpose of the study, significance of
the study, definition of terms and thesis organization.
1.1Research background
Halliday‟s Systemic Functional Linguistics (hence SFL) influence on language learning has been of great interest to researchers. This is believed to owe to its
particular specialization on the concept of metafunctions, i.e. interpersonal,
ideational and textual, as opposed to the traditional grammar (see Eggins, 2004).
Within SFL theory, language users are able to express these three kinds of
meaning simultaneously by utilizing a set of grammatical choices available in the
lexico-grammar system. As the theory posits, the interpersonal, ideational and
textual metafunction are the semantic meanings for which people make when
interacting (Eggins, 2004). Interpersonal metafunction expresses the writer‟s role
relationship with the reader as well as the writer‟s attitude towards the subject
matter. Ideational metafunction shows the way the writers make sense of the
world. Textual metafunction suggests the way the text is organized.
It is particularly this latter strand of metafunction that is of important for
its role that partly contributes to realizing textual meanings. According to Halliday
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Research into thematic structure in texts has been revealing. Several
research compared the thematic structure in different genres (see, for example,
Ghadessy, 1999; Ebrahimi and Heng, 2012), whereas several others compared the
thematic structure and aspects of students‟ writing of different level of score (e.g.,
Ping, 2007; Kawaguchi, Haenouchi, & Ichinose, 2009). Research into thematic
structure of interlanguage texts has also been prevalent. For example, Green,
Christopher, & Mei (2000) reported a comparison of corpus academic writings
produced by non-native speakers of Chinese student and native speakers of
English in relation to the occurences of the two fronting devices (i.e., beginning
For and Concerning) and the three thematized connectors (i.e., Besides, Furthermore and Moreover). Mirahayuni (2002) investigated the textual structure
of research articles written by English speakers, Indonesian writers writing in
English, and Indonesian writers writing in Indonesian. Some attention has also
been given to thematic progression in academic research articles (e.g.,
Soepriatmadji, 2009; Herriman, 2011; Nuraeningsih, 2012; Sharndama &
Panamah, 2013; Shi, 2013). These studies described the way the thematic
structure and progression contribute to cohesion and coherence of texts.
Thematic structure and its utilization in the field of language teaching has
been an especially popular area of research. Several action research reported the
effectiveness of incorporating thematic structure in teaching writing (e.g., Ren,
Cao, Gao, & Li, 2009; Priyatmojo, 2012 ; Farikah, Nurkamto, & Sofwan, 2013).
The results showed a considerable improvement of students‟ competence in
developing paragraph of certain genres.
In translation studies thematic organization has been of an issue. Khedri
and Ebrahimi (2012) reported the efficacy of thematic structure to keep the
rhetoric and argumentation well-structured. Several studies have mostly dealt with
the way the translator tackled the issues of textual devices (i.e. thematic
organization and progression) when a text was translated into another language
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problems as regards the thematic issue, Dejica-Cartis and Cozma (2013) proposed
a process-based translation by putting a methodological approach for integrating
information-structure theories in translation process.
Although considerable research has been devoted to thematic structure,
these research have tended to focus on a single mode of discourse, i.e. written
(e.g. Ghadessy, 1999; Ebrahimi and Heng, 2012; Ping, 2007; Kawaguchi,
Haenouchi, & Ichinose, 2009). It would seem, therefore, that further
investigations are needed in order to find out the thematic realizations in two
different modes of discourse, i.e. spoken and written. The aim of the present
research is to compare the realizations of thematic structures in students‟ research
papers and oral presentations. To be specific, it will reveal the types of Theme and
linguistic realizations of topical Theme in research papers and oral presentations.
Selections of type of Theme and realizations of topical Theme to become the
focus of investigation because they will reveal variations between two types of
text, considering there is a choice between using textual and interpersonal
thematic elements. In addition, topical Theme is expected to occur in each clause
for its vital role in giving the content to the clause (see Thompson, 2004; Martin,
Matthiessen and Pinter, 1997), and thus is crucial to look at what it is (see Eggins,
1994, 2004). Topical Theme can be realized in various elements such as nominal
group, dependent clause, embedded clause, etc.
