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APPENDICES
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Table of List of Cohesive Devices Encountered in Students'
Compositions
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Table of List of Errors in Using Conjunction Encountered in Students'
Composition
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Table of List of Errors in Using Reference Encountered in Students'
Comment & Correction
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1 1 Sentene18:I usually study from 10:00 am to
11:00 am 1
Sentene18:I usually study from 10:00 am until 11:00 am
2 Sentence28:I usually spend 30 minutes taking
a bath. 1
Sentence28:I usually spend for 30 minutes taking a bath.
3 Sentence29:*No one disturb me while taking
a bath. 1
Sentence29:and No one disturb me while taking a bath.
4 Sentence32:*I always feel hungry in the
evening. 1
Sentence32:because always feel hungry in the evening.
5 Sentence33:*I continue doing my hobbies
until the dinnertime. 1
Sentence33:then I continue doing my hobbies until the dinnertime.
6 2 Sentence3:*My mother always wake me up. 1 Sentence3:and My mother always wake me
up.
7 Sentence6:*I usually watch *television first. 1 Sentence6:but I usually watch *television
first.
8 Sentence9:*It starts from 09:00 am until
10:00 am. 1
Sentence9:and It starts from 09:00 am until 10:00 am.
9 Sentence16:*It lasts from 11:00 am and ends
at 11:45 am. 1
Sentence16:and lasts from 11:00 am and ends at 11:45 am.
10 Sentence19:*Her’s cooking are delicious. 1 Sentence19:and Her’s cooking are delicious.
11 Sentence22:*I enjoy to read them all. 1 Sentence22:andI enjoy to read them all.
12 Sentence24:*My parents also take a nap. 1 Sentence24:and My parents also take a nap.
13 Sentence28:*I always prepare or get dressed
before I go out. 1
Sentence28:so always prepare or get dressed before I go out.
14 Sentence29:I always make over my face;
*hopefully I will look more beautiful. 1
Sentence29:I always make over my face; and hopefully I will look more beautiful.
15
Sentence36:*We seldom go to *mall, because there are too crowded, so we don’t get parking car.
1
Sentence36:but We seldom go to *mall, because there are too crowded, so we don’t get parking car.
16 Sentence38:*When we want to go to *movie
theatre, we usually go to Vida. 1
Sentence38:if we want to go to *movie theatre, we usually go to Vida.
17 Sentence40:*It isn’t too crowded. 1 Sentence40:and It isn’t too crowded.
18 3 Sentence3:After that, I take a bath, get
dressed and have breakfast. 1
Sentence3:After that, I take a bath, get dressed and have breakfast.
19 Sentence9:*It’s name “Lisa Boutique” 1 Sentence9:and It’s name “Lisa Boutique”
S Log. Seq. Explicative
List of Errors in Using Conjunction Encountered in Students' Composition
N o N
o SENTENCE
20
Sentence11:I usually have soto ayam, bakwan
kapasari, * fried chicken at “Tip Top” or
pangsit mie kiauw for lunch.
1
Sentence11:I usually have soto ayam, bakwan
kapasari, or fried chicken at “Tip Top” or
pangsit mie kiauw for lunch.
21 Sentence12:*Those is my favorite foods in
pasar atom. 1
Sentence12:because Those is my favorite foods in pasar atom.
22 Sentence14:*It takes 10 or 15 minutes. 1 Sentence14:andIt takes 10 or 15 minutes.
23 Sentence21:*It is our favorite plaza in
Surabaya. 1
Sentence21:because It is our favorite plaza in Surabaya.
24
Sentence26:*I usually have fried chicken, black pepper meat, fried rice, or kungpao chicken for dinner.
1
Sentence26:and I usually have fried chicken, black pepper meat, fried rice, or kungpao chicken for dinner.
25 Sentence32:*Every one game, it is need two
coins. 1
Sentence32:and Every one game, it is need two coins.
26 Sentence37:*At 09:35 pm, I arrive home. 1 Sentence37:and At 09:35 pm, I arrive home.
27 4 Sentence3:*I does not go to the school. 1 Sentence3:because I does not go to the
school.
28 Sentence4:*I can do everything I want to on
Saturday. 1
Sentence4:and I can do everything I want to on Saturday.
29 Sentence6:After that, I take a bath, *it takes
about 10 – 15 minutes and I brush my teeth. 1 1
Sentence6:After that, I take a bath, and it
takes about 10 – 15 minutes then I brush my teeth.
30 Sentence7:*It do not take along time; it takes
about one or two minutes. 1
Sentence7:but It do not take along time; it takes about one or two minutes.
31 Sentence10:*On Saturdays, the program on
television are not too interesting. 1
Sentence10:anyway On Saturdays, the program on television are not too interesting.
32
Sentence11:*In the morning, almost all channel show gossip news and almost the gossip in all channel show the same news.
1
Sentence11:because In the morning, almost all channel show gossip news and almost the gossip in all channel show the same news.
33
Sentence14:Usually I watch television in a long time but if the program are not too interesting, I will change and change all the time until I get one which is interesting to me.
1 1
Sentence14:Usually I watch television for a long time if the program are not too interesting, I will change and change all the time until I get one which is interesting to me.
34
Sentence15:Usually if the programs is not too interesting I just watch television in 5 or 10 minutes.
1
35
Sentence17:*I have some collection of VCD and if I want to watch DVD, I can rent it near my house.
1
Sentence17:because I have some collection of VCD and if I want to watch DVD, I can rent it near my house.
36
Sentence19:*Usually I watch television and film alone because my sister and my brother go to work and my little brother go to school.
1 1
Sentence19:and Usually I watch television and film alone because my sister and my brother go to work and my little brother go to school.
37 Sentence22:*I can find many things there. 1 Sentence22:and I can find many things there.
38 Sentence23:*I likes window shopping and
shopping. 1
Sentence23:because I likes window shopping and shopping.
39 Sentence24:Sometimes I go with my
boyfriend, *sometimes I go with my friends. 1
Sentence24:Sometimes I go with my boyfriend, or sometimes I go with my friends.
40 Sentence28:*The name of the church is
Aloysius Gonzaga. 1
Sentence28:and The name of the church is Aloysius Gonzaga.
41 Sentence30:The mass starts from 6 pm to
7:30 pm. 1
Sentence30:The mass starts from 6 pm until 7:30 pm.
42 Sentence35:*We go home at 8:30 pm. 1 Sentence35:then We go home at 8:30 pm.
43 Sentence39:But if I watch television or watch
film, I go to bed at 12 or 1 am. 1
Sentence39: if I watch television or watch film, I go to bed at 12 or 1 am.
44 5 Sentence2:*On that day, I do not go to the
campus. 1
Sentence2:because On that day, I do not go to the campus.
45 Sentence9:First, I pray and make a bed. 1 Sentence9:First, I pray and then make a bed.
46 Sentence11:In the morning, I always reads a
newspaper and I do not have breakfast. 1
Sentence11:In the morning, I always reads a newspaper but I do not have breakfast.
47 Sentence12:At 09:00 am, I took a bath for 15
minutes and I get dressed. 1
Sentence12:At 09:00 am, I took a bath for 15 minutes andthen I get dressed.
48
Sentence14:*Sometimes, my mother wants me to accompany her to go somewhere, and I always accompany her because I do not have many activities.
1 1
Sentence14:but Sometimes, my mother wants me to accompany her to go somewhere, so I always accompany her because I do not have many activities.
49
Sentence16:Then, I always wash the plate, spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
1
Sentence16:Then, I always wash the plate, and spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
50 Sentence17:So, we always do house works
alone. 1
51
Sentence18:After have lunch, I usually telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms and I usually watch TV for one hour.
1
Sentence18:After have lunch, I usually telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms while I usually watch TV for one hour.
52 Sentence19:*At 01:30 am, I always take a
nap for 2 hours. 1
Sentence19:then At 01:30 am, I always take a nap for 2 hours.
53 Sentence20:*At 03:30 pm, I get up and
prepare myself to go to the church. 1
Sentence20:then At 03:30 pm, I get up and prepare myself to go to the church.
54 Sentence26:After from the church, we usually
go out for dinner in a restaurant or café. 1
Sentence26: from the church, we usually go out for dinner in a restaurant or café.
55 Sentence28:When we arrive, my older
brother park the car in the yard. 1
Sentence28:When we arrive, my older brother park the car in the yard.
