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Refe ee( )' Commen o A ho : Refe ee: 1

Recommenda ion: Mino Re i ion Commen :

he pape i good b need a li le imp o emen on he li e a e on online lea ning and al o anal i of an i a i e da a Addi ional Q e ion :

1. O iginali : Doe he pape con ain ne and ignifican info ma ion ade a e o j if p blica ion?: e , b he di c ion doe no ho he gap be een heo and p ac ice. impac fo lec e o ed a hen ic a e men hile online lea ning.

2. Rela ion hip o Li e a e: Doe he pape demon a e an ade a e nde anding of he ele an li e a e in he field and ci e an app op ia e ange of li e a e o ce ? I an ignifican o k igno ed?: he e i ill li le li e a e on online lea ning and ho a hen ic a e men a e ed in online lea ning

3. Me hodolog : I he pape ' a g men b il on an app op ia e ba e of heo , concep , o o he idea ? Ha he e ea ch o e i alen in ellec al o k on hich he pape i ba ed been ell de igned? A e he me hod emplo ed app op ia e?: e eno gh, e e al a hen ic a e men de elopmen de ign ha e been in e iga ed. b hi e ea ch ha no e ealed h choo ing he 5DF concep

4. Re l : A e e l p e en ed clea l and anal ed app op ia el ? Do he concl ion ade a el ie oge he he o he elemen of he pape ?: Ye , he e ea ch e l p e en ed a e i e clea , b in-dep h an i a i e da a anal i 5. Implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie : Doe he pape iden if clea l an implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie ? Doe he pape b idge he gap be een heo and p ac ice? Ho can he e ea ch be ed in p ac ice (economic and comme cial impac ), in eaching, o infl ence p blic polic , in e ea ch (con ib ing o he bod of kno ledge)? Wha i he impac pon ocie (infl encing p blic a i de , affec ing ali of life)? A e he e

implica ion con i en i h he finding and concl ion of he pape ?: e , b he di c ion doe no ho he gap be een heo and p ac ice. impac fo lec e o ed a hen ic a e men hile online lea ning.

6. Q ali of Comm nica ion: Doe he pape clea l e p e i ca e, mea ed again he echnical lang age of he field and he e pec ed kno ledge of he jo nal' eade hip? Ha a en ion been paid o he cla i of e p e ion and

eadabili , ch a en ence c e, ja gon e, ac on m , e c.: e eno gh

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Recommenda ion: Majo Re i ion Commen :

The a ho need e i e he ele an poin in he Ab ac backg o nd / con e ( e ea ch p oblem / aim - he gap he plan o fill, me hod , e l , implica ion and/o concl ion )

Addi ional Q e ion :

1. O iginali : Doe he pape con ain ne and ignifican info ma ion ade a e o j if p blica ion?: 1. Plea e ppo ing i h he da a o p e io d , Lack of ppo ing f om p e io e ea ch a empi ical e idence hich ele an he i e. The a ho need o imp o e he mo i a ion fo cond c ing he d .

2. The e ea ch p po e i no clea a ed. The a ionale and objec i e a e no defined in backg o nd/In od c ion e ea ch

2. Rela ion hip o Li e a e: Doe he pape demon a e an ade a e nde anding of he ele an li e a e in he field and ci e an app op ia e ange of li e a e o ce ? I an ignifican o k igno ed?: Gi e ome e idence ( i h p e io

e ea ch)

3. Me hodolog : I he pape ' a g men b il on an app op ia e ba e of heo , concep , o o he idea ? Ha he e ea ch o e i alen in ellec al o k on hich he pape i ba ed been ell de igned? A e he me hod emplo ed app op ia e?: 1. Plea e e i ed comple el he Me hod.

like, Sampling/ob e a ion in hi e ea ch? S ep of anl i ?

4. Re l : A e e l p e en ed clea l and anal ed app op ia el ? Do he concl ion ade a el ie oge he he o he elemen of he pape ?: 1. Plea e make i in di c ion (impac of ea ning ali i h co of capi al in o good

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2. The e ea ch ho ld p e en GAP o no el , backg o nd onl mo i a ed b he phenomena, need o add p e io e ea ch ha ppo ing i e ela ed in Indone ia

3.Gi e he implica ion e ea ch in clea l h and ho he e finding ma be ecommended fo

5. Implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie : Doe he pape iden if clea l an implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie ? Doe he pape b idge he gap be een heo and p ac ice? Ho can he e ea ch be ed in p ac ice (economic and comme cial impac ), in eaching, o infl ence p blic polic , in e ea ch (con ib ing o he bod of kno ledge)? Wha i he impac pon ocie (infl encing p blic a i de , affec ing ali of life)? A e he e implica ion con i en i h he finding and concl ion of he pape ?: 1. Gi e effec i el in e p e a ion fo a i ic de c ip i e, main foc he da a o main finding da a hich need e plana ion

2.The e ea ch ho ld p e en GAP o no el , backg o nd onl mo i a ed b he phenomena, need o add p e io e ea ch ha ppo ing i e ela ed in Indone ia

6. Q ali of Comm nica ion: Doe he pape clea l e p e i ca e, mea ed again he echnical lang age of he field and he e pec ed kno ledge of he jo nal' eade hip? Ha a en ion been paid o he cla i of e p e ion and

eadabili , ch a en ence c e, ja gon e, ac on m , e c.: The Di c ion fail o ela e he finding and ob e a ion o o he ele an die , and he e appea o be no di c ion on he implica ion of he e finding

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Recommenda ion: Majo Re i ion Commen :

B men ioning a mi ed-me hod app oach in he e ea ch me hodolog ec ion, hen o need o j if he e ea ch p oce of bo h me hod. I ecommend o go back and e i i he me hodolog , if nece a e end he da a collec ion.

S gge o b ild model o j if he no el of hi pape . In c en fo ma , I fo nd ha he p e en a ion of e l in bo h he ali a i e and an i a i e pa a e hin.

Good l ck fo he ne jo ne . Addi ional Q e ion :

1. O iginali : Doe he pape con ain ne and ignifican info ma ion ade a e o j if p blica ion?: Thi pape ha a po en ial o ha e no el , ince i i alking abo he change of he a of a e men d ing pandemic.

Ho e e , in i c en fo ma , hi pape doe no ha e b an ial no el o j if p blica ion in he ep able jo nal.

2. Rela ion hip o Li e a e: Doe he pape demon a e an ade a e nde anding of he ele an li e a e in he field and ci e an app op ia e ange of li e a e o ce ? I an ignifican o k igno ed?: Al ho gh hi pape ci ed lo of p e io die and ed ha o e ie he e ea ch a ea. Ho e e , he e a e no eno gh li e a e foc ing in he

heo e ical pa .

3. Me hodolog : I he pape ' a g men b il on an app op ia e ba e of heo , concep , o o he idea ? Ha he e ea ch o e i alen in ellec al o k on hich he pape i ba ed been ell de igned? A e he me hod emplo ed app op ia e?: When hi pape men ioned abo mi ed me hod fo he me hodolog , ba icall i ho ld a i f eade in

he p oced e a ell a he ob of he e l .

The alidi and eliabili of he ali a i e pa i no j ified. Yo need o di c he iang la ion hich i a no cond c ed. The ne in igh hich e e a ol ion o p oblem e e no clea .

The e pa i al o no clea . Ho man e ponden did o ge ? The e l do no ho h po he i e ing, hile ha ho ld be pa of he con ib ion of he d . The e l mainl co e ed de c ip i e anal i - no eno gh a he con ib ion o he academic/ heo .

4. Re l : A e e l p e en ed clea l and anal ed app op ia el ? Do he concl ion ade a el ie oge he he o he elemen of he pape ?: A men ioned ea lie , e l a e hin. E peciall he an i a i e pa . Mainl de c ip i e anal i .

5. Implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie : Doe he pape iden if clea l an implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie ? Doe he pape b idge he gap be een heo and p ac ice? Ho can he e ea ch be ed in p ac ice (economic and comme cial impac ), in eaching, o infl ence p blic polic , in e ea ch (con ib ing o he bod of kno ledge)? Wha i he impac pon ocie (infl encing p blic a i de , affec ing ali of life)? A e he e implica ion con i en i h he finding and concl ion of he pape ?: D e o nclea p oblem a emen o e ea ch

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M gge ion i o a i h fo m la ing olid e ea ch e ion . Concl ion ill link o an e ing he p oblem.

Implica ion o he ocie i he efo e add e ing he gap.

6. Q ali of Comm nica ion: Doe he pape clea l e p e i ca e, mea ed again he echnical lang age of he field and he e pec ed kno ledge of he jo nal' eade hip? Ha a en ion been paid o he cla i of e p e ion and

eadabili , ch a en ence c e, ja gon e, ac on m , e c.: Gene all , he ali of comm nica ion i accep able.

The a ho need o check all po , and ecommend o a k p ofe ional edi o o e i e he pape .

