Editor's Report .

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8/6/2018 Review Form Response

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REVIEW FORM RESPONSE

1. Title * Appropriate Should be changed 2. Abstract

Is the length reasonable? * Yes

No

Is it an appropriate summary of the content? * Yes

No 3. Main Text

Is there anything new in this work? * Yes

No

Is the relation to previous studies adequately stated? * Yes

No

Are the assumption(s) and/or method(s) described comprehensively? * Yes

No

Are the new results adequately emphasized? * Yes

No

Referee's Comments

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8/6/2018 Review Form Response

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On this manuscript, the methods clearly explained and the results are presented in the table or figures. The manuscript meets the standard requirements to be

published in Atom Indonesia Journal. However, the manuscript requires some revision especially in the results and discussion sections.

Final comments and recommendations: *

This manuscript needs some improvements based on the referee’s comments attached.

This Paper is recommended to be * Accepted without further revision Accepted with minor revision Major Revision is required Rejected

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ATOM INDONESIA

Referee’s Report

Article No. :

Release of Radioactive Particulates into the air 1 during Forest fire in Riau, Indonesia Title of Paper : Fate of ¹³⁷Cs Activity in the Sayung Waters, Demak, Indonesia

Referee Name :

Comment on Descriptions 1. Title

[X ] Appropriate [ ] Should be changed

2. Abstract

Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is the length reasonable?

Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is it an appropriate summary of the content?

3. Main Text

Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is there anything new in this work?

Yes[ ] No[ ] Is the relation to previous studies adequately stated?

Yes[ ] No[ ] Are the assumption(s) and/or method(s) described comprehensively?

Yes[ ] No[ ] Are the new results adequately emphasized?

Line # Referee’s Comments

135-140

The sampling location information needs to be equipped with GPS data

159-160 Explain why it should be stored in the refrigerator and write down the related references 226-228 Need references

245-257 compare the quantitative results obtained with other related research

284-293 the writing of the figure number must be in sequence. Written Figure 6 should be Figure 5 304-306,

316-321 Need references

321-335 It is written Figure 5 should be Figure 6

325-330

provide a more comprehensive discussion with references that discuss the concentration of Cs when smoke occurs

345-348

it should be clarified whether other related research results show an increase in Cs concentrations in the event of a forest fire.

365-373

This statement should be discussed first in the results and discussion section before it is stated in conclusion

Final comments and recommendations:

This manuscript needs some improvements based on the referee’s comments above.