The selection of research papers and oral presentations being the focus of
investigation is motivated by a consideration that these two have become an
important part in academic tradition particularly postgraduate level. Research papers constitute students‟ mastery of a subject matter, and as it turns out, they are often followed up by oral presentations. The analysis of Theme will provide
evidence that the two types of text are alike to several respects, but different to the
other: the texts may be ideationally and interpersonally similar but textually
different. It is hoped that the information presented will be useful to students of
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spoken and written language in terms of the way they are structured, which
realizes the textual meaning of the text.
1.2Research questions
The questions that this research seeks to answer are formulated as follows:
1. What types of Theme are used in students‟ research papers and oral
presentations?
2. What is selected to be Topical Theme in students‟ research papers and
oral presentations?
1.3Aims of the research
The research is aimed to:
1. find out the types of Theme get used in students‟ research papers and oral
presentations. The type of Theme is expected to vary according to the
mode variations of the texts.
2. reveal the elements selected to be the topical Theme in students‟ research
papers and oral presentations. The language use in different mode will
somehow affect the lexical choices as well as their structure in clauses.
This in turn will reveal the characteristics of spoken and written language
in terms of its thematic structure.
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The following significant points are expected from this case study:
1. It imparts a contribution to the theory of functional linguistics. The study
of functional linguistics has mostly dealt with the way the metafunctions
are realized in either written or spoken mode. The current research,
however, extends the analysis to uncover how the Theme is structured in
written mode as compared to that of spoken mode. This will indicate that
the texts are alike to some extents but different to the other.
2. It contributes to raising students‟ awareness of the way the message is
structured in both written and spoken mode. As for non-native language
users particularly in Indonesian context, it is helpful to provide accounts
towards how the language is used according to its context and purpose.
1.5Definition of terms
The technical terms prominently used in this research are defined as follows:
1. Academic language refers to language typically used in the school context
that gives access to students to acquire knowledge and that serves as a tool
of thinking (Schleppegrell, 2004).
2. Metafunction is defined as “the highly generalized functions language has
evolved to serve and which are evidenced in its organization”
(Matthiessen, Teruya, & Lam, 2010: 138).
3. Mode refers to “the role language is playing in an interaction” (Martin,
1984, in Eggins, 2004: 90).
4. Register is “A variety of language determined by a particular set of values
of the context; it is determined by what the speaker is doing socially”
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5. Systemic functional linguistics (SFL) refers to “a functional approach to
language which explores both how people use language in different contexts, and how language is structured for use a semiotic system” (Eggins, 2004: 20).
6. Theme is defined as “Textual system for organizing the clause as a
message, more specifically for assigning an element or set of elements of
the clause the textual status of prominence as orientation or local context
for the interpretation of the rest of the clause—the point of departure in the
process of interpreting the clause” (Matthiessen, Teruya, & Lam, 2010:
223).
7. Topical Theme refers to “an element of the clause in which a Transitivity function can be assigned occurs in first position in a clause” (Eggins, 2004: 301).
1.6Thesis organization
This research is organized into five chapters. Chapter 1 consists of the background
of the study which elaborates a general description of the research focus under
discussion. The following sub-chapter includes research questions, purpose of the
study, significance of the study, definition of terms and thesis organization.
Chapter 2 elaborates theoretical bases underlying the present research. It mainly
discusses the language approach of Halliday‟s SFL to analyze the thematic
structure in students‟ research papers and oral presentations. It subsequently
provides a description on the concept of register, mode and language features
typical in academic setting.
Chapter 3 describes the methodology employed in this research. It includes
research design, research setting and participants, data collection and data
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Chapter 4 presents the data presentation and data analysis. The data presentation
describes the choice of types of Theme including textual, interpersonal, and
topical Theme in students‟ research papers and oral presentations. They also
present the elements used to be the topical Theme in both types of text. They are
discussed by referring to relevant theories and previous studies.
Chapter 5 provides conclusion and suggestions drawn from this research. The
conclusion is made based on the research findings and the discussion regarding
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CHAPTER 3
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
This chapter describes the research strategy that is used to study the realizations of
thematic structures in research papers and oral presentations. It provides an
account of the specific research design, research site and participants, data
collection and data analysis.
