IMPROVING
GRADE XI STUDENTS’ ACHIEVEMENT
IN WRITING ANALYTICAL EXPOSITION TEXT
THROUGH COLLABORATIVE STRATEGY
A THESIS
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of Sarjana Pendidikan
By:
NIA DANIATI LUMBAN RAJA
Registration Number: 208321046
ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
FACULTY OF LANGUAGES AND ARTS
STATE UNIVERSITY OF MEDAN
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
Praise to Jesus Christ for his merciful that the writer is able to complete
this thesis. This thesis is aimed to fulfill one of the requirements for the Degree of
Sarjana Pendidikan at English Department, Faculty of Languages and Arts, State
University of Medan.
In the process of finishing this thesis, the writer faced a lot of difficulties,
but, because of the assistance of many sides, this thesis finally could be
completed.
Thus, the writer would like to express her sincere gratitude to:
Prof. Dr. Ibnu Hajar, M.Si., Rector of State University of Medan Dr. Isda Pramuniati, M.Hum, Dean of Languages and Arts Faculty
Prof. Dr. Hj. Sumarsih, M.Pd., Head of English Department, and Dra. Masitowarni Siregar, M.Ed., Head of English Education Study Program Drs. Elia Masa Gintings, M.Hum., as her consultant, all lecturers of
English Department and also all examiners of my thesis.
Drs. Herry Aritonang., the headmaster of SMA Markus Medan who had helped the writer during conducting the research in that school and also to
all the students of class XI IPA -1.
J. Lumban raja and M. Tamba, her beloved parents and her big family who always supported the writer to be hard-working to finish her study in
Faculty of languages and Arts, State University of Medan. All my friends who take part in completing my thesis.
May all the assistance, support, and simplicity given by all of the people can
be their charity and got merit from Jesus Christ, amin.
Medan, Januari 2014 The Writer,
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ABSTRACT
Lumban raja, Nia Daniati. Registration Number. 208321046. Improving Grade XI Students’ Achievement in Writing Analytical Exposition Text Through Collaborative Strategy. A Thesis. Faculty Of Languages and Arts. State University Of Medan.
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4. Collaborative Writing Strategy ... 12
5. Application of Collaborative Writing Strategy ... 15
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CHAPTER V CONCLUSSION AND SUGGESTION ... 44
A. Conclusion ... 44
B. Suggestion ... 44
REFERENCES ... 46
APPENDICES ... 48
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LIST OF TABLES
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Table 3.1 The Activities in Cycle I ... 24
Table 3.2 The Scoring of Writing Analytical ... 27
Table 4.1 Students’ Writing Scores ... 32
Table 4.2 The Comparison of Students’ Writing Scores ... 37
Table 4.3 The Improvement of Mean Score of Students’ Writing ... 38
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LIST OF FIGURE
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Figure 2.1.Writing Process ... 8
Figure 2.2. Types of Team Working in Collaborative Writing ... 15
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. The Background of the Study
Language significantly aids in both socialization and individual
development. Therefore, language is also stated as a way to comunicate
ideas comprehensibly from one person to onother in such away the others
will be able to act exactly and accordingly. It means that language is very
crucial and for human life because it is used as a tool in communication or
when people make interaction each other.
English is an internasional language. English also considered as
lingua franca in global communication that has been used widely as the
language in many sectors, such as in transportation, technology, tourism and
internasional trade. In Indonesia, English is considered as the first foreign
language and taught formally from elementary school up to the university
level. It means that english is very important to be learned by the students.
So that’s why,they are need to learn english more. In order, they have good
english.
English consist of four skills, namely: listening, speaking, reading
and writing. From these four skills, the very important and most required in
academic field is writing. People convey their idea and feeling through
writing and it is also used as the reminder in form of file or document. So, it
is not doubt that writing can help people in communicating and keeping
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effectively because they perform their writing skill throughout their
life for the academic and occupational purposes such as composing simple
stories, writing social letters, papers, theses, and so forth. Walsh (2010:1) in
http://www.emergingedtech.com says that writing is used extensively in
higher education which leads to a future career. Because of that, writing is
an important skill to be learned.
In writing people consider what to write and how to write. Once,
people want to write, they have to choose a topic, then extend the idea in
order to know what is actually described on the piece. However, how to
write will guide the writer of how to express the idea of writing wheter it is
an arguments, narrative, descriptive or other kind of writing. Writing has
also become more important as principal of communicative language
teaching.
Since writing is really important to learn, it can be a media to help
the students to give ideas, views and messages to the reader which certain
purpose in a written text. The students were asked to apply their grammar
knowledge, sentence structure, idiom and vocabulary.Beside that, the
students were asked to explore the language that they learn. Based on the
standard competence in the syllabus of the Second Year of Senior High
School called Educational Unit Level Curriculum (Kurikulum Tingkat
Satuan Pendidikan:KTSP) the students were expected to be able to write text
of narrative, report, spoof, hortatory exposition and analytical exposition.In
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Analytical exposition text is a type of writing where the purpose is to
inform, describe, explain or define the author’s subject to the reader. It
describes the relationship between an event or circumstance and its effect.