56 Sentence32:*At 10:00 pm, I go to bed. 1 Sentence32:then At 10:00 pm, I go to bed.
57 6 Sentence2:*Saturdays is, my first holiday in a
week. 1
Sentence2:because Saturdays is, my first holiday in a week.
58 Sentence6:*At 08:00 am, I have breakfast. 1 Sentence6:then At 08:00 am, I have
breakfast.
59 Sentence8:*I have breakfast for about twenty
minutes. 1
Sentence8:and I have breakfast for about twenty minutes.
60
Sentence10:From 09:05 am to 10:00 am, I usually clean my own room such as sweep the floor, etc.
1
Sentence10:From 09:05 am until 10:00 am, I usually clean my own room such as sweep the floor, etc.
61 Sentence18:*Sometimes we made some jokes
too. 1
Sentence18:and Sometimes we made some jokes too.
62
Sentence21:After that, I usually watch television in my own room and eating some snacks, but sometimes I just listening to the music or radio in my own room.
1
Sentence21:After that, I usually watch television in my own room while eating some snacks, but sometimes I just listening to the music or radio in my own room.
63 Sentence24:*Usually we have dinner together
and make some jokes or watching television. 1 1
Sentence24:and Usually we have dinner togetherwhile make some jokes or watching television.
64
Sentence25:*At 09:00 pm, I brush my teeth and clean my hand and my legs for about fifteen minutes.
1
Sentence25:then At 09:00 pm, I brush my teeth and clean my hand and my legs for about fifteen minutes.
65 7 Sentence7:*I usually watch cooking program
because I like cooking. 1
66 Sentence9:*I a singer in the church, so I have
to practice regularly every Saturdays. 1
Sentence9:because I a singer in the church, so I have to practice regularly every Saturdays.
67 Sentence11:After I arrive at the church, I go
upstairs; *my friends are wait for me. 1
Sentence11:After I arrive at the church, I go upstairs; and my friends are wait for me.
68 Sentence13:*I finish practice at 01:30 pm. 1 Sentence13:after I finish practice at 01:30
pm.
69 Sentence14:*I look for some lunch before I
go home. 1
Sentence14:then I look for some lunch before I go home.
70 Sentence16:*It on jalan kupang jaya. 1 Sentence16:and it on jalan kupang jaya.
71 Sentence18:*We go home at 03:00 pm. 1 Sentence18:and We go home at 03:00 pm.
72 Sentence21:15 minutes later, I finish and get
dressed in my room. 1
Sentence21:15 minutes later, I finish and get dressed in my room.
73 Sentence22:*I make up my face because I
will go for a date with my boyfriend. 1
Sentence22:then I make up my face because I will go for a date with my boyfriend.
74 Sentence27:*He knows that I need more
clothes to go to the campus. 1
Sentence27:because He knows that I need more clothes to go to the campus.
75 Sentence28:*He don’t like if I wear a bad
clothes at the campus. 1
Sentence28:and He don’t like if I wear a bad clothes at the campus.
76
Sentence29:*We go around the mall and when we feel hungry, we go to the food centre to looking for a dinner
1
Sentence29:then We go around the mall and when we feel hungry, we go to the food centre to looking for a dinner
77 Sentence31:*That’s my favorite menu. 1 Sentence31:because That’s my favorite menu.
78 Sentence32:*We sit and eat. 1 Sentence32:then We sit and eat.
79 Sentence35:*There is a lot of modification
motorcycles. 1
Sentence35:and There is a lot of modification motorcycles.
80 Sentence37:*I arrive at home at 11:00
o’clock. 1
Sentence37:and I arrive at home at 11:00
o’clock.
81 Sentence38:*I change my dress and go to
sleep. 1
Sentence38:then I change my dress and go to sleep.
82 8 Sentence3:On Saturdays, I’m free, so I do not
go to the campus. 1
Sentence3:On Saturdays, I’m free,because I do not go to the campus.
83
Sentence5:And after that, I just moving around my little town gresik with a motorcycle.
1 Sentence5:after that, I just moving around my
84
Sentence8: *in the town square, there are many people do sport such as jogging or badminton.
1
Sentence8: *in the town square, there are many people do sport such as jogging or badminton.
85
Sentence10:On these days, my parents also free from their works, so usually my mom and my dad go to the market and buy something for our lunch.
1
Sentence10:On these days, my parents also free from their works, so usually my mom and my dad go to the market buy something for our lunch.
86 Sentence12:*I spend about 3 hour to play the
games. 1
Sentence12:and I spend about 3 hour to play the games.
87
Sentence15:*If I had a leisure time on Saturday, I usually learn a lot of recipient from my mom.
1
Sentence15:and If I had a leisure time on Saturday, I usually learn a lot of recipient from my mom.
88
Sentence16:And sometimes when I try to cook, the taste become terrible, but I always try.
1 Sentence16:but sometimes when I try to cook,
the taste become terrible, but I always try.
89
Sentence17:On Saturdays, I like only to stay home, because on weekdays, I never stay longer in my home because of my activities.
1
Sentence17:On Saturdays, I like only to stay home on weekdays, I never stay longer in my home because of my activities.
90
Sentence21:Usually, if I am not take a nap, I just go to the some cyber or internet rental and open the internet just for browsing or chatting.
1
Sentence21:Usually, if I am not take a nap, I just go to the some cyber or internet rental open the internet just for browsing or chatting.
91 Sentence26:*We often go for the dinner or
just shopping in the mall. 1
Sentence26:and We often go for the dinner or just shopping in the mall.
92 Sentence27:I usually go for dinner at 19:30
pm and we back home at 21:30 pm. 1
Sentence27:I usually go for dinner at 19:30 pm and we back home at 21:30 pm.
93
Sentence29:*Usually, I just play guitar and sometimes I just sing a song and my boyfriend will play the guitar.
1 1
Sentence29:so Usually, I just play guitar or sometimes I just sing a song and my boyfriend will play the guitar.
94
Sentence30:*At 23:00 pm, my boyfriend have to return home and I go to sleep but before that I pray to God.
1
Sentence30:At 23:00 pm, my boyfriend have to return home and I go to sleep but I pray to God before that.
95 Sentence31:I really enjoy my Saturday, *I
feel so relax after my activities on weekdays. 1
Sentence31:I really enjoy my Saturday, and I feel so relax after my activities on weekdays.
97 9 Sentence8:*I always do some hair or body
treatment on Saturdays. 1
Sentence8:because I always do some hair or body treatment on Saturdays.
98 SentenceI 9:*always have hair cream bath or
facial treatment 1
99 Sentence10:*I seldom do manicure or
pedicure treatment. 1
Sentence10:but I seldom do manicure or pedicure treatment.
100 Sentence12:*Usually, I finish take a bath at
09:00 am. 1
Sentence12:and Usually, I finish take a bath at 09:00 am.
101 Sentence17:*Sometimes she cooks spaghetti,
beef teriyaki, roasted chicken, salad, *etc. 1 1
Sentence17:so Sometimes she cooks spaghetti, beef teriyaki, roasted chicken, salad, or etc.
102 Sentence18:*Sometimes she finishes cook at
11:00 am. 1
Sentence18:and Sometimes she finishes cook at 11:00 am.
103 Sentence25:*I don’t really like watch TV for
a long time. 1
Sentence25:but I don’t really like watch TV for a long time.
104 Sentence28:*I like read books, not textbooks. 1 Sentence28:and I like read books, not
textbooks.
105 Sentence30:*I can read a book fast. 1 Sentence30:and I can read a book fast.
106 Sentence31:*Sometimes I can read a 200
pages book in 1, 5 hours. 1
Sentence31:therefore Sometimes I can read a 200 pages book in 1, 5 hours.
107 Sentence33:Especially, if I read an
interesting book. 1
Sentence33:moreover, if I read an interesting book.
108 Sentence36:*At 04:00 pm, I clean my house. 1 Sentence36:then At 04:00 pm, I clean my
house.
109 Sentence37:*I always finish clean my house
at 05:00 pm. 1
Sentence37:and I always finish clean my house at 05:00 pm.
110
Sentence41:We always talk about our daily activities, our plane, or our story when we have dinner.
1
Sentence41:We always talk about our daily activities, our plane, or our story while we have dinner.
111 Sentence44:First, I plans to visit one of my
friends’ house. 1
Sentence44:I plans to visit one of my friends’ house.
