APPENDICES
8. The Students’ Writing Assignment
Nama : Kelas :
Mata Pelajaran :
Choose one of the themes below, make at least 3 paragraphs about descriptive text!
a. Favorite animals (Cat, Dog, etc.) b. Favorite person
c. Member of family (Father, mother, etc.) d. Tourist attraction
Observation Sheet
Analysis of the Students’ Writing Assignment given by English Teacher
No. Data
Concord of Number Concord of Person Correction
Appropriate Inappropriate Appropriate Inappropriate Concord of Number
Concord of Person 1. AMF Subject-verb
Concord My pet is cat I call it mini It is black in color and beautiful to look at It has a long tail and round head
Subject-verb Concord
My pet is cat I call it mini It is black in color and beautiful to look at It has a long tail and round head
- Subject-verb
Concord My pet is cat I call it mini It is black in color and beautiful to look at It has a long tail and round head
My pet is cat I call it mini It is black in color and beautiful to look at It has a long tail and round head
Total : 4 Total : - Total : 4 Total : - Pronoun
Concord Its whole body is cover with soft fur Its eyes and ears are very cute
Its four legs have some sharp slams by which it can easily hill the rats
Pronoun Concord
- - Pronoun
Concord Its whole body is cover with soft fur Its eyes and ears are very cute
Its four legs have some sharp slams by which it can easily hill the rats Total : 3 Total : - Total : - Total : -
2. DNA Subject-verb Concord Elephant is my favorite animal They live in Way Kambas They like play with me The elephant is big He has long tail
The elephant has four legs The elephant is friendly animals
Subject-verb Concord He eat grass The elephant like playing
Elephant is my favorite animal They live in Way Kambas They like play with me The elephant is big
He has long tail
The elephant has four legs The elephant is friendly animals I like the elephant
He eat grass The elephant like playing
Subject-verb Concord He eats grass The elephant likes playing
He eats grass The elephant likes playing
I like the elephant
Total : 8 Total : 2 Total : 8 Total : 2 Pronoun
Concord -
Pronoun Concord Her colour is grey
Her ears is wide
- - Pronoun
Concord His colour is grey
His ears are wide
-
Total : - Total : 2 Total : - Total : - 3. DER Subject-verb
concord I have older sister
The name is Arista Sari I usually call sari
She is too short
She loves cream colour I love my sister
Subject-verb concord She have chubby cheeks She have white skin
I have older sister
The name is Arista Sari I usually call sari
She is too short
She loves cream colour I love my sister
She have chubby cheeks She have white skin
Subject-verb concord
She has
chubby cheeks She has white skin
She has chubby cheeks She has white skin
Total : 6 Total : 2 Total : 6 Total : 2 Pronoun
Concord
Pronoun Concord His have a body smaller than me His eyes are brown colour His hair is curly
- - Pronoun
Concord She has a body smaller than me Her eyes are brown colour Her hair is curly
-
Total : - Total : 3 Total : - Total : - Concord
with Coordinate Subject My sister and I like to find culinary food
Concord with Coordinate Subject
- - - -
Total : 1 Total : - Total : - Total : - 4. ENS Subject-verb
Concord I have a persian cat as my pet He is so cute He has white fur, very thick, and soft fur.
Subject-verb Concord
He like
playing with me
He like going up to the window
I have a persian cat as my pet He is so cute He has white
fur, very thick, and soft fur.