3.1 Research design
As described earlier in Chapter 1, this research attempts to investigate the
thematic choices and realizations of topical Theme in students‟ research papers
and oral presentations. Relevant to this inquiry, qualitative research is adopted
since it provides descriptive data concerning what people wrote and said as well
as how they behaved (Anderson, 1987: 384, in Hatch, 2002: 6). Furthermore,
there are several characteristics of qualitative found in this research (Hatch, 2002:
6-11); Alwasilah, 2000: 36; Best & Kahn, 1993: 185). Firstly, the natural setting
of the current research is that the research was conducted in a classroom whereby
the students were doing oral presentations of the research papers. Secondly, it is
the researcher himself as the main data gathering instrument; the researcher
directly collected the main data of the research including students‟ document of
research papers and videotaped oral presentations. Thirdly, the data are analyzed
inductively. The researcher collected the data from the research setting, and then
began to consider patterns that emerge from the data.
This research is designed as case study. Case study, according to Creswell
(2007, cited in Liamputtong, 2009: 76), is:
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information (e.g., observations, interviews, audiovisual material, and documents and reports), and reports of a case description and case-based themes.
Based on the definition above, several points can be drawn that characterize this
research as case study. Firstly, the “case” identified for the research involves a
course as well as students attending it. Secondly, this “case” is a bounded system,
that is, bounded by time (two weeks of data collection) and a place (situated at a
single campus). Thirdly, the data collection involves multiple sources of
information, i.e. students‟ documentations and audiovisual materials, to generate a
complete picture of the realizations of thematic structures in students‟ research
papers and oral presentations (see Richards, 2003; Hood, 2009).
Focusing on how the Theme-Rheme is structured in students‟ research
papers and oral presentations, case study is a useful method for this purpose of
research. It is designed as a viable strategy for researchers which anchored their inquiry in providing answers for „how, „why‟ or „what‟, or in a condition that limits researchers to handle the complexity of events as a whole (Burns, 1994:
313)
3.2 Research site and participants
The research was conducted at English Department of Postgraduate School in one
of state universities in Bandung. It involved a course of Teaching English for
Young Learners (TEYL) of academic year 2012. This selection was due to a
consideration that proficient English command was highly demanding for the
students at this level in order to engage in academic culture and to develop
professional confidence. In addition, one of the course-related tasks required
students to write a research-based paper as a partial fulfillment of course
completion. Research-based papers represented students‟ expertise regarding the
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they were followed up by students‟ oral presentations with respect to the papers
that the students had written.
In this research three students of postgraduate program in English were
selected purposively as research participants (see Alwasilah, 2000: 56;
Liamputtong, 2011: 11; Dornyei, 2007). This selection of purposive sampling is
based on a consideration that the participants were considered to have
characteristics and information that were relevant to the research focus under
discussion (Ritchie and Lewis, 2003). The characteristics and information
discussed here deal with the textual structures the students used in research papers
and oral presentations. They were assumed to bear information regarding the
contrastive aspects in terms of their thematic structure developed in these two
types of text.
3.3 Data collection
The data of students‟ research papers and oral presentations were collected using
two methods, i.e. documentation of students‟ research papers and video-taped oral
presentations. Since this research were undertaken involving a course, the data
collections were conducted in coordination with the lecturers. The research papers
were collected as scheduled in the syllabus. To collect the data of students‟ oral
presentations, the researcher attended each meeting when the students presented
their papers, and video-taped them by means of a video-taping device. This was
done after all students had submitted their research papers.