112
Sentence46:Second, sometimes my friends asked me to join them to visit some place, like shopping area, café, or we just walk around city.
1
Sentence46: sometimes my friends asked me to join them to visit some place, like shopping area, café, or we just walk around city.
113
Sentence47:Third, I go with my family to have dinner outside, visit some of my
parent’s friend’s house, or we go shopping or look for books in the bookstore.
1
Sentence47:I go with my family to have dinner outside, visit some of my parent’s friend’s house, or we go shopping or look for books in the bookstore.
114
Sentence48:Fourth, my friends and I go to some events, like music festival, art festival, movie festival, or go to a friend’s birthday party.
1
115 Sentence49:There we can so crazy; *we can
dance, sing and laugh loudly. 1
Sentence49:There we can so crazy; and we can dance, sing and laugh loudly.
116
Sentence50:Well, I love hang out with my friends or if I feel so tired to go outside, I just stay home and enjoy watch TV with my family.
1
Sentence50:Well, I love hang out with my friends or if I feel so tired to go outside, I just stay home and enjoy watch TV with my family.
117 Sentence52:*On Saturdays, I usually sleep at
midnight. 1
Sentence52:in other words, On Saturdays, I usually sleep at midnight.
118
Sentence54:*I’m very busy on weekdays and I try to enjoy my Saturdays as well as possible.
1 1
Sentence54:since I’m very busy on weekdays so I try to enjoy my Saturdays as well as possible.
119 Sentence56:*I have a long time on Saturdays,
and I try to enjoy my lovely Saturday. 1 1
Sentence56:since I have a long time on Saturdays,so I try to enjoy my lovely Saturday.
120 10
Sentence2:I always wake up at 08:30 am* before I take a bath, I eat breakfast and I read newspaper.
1
Sentence2:I always wake up at 08:30 am but before I take a bath, I eat breakfast and I read newspaper.
121 Sentence3:*At 10:00 am, I take a bath,
sometimes I take a bath until I hours. 1
Sentence3:then At 10:00 am, I take a bath, sometimes I take a bath until I hours.
122
Sentence7:*This time I always share with my mom about anything, such as my friends, my boyfriend, and my other problems.
1
Sentence7:and This time I always share with my mom about anything, such as my friends, my boyfriend, and my other problems.
123 Sentence9:*We always eat lunch at 02:00 pm
but my father doesn’t eat lunch with us. 1
Sentence9:and We always eat lunch at 02:00 pm but my father doesn’t eat lunch with us.
124 Sentence10:*My mother like cooks many
vegetables and chicken or meat for eat lunch. 1
Sentence10:and My mother like cooks many vegetables and chicken or meat for eat lunch.
125 Sentence11:Next, I take a nap until 30
minutes. 1 Sentence11:Next, I take a nap for 30 minutes.
126 Sentence12:*I don’t like take a nap too long. 1 Sentence12:because I don’t like take a nap
too long.
127
Sentence13:*I like take a nap in my parents bedroom because in the afternoon in my bedroom is so noisy.
1
Sentence13:and I like take a nap in my parents bedroom because in the afternoon in my bedroom is so noisy.
128 Sentence17:*Sometimes, at 5:30 pm, my
boyfriend comes to my house. 1
Sentence17:because Sometimes, at 5:30 pm, my boyfriend comes to my house.
130 Sentence24:*Sometimes, we go to prime
steak or pro steak. 1
131 Sentence25:*He doesn’t like eat Japanese
food. 1
Sentence25:moreover He doesn’t like eat Japanese food.
132 Sentence32:*I am very enjoy and relax on
Saturdays. 1
Sentence32:so I am very enjoy and relax on Saturdays.
133 11 Sentence2:*I don’t get up early in the
morning. 1
Sentence2:because I don’t get up early in the morning.
134 Sentence3:*I usually get up at 9:00 am. 1 Sentence13:and I usually get up at 9:00 am.
135 Sentence12:*Sometimes after we finish
study, we go to Tunjungan Plaza (TP). 1
Sentence12:and Sometimes after we finish study, we go to Tunjungan Plaza (TP).
136 Sentence13:*Her house is near to TP. 1 Sentence13:because Her house is near to TP.
137 Sentence17:*We are like twins sister. 1 Sentence17:so We are like twins sister.
138
Sentence28:Usually in the family room, I read newspaper, talk to my parents, watch TV together, karaoke together,* etc.
1
Sentence28:Usually in the family room, I read newspaper, talk to my parents, watch TV together, karaoke together,or etc.
139 Sentence33:*I play badminton from 7:30 pm
to 9:00 pm. 1 1
Sentence33:and I play badminton from 7:30 pm until 9:00 pm.
140 Sentence35:But if I feel tired, I don’t play
badminton. 1
Sentence35: if I feel tired, I don’t play badminton.
141 Sentence39:*Usually I listen to radio. 1 Sentence39:then Usually I listen to radio.
142 Sentence40:Sometimes I fall a sleep when I
listening to the radio. 1
Sentence40:Sometimes I fall a sleep while listening to the radio.
143 12 Sentence2:*I don’t gets up early. 1 Sentence2:so I don’t gets up early.
144 Sentence6:*We usually cooks “ Opor Ayam”. 1 Sentence6:and We usually cooks “ Opor
Ayam”.
145 Sentence7:Next, I watching television at
10:00 am. 1
Sentence7:Next, I watching television at 10:00 am.
146
Sentence8:*I watching my favorite cartoons like sincan, Galzor inuyasa or usually I reading novels while having my breakfast.
1
Sentence8:and I watching my favorite cartoons like sincan, Galzor inuyasa or usually I reading novels while having my breakfast.
147
Sentence10:*At 12:00 pm, I usually go to my
grandmother’s house or go to Mall with my mom.
1
Sentence10:because At 12:00 pm, I usually go to my grandmother’s house or go to Mall with my mom.
148 Sentence14:*I have the same hobby with my
mom. 1
Sentence14:because I have the same hobby with my mom.
149 Sentence16:*My mother and I usually go to “
Tunjungan Plaza”. 1
Sentence16:and My mother and I usually go
150 Sentence18:*Sometimes we order “Dcrepes”,
“McDonald”, “Hot Plate” or “Doner Kebab”. 1
Sentence18:and Sometimes we order
“Dcrepes”, “McDonald”, “Hot Plate” or
“Doner Kebab”.
151 Sentence19:*They our favorite foods. 1 Sentence19:because They our favorite foods.
152
Sentence22:*it is not a big dinner, we just cooking a simple food like fried rice and fried chicken, that is my favorite foods.
1
Sentence22:since it is not a big dinner, we just cooking a simple food like fried rice and fried chicken, that is my favorite foods.
153
Sentence25:Before I go to sleep, I usually prepare my books for Monday and do my homeworks which are has to collect for next week.
1
Sentence25:Before I go to sleep, I usually prepare my books for Monday and do my homeworks which are has to collect next week.
154 Sentence26:*I always have homeworks from
my lectures. 1
Sentence26:becauseI always have homeworks from my lectures.
155 Sentence28:*I always sleep at 10:00 pm. 1 Sentence28:and always sleep at 10:00 pm.
156 Sentence30:*I prefer to spend my time with
my family. 1
Sentence30:and I prefer to spend my time with my family.
157 13 Sentence6:*I eat for about 15 minutes. 1 Sentence6:and I eat for about 15 minutes.
158
Sentence10:I like to play a card and ball games in computer with turn on the music that I have on my computer.
2
Sentence10:I like to play a card and ball games in computer while turn on the music that I have on my computer.
159 Sentence12:*I use the computer for about 2
until 3 hours. 1
Sentence12:in other words, I use the computer for about 2 until 3 hours.
160
Sentence13:If I feel bored with the game,I will turn off the computer and I watch TV or DVD until in the afternoon.
1
Sentence13:If I feel bored with the game,I will turn off the computer andthen I watch TV or DVD until in the afternoon.
161
Sentence16:After lunch, I continue to watch TV until I feel tired but usually I take a nap *on 02:00 pm until 04:30 pm.
1 1
Sentence16:After lunch, I continue to watch TV until I feel tired and usually I take a nap for on 02:00 pm until 04:30 pm.
162
Sentence17:After I get up, I take a bath for about 15 minutes and then get dress and I’m waiting* my family come back.
1
Sentence17:After I get up, I take a bath for about 15 minutes and then get dress and I’m waiting for my family come back.