In defining the author’s subject to the reader, analytical exposition can be a
media for the students to explore the ideas, arguments and thoughts in
written text.
However, based on the previous study in senior high school (Sekolah
Menengah Atas – SMA) Markus Medan, the students’ achievement in
analytical exposition was lack; it means that they have not passed the
standart applied. There were some factors making the students unable to
write well. The first was students were lack of information and idea. The
Second was students cannot make strong arguments in their writing. The
third was When a writing task was given, students spend much of their time
to think about what their going to writing. The fourth was The students were
unable to make the text goes coherently and organisationally, for example
there was still another argument after writing closing statement.
Based on the explanation above, it is necessary to give an eye on the
problem above. To decrease the problem above can be done by applying the
strategy to improve the students’ achievement in writing a text especially in
analytical exposition text. In this study, the writer did a try out on the
application of collaborative strategy to improve the students’ writing
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is a strategy of learning which allow the students to collaborate with their
peers in producing or writing a text.
Speck (2002:6) states that collaborative writing is a powerful
strategy of writing that encourages cooperation,critical thinking, peer
learning and active participation to end product. The students work in a
group and produce a text after discussing it in the group. Read their peer
writing and offer critiques of the writing to help their peer rivise their
writing. All the critiques and sugguestions from their peer will help them to
revise their writing with a purpose to improve their writing skill. Morever,
collaborative strategy effectively teaches the concept of teamwork. More
people mean more ideas, more work done and thus the goals are achieved
more afficiently. In this strategy, students were not only sit in a group but
they were trained to give idea each person in a group. Collaborative
strategy is also one of the most interesting strategy to build students skill
especially in writing. Students more enjoyed in working collaboratively than
individually.
Writing analytical exposition text emphasizes on the process of how
the students develop their ideas in writing. As analytical exposition text is a
text that elaborates the writer idea about the phenomenon surrounding, the
students can develop their idea in writing this text. The teacher should
motivate students to be brave in developing the ideas, arguments and
thoughts they have into their writing. Collaborative writing strategy will
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exposition because every student in group would give arguments, ideas, and
thoughts in their writing. It would strengthen their statement in the
analytical exposition.
B. The Problem of the Study
Many students are not able to write well. That is why collaborative
strategy is hoped to improve students’ writing achievement. Based on the
problem, the problem of the study is formulated as follow: ”Is Grade XI
Students’ Writing Achievement Improved In Analytical Exposition text
Through Collaborative Strategy?”
C. The Scope of The Study
In this study, the writer focuses on improving grade XI students’
writing achievement in analytical exposition text By aplying collaborative
strategy in teaching analytical exposition, it is supposed that it will help the
students to produces their ideas, throughts, feeling, and arguments in a
written text.
D. The Objective of the Study
This research intends to discover whether Collaborative strategy
significantly improve students’ ability in writing. By using collaborative
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english grade XI students of SMA Markus Medan by Aplying
Collaborative Strategy in Writing Analytical exposition text .
E. The significance of the Study
This study covers the aspects of teaching writing. The application of
collaborative strategy is expected to be successful. The benefits of the study
are: Theoritically, the result of the research can be a reference for those
who want to conduct a research in english-learning process especially in
teaching writing and practically, the writer hopes that this study will be a
useful input for teachers in english teaching -learning process especially in
teaching writing analytical exposition, for the students to improve their
writing achievement and for the other researcher who are interested in
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CHAPTER V
CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION
A. Conclusion
After analyzing the data, it was found that the students’ writing scores
improved from the cycle I until the cycle II. The improvement was shown by the
mean of the students’ scores from the first test (orientation test) 38.7, the second
test (in the last meeting of cycle I) 65.1 and the last test (in the last meeting of
cycle II) 79.4. The students’ scores continuously improved in each writing test.
The percentage of the students who were competent in writing analytical
exposition text was also improved, where in Test I, there was 2.3%, in Test II
21.4% and in Test III, the percentage was improved to be 71.4%.
From the data, there is the improvement of students achievement in writing
analytical exposition text by using collaborative strategy.
B. Suggestion
This study shows that the application of collaborative strategy improves
the students’ achievement on writing analytical exposition text. Due to the
conclusion above, there are some points suggested as follows:
1. The teachers may apply collaborative strategy as one of the alternatives
teaching strategy, especially teaching writing, to stimulate students’
interest in writing.
2. It helps the students to build more arguments to strengthen their analytical
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3. The English teacher are advised to use this strategy especially in analytical
exposition text.
4. Readers may use the information in this research as a useful input in
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