b. The lecturer should develop teaching strategy, so the motivation of the learner to study English will always increase. The uses of various strategies are suggested to make the student more interesting.
c. The lecturer should be selective in indicating the errors, find the solution, and create a remedial teaching which is free from the previous erroneous.
2. The Further Researcher
a. The further researcher should be selective in indicating the errors which made by students.
b. The further researcher should be selective to differentiate between error and mistake in indicating the errors.
3. The students:
a. The student should develop their motivation because it is important in the English learning.
b. The student should study the material intensively, repeatedly and toughly.
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RESEARCH INSTRUMENT
Essay writing for the students third semester English Department Muhammadiyah University of Makassar
1. Choose one items and write down the essay with theme bellow:
a. Indonesia b. University c. Flood d. Elephant e. Computer f. Politic g. Education h. Bali
i. Danger of Smoking j. Drugs
k. HIV-AIDS l. Gold m. Tsunami
n. Mobile Technology o. Health
Name: Abd Latif Nim : 105351108618 Class : BG3A
Subject : essay writing
The Introduction Of Indonesia Tourism Essay
Indonesia have five big island java, sumatra, kalimantan, sulawesi and papua.
consists of 32 provinces and each province has special attractions to attract the visitors, and this are the explanation of three major tourist destinations in Indonesia:
Jakarta is the capital city of the Republic of Indonesia, a country composed of more than 13,000 islands with a population of over 180 million.
People who come to Jakarta usually want to enjoy the luxurious city life. Jakarta provides many great shopping malls, bars, luxury restaurants and best service hotels. Jakarta also offers historical tourism for the visitors such as likeTaman Ismail Marzuki Art Center, Jakarta 1945 Museum, Keong Mas, Sunda Kelapa Harbour, National Museum, Ancient Inscription Museum, and Jakarta History Museum.
Bali With a reputation as being one of the most beautiful and diverse spots in Asia, Bali attracts almost 1,000,000 visitors a year, from all around the world.
Bali offers many attractions for the visitors to make them come again and again.
First is from the adventure tourism in Bali such as like Grajagan, Uluwatu, river kayaking, and rafting activities. For the religion destinations, Bali has Pura Luhur Temple, Gajah Cave, Besakih Temple, and Tanah Lot Temple. Bali also has many cultural attractions such as The Dramatic of Kecak Dance, Ngaben, and Barong Dance.
Yogyakarta is famous for its culture. Visitors usually come to Yogyakarta to see and enjoy its cultural tourism such as likeSonobudoyo Museum, Imogiri, Ngayogyakarta Hadiningrat Palace The Kraton, Kalasan Temple, and Prambanan Temple.
Nama : Irma Fitriani NIM : 105351102620 Kelas : BG3A
Narcotics Are Dangerous for Everyone
Narcotics are natural, synthetic, or semi-synthetic substances or drugs where cause decreased consciousness, hallucinations, and excitability.drug is kind of medicine where can influence psychology condition(mind, feel, and behavior) Which of course in every use under the supervision of a doctor. But not infrequently also some people use this substance to reap profits without thinking about the negative effects of excessive use. The circulation and impact of drugs today is very troubling. The ease of obtaining these hazardous materials makes its users increase. Regardless of gender and age, everyone is at risk if they have committed this dangerous act. But the ones who are most at risk of being entangled in drug shackles are teenagers because at this age the curiosity and desire to try something new is very large.
Drug trafficking is like mushrooms in the rainy season. Not only entertainment places, now it has spread in residential areas, even to schools. The impact where occurs when the drug is used continuously or exceeds the prescribed dose will result in dependence. This addiction will result in physical and psychological disorders, due to damage to the central nervous system and organs such as the heart, lungs, liver and kidneys. The impact of drugs on a person depends on the type of drug used, the personality of the user and the situation or condition of the user. In general, drug addiction can be seen from the physical, psychological and social aspects of a person.
Motivation in substances and drugs turns out to be related to individual circumstances involving emotional, mental-intellectual, interpersonal and physical factors. In addition, there are factors that have a close relationship with other conditions of drugs, namely socio-cultural which causes great pressure on adolescents, for example rapid technological changes, increasing values and religious systems and moral standards, the influence of mass media, poor economic conditions, divisions in society. family, and so on. But there are several ways to avoid it, including looking for information about the dangers of drugs, having a strong determination to avoid drugs, having goals in life so that you will have direction, do positive activities that can help you become more independent, confident, and channeling hobbies and achievements, cognitive approaches from parents, schools, and teachers.
Name : Rahmatullah
NIM : 105351101920
Class : BG3A
Music can affect people‟s mood
Mood is a psychological disorder where fluctuates, sometimes happy, sometimes irritated or otherwise for no known reason. And listening to music is one way to reduce these psychological disorders. People who listen to music will have a strong mentality, calm emotions, live more comfortably and relaxed and make their lives more confident. Music can affect the reduction of depression in everyone. When a person's mind is confused or bored, listening to music also even for a moment is proven to be able to calm and refresh the mind. So that it can make you feel excited and all activities can be done. So I believe the music we listen to, can affect the moods of people.
The first reason, music can make a person calm when he gets into trouble. This is evidenced by the experiment of researchers examining people who listen to music proven to be able to slow down the pulse or heart rate. When you are at your lowest point, someone must have their own way to stay okay, one of them is by listening to music.