163
Sentence22:When we arrive home, my father and my mom change their clothes and say good night to me because they feel tired and then they go to sleep.
1
164
Sentence23:*I can’t sleep earlier on Saturday because there are many exciting programs on Television so after I change my clothes, I turn on my air conditioner of my room and after that I go out from my room.
1
Sentence23:but I can’t sleep earlier on Saturday because there are many exciting programs on Television so after I change my clothes, I turn on my air conditioner of my room and after that I go out from my room.
165
Sentence24:*I headed for my family room and turn on my television and fan and then I watch TV alone.
1
Sentence24:then I headed for my family room and turn on my television and fan and then I watch TV alone.
166 Sentence27:Before I sleep I always pray to
thank’s for his blessing, *can I go to sleep. 1
Sentence27:Before I sleep I always pray to
thank’s for his blessing,then can I go to sleep.
167 Sentence29:*I don’t have many school
activities on Saturdays. 1
Sentence29:and I don’t have many school activities on Saturdays.
14Sentence2:*I’m free for having to do many
thing 1
Sentence2:So I’m free for having to do many
thing Sentence3:Nothing hurry, *nothing classes
and nothing wake early. 1
Sentence3:Nothing hurry, Because nothing classes and nothing wake early.
Sentence5:*I am wake up at 10:00 am. 1 Sentence5:So I am wake up at 10:00 am.
170 Sentence8:If it is about 11:00 am or 12:00
pm, I always go to the Pasar atum. 1
Sentence8: it is about 11:00 am or 12:00 pm, I always go to the Pasar atum.
171 Sentence11:*That shop is selling many kinds
of watches. 1
Sentence11:and That shop is selling many kinds of watches.
172 Sentence15:I go to the church *at 4:30 pm
until 7:00 pm. 1
Sentence15:I go to the church at 4:30 pm until 7:00 pm.
173 Sentence17:*I play drum with my church’s
team. 1
Sentence17:because I play drum with my
church’s team.
174
Sentence21:*We feels so happy because we can relax our body and mind after we working hard *a week.
1 1
Sentence21:and We feels so happy because we can relax our body and mind after we working hard for a week.
176 Sentence23:*I always wash my face, my
hands and my feet before I go to the bed. 1
Sentence23:then I always wash my face, my hands and my feet before I go to the bed.
177 Sentence26:Usually I go with my friends * at
11:00 pm until 3:00 o’clock in the morning. 1
Sentence26:Usually I go with my friends from at 11:00 pm until 3:00 o’clock in the morning.
178
Sentence27:We go to tretes and eat corn,
meatballs and “ronde”, but I don’t do the same thing every Saturdays.
1
Sentence27:We go to tretes and eat corn,
meatballs or “ronde”, but I don’t do the same thing every Saturdays.
180 Sentence32:*Saturdays is my favorite days 1 Sentence32:So Saturdays is my favorite days
181 15 Sentence1:On Saturday, I don’t hurry from
morning until night, *it’s *free day for me. 1
Sentence1:On Saturday, I don’t hurry from
morning until night, *it’s *free day for me.
182
Sentence2:Usually, I get up at 04:00 am in the morning because on Saturdays I get up at 05:00 am.
1
Sentence2: Usually, I get up at 04:00 am in the morning because on Saturdays I get up at 05:00 am.
184 Sentence7:After that, I go first to ITS to join
my friend to playing soccer together. 1
Sentence7:After that, I go to ITS to join my friend to playing soccer together first.
185 Sentence8:We play only *one hour, then I
back to my house. 1
Sentence8:We play only for one hour, then I back to my house.
186 Sentence9:When I finish clean my house, I
have breakfast. 1
Sentence9:after I finish clean my house, I have breakfast.
187 Sentence11:After that, I washes and dishes,
then I read newspaper. 1
Sentence11:After that, I washes dishes, then I read newspaper.
188 Sentence14:We play *four hour. 1 Sentence14:We play for our hour.
189
Sentence18:I wake up at 16:00 pm, it’s enough sleep *three hour because if I sleep more, I can’t sleep well at night, then I pray.
1
Sentence18:I wake up at 16:00 pm, it’s enough sleep for three hour because if I sleep more, I can’t sleep well at night, then I pray.
190 Sentence20:*I report all sell that day then I
sent the report to my father. 1
Sentence20:because I report all sell that day then I sent the report to my father.
191 Sentence23:*At 19:00 pm, I dinner with my
brother. 1
Sentence23:then At 19:00 pm, I dinner with my brother.
192 Sentence26:After dinner, I washes and
dishes, then I watch TV. 1
Sentence26:After dinner, I washes dishes, then I watch TV.
193 Sentence27:*I like Discovery Channel. 1 Sentence27:andI like Discovery Channel.
194 Sentence29:When I finish, I go to bed at
23:00 pm. 1
Sentence29:after I finish, I go to bed at 23:00 pm.
195 Sentence30:I am not hurry go to bed besides
that weekend days. 1
Sentence30:I am not hurry go to bed because weekend days.
196 16 Sentence2:*I usually wake up at 09:00 am. 1 Sentence2:and I usually wake up at 09:00
am.
197
Sentence3:After that, I watching “Dragon
Ball” in Indosiar until 10:00 am and at 10,0 I
watching “Crayon Shincan” in RCTI.
1
Sentence3:After that, I watching “Dragon
Ball” in Indosiar until 10:00 am then at 10,0
I watching “Crayon Shincan” in RCTI.
199 Sentence6:*I having breakfast at 11:15 am. 1 Sentence6:After I having breakfast at 11:15
200 Sentence11:We arrives in *mall at 03:00 pm
and we having lunch together. 1
Sentence11:We arrives in *mall at 03:00 pm andthen we having lunch together.
201 Sentence19:At 05:30 pm, we go to church by
car; *we go to *Algonz on jalan satelit. 1
Sentence19:At 05:30 pm, we go to church by car; and we go to *Algonz on jalan satelit.
202
Sentence25:After I arrive at home, I call her to say I have arrive at home and I take a bath and get dressed.
1
Sentence25:After I arrive at home, I call her to say I have arrive at home and then I take a bath and get dressed.
ad om sl od ad om sl od ad om sl od
1 1 Sentence2: I do not have to get up
*early as on weekdays. 1
I do not have to get up as early as on weekdays.
2 Sentence6: It takes me about 15
minutes to 20 minutes. 1
It takes about 15 minutes to 20 minutes.
3
Sentence11: I can arrange them only on Saturdays because I always hurry on weekdays and I do not have time to arrange them.
1
I can arrange the papers and books only on Saturdays because I always hurry on weekdays and I do not have time to arrange them.
4 Sentence22: I has it at 12:05 pm with
my friends. 1
I has lunch at 12:05 pm with my friends.
5
Sentence26: Although, it is always hot in the afternoon, I can enjoy doing my hobbies accompanied by my favorite songs.
1
Although, the weather is always hot in the afternoon, I can enjoy doing my hobbies accompanied by my favorite songs.
6 2 Sentence6: *I usually watch
*television first. 1 *I usually watch the television first.
7 Sentence10: It is a funny cartoon, I
think. 1
Spongebob's Squarepants is a funny cartoon, I think.
8
Sentence11: At 10:00 am, I go to*bathroom to take a bath and brush my teeth.
1 At 10:00 am, I go to the bathroom to
take a bath and brush my teeth.
9 Sentence22: *I enjoy to read them all. 1 *I enjoy to read all the magazines.
10 Sentence35: We usually have dinner
and go to *movie theatre. 1
We usually have dinner and go to the movie theatre.
11
Sentence36:*We seldom go to *mall, because there are too crowded, so we
don’t get parking car.
1
Sentence36:*We seldom go to *mall, because there are too crowded, so we
don’t get parking car.
12
Sentence38:When we want to go to *movie theatre, we usually go to Vida.
1
Sentence38:When we want to go to the movie theatre, we usually go to Vida.
13
Sentence 43: My parents are not angry with us because they know that on *street are crowded.
1
My parents are not angry with us because they know that on the street are crowded.
14 3 Sentence8:Lisa have a boutique on
*third floor. 1
Sentence8:Lisa have a boutique on the third floor.
15 Sentence9:*It’s name “Lisa
Boutique” 1 Sentence9:*Its name “Lisa Boutique”
16
Sentence33:After *finish play in G-fan, my friends and I go to bread story.
1
Sentence33:After I finish play in G-fan, my friends and I go to bread story.