3.4 Data analysis
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2004). The analyses in this research were performed in sequences. Firstly, the data
of videotaped oral presentations were transcribed. Next step was divide all texts of students‟ research papers and transcribed oral presentations into clauses since thematic analysis operates at the level of clause. After that, each clause in both
types of texts was analyzed to determine the boundary between Theme and
Rheme. The principle of deciding where Theme begins and stops is by
considering that the element(s) that comes first at the beginning of the clause
including the first topical element would be considered as Theme. The Theme was
analyzed with respect to the types of Theme, i.e. topical, interpersonal, and
textual. The topical Theme includes selections of marked or unmarked Theme;
interpersonal Themes consist of selections of (unfused) Finite, Mood Adjunct,
Vocative Adjunct, Polarity Adjunct, and Comment Adjunct as interpersonal
Theme; and, textual Themes involve selections of Conjunctions, Continuity
Adjunct and Conjunctive Adjunct. All occurrences of each type of Theme were
quantified and provided in percentage (%).
Having completed the analysis of types of Theme, the analysis proceeded
with the realizations of topical Theme in students‟ research papers and oral
presentations. This included various elements potentially selected to be topical
Theme, for example, nominal group, nominalization, dependent clause,
prepositional phrase, etc. All occurrences of each element used to be the topical in students‟ research papers and oral presentations were quantified and presented in percentage (%). All findings related to types of Theme and selections of topical
Theme in students‟ research papers and oral presentations were discussed by
taking into account relevant theories and previous research.
3.5Conclusion
This chapter has elaborated the research methodology that the current research
will employ including research design, research site and participants, data
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CHAPTER 5
CONCLUSION AND RECOMMENDATION
This chapter provides conclusions of the findings in relation to the research questions
formulated in Chapter 1, i.e. types of Theme and realizations of topical Theme in students’ research papers and oral presentations. Recommendations for further study are also provided.
5.1Conclusion
This research investigated the thematic structures in students’ research papers and
oral presentations. Specifically, it attempted to find out the types of Theme and
realizations of topical Theme in students’ research papers and oral presentations. The
findings related to the types of Theme and realizations of topical Theme in students’
research papers and oral presentations highlighted a number of differences of
thematic structures between the two types of text.
Considering the first research question, i.e. types of Theme used in students’
research papers and oral presentations, the two types of texts shared similar types of
Theme, i.e. interpersonal, textual, and topical. However, the occurrence of each type
of Theme in both texts varies considerably. Firstly, interpersonal Theme in the form
of Modal Adjuncts tends to occur more commonly in oral presentations (5.2%) rather
than in research papers (1.2%). This variation may stem from the fact that Modal
Adjuncts realizing interpersonal Theme are movable; it is the speaker’s choice either
to assign Modal Adjuncts a thematic role or simply to consign them into the Rheme.
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the Mood Adjunct realizing interpersonal Theme in students’ research papers were Adjunct, there were several cases when the interpersonal Themes in student’s oral presentations were realized by grammatical metaphor. The occurrence of
interpersonal Theme in student’s oral presentations suggests the speaker’s evaluation
of something s/he has presented, whereas interpersonal Theme in research papers
may be considered as a way to create “approachable, fallible style” of text (Eggins,
2004: 322).
Secondly, the findings related to textual Theme revealed considerable
differences of thematic structure between students’ research papers and oral
presentations. This finding again confirms the proposition stated earlier that mode
variation apparently affects the realizations of textual Theme in both types of text.
Textual Theme can consist of any element of Conjunctive Adjuncts, Conjunctions,
and Continuity Adjuncts. It was found that textual Theme tend to be used more
frequently in student’s oral presentations (39.5%) than that in students’ research
papers (26.1%). Conjunctive Adjuncts tend to appear more commonly in student’s
oral presentations (10.3%) than those in students’ research papers (5.1%). They
contribute to developing the rhetorical structure in students’ research papers (see Gerot and Wignel, 1994). Conjunctions occurred more frequently in student’s oral presentations (27.1%) than those in students’ research papers (20.2%). This is
relevant to the nature of spoken language in which clause complexes may abound as
indicated by an extensive use of Conjunctions that link the clauses within sentences
(see Eggins, 2004; Schleppegrell, 2004). Continuity Adjuncts, typical textual
elements in spoken language, were only found in student’s oral presentations.
