Dakir Dr., M.A. <[email protected]>
Review Result
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publisher scsss <[email protected]> 19 Juni 2023 pukul 11.37
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Dear Dakir
We have reached a decision regarding your submission to Journal of Namibian Studies - History Politics Culture (ISSN print 1863-5954; ISSN online 2197-5523), " School Leadership Model and Teacher Competency Development in Indonesia".
Our decision is: Revisions Required Dr. Bincar Nasution
(Studies on Education and Humanities), Indonesia ---
Reviewer:
>> The writing of the manuscript. There are a many incomplete sentences or sentences without subjects.
>> Your abstract does not highlight the specifics of your research or findings. Rewrite the Abstract section to be more meaningful. I suggest being Problem, Aim, Methods, Results, and Conclusion.
>> Introduction section can be extended to add the issues in the context of the existing work and how proposed approach can be used to overcome this.
>> Add main contributions list as points in the Introduction section.
>> Add the rest organization section at the end of the Introduction section.
>> The authors should consider more recent research done in the field of their study
>> If no one has proposed before a method, this claim should be highlighted much more. Else, it should be indicated who has done this, and it should be indicated what the innovations of the current paper are.
>> Explain what kind of simulations will be provided in Section 4 at the beginning of the section.
>> The proposal does not present information so can be reproduced by readers.
>> Please, also provide a paragraph with three to five clear positive impacts
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>> The authors also do not describe why the proposed outperformed other existing method.
>> Results need more explanations. Additional analysis is required at each experiment to show its main purpose.
>> The results are not easy to follow. The proposed method and experiments are not clearly illustrated. Result and Discussion section is inadequate. Need more attention and better explanation.
>> The authors should further detail the preparation
>> A comparison with state of art in the form of table should be added
>> The Limitations of the proposed study need to be discussed before conclusion.
>> Please include the contribution of this paper, limitation of this study and future research in the Conclusion Section.
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Dakir Dr., M.A. <[email protected]>
Submission
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Dear Dakir
Thank you for your interest and support to Journal of Namibian Studies - History Politics Culture (ISSN print 1863-5954; ISSN online 2197-5523). I am hereby confirming the delivery of your paper. It has been sent for reviewing. The notification will be feedback within 1 month.
I appreciate your patient waiting.
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Dr. Bincar Nasution
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