17
Sentence35: At 08:30 pm until 09:15 pm, I always go to Excelso Café to meet my other friends there and have some meal.
1
Sentence35: At 08:30 pm until 09:15 pm, I always go to Excelso Café to meet my other friends and have some meal there.
18 4
Sentence16:There is the other thing that I can do on Saturdays if I am bored with the program on television; I watch film from VCD or DVD.
1
Sentence16:There is other thing that I can do on Saturdays if I am bored with the program on television; I watch film from VCD or DVD.
Sentence19:*Usually I watch television and film alone because my sister and my brother go to work and my little brother go to school.
1
Sentence19:*Usually I watch television and film alone because my sister and brother go to work and my little brother go to school.
Correction
List of Errors in Using Reference Encountered in Students' Compositions
N
o S SENTENCE
19 Sentence21:I go to the mall. 1 Sentence21:I go to mall.
20 Sentence27:Sometimes on Saturdays,
I go to the church. 1
Sentence27:Sometimes on Saturdays, I go to church.
21
Sentence32:After the mass finishes, usually my sister, my boyfriend and I go to the restaurant.
1
Sentence32:After the mass finishes, usually my sister, my boyfriend and I go to restaurant.
22 5 Sentence2:*On that day, I do not go
to the campus. 1
Sentence2:*On that day, I do not go to campus.
23 Sentence5:I just go to the church on
Saturday night. 1
Sentence5:I just go to church on Saturday night.
24 Sentence6:I and my family always go
to the church every Saturday night. 1 1
Sentence6: my family and I always go to the church every Saturday night.
25 Sentence9:First, I pray and make a
bed. 1 Sentence9:First, I pray and make bed.
26
Sentence16:Then, I always wash the plate, spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
1
Sentence16:Then, I always wash the plate, the spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
27 Sentence17:So, we always do house
works alone. 1
Sentence17:So, we always do the house works alone.
28
Sentence18:After have lunch, I usually telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms and I usually watch TV for one hour.
1
Sentence18:After I have lunch, I usually telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms and I usually watch TV for one hour.
29
Sentence20:*At 03:30 pm, I get up and prepare myself to go to the church.
1 Sentence20:*At 03:30 pm, I get up
and prepare myself to go to church.
30
Sentence22:Before my family and I go to the church, we always switch on some of lamps, close all the windows and lock the doors.
1
Sentence22:Before my family and I go to church, we always switch on some of lamps, close all the windows and lock the doors.
31 6
Sentence26:After that, *go back to my own room and pray for about five minutes, then go to sleep.
1
Sentence26:After that, I go back to my own room and pray for about five minutes, then go to sleep.
32 7
Sentence8:At 11:00 o’clock, I get
ready to go to the church for practice
with the church’s band.
1
Sentence8:At 11:00 o’clock, I get
ready to go to church for practice
with the church’s band.
33 Sentence10:I go to the church at
11:45 with my boyfriend. 1
Sentence10:I go to church at 11:45 with my boyfriend.
34 Sentence24:I like to go to the mall. 1 Sentence24:I like to go to mall.
35 Sentence27:*He knows that I need
more clothes to go to the campus. 1
Sentence27:*He knows that I need more clothes to go to campus.
36 Sentence28:*He don’t like if I wear a
bad clothes at the campus. 1
Sentence28:*He don’t like if I wear a
bad clothes at campus.
37 Sentence34:Before that, my boyfriend
will take me to his motorcycle club. 1
Sentence34:Before , my boyfriend will take me to his motorcycle club.
38 8 Sentence3:On Saturdays, I’m free, so
I do not go to the campus. 1
Sentence3:On Saturdays, I’m free, so
I do not go to campus.
39
Sentence8: in the town square, there are many people do sport such as jogging or badminton.
1
Sentence8: in town square, there are many people do sport such as jogging or badminton.
40
Sentence10:On these days, my parents also free from their works, so usually my mom and my dad go to the market and buy something for our lunch.
1
41
Sentence21:Usually, if I am not take a nap, I just go to the some cyber or internet rental and open the internet just for browsing or chatting.
1
Sentence21:Usually, if I am not take a nap, I just go to some cyber or internet rental and open the internet just for browsing or chatting.
42
Sentence24:In the evening, I usually relax my self with watch the movie with my boyfriend, sometimes in the theatre or just from DVD.
2
Sentence24:In the evening, I usually relax my self with watch movie with my boyfriend, sometimes in theatre or just from DVD.
43 Sentence26:*We often go for the
dinner or just shopping in the mall. 2
Sentence26:*We often go for dinner or just shopping in mall.
45
Sentence30:*At 23:00 pm, my boyfriend have to return home and I go to sleep but before that I pray to God.
1
Sentence30:*At 23:00 pm, my boyfriend have to return home and I go to sleep but I pray to God before.
46 9
Sentence45:There I can talk about friends, boyfriends, or parents to my friend.
1
Sentence45: I can talk about friends, boyfriends, or parents to my friend there.
47 Sentence49:There we can so crazy;
*we can dance, sing and laugh loudly. 1
Sentence49:we can so crazy; *we can dance, sing and laugh loudly there.
51 11
Sentence29:But sometimes we go out together, for example go to the Galaxi Mall because Galaxi Mall is near from my house.
1
Sentence29:But sometimes we go out together, for example go to Galaxi Mall because Galaxi Mall is near from my house.
52 12 Sentence17:At 02:00 pm, we go to
*food court for having lunch. 1
Sentence17:At 02:00 pm, we go to the food court for having lunch.
53 Sentence29:There are my activities on
Saturdays. 1
Sentence29:Those are my activities on Saturdays.
54 13
Sentence1:On Saturday, I wake up
late than customarily, because I don’t
have anything to do on Saturday.
1
Sentence1:On Saturday, I wake up later than customarily, because I
don’t have anything to do on
Saturday.
55
Sentence20:Every Saturday, we always visit different restaurant because if *choose (visit) one restaurant everyday *feel bored with the foods and the situation.
2
Sentence20:Every Saturday, we always visit different restaurant because if we choose (visit) one restaurant everyday we feel bored with the foods and the situation.
56 14
Sentence8:If it is about 11:00 am or 12:00 pm, I always go to the Pasar atum.
1 Sentence8:If it is about 11:00 am or
12:00 pm, I always go to Pasar atum.
57
Sentence14:After I arrive at home, I usually go to the bathroom for taking a bath and prepare myself to go to the church.
2
Sentence14:After I arrive at home, I usually go to bathroom for taking a bath and prepare myself to go to church.
58 Sentence15:I go to the church *at
4:30 pm until 7:00 pm. 1
Sentence15:I go to church *at 4:30 pm until 7:00 pm.
59
Sentence18:After I finished my activities in the church, usually I go to the mall with my sister, her husband and her children.
2
Sentence18:After I finished my activities in church, usually I go to mall with my sister, her husband and her children.
60
Sentence23:*I always wash my face, my hands and my feet before I go to the bed.
1
Sentence23:*I always wash my face, my hands and my feet before I go to bed.
61 15
Sentence1:On Saturday, I don’t hurry from morning until night, *it’s *free
day for me.
1
Sentence1:On Saturday, I don’t hurry from morning until night, *it’s a free
62
Sentence12:On Saturdays, I always wash my motorcycle because only Saturday I have a time to wash it.
1
Sentence12:On Saturdays, I always wash my motorcycle because only Saturday I have time to wash it.
63
Sentence17:After lunch, I go to bed,
for relax my mind and I doesn’t make
home work.
1
Sentence17:After lunch, I go to bed,
for relax my mind and I doesn’t make
my home work.
64 16
Sentence11:We arrives in *mall at 03:00 pm and we having lunch together.
1
Sentence11:We arrives in the mall at 03:00 pm and we having lunch together.
65 Sentence17:I like playing *shoot ball
games. 1
Sentence17:I like playing the shoot ball games.
Sentence18:After that, we back to her home and we arrive in her home at 05:05 pm.
1
Sentence18:After that, we back to her home and arrive in her home at 05:05 pm.
66
Sentence19:At 05:30 pm, we go to church by car; *we go to *Algonz on jalan satelit.
1
Sentence19:At 05:30 pm, we go to church by car; *we go to the Algonz on jalan satelit.