He like
playing with me
He like going up to the window
Subject-verb Concord He likes playing with me
He likes going up to the window
He likes playing with me
He likes going up to the window
Total : 3 Total : 2 Total : 3 Total : 2
Pronoun Pronoun - - Pronoun -
Concord His face is round His tail is very long
Concord I love stroking her body to sleep
Concord I love stroking his body to sleep
Total : 2 Total : 1 Total : - Total : - 5. FEYE Subject-verb
Concord I have a black and white dog They often play in the room
He likes to eat meat He has long and soft fur
Subject-verb Concord He is male and female
I have a black and white dog They often play in the room
He likes to eat meat
He has long and soft fur
He is male and female
Subject-verb Concord They are male and female
They are male and female
Total : 4 Total : 1 Total : 4 Total : 1 Pronoun
Concord Every heart I stroked his fur
Pronoun Concord
- - - -
Total : 1 Total : - Total : - Total : - 6. GR Subject-verb
Concord I have a cat It so like eat fish asin My cat hair is so nice My favorite cat sleep
Subject-verb Concord My cat white colour
My cat very beautiful My cat eyes blue colour
I have a cat It so like eat fish asin My cat hair is so nice My favorite cat sleep
My cat white colour
My cat very beautiful My cat eyes blue colour
Subject-verb Concord My cat is white colour My cat is very beautiful My cat eyes are blue colour
My cat is white colour My cat is very
beautiful My cat eyes are blue colour Total : 4 Total : 3 Total : 4 Total : 3
7. IH Subject-verb Concord Joko Widodo
is the
precident of Indonesia His wife is Iriana He is tall
Subject-verb Concord He come from Solo
He have three child
He have thin body
Joko Widodo very friendly to everyone
Joko Widodo
is the
precident of Indonesia His wife is Iriana
He is tall
He come from Solo
He have three child
He have thin body
Joko Widodo very friendly to everyone
Subject-verb Concord He comes from Solo He has three child
He has thin body
Joko Widodo
is very
friendly to everyone
He comes from Solo He has three child He has thin body Joko
Widodo is very friendly to everyone Total : 3 Total : 3 Total : 3 Total : 3
Pronoun Concord His wife is Iriana His nose is sharp His eyes is slanted like
Pronoun Concord His skin black His smile very sweet
- - Pronoun
Concord His skin is black
His smile is very sweet
chinese
Total : 3 Total : 2 Total : - Total : - Concord
with Group Noun Many people like Joko Widodo because he is simple person.
Concord with Group Noun -
- - - -
Total : 1 Total : - Total : - Total : - 8. NR Subject-verb
Concord I have a cute cat
I call him momo
Momo is
lazy cat He loves to sleep
Momo has a predominantl y white fur, with a short black tail Momo also has soft and warm fur
Subject-verb Concord -
I have a cute cat
I call him momo
Momo is lazy cat
He loves to sleep
Momo has a predominantly white fur, with a short black tail
Momo also has soft and warm fur
- - -
Total : 6 Total : - Total : 6 Total : - Pronoun
Concord I call him momo Although
Momo is
lazy cat, but he always runs
impatiently to his food when I bring him food He likes every meal I gave him Him eyes are beautiful
Pronoun Concord
- -
Total : 5 Total : - Total : - Total : - 9. RHT Subject-verb
Concord I have a stray cat as my pet
Subject-verb Concord He love to play with me
I have a stray cat as my pet He is really
playful
He love to play with me and the new things he
Subject-verb Concord He love to play with me
He love to play with me and the new things he
He is really playful
He has
orange and white fur His fur is so soft
He has a long tail He likes to play with it I also like to hold him in my hand
and the new things he found
He is always try to catch his tail
He has orange and white fur He has a long tail
He likes to play with it I also like to hold him in my hand
found
He is always try to catch his tail
and the new things he found
He always try to catch his tail
found He always try to catch his tail
Total : 7 Total : 2 Total : 5 Total : 2 Pronoun
Concord He has a long tail. He likes to play with it His fur is so soft
He is always try to catch his tail I also like to hold him in my hand
Pronoun Concord
- -
Total : 4 Total : - Total : - Total : - 10. SAA Subject-verb
Concord I have a fat cat in my house It is so chubby It is a female cat
She has a big and fat body
Subject-verb Concord -
I have a fat cat in my house It is so chubby It is a female cat
She has a big and fat body
- - -
Total : 4 Total : - Total : 4 Total : - Pronoun
Concord Her fur is basically white with some random black and brown spots all over her body
Her eyes are yellow and a bit dark
Pronoun Concord -
- - - -
Her nose and the part of her her inside ears are light pink
Total : 3 Total : - Total : - Total : - Concord
with Coordinate Subject Her nose and the part of her her inside ears are light pink
Concord with Coordinate Subject -
- - - -
Total : 1 Total : - Total : - Total : - 11. TDD Subject-verb
Concord He has long ears and a short tail He also has big cute red eyes
He likes to eat carrots and other vegetables
