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9/23/2019 Review Form Response

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REVIEW FORM RESPONSE

1. The Title is Appropriate * [2] Partly Correct

Comment

It needs revision

2. Abstract

The Content and Length of the abstract are appropriate * [2] Partly Correct

Comment

It needs revision. please see the reviewer comments

3. Main Text

The results are important to be reported * [1] Completely Correct

Comment

The paper is of high scientific quality (scientifically sound) * [2] Partly Correct

Comment

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The paper is well organized (experimental/theory/results/conclusion) * [2] Partly Correct

Comment

1. Many sentences are difficult to understand.

2. The discussions should be rearranged in such a manner in order to be more easy to understand

The length of the paper is appropriate to the content * [1] Completely Correct

Comment

The references are adequate in complete / consist of 85% primary references and recent journals *

[1] Completely Correct

Comment

More than 90% is primary references

The English is alright * [3] Poor

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Comment

The paper was written in poor English. Many mistakes in grammatical, word spelling and punctuation. Please consult with an English

proofreader for grammar correction. Please check word by word before it sent to the journal

Final Comments To the Author *

Please revise the manuscript according to reviewer/referee comments

Confidential Comments to the EIC

The author needs the help of English proofreader in order to improve the English

This Paper is recommended to be * Accepted without further revision Accepted with minor revision Major Revision is required Rejected

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Referee’s Report

Article No. : # 968

Title of Paper : Protection Effect of Garlic, Petai Bean, Jengkol Bean, Tomato Extracts and N- acetylcystein on 2 Rats after 5 Gy Whole Body Irradiation

Referee Name :

Comment on Descriptions 1. Title

[ ] Appropriate [ x ] Should be changed

2. Abstract

Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is the length reasonable?

Yes[ X ] No[ ] Is it an appropriate summary of the content?

3. Main Text

Yes[X ] No[ ] Is there anything new in this work?

Yes[X] No[ ] Is the relation to previous studies adequately stated?

Yes[ X ] No[ ] Are the assumption(s) and/or method(s) described comprehensively?

Yes[X] No[ ] Are the new results adequately emphasized?

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# Referee’s Comments

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Title

Need to be changed (use scientific name for petai and jengkol)

Petai and jengkol, please check English name or scientific names. For example petai is Bitter bean, jengkol is Pithecellobium jiringa

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…. Free radicals induced by 5 Gy single dose irradiation of gamma rays Change to

free radicals induced by gamma irradiation with a dose of 5 Gy ……

17

The rat were irradiated Change to

The rats were irradiated

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Single dose 5 Gy γ-irradiation caused increase the level Change to

The results showed that γ-irradiation with a dose of 5 Gy cause increase the level ….

28-34 The sentences are difficult to understand. Please rearrange the sentences 34 attact => attack

35 an DNA => DNA

37-40 The sentence is difficult to understand. Please change/rearrange the sentence 51-52 Several studies have shown that some vegetables to protect

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52-53 …. body from free radical danger

69-71 change the sentence to: Besides the active compounds, the vegetable also contains vitamin C and various phenolic compounds.

71-72 change the Sentence to:NAC is a derivative of the cysteine which has antioxidant activity and often used as standard antioxidant

90 ….were used for the our study.

95 The rats were feed with a commercial (please add with) 97 All animal was weighing => All animals were weighing 99-

107 Figure is to small and not properly arranged.

117 Group B (5 Gy only) 115-

129 The sentences are difficult to understand. Please rearrange the sentences 135-

149 Please rearranged and correct the sentence.

196- 197

change the sentence to: Measurement of MDA concentration was performed according to the method of Wills (2015) [19]. The MDA concentration was expressed in a total 198 protein concentration.

429-

430 Ionizing radiation can produce ROS that will cause …..

432-

433 The radiation source used in this study is 60Co gamma ray. (Remove the sentence) Final comments and recommendations:

1. The paper was written in poor English. Many mistakes in grammatical, word spelling and punctuation. Please consult with an English proofreader for grammar correction. please check word by word before it sent to the journal

2. All the word jengkol, and petai should be change to English/scientific name 3. Many sentences are difficult to understand.

4. Figure 2 and 3: too small, please make enlargement

5. The discussions should be re-arranged in such a manner in order to be more easy to understand

This paper is recommended to be [ ] Accepted without further revision [ ] Accepted with minor revision [ X ] Major Revision is required [ ] Rejected