67
Sentence25:After I arrive at home, I call her to say *I have arrive at home and I take a bath and get dressed
1
Sentence25:After I arrive at home, I call her to say that I have arrive at home and I take a bath and get dressed
Exp
List of Cohesive Devices Encountered in Students' Compositions
Reference
1 1 On Saturdays, I do not hurry from morning
until night. 1 1 2
2 I do not have to get up *early as on weekdays. 1 1
3 I usually get up at 06:00 am and brush my
teeth at 06:10 am. 2 1 1 1
4 I do not have to wait for a long time to take a
bath because my friends are still sleeping. 2
5 I take a bath calmly. 1
6 It takes me about 15 minutes to 20 minutes. 1 1 1 1
7
After taking a bath, I usually have a plate of rice; a bowl of Soto, crackers and a glass of water for breakfast.
1 1 1 1 1
8 Then I get back into my room at 07:00 am. 2 1
9 I sweep my room’s floor and mop it. 3 1 1 1 1 1 1
10
I always make my table neat on Saturdays because there are so many papers and books on my table.
3 1 1 1
11
I can arrange them only on Saturdays because I always hurry on weekdays and I do not have time to arrange them.
5 1 1 1 1
12 When I clean my room, I sometimes listen to
western songs on the radio. 3 1 1
13 It make me more relaxed in doing something. 2 1
14 At 10:00 am, I finish cleaning my room. 2
15 After that, I usually do my homework for
Monday calmly. 2 1 1
16
17 While doing my homework, I listen to
mandarin songs 2 1 1
18 I usually study from 10:00 am to 11:00 am 1 1 1 1
19 Sometimes, my friends are come to my room
and accompany me to study. 3 1 1
20 In return, I come to my friend’s room and we
study together. 3 1 1
21 I have a plate of rice or a plate of fried noodles,
crackers and a glass of cold water for lunch. 1 1 1 1 1
22 I has it at 12:05 pm with my friends. 2 1
23 After that, I usually watch television. 1 1 1
24
I go into my room at 01:00 pm and I spend the whole afternoon in my own room alone because my friends usually takes a nap.
5 1 1 1 1
25
While, I do my hobbies, such as drawing, reading comics, etc, I listen to my cassette record.
4 1 1 1
26
Although, it is always hot in the afternoon, I can enjoy doing my hobbies accompanied by my favorite songs.
3 1 1 1
27 At 15:00 pm, I take a bath. 1
28 I usually spend 30 minutes taking a bath. 1 1 1
29 *No one disturb me while taking a bath. 1 1 1 1
30 After that, I am ready to listen to the radio
again. 1 1 1
31 Sometimes, I eat apples while listening to the
radio. 1 2
32 *I always feel hungry in the evening. 1 1
33 *I continue doing my hobbies until the
dinnertime. 2 1 1 1
34 My friends always knocks my room’s door
before having dinner 2 1 1
35 It a sign for me that we will have dinner. 3 1 1 1
36 While having a plate of warm rice, a bowl of
soup and a glass of water, I watch television. 1 2 1
37 We have dinner at 18:00 pm. 1 1
38 I usually talk to my friends for a while after
having dinner. 2 1 1 1
40 My friends often come to my room and talk to
me. 3 1 1
41 We talk about our assignments, make jokes,
etc. 1 1 1
42
When my watch points at 09:00 pm, my friends go back into their room and I am ready to go to bed.
4 1
43 On Saturdays, I do not hurry from morning
until night. 1 1 2
44 Saturdays is a relaxed day. 1
45 I always enjoy having fun on Saturdays. 1 1
46 I do not want to miss it. 2
2 1 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night. 1 1 2
2 I usually get up at 09:00 am. 1
3 *My mother always wake me up. 2 1
4 But, sometimes my servant also wakes me up. 2 1 1
5 After getting up, I don’t take a bath
immediately. 1 1 1
6 *I usually watch *television first. 1 1 1 1 1 1
7 I watch my favorite cartoon program. 2 1
8 It is spongebob’ s squarepants. 1
9 *It starts from 09:00 am until 10:00 am. 1 2 1
10 It is a funny cartoon, I think. 1 1 1
11 At 10:00 am, I go to*bathroom to take a bath
and brush my teeth. 2 1 1 2 1
12 On Saturdays, I usually take a bath for about
half an hour. 1 1 1
13 After taking a bath, I watch television again. 1 1 1 1 1
14 I watch infotainment program. 1 1
15 It is “Insert” ( informasi selebriti). 1
16 *It lasts from 11:00 am and ends at 11:45 am. 1 1 1 2 1
17 At 12:00 pm, I usually have lunch with my
family. 2
18 My mother always cook by herself. 1 1
19 *Her’s cooking are delicious. 1 1
20 After having lunch, I usually listen to the
music and sometimes read a magazine. 1 1 1 2 1 1
21 I like to read girl magazine, for example Gadis,
22 *I enjoy to read them all. 1 1 1 1 1 23 At 03:00 pm, I usually takes a nap. 1
24 *My parents also take a nap. 1 1 1
25 It starts from 03:00 pm until 05:00 pm. 1 2
26 After taking a nap, I take a bath immediately
because I will date with my boyfriend. 3 1 1
27 On Saturdays night, I always go out with my
boyfriend. 2 1
28 *I always prepare or get dressed before I go
out. 2 1 1 1
29 I always make over my face; *hopefully I will
look more beautiful. 3 1 1 1
30 Usually, my mother helps me to choose what
dress I will wear. 3 1
31 At 06:00 pm, my boyfriend picks me up. 2
32 He usually enters to my house but sometimes
we go out immediately. 3 1
33 My parents are happy with my boyfriend. 2
34 *My boyfriend isn’t handsome but he is good
looking. 2 1 1 1
35 We usually have dinner and go to *movie
theatre. 1 1 1 1 1
36 *We seldom go to *mall, because there are too
crowded, so we don’t get parking car. 2 1 1 1 2
37 We just go to a restaurant for having dinner. 1 1 1
38 When we want to go to *movie theatre, we
usually go to Vida. 2 1 1
39 It is on jalan Mayjen Sungkono. 1
40 *It isn’t too crowded. 1 1
41
At 10:00 pm, we go back home, because my parents just give us permission to go out until at 10:00 pm
3 1 1
42 But sometimes, we arrives home at 10:30 pm. 1 1
43 My parents are not angry with us because they
know that on *street are crowded. 3 1 1 1
44 My boyfriend usually go home immediately
45 After arriving home, I change my clothes and
then wash my face and brush my teeth. 4 2 1 3 2
46 After that, I go to bed. 1 1
47 I really do things relaxingly on Saturdays. 1
3 1 On Saturdays, I do not hurry from morning
until night. 1 1 2
2 I usually get up at 08:00 am and watch “
Crayon shincan” on RCTI. 1 1 1 1
3 After that, I take a bath, get dressed and have
breakfast. 1 2 1 1 1
4 I usually have toast, fried rice, milk or tea for
breakfast. 1 1 1 1 1
5 After I have breakfast, I watch TV again until
10:00 am. 2 1 1 2 1
6 At 10:00 am, I change my clothes and go to
pasar Atum at 10:20 am. 2 1 1 1
7 Every Saturday, I always go to pasar atum to
company my cousin, Lisa. 2
8 Lisa have a boutique on *third floor. 1
9 *It’s name “Lisa Boutique” 1 1
10 At 01:00 pm, I have lunch with Lisa. 1
11
I usually have soto ayam, bakwan kapasari, * fried chicken at “Tip Top” or pangsit mie kiauw for lunch.
1 1 1 1 1 1
12 *Those is my favorite foods in pasar atom. 1 1 1
13 At 02:30 pm, Lisa’s driver drive me to my
house on jalan kemayoran. 2
14 *It takes 10 or 15 minutes. 1 1 1
15 After arriving home, I change my clothes and
take a nap until 04:30 pm. 2 1 1 2 1
16 After I wake up, I lie on my bed, listen to the
music, or watch TV. 2 2 3 1 1
17 At 05:00 pm, I take a bath and get dressed. 1 1 1 1
18 After that, I prepare my self to go out. 2 1
19 Every Saturday, my friends and I always go out
together. 2 1
20 We always go to Tunjungan Plaza. 1
21 *It is our favorite plaza in Surabaya. 1 1 1
22
At 05:30 pm, my friend, Henny picks me up and we go together to pick my friend, Ratna on jalan karet.
23 At 06:00 pm, my friends and I arrive at
tunjungan plaza. 2 1
24
At there, we just go window-shopping, playing in G-fan, have dinner, and sometimes we watch movie.
