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Write your experience during your holiday consists of 200 words

Experience During Holiday

Hi everybody my name is selly Tobing I’m from eleventh grade accounting. I wanted to tell you about my experience during holidays.

When holidays, I and my family went on to Batu merah beach. my heart very happy. because this years. I get to hang out with my family to one of the most beauty place at north sumatera. When arrived at Batu Merah, my mom looked very tiring and nouse. We finally took the decision to rest and we all had lunch when we arrived in my aunt house. I think, many people felt happy when holiday because they can have fun with family, friends.

After we spent long time to rest, we continued our trip. While on the way, I looked around and feel fresh with a weather and after 30 minutes we are hungry again, so we stopped briefly to buy something such as gorengan, kue, kerupuk, etc. after we finished shop, we continued our journey again. I was really interest to get there and finally we arriv at Batu Merah beach, I love it.

at beach we are very happy and giggling until my stomach huet, but, different with my mom also my sister. They was terrified because when we are on boat the wave is high, so my mom and my sister is afraid to come the Batu Merah again. In the afternoon. we came home and bring some sovenirs from Batu Merah Beach.

well, that’s the first day of holiday, next day I and my friends go to merdeka walk. We saw the festival and actually we fell happy to spent time there. Ok, by the way it’s my experience during holiday, and I can’t wait to holiday again.

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Experience During Holiday

Hello friends, Let me write my experience during my holidays school. When holiday I was very happy, because I can visited many places. The moment that I can’t forget is in the last holiday, I visitied my brother that stayed in bandung. I always visited him when holiday come. His home was in Lembagei which was not far from Bandung city. When I arrived there, I ask him to visit the famous places in Bandung. My brother recommended so many interested places, so I make a list where I had to visit.

The first place I visited was curug Dago. It was one of the waterfalls in Bandung. My brother and I rode motorcycle to go to there. The waterfall was don’t high, it was only 10 meters but it looked very beautiful that many people know about that waterfall and the condition around the waterfall seemed natural.

After visiting curug Dago, I choosed Trans Studio Bandung as the second destination. I was surprised when I knew the entrance price. It was 250.000 rupiah. I spent a lot of money just for visiting that place. but, the English proverb “The price doesn’t lie” was right. I rode many interesting and fun game there. There are about twenty games in Trans Studio. I also went to the mall to buy some souvenirs for my mother.

Then I went to the third place. the place was ciater thermal baths. My brother and I took a bath there. i was so relax and felt the hot water in the tube. After taking a bath, I tried to find some meals for dinner then went to a cottage for sleeping. On the next day, i remembered my mom’s order. She asked me to buy her a wallet and I was bought a beautiful red wallet for my mom.

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Experience My Holiday

During holiday I just stay at home because I was sick for one week. so, I couldn’t celebrate Christmas day with happy. At home, I help my mother to clean the house and also help her to make cakes during two day. we didn’t make just for my family, but also helped my aunt to made their cakes.

When new year came, I, my mother and my sister went to the church together to pray. I very sad because all of my brother didn’t back to house to celebrate the new year party. Although my family didn’t gather but I still felt happy and said thanks to God I can gather with my parents.

At 2nd January 2015 I, my sister and my parents go to Sawit Sebrang, we wanted to see my brother because he was sick. When we arrived there, I want cry saw my brother’s face, he was pale and his body was thin. My holiday was really sad, because I was sick, my brother also sick and my another brother didn’t came back to house. So, I just celebrated the new year with my parents, my sister and also my nephew at home. That’s my sad story during holiday, thank you.

My Holiday

Hello, my name Fernando, I’m grade XI- AK in SMK Teladan Sumut 1. I wanted to tell you about my experience when holiday. Holiday was come, and I really happy to get a vacation.

In the first week holiday, I just stayed at home because I am sick. But, it was not a problem for me, I still can enjoy my holiday. When I was bored in the home, I listen to the music from my computer and play game. No pleasant experience in the first week holiday.

In the las holiday, me, and my family spend our spare time or our holiday time in our village. exactly at my mother’s village in pangasean, kec.suamopolong desa Bonondolok kota Doloksanggul. I’m so happy in there, I Have met with All my family in there with my uncle, Brother, sister and others. It’s so fun.

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Year night on the way and finally we arrive in our village at 02.00 am. My family in village still waiting for us until we arrive at village to do jurisdiction togeter. The next morning we all go to the church.

While we spend our spare time in village, I’m so happy and happy until we depart from village at 3rd morning and arrive at home in 4th morning. I think only that my story about experience during my holiday… thank you.

My Experience During Holiday

During the holiday I was just stayed at home to help my parents clean hause. There is no special thing with my holiday. I am very sad because I didn’t do anything and I fell very sad because I got rank eleven in my raport. I promised my parents to got top ten rank, but I cannot.

Later, I get news that my brother had accident, I can not say anything and my family look very sad when knew the condition my brother. I only pray to God that my brother healthy again, my tears were felt down and I hope tomorrow no more tears because my birthday is tomorrow. In my birthday, I don’t get a gift from my family even my mother and my father forget to say happy birthday to me.

The next day when new year come, we are hanging out with all families. On the other hand, my father and my mother quarreled because she wanted to return to her village but the father did not allow. Although my holiday is not very good, but I felt happy can gather with the whole families. Finally, the holiday is over and I was ready to go to school on monday.

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Experience During Holiday

I wanted to tell you about the story of my experience during holiday. When holiday, I couldn’t go anywhere because I am sick. In 4 days I just stay at home until my health good again. I fell boring at home, nothing activity I can doing when I am sick but I felt happy because my friends came to my house to saw me. They bring many foods also don’t forget to bring the guitar and we are singing all day in my house.

The next day when I felt good, my mother and I went to my sister’s house because my mother promised to make cakes with my sister. I was happy because I could meet my nephew there, I really miss them very much. In the afternoon we are playing fireworks together, we were all feeling happy and laughed loudly. After finish playing fireworks, we go to the church at the night to pray until the new year come.

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