Submission , 28 November 2021 Hasil Initial Review, 19 April 2022

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Submission , 28 November 2021

Hasil Initial Review, 19 April 2022

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Hasil Review 18 Mei 2022

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Review Form by Reviewer

Title: STRATEGY BUSINESS OF ECOFRIENDLY CRAFT FROM PALM OIL STAND WASTE IN ROKAN HILIR, RIAU

No Question Suggested reviewers Score 1-5

1 Is the title of the paper concise and can clearly illustrate the contents of the paper?

The title is too broad. Please be more specific about "what business strategy" that

emphasized and represented by this study overall (e.g: offensive business strategy, defensive, growth, etc."

2

2 Does the abstract have summarized briefly and clearly:

Purpose & scope of research The purpose and scope of the study are too general. What is the greatness of this study rather than finding new research objects?

3

The method used SWOT analysis is not enough to formulate strategies. The author should consider complementary tools such as QSPM to narrow down the focus of the business strategy

3

Summary of results This is a case study research. It is better to remove any" research gap” terms from the abstract.

Again, the readers would like to know what is the main theme of the most influential business strategy and the impact

3

conclusion The conclusion should be written

at the end of abstract part at least 2-3 sentences.

2

3 Does the introduction clearly describe:

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No Question Suggested reviewers Score 1-5 Problems & scope of research There is no supporting data to

prove that the optimal benefits of the palm sticks waste have not been reached yet, and what are the main problems?

2

Scientific status Why do you think the previous studies did not focus on business development strategies? What is the urgency of this study?

3

Hypothesis No hypothesis is required in this study

N/A

approach to problem-solving The authors should add more data analysis after SWOT, e.g QSPM

3

Expected results It is not clear that based on what the authors can determine the most and the worst strategies if they only rely on a descriptive TOWS Matrix?

2

4 Has the organization been clearly written so that the research can be repeated?

Not too clear 2

5 Is the data presented in the discussion section processed and written in the form of tables or drawings, and given information that is easy to understand?

Yes 4

6 Is the discussion part of the relationship between the research results obtained and the basic concepts and or hypotheses?

Not too clear because it need further data analysis

2

7 Is the conclusion there is conformity or disagreement with the results of other studies?

The conclusions do not discuss the comparison with the previous/earlier study

2

8 Does the conclusion contain the implications of both

We cannot find any theoretical

implications, just

2

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No Question Suggested reviewers Score 1-5 theoretical and implementation

results?

practical/managerial

implications, but still not clear and sharp

9 Does the conclusion contain the essence of the research?

No, it does not 1

10 Is the conclusion written by the author logically and honestly based on the facts obtained?

Yes 4

11 Is the bibliography written correctly according to the instructions?

Yes 5

12 Does the reference indicate:

Recency reference library? Yes 4

Primary reference library? Yes 4

13 Positive impact of research publications for authors

This research is actually adequate, but it needs a lot of improvement, especially in terms of data analysis and further discussion

2

The result of the reviewers' assessment decisions: (give (v) a checklist)

 Accepted

 Improvements MAJOR

 REJECTED

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BUTIR KONTROL NASKAH (12-14 Halaman) Judul Artikel:

MARKET DEVELOPMENT BUSINESS STRATEGY OF ECO-FRIENDLY CRAFT FROM PALM OIL STAND WASTE IN ROKAN HILIR, RIAU : QSPM METHOD

No Pertanyaan Ket

1 Judul makalah cukup ringkas dan dapat melukiskan isi makalah dengan jelas ? (15-25 kata)

Ya 2 Abstrak telah merangkum secara singkat dan jelas tentang :

Tujuan penelitian Ya

Metode yang digunakan Ya

Hasil Ya

Simpulan Ya

Keyword (harus 5 keyword) Ya

Dalam dua bahasa (Indonesia dan Inggris) dalam 1 halaman Ya 3 Pendahuluan ( 20%)

Latar belakang (alasan penelitian dilakukan) Hal ke 3 Paragraf ke 3,4 Hal ke 4 Paragraf ke 1 Status ilmiah dewasa ini/posisi penitian terhadap penelitian

sebelumnya/terdahulu

Hal ke 3 Paragraf ke 4 Hal ke 4 Paragraf ke 1

Cara pendekatan penyelesaian masalah Hal ke 4

Paragraf ke 1

Tujuan penelitian Hal ke 4

Paragraf ke 1 4 Metode (20%)

Lokasi dan waktu penelitian Hal ke 4

Paragraf ke 2 Jenis dan sumber data ( JANGAN menuliskan diskripsi, Misal: data

primer adalah... dll)

Hal ke 4 Paragraf ke 3 Teknik pengambilan data ( JANGAN menuliskan diskripsi, Misal: ....

menggunakan pusposive sample yaitu...)

Hal ke 4 Paragraf ke 3 Teknik analisis data (tuliskan alasan penggunaan analisis yang

digunakan, tahapan analisis data) – JANGAN menuliskan diskripsi dari tool yang digunakan... misalnya SEM adalah...., Menurut Daryanto (2011) dayasaing adalah....

Hal ke 4 Paragraf ke 2

Hipotesis (harus diberikan dasar kenapa hipotesis ini diambil)

Tidak

Memerlukan

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Hipotesis

Kerangka pemikiran yang berupa gambar dan dijelaskan dalam 1

paragraf singkat

Hal ke 4 Paragraf ke 4 5 Hasil (50%)

Pembahasan tujuan 1 Hal ke 6 - 7

Pembahasan tujuan 2 Hal ke 10 - 12

6 Implikasi Manajerial Hal ke 12

7 Kesimpulan dan saran (10%)

Kesimpulan (dibuat paragraf (tidak numbering) sesuai jumlah tujuan) Hal ke 12 Saran (berisikan saran untuk instansi bersangkutan dan saran penelitian

selanjutnya)

Hal ke 13 8 Daftar Pustaka (minimal 20 daftar pustaka 80% jurnal + 1 Jurnal

JABM/JMA/IJBE*) – harus sesuai dengan penulisan/pedoman dan 5 tahun terakhir

*) sesuai jurnal yang di tuju atau dipilih Jurnal (16 daftar pustaka)

Daftar pustaka jurnal 1 Dikutip pada hal

ke 2,4,6

ke 3

ke 3,9

Daftar Pustaka jurnal 5 Dikutip pada hal

ke 6

9

2,3,6,9

9

Daftar Pustaka jurnal 9 Buku

4,9

Daftar Pustaka jurnal 11 Buku

ke 9

ke 3,9,14

6

9,12

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3,9

ke 9

3,6,9,14

ke 9,12 Buku/tesis/disertasi/internet

Daftar pustaka Buku Dikutip pada hal

ke 9

Daftar pustaka Buku Dikutip pada hal

ke 4, 8

Jurnal JMA/IJBE/JABM Dikutip pada hal

ke 9

Naskah jurnal ini sepenuhnya sudah disetujui/konfirmasi oleh tim penulis lain/pembimbing/instansi objek penelitian.

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( Dr. Annisa Mardatillah, M.Si )