2 1 2 1 1 1
25 At 07:00 pm, I have with my friends. 2
26 *I usually have fried chicken, black pepper
meat, fried rice, or kungpao chicken for dinner. 1 1 1 1 1 1
27 My favorite restaurant in TP is Ta Wan. 1
28 I have dinner until 07:45 pm. 1 1
29 After that, my friends and I go to G-fan 2 1 1
30 I usually spend Rp. 10.000 to buy 8 coins. 1
31 My favorite game is “time crisis”. 1
32 *Every one game, it is need two coins. 1 1
33 After *finish play in G-fan, my friends and I go
to bread story. 2 1 1 1
34 I always buy “hero” bread at bread story. 1 1
35
At 08:30 pm until 09:15 pm, I always go to Excelso Café to meet my other friends there and have some meal.
2 1 1 1 1
36 At 09:15 pm, my friends and I out from TP. 2 1 1
37 *At 09:35 pm, I arrive home. 1 1
38
After I arrive home, I change my clothes, wash my face, brush my teeth, read my bible about 10 minutes and pray.
6 3 5 1
39 At 10:00 pm, I go to bed and sleep until
morning comes. 1 1 1 1 1
40 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night but I have a lot of activities on this day. 2 1 2 1
4 1 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night. 1 1 2
2 Saturday is my day off. 1
3 *I does not go to the school. 1 1 1
4 *I can do everything I want to on Saturday. 2 1
5 I get up at 9 or 10 am. 1 1 1
6 After that, I take a bath, *it takes about 10 – 15
7 *It do not take along time; it takes about one or
two minutes. 2 1 1
8 Then, I have breakfast. 1 1
9 Usually I eat breads or instant noodle. 1 1 1 1
10 *On Saturdays, the program on television are
not too interesting. 1 1
11
*In the morning, almost all channel show gossip news and almost the gossip in all channel show the same news.
3 1 2 1 1
12 So sometimes, it is quite boring. 1 1
13 But television is one of my entertainments at
home. 2 1
14
Usually I watch television in a long time but if the program are not too interesting, I will change and change all the time until I get one which is interesting to me.
5 2 1 1 1 1 1 1
15 Usually if the programs is not too interesting I
just watch television in 5 or 10 minutes. 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
16
There is the other thing that I can do on Saturdays if I am bored with the program on television; I watch film from VCD or DVD.
3 3 1 1 2 1 1 1 1 1
17 *I have some collection of VCD and if I want
to watch DVD, I can rent it near my house. 5 1 1 1 1
18 I watch film until afternoon but sometimes I
watch film until evening. 2 2 1 2 2 1
19
*Usually I watch television and film alone because my sister and my brother go to work and my little brother go to school.
3 1 1 1 1 1 2 1 1 1
20
Except watching television or watching film from VCD or DVD, usually I go to some places that I want to go to.
2 1 2 1 2 1 1
21 I go to the mall. 1 1
22 *I can find many things there. 1 1 1
23 *I likes window shopping and shopping. 1 1 1 1 1
24 Sometimes I go with my boyfriend, *sometimes
I go with my friends. 4 1 1
25 I like to go to supermal or tunjungan plaza
26 But I like to go to Galaxi mall or Delta but I
rarely go there. 2 1 1 1 3
27 Sometimes on Saturdays, I go to the church. 1 1
28 *The name of the church is Aloysius Gonzaga. 2 1 1
29 I go to the church at 5:50 pm, because the
church is not too far from my house. 2 2 2 1 1
30 The mass starts from 6 pm to 7:30 pm. 1 1 1
31 I go there with my boyfriend and my sister. 3 1 1 1
32 After the mass finishes, usually my sister, my
boyfriend and I go to the restaurant. 3 1 1 3 1 1
33 We has dinner in the restaurant. 1 1 1
34 We eat in different place, not in the same
place. 1 1 1 1 1 1
35 *We go home at 8:30 pm. 1 1
36 Then I change my clothes into pajamas, but I
do not go to bed after I change my clothes. 5 1 2 2 1
37 I watch television and relax or watch film from
VCD again if I want to. 2 1 1 2 1 2 1
38 Then, I go to bed at 10 or 11 pm. 1 1
39 But if I watch television or watch film, I go to
bed at 12 or 1 am. 2 1 1 2 1 1
5 1 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night. 1 1 2
2 *On that day, I do not go to the campus. 1 1 1
3 So, I more relax than weekdays. 1 1 1
4 I usually get up not too early, because I do not
have too many activities. 2 1
5 I just go to the church on Saturday night. 1 1
6 I and my family always go to the church every
Saturday night. 1 1 2 1
7 On Saturdays morning, I do not get up too
early. 1
8 I usually get up at 08:00 am. 1 1
9 First, I pray and make a bed. 1 1 1 1 1
10 Then, I brush my teeth and feed my pet. 3 1 2 1 1
11 In the morning, I always reads a newspaper
and I do not have breakfast. 2 1 1
12 At 09:00 am, I took a bath for 15 minutes and I
get dressed. 2 1 1 1
14
*Sometimes, my mother wants me to accompany her to go somewhere, and I always accompany her because I do not have many activities.
6 1 1 1
15 At 12:00 pm, I have lunch for 10 minutes. 1 1
16 Then, I always wash the plate, spoon alone
because in my house we do not have servant. 3 1 1 1 1
17 So, we always do house works alone. 1 1 1 1
18
After have lunch, I usually telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms and I usually watch TV for one hour.
3 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
19 At 01:30 am, I always take a nap for 2 hours. 1 1 1
20 *At 03:30 pm, I get up and prepare myself to
go to the church. 2 1 1 1 1
21 Then, I take a bath and get dressed for 20
minutes.
22
Before my family and I go to the church, we always switch on some of lamps, close all the windows and lock the doors.
3 2 1 2 1 3 1 2
23 *At 05:00 pm, we are already go to the “Christ
of the king” church. 1 2 1 1
24 The Holy mass starts at 05:30 pm and ends at
07:00 pm. 1 1 1
25 We go to the church by car. 1 1
26 After from the church, we usually go out for
dinner in a restaurant or café. 1 2 1 1 1 1 1 1
27 After that, we go back home. 1 1
28 When we arrive, my older brother park the car
in the yard. 2 2 1
29 Then, I get dressed. 1 1
30 After I arrive at home, I do not straight go to
bed. 2 1
31 Sometimes, I watch my favorite program for 2
hours. 2 1 1
32 *At 10:00 pm, I go to bed. 1 1
33 That my all activities on Saturdays. 1 1
6 1 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night. 1 1 2
2 *Saturdays is, my first holiday in a week. 1 1 1
3 On Saturdays, I don’t get up too early. 1
4 I get up at 07:00 am, and then I pray for about
five minutes. 2 1 1 1
5 After that, I takes a bath for about twenty
minutes. 1 1 1
6 *At 08:00 am, I have breakfast. 1 1
7 Usually I have fried noodle or a glass of milk
and some bread for breakfast. 1 2 1 1 1 1
8 *I have breakfast for about twenty minutes. 1 1 1 1
9 After I finish for breakfast, I usually watch TV
in my own room for about one hour. 3 1 1 1 2
10 From 09:05 am to 10:00 am, I usually clean my
own room such as sweep the floor, etc. 2 1 1 1 1
11
After I finish to clean my own room, sometimes I buy some snacks near in my boarding house.
4 2 1 1
12 Then, I eat it and listening to the music in my
own room. 3 1 1 1 1 1
13 At 12:00 pm, my twin sister come to my
boarding house. 2 1
14
Her boarding house is in Dinoyo because she is studying at Widya Mandala University in dinoyo, she take pharmacy.
3 1 1
15 Then, we go together to buy some food for
lunch and we have lunch together. 2 2 1 1 1 1
16 At 02:00 pm, we take a nap together and wake
up at 04:00 pm. 1 1 1 1 1
17 After wake up, sometimes we tell our story, I
tell my story to her and she tell her story to me. 8 3 1 1 1
18 *Sometimes we made some jokes too. 1 1
19 At 05:00 pm, she go home to her boarding
house. 2
20 At 15:15 pm, I take a bath for about twenty
21
After that, I usually watch television in my own room and eating some snacks, but sometimes I just listening to the music or radio in my own room.