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Recommenda ion: Majo Re i ion Commen :

The in od c ion of hi d doe no ho he condi ion of online lea ning d ing he Co id-19 pandemic in Indone ia.

The in od c ion i oo gene al. The concl ion and implica ion p e en ed a e al o oo gene al. In m opinion, hi e ea ch i mo e i able o be ca ied o ing a ca e d e ea ch me hod.

Addi ional Q e ion :

1. O iginali : Doe he pape con ain ne and ignifican info ma ion ade a e o j if p blica ion?: Thi d e ca e ha occ ed in Indone ia. In he in od c ion, he e ea che did no con e he condi ion of highe ed ca ion in Indone ia d ing he Co id-19 pandemic. The e i no info ma ion ho ing he impo ance of ing a hen ic a e men fo he implemen a ion of highe ed ca ion in he e condi ion . The info ma ion p e en ed b e ea che in he

in od c ion i ill e gene al. The e ea che al o did no p o ide a b ief de c ip ion of he alifica ion of he e ponden in e ie ed f om he fo ni e i ie . Thi become impo an , beca e he alifica ion of he e ponden a e clo el ela ed o he ali of he e ponden . A men ioned in he efe ence ed b he e ea che , doing a hen ic a e men i no ea . I i he efo e impo an o indica e he alifica ion of he e ponden . The abili and e pe ience of e ponden in ing a hen ic a e men i no clea l de c ibed. I do b he he he e ponden a e

eall capable and e pe ienced in cond c ing a hen ic a e men . Beca e a fa a I kno , no man lec e in Indone ia ha e he abili o ac all implemen a hen ic a e men .

2. Rela ion hip o Li e a e: Doe he pape demon a e an ade a e nde anding of he ele an li e a e in he field and ci e an app op ia e ange of li e a e o ce ? I an ignifican o k igno ed?: The a ho e man old

efe ence . I i ecommended ha he a ho add he mo ecen efe ence. The a ho need o add a efe ence abo a hen ic a e men ed in online lea ning. Thi i impo an beca e e ea che need o ho p e io efe ence

ha ha e e ea ched a hen ic a e men in online lea ning. Re ea che al o need o add efe ence abo online lea ning.

3. Me hodolog : I he pape ' a g men b il on an app op ia e ba e of heo , concep , o o he idea ? Ha he e ea ch o e i alen in ellec al o k on hich he pape i ba ed been ell de igned? A e he me hod emplo ed app op ia e?: U ing ali a i e and an i a i e me hod in e ea ch i ce ainl no p oblem. B in hi d , e ea che

ho ld con e in de ail he backg o nd of e ponden and info man . I ha e do b abo he e ponden , a e he f om a io cien ific backg o nd o onl f om one pe of cien ific backg o nd? Thi of co e can affec he e l ing concl ion . In m opinion, hi e ea ch i mo e i able o be ca ied o ing he ca e d me hod.

4. Re l : A e e l p e en ed clea l and anal ed app op ia el ? Do he concl ion ade a el ie oge he he o he elemen of he pape ?: A hen ic a e men i no i able fo e in he eache cen e lea ning me hod. In hi

d , he e ea che did no con e he lea ning me hod ed b he e ponden . If he e l of he d ho ha onl cogni i e a e men ha e been applied ell b he e ponden , hen hi confi m ha he e i a po ibili ha

he lea ning me hod ed b he e ponden i eache cen e . In he econd pa ag aph, he i h en ence ha ho he ob acle o implemen ing a hen ic a e men , one of hich i a c o ded cla . Thi confi m ha he lea ning me hod ed i no in acco dance i h he a hen ic a e men concep . When ing a hen ic a e men , he lec e

ho ld appl he ac i e lea ning me hod. The e a e a io pe of ac i e lea ning me hod ha can be ed. In m opinion, hi e ea ch eem ele if i e amine he applica ion of a hen ic a e men in he cla oom ing he

eache cen e lea ning me hod.

5. Implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie : Doe he pape iden if clea l an implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie ? Doe he pape b idge he gap be een heo and p ac ice? Ho can he e ea ch be ed in p ac ice (economic and comme cial impac ), in eaching, o infl ence p blic polic , in e ea ch (con ib ing o he bod of kno ledge)? Wha i he impac pon ocie (infl encing p blic a i de , affec ing ali of life)? A e he e implica ion con i en i h he finding and concl ion of he pape ?: The implica ion con e ed a e oo gene al.

