ATOM INDONESIA
Editor’s Report
Article No. : #522
Title of Paper : Atmospheric dispersion analysis for expected radiation dose due to normal operation of RSG-GAS and RDE Reactor
Referee Name :
Comment on Descriptions 1. Title
[ X ] Appropriate [ ] Should be changed 2. Abstract
Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is the length reasonable?
Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is it an appropriate summary of the content?
3. Main Text
Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is there anything new in this work?
Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is the relation to previous studies adequately stated?
Yes[ X ] No[ ] Are the assumption(s) and/or method(s) described comprehensively?
Yes[ X ] No[ ] Are the new results adequately emphasized?
Line # Referee’s Comments
26 What is ‘mater’?
47 been done a), …. What does this mean?
48 rsg-gas or RSG-GAS ???
104 The quality of Fig. 1 is still very poor. Some text are not legible Table 1
Data in Table 1 taken from Ref. [14] is not for RDE design parameters. Those are clearly and explicitly mentioned for HTR-10. Please be careful!
Texts in Table 1 are also written in Indonesian.
186 Table 2 needs references. You still have not mentioned the reference.
226
Data in Table 3 are different from the source Ref. [14]. Is your reference correct? Please cross check.
This is from Ref. [14]
http://jurnal.batan.go.id/index.php/urania/article/view/2745
References Page numbers of some references are not correct. For example: Ref. [14] and [15]. Please double check other references.
Final comments and recommendations:
- Authors have not fully addressed Reviewer’s and Editor comments provided in the
previous version as listed above. This version still cannot be accepted for publication. The manuscript has to be returned to authors for revision.
- English is very poor. For example: tabel instead of table, text in Table 1 is in Indonesian, sourth instead of south. Please proofread your manuscript before you submit the revision version.
- Please be consistent on how you write RSG-GAS. RSG or RSG-GAS ???
This paper is recommended to be [ ] Accepted without further revision [ ] Accepted with minor revision [ X ] Major Revision is required [ ] Rejected