Subject-verb Concord
He has long ears and a short tail He also has big cute red eyes
He likes to eat carrots and other
vegetables
- - -
Total : 3 Total : 0 Total : 3 Total : 0 12. WP Subject-verb
Concord I have a cat It is name is Mika
It is white in color
It has lovely green and blue eyes It is very soft and furry It eats fun and drinks milk
It plays with me
Subject-verb Concord -
I have a cat It is name is Mika
It is white in color
It has lovely green and blue eyes
It is very soft and furry It eats fun and drinks milk It plays with me
- - -
Total : 7 Total : - Total : 7 Total : - Pronoun
Concord I love my cat very much and take care of it
Pronoun Concord -
- -
Total : 1 Total : - Total : - Total : -
13. YP Subject-verb Subject-verb My mother - - -
Concord My mother
name is
Marni She is kind and beautiful My mother is a housewife She takes care of the whole family, especially my older brother and I My mother is a middle aged
She is
arround 53 years old She is about 158cm tall and 65kg She has dark brown eyes and black hair
Her face is slightly rounded She also has chubby cheeks
Concord -
name is Marni She is kind and beautiful My mother is a housewife She takes care of the whole family, especially my older brother and I
My mother is a middle aged She is arround 53 years old She is about 158cm tall and 65kg
She has dark brown eyes and black hair She also has chubby cheeks
Total : 10 Total : - Total : 9 Total : - Pronoun
Concord Her skin color is well tanned Her face is slightly rounded
Pronoun Concord -
- - -
Total : 2 Total : 0 Total : 0 Total : 0 14. DE Subject-verb
Concord Its four legs have some sharp claws I give it fish, milk and rice
Subject-verb Concord -
I give it fish, milk and rice
- - -
Total : 2 Total : - Total : 1 Total : - Pronoun
Concord Its eyes and
Pronoun Concord -
- - - -
ears are very a cute Its four legs have some sharp claws
Total : 2 Total : - Total : - Total : - 15. FSSW Subject-verb
Concord She is one of
the few
nephewsI have
Jessy is seventh months old
Subject-verb Concord She have a sharp nose
She is one of
the few
nephews I have
Jessy is seventh months old
She have a sharp nose
Subject-verb Concord She has a sharp nose
She has a sharp nose
Total : 3 Total : 1 Total : 3 Total : 1 Pronoun
Concord Her name is Jessy
Her hair is black and curly
Her skin is brown
Pronoun Concord -
- - - -
Total : 3 Total : - Total : - Total : - Concord
with Group Noun One of the people I love so much is my little nephew
Concord with Group Noun -
- -
Total : 1 Total : - Total : - Total : - Total All of
Sentences : 132 sentences
Total Sentence of Subject- verb Concord : 89 sentences
Total Sentence of Concord of Person : 85 setences
- -
Total Sentence of Pronoun Concord : 41 sentences Total Sentence of Concord with Group Noun : 2 sentences
Total Sentence of Concord with Coordinate Subject : 2 sentences
The Most Frequent Type of Grammatical Concordance in Students’ Descriptive Writing
No. The Most Frequent Type of Grammatical Concordance Analyzedin Students’ Descriptive
Writing
Frequency Percentage 1. Concord
of Number
a) Subject-verb Concord
89 sentences
67%
b) Pronoun Concord
41 sentences
41%
c) Notional Concord
- -
d) Concord with Group Noun
2 sentences 1,5%
e) Concord with Coordinate Subject
2 sentences 1,5%
f) Concord in Elliptical Construction
- -
g) Concord with Indefinite Expressions of Amount
- -
2. Concord of Person 85
sentences
64%
Interview sheet
1. What do you know about grammatical concordance in writing?
2. In the process of writing, do you use grammatical concordance?
3. What are the types of grammatical concordance in writing?
4. What type of grammatical concordance do you often use in writing?
5. Why do you use that type?
Audio script of interview with the students, as follow:
Name of Student : Eka Ningtyas Safitri
1. What do you know about grammatical concordance in writing?
Answer : No, I do not know
2. In the process of writing, do you use grammatical concordance?
Answer : Yes, I use
3. What are the types of grammatical concordance in writing?
Answer : I do not know the types
4. What type of grammatical concordance do you often use in writing?
Answer : I usually use subject-verb concord 5. Why do you use that type?
Answer : I usually use subject-verb concord because I just understand this type so I feel confident in use this type, and this type often use by teacher when learning English in the class.
Name of Student : Desta Evi Rozana
1. What do you know about grammatical concordance in writing?
Answer : No, I do not know
2. In the process of writing, do you use grammatical concordance?
Answer : Yes, I use
3. What are the types of grammatical concordance in writing?
Answer : I do not know the types
4. What type of grammatical concordance do you often use in writing?
Answer : I often use subject-verb concord 5. Why do you use that type?
Answer : I use subject-verb concord because the teacher often use this type when explains the material in the class, the teacher often give examples of this type, so it is easy for me to understand this type.