S gge ion fo f he e ea ch a e al o nclea . Th , i i diffic l o e i o make ne policie in lea ning o diffic l o e in de igning lea ning ho e a e men e a hen ic a e men . The e ea che i al o no clea abo ho o

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econd pa ag aph, in he la en ence.

6. Q ali of Comm nica ion: Doe he pape clea l e p e i ca e, mea ed again he echnical lang age of he field and he e pec ed kno ledge of he jo nal' eade hip? Ha a en ion been paid o he cla i of e p e ion and

eadabili , ch a en ence c e, ja gon e, ac on m , e c.: The e ea ch objec i e , in od c ion, li e a e e ie , me hod , and e ea ch e l a e no in e ela ed. The in od c ion and li e a e e ie a e oo gene al. The in od c ion ho ld ho he en i e d b be p e en ed b iefl . Li e a e e ie ho ld be ela ed o he opic nde

d . The concl ion con e ed b e ea che a e e gene al.

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Recommenda ion: Mino Re i ion Commen :

In he p e en i a ion, he opic i engaging. Ho e e , he e a e a fe mino echnical i ing on he pape page 2 be een line 35-38, and on page 10 and 11, pe cen age n mbe a e ped ha do no ma ch able 1. Al o, plea e p

he e plana ion an e of he d ' p po e in he co ec e ence a he concl ion.

Addi ional Q e ion :

1. O iginali : Doe he pape con ain ne and ignifican info ma ion ade a e o j if p blica ion?: The pape ha fficien ne idea and b an ial fac o a an p bli hing.

2. Rela ion hip o Li e a e: Doe he pape demon a e an ade a e nde anding of he ele an li e a e in he field and ci e an app op ia e ange of li e a e o ce ? I an ignifican o k igno ed?: Thi Pape ho ed a ho o gh a a ene of he field' ele an li e a e and ci e a a ie of li e a o ce ha a e accep able fo he opic.

The e e e j a fe mino fla in hi pape ' i ing. The e i an o de e o on page 2 be een line 35-38, and on page 10 and 11, pe cen age n mbe a e ped ha do no ma ch able 1.

3. Me hodolog : I he pape ' a g men b il on an app op ia e ba e of heo , concep , o o he idea ? Ha he e ea ch o e i alen in ellec al o k on hich he pape i ba ed been ell de igned? A e he me hod emplo ed app op ia e?: The a emen in he pape i ba ed on a olid ppo of he heo .

The e ea ch fea e a ell-de igned f ame o k and accep able e ea ch me hod .

4. Re l : A e e l p e en ed clea l and anal ed app op ia el ? Do he concl ion ade a el ie oge he he o he elemen of he pape ?: The finding of hi d a e p e en ed clea l , and i doe an e cellen job of ing e e hing oge he . Ho e e , he concl ion doe no di ec l an e he e ea ch aim .

5. Implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie : Doe he pape iden if clea l an implica ion fo e ea ch, p ac ice and/o ocie ? Doe he pape b idge he gap be een heo and p ac ice? Ho can he e ea ch be ed in p ac ice (economic and comme cial impac ), in eaching, o infl ence p blic polic , in e ea ch (con ib ing o he bod of kno ledge)? Wha i he impac pon ocie (infl encing p blic a i de , affec ing ali of life)? A e he e

implica ion con i en i h he finding and concl ion of he pape ?: An applica ion fo d , p ac ice, o ocie a e e plici l a ed in he p blica ion. The a icle al o b idge he heo e ical and p ac ical ba ie .

The concl ion of hi e ea ch can be ed in eaching p ac ice o pe ade lec e o imp o e hei li e ac in lec e a e men and enhance p ofe ional academic kill d ing he Co id 19 epidemic.

6. Q ali of Comm nica ion: Doe he pape clea l e p e i ca e, mea ed again he echnical lang age of he field and he e pec ed kno ledge of he jo nal' eade hip? Ha a en ion been paid o he cla i of e p e ion and

eadabili , ch a en ence c e, ja gon e, ac on m , e c.: The pape a i en in a a ha ma ched he field' e minolog and he e pec ed le el of nde anding among he jo nal' eade .

The pape i ell- i en and ea o nde and.

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Recommenda ion: Mino Re i ion Commen :

Thi a icle ho ld be co ec ed and efined acco ding o he edi o ' in c ion . Addi ional Q e ion :

1. O iginali : Doe he pape con ain ne and ignifican info ma ion ade a e o j if p blica ion?: Ye . The a icle con ain ade a e and ignifican info ma ion o p bli h.

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