4 1 1 1 3 1 1 1 1
22 At 07:00 pm, my friends and I go to buy some
food for dinner. 2 1 1 1
23
Sometimes we buy tempe penyet, rawon or meat balls for dinner, then we have dinner together in my own room.
3 1 2 1 1 1 1
24 *Usually we have dinner together and make
some jokes or watching television. 1 2 2 1 1 1 1 1
25 *At 09:00 pm, I brush my teeth and clean my
hand and my legs for about fifteen minutes. 4 2 1 3 1 2 1
26 After that, *go back to my own room and pray
for about five minutes, then go to sleep. 1 1 1 2 1 1
27 *I don’t have to go to campus to study. 1 1
28 I don’t hurry from morning until night. 1 1 2
29 I just spend my times in my boarding house. 3
30 On Saturdays, I am so relax. 1
7 1 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night. 1 1 2
2 I wake up at 07:30 am in the morning, I pray
for about 5 minutes. 1 1 1 1
3 Then at 07:40 am, I go to bath. 1 1
4 At 8 am, I finish and get dressed in my room. 2 1 1
5 After I take a bath, I make my own breakfast
and eat it. 4 1 1 1 1
6 After finishing my breakfast, I watch TV until
11:00 am. 2 1 1 2
7 *I usually watch cooking program because I
like cooking. 2 1 1 1 1
8 At 11:00 o’clock, I get ready to go to the
church for practice with the church’s band. 1 1 1 1 1
9 *I a singer in the church, so I have to practice
regularly every Saturdays. 2 1 2 1 1
11 After I arrive at the church, I go upstairs; *my
friends are wait for me. 4 1 1 1 1 1
12 We are practice about 12 songs that we have to
sing on Sunday. 2 1 1
13 *I finish practice at 01:30 pm. 1 1 1
14 *I look for some lunch before I go home. 2 1 1 1
15 My boyfriend usually like to have fried chicken
in our favorite restaurant. 2 1
16 *It on jalan kupang jaya. 1 1
17 We go there and eat. 1 1 1 1
18 *We go home at 03:00 pm. 1 1
19 After I arrive at home, I take a nap. 2 1 1
20 I wake up at 5 o’clock and take a bath. 1 1 1
21 15 minutes later, I finish and get dressed in my
room. 2 1 1
22 *I make up my face because I will go for a date
with my boyfriend. 4 1 1 2
23 At 5:45 pm, my boyfriend come and we go
together. 2 1 1
24 I like to go to the mall. 1 1
25 *Usually we go to plaza tunjungan. 1 1
26
After we arrive at the mall, we go inside and sometimes my boyfriend will buy some clothes for me.
4 1 1 1 1
27 *He knows that I need more clothes to go to the
campus. 2 1 1 1 1
28 *He don’t like if I wear a bad clothes at the
campus. 2 1 1 1 1
29
*We go around the mall and when we feel hungry, we go to the food centre to looking for a dinner
3 2 1 1 1 1
30 I like steak, so I choose a tenderloin steak. 2 1
31 *That’s my favorite menu. 1 1
32 *We sit and eat. 1 1 1 1 1
33 At 10:00 pm, we go home. 1
34 Before that, my boyfriend will take me to his
motorcycle club. 3 1 1
35 *There is a lot of modification motorcycles. 1 1
36 At 10:45 pm, we go home. 1
37 *I arrive at home at 11:00 o’clock. 1 1
8 1 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night. 1 1 2
2 *I wake up at 07:00 am, but usually on
weekdays, I wake up at 04:30 am. 2 1 1
3 On Saturdays, I’m free, so I do not go to the
campus. 2 1 1
4 In the morning, I usually bring my sister and
my little brother to their school. 4 1 1 1 1 1
5 And after that, I just moving around my little
town gresik with a motorcycle. 2 1 1
6
In Gresik, specifically for Saturdays and Sundays morning, there are a lot of merchant
who’s sells special food from Gresik, such as nasi krawu.
1 1 1 1 1 1 1
7 And I usually buy it for my breakfast. 3 1 1
8 in the town square, there are many people do
sport such as jogging or badminton. 1 1 1 1 1
9
On Saturdays, usually the TV programs is boring so I never watch TV on Saturdays morning.
1 1 1 2 1
10
On these days, my parents also free from their works, so usually my mom and my dad go to the market and buy something for our lunch.
5 1 1 2 1 1 1 1 1
11 Because there is no interesting TV Programs, I
usually play some games from play station. 1 1 3 1 1
12 *I spend about 3 hour to play the games. 1 1 1 1
13 At 11:00 am, my mom and my dad usually
arrived from the market. 2 1 1 1 1
14 Then we start to cook for our lunch. 2 1 1 1
15 If I had a leisure time on Saturday, I usually
learn a lot of recipient from my mom. 3 1 1
16 And sometimes when I try to cook, the taste
become terrible, but I always try. 2 1 1 1 1
17
On Saturdays, I like only to stay home, because on weekdays, I never stay longer in my home because of my activities.
4 2 1 1
18 My mom and I finish cooking at 12:30 pm,
then I pick up my sister and my brother. 5 2 1 1 2
20 These day, I don’t have something important
that i have to do. 2 2
21
Usually, if I am not take a nap, I just go to the some cyber or internet rental and open the internet just for browsing or chatting.
2 1 1 4 1 2 1
22 And before 15:30 pm, I have to go back to my
home. 2 1 1
23
Because at 16:00 pm, I have to teach children around my house whether they want to ask me about English or just help them to do their home works.
6 1 1 1
24
In the evening, I usually relax my self with watch the movie with my boyfriend, sometimes in the theatre or just from DVD.
3 1 2 1 1 1 1
25 On Saturdays night, I also make a date with my
boy. 2 1
26 *We often go for the dinner or just shopping in
the mall. 1 2 1 1 1 1
27 I usually go for dinner at 19:30 pm and we
back home at 21:30 pm. 2 1 1 1
28
These night, my father allowed me to stay late at night with my boyfriend but we are not allowed to hang out until late at night.
4 1 1 1
29
*Usually, I just play guitar and sometimes I just sing a song and my boyfriend will play the guitar.
3 1 1 3 1 1 1
30
*At 23:00 pm, my boyfriend have to return home and I go to sleep but before that I pray to God.
3 1 1 1 1 1
31 I really enjoy my Saturday, *I feel so relax after
my activities on weekdays. 4 1 1 1
9 1 On Saturdays, I don’t hurry from morning until
night. 1 1 2
2 On Saturdays, I usually wake up late. 1
3 I wake up at 06:30 am and watch TV until
08:00 am. 1 1 1 1 1 1
4 I sometimes watch cartoon movie, or music
channel on MTV. 1 1 1 1 1
5 *I rarely watch news program on Saturdays. 1 1 1
7 I always take a long bath on Saturdays, about a
half until an hour. 1 1 1
8 *I always do some hair or body treatment on
Saturdays. 1 1 1 1 1
9 I *always have hair cream bath or facial
treatment 1 1 1 1 1
10 *I seldom do manicure or pedicure treatment. 1 1 1 1 1
11 Usually I do all of that treatment at home. 1 1 1
12 *Usually, I finish take a bath at 09:00 am. 1 1
13 After take a bath, I clean my bedroom. 2 1 1
14 Then, I help my mother in the kitchen. 2 1 1
15 My mother usually makes a special food on
Saturdays. 1 1
16 She love cooks. 1
17 *Sometimes she cooks spaghetti, beef teriyaki,
roasted chicken, salad, *etc. 1 1 1 1 1
18 *Sometimes she finishes cook at 11:00 am. 1 1 1
19 After help my mother in the kitchen, I take a
bath again, sometimes. 2 1 1 1
20 it’s not a long one, but a short and a fast one. 1 2 2 1 1 1
21 I take a bath for about 20 minutes. 1 1
22 After take a bath, I watch some of TV
program. 1 1 1 1
23 I love music, so I always watch music channel
on global TV (MTV). 2 1 1 1
24 I also watch infotainment program on Trans
TV. 1 1 1
25 *I don’t really like watch TV for a long time. 1 1 1 1
26 I usually can stand to watch TV only for 3
hours. 1 1 1
27 If I get bored, I always read some books. 2 1 1
28 *I like read books, not textbooks. 1 1 1 1 1
29 I always read novels, biography or comics on
Saturdays. 1 2 1 1 1 3 1
30 *I can read a book fast. 1 1 1 1
31 *Sometimes I can read a 200 pages book in 1,