Thirdly, realizations of topical Themes in students’ research papers and oral
presentations with respect to the use of marked and unmarked topical Theme revealed
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Themes tend to occur more frequently in students’ research papers (11.7%) than that
in student’s oral presentations (7.2%). Marked Themes in research papers contribute
to doing coherence work in that they present information of previous texts and make
them as the point of departure of the clause (see Thompson, 2004). They also allow
other elements that are not usually functioning as Subject to become the Themes of
the clause without making them Subject in declarative Mood. By contrast, marked
topical Themes in oral presentations were often used to signal schematic move when
speakers presented their research papers (see Lock, 1996).
The findings related to the second research question, i.e. realizations of topical
Theme in students’ research papers and oral presentations, revealed further
characteristics of thematic structures in both texts. It was revealed that the nominal
group with common noun as Head was frequently used in both students’ research
papers (46.1%) and oral presentations (40.3%). Despite this similarity, this element
was in fact realized differently in both types of text. It was found that the speakers in
oral presentations tend to use brief nominal groups, which refer to specific common
nouns or simple prepositional phrases. In contrast to oral presentations, research
papers were often loaded with relatively lengthy nominal groups. Nominal groups
containing nominalizations as Head were also found quite frequently in research
papers. In addition to nominal group with common noun as Head, the use of nominal
group with personal pronoun as Head is also worth noticing. It was the second
element mostly selected to be the topical Theme both in students’ research papers
(14.1%) and oral presentations (30.5%). In oral presentations, it is often the case that
the speakers identify themselves by using first person singular pronoun I, which is
hardly used in students’ research papers.
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considered partly as realizing textual meaning. The textual meaning realized deals
with the way the messages are organized so that they “fit smoothly into the unfolding language event” (Thompson, 2004: 141; see also Lock, 1996: 219; Martin, Matthiessen, & Pinter, 1997: 21; Eggins, 2004: 320). In this case, it is the students’
research papers and oral presentations. It was revealed how the thematic structures in students’ research papers differ quite considerably from those in oral presentations by offering choices of what Theme to be selected as the point of departure of the clause,
either single Theme that consists of topical Theme only, or multiple Theme that
consists of a combination of textual and/or interpersonal and topical Theme. The
realizations topical Theme in students’ research papers and oral presentations also
revealed another differing aspect between the two types of texts. In oral presentations,
it was found that the topical Themes tend to be brief nominal groups of personal
pronoun, or particular commons nouns. In research papers, by contrast, the elements
selected to be the topical Themes tend to be relatively lengthy nominal groups,
containing lengthy strings of word. Nominalizations and dependent clauses were also
frequently given a thematic prominence of topical Theme. In addition to the analysis
of thematic structures in clausal level, the analysis of higher level of Theme, i.e.
macro- and hyper-Theme also reveals that both types of text are considered cohesive
and coherent. This can be observed from the predictive relations between the macro-
and hyper-Theme in both types of text.
5.2Recommendations
This research investigates the differences between spoken and written texts with
respect to the thematic structures in students’ research papers and oral presentations.
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of the text in both spoken and written language (see Martin, 2001). Given the
importance of thematic structure in organizing the message of the texts, there are two
suggestions that can be made in relation to the practice of English as Foreign
Language (EFL) teaching particularly college level in which research papers and oral
presentations become an essential part in this academic level, and linguistic research
on thematic structure.
Firstly, with regard to the practice of EFL teaching, it is recommended that
teaching on the way the message is organized in both written and spoken context of
language use be given to students to improve coherence and cohesion of text (see
Martin, 2001; Nunan, 1991). In addition, it is important that students be exposed to
various research papers from which they internalize some characteristics of research
papers especially in terms of the way the message is organized. For example, it is
quite common that academic texts use abstract ideas as the point of departure
(Eggins, 2004; see also Martin, 1993). In addition, nominalization is commonly used
as the clause Theme since it allows for reiteration of prior information to be used as
the point of departure in the writer’s succeeding clause. Clause combination strategies
signifying taxis and projections are the other points that need to be addressed
properly in the teaching of writing because they play important roles in logical
relationships either within or between sentences.
Secondly, for further research, it is recommended that other researcher
analyze the method of development of research papers as compared to that of oral
presentations. This will generate a complete description of how the texts are different.
More importantly, this will show how thematic elements are related to each other,
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