Music can help a person release fatigue after a day of activities so that the risk of stress can be avoided. Most people are not aware of the importance of keeping the mind away from excessive anxiety. Some even let their anxiety continue to make them depressed themselves. This can increase the risk of health problems. Music genres that are suitable to overcome this are music genres that are slow and calm, such as the indie genre and the classic genre. When we feel uneasy and anxious, we are not only listening to music to calm ourselves, we can also sing along to the music to increase the positive effect because we can share emotions, feelings, and empathy.
The second reason, listening to music can increase enthusiasm at work. A number of studies have shown where doing work while listening to music actually produces many benefits. Especially if you listen to songs that have a spirit theme, of course, it will affect a person's psychology with genres that can make you more enthusiastic such as like pop music, hip-hop, or genres that have a happy tempo. Having a feeling of enthusiasm will make work or activities more productive. Because in fact, one of the causes of a person's declining performance is the loss of our enthusiasm for work. One solution to increase enthusiasm and will be more motivated to work is by listening to music.
The point is, music can improve someone's mood. Different genres of music are suitable for influencing one's mood. Slow-paced genres such as Hindi and classic are suitable for calming someone. while the fast-paced or cheerful genres such as pop and hip-hop are suitable to make someone enthusiastic at work.
Name:Andi Raju
Class: BG3A/105351108918
Tsunami
In Indonesia, we are already familiar with the word “Tsunami”. This natural disaster once struck and claimed thousands of lives where occurred in Banda Aceh several years ago. Indonesia is grieving, world is grieving. Then, what is the process for the tsunami?
The following is a brief explanation of the Tsunami process.
Tsunamis can occur when a phenomenon occurs that causes the displacement of large amounts of water in the ocean, such as volcanic eruptions, earthquakes, landslides and meteors that fall to earth. However, 90% of the causes of tsunamis are the result of underwater earthquakes.
Vertical movements that occur in the earth’s crust at the bottom of the ocean cause the seabed to be up or down suddenly, resulting in disruption of water balance above it. The disturbance resulted in a very large flow of sea water energy, which when they arrived at the beach, they became a large wave that caused a tsunami.
Name : Nurfadilah NIM : 105351108018 Class : BG3A
Essay Writing
Tsunami
In Indonesia, we are very familiar with the word " Tsunami ". This natural disaster has ever killed thousands of lives in Banda Aceh a few years ago. Indonesia mourned, the world mourned. Then, how the Tsunami happens? Here is a brief explanation of the process of how the Asian tsunami happens.
Tsunamis can occur if there is a phenomenon which causes the displacement of large amounts of water in the ocean, volcanic eruptions, earthquakes, landslides, and meteors that fall to Earth. However 90% of tsunamis is the result of underwater earthquakes.
Vertical movement in the Earth's crust in the bottom of the ocean causes a sudden up or down movement of sea floor which then causes the water balance disorders above it.
This disturbance causes the occurrence of the flow of the massive sea water energy, that once it reaches the shore, it becomes huge waves resulting Tsunami.
Name : Nur Imama Mediana Nim : 105351102120
Class : BG3A
Mata Kuliah : Essay Writing
Drugs are still circulating in Indonesia
There is still a lot of drugs circulating in Indonesia, not only ordinary people, but a lot of drug users, where on TV, a lot of news about drugs,where artists get arrested for doing drugs. In Indonesia, there is still a lot of drug trafficking where can damage generations.
Because many who distribute drugs, young people become victims where they use drugs.
Drugs are still high in the age of drugs, marijuana etc., and there are kids who take drugs using fox glue where they abuse glue for other things. Indonesia‟s drug emergency police, Even though have been monitoring the progress of the drug.
Drugs are a big threat to the young generation of the Indonesian. For example Seen fromany side, drugs are illegal goods that are very detrimental both in terms of
physical and mental health.
Some students consider taking drugs a trend and those who are reluctant to use them are considered out of date. This kind of wrong mindset needs to be changed.There needs to be an effort to make our children aware of the dangers of drugs and reverse their mindset about drugs themselves. For those who initially thought drugs were cool,become a mindset that considers drugs to be primitive. Taking drugs is actually a stupid behavior, not the behavior of
intelligent people. Slogans that campaign for the dangers of drugs are one solution that is considered effective in touching students and young people. Examples such as "Drugs are not cool", "Drugs are primitive", "Cool is achievement, not pocket to death", and others.
Let's promote the anti-drug movement, for a healthy, smart generation.
Summary
between the ages of 11 and 24. It means that it is either the productive age or the student age. Initially, students who take drugs usually start with their introduction with cigarettes.
Since smoking seems to have become a normal practice among current students. From this habit, associations continue to increase, especially when the student joins a group of people who are already drug addicts. First try, then become dependent.
NAME : ROSNANI NIM. :195351100520 CLASS : BG3A BUSINESS ONLINE
Online business is a business where is run via internet using a cellphone or laptop. For example Online business is an easier and faster job. So that many people in Indonesia and even abroad are doing or running an online business. In particular, students from Indonesia take advantage of this online business to earn their own income to pay for college. Tuition fees are one of the problems for a student. So he should be able to earn on his own.
The benefit of an online business is that it tries to trap students to earn more money, and can increase the creative ability of editing Promotional Brochures.
The first thing to learn from online business is where students earn more money. A student takes advantage of online business by selling many things such as clothes, food, and selling beauty products. Not only that, in the online business world, students can also sell materials that are needed by students in the form of ebooks. The clothes that are sold are usually clothes that are often worn by students to campus for college and so on. In addition, the food sold by a student is food that is not so difficult to make and can last a long time. Usually the food is in the form of snacks. for the beauty products that are sold, sometimes they are bought at shopy first and then resold at a different price. It could also be that the beauty products sold are products taken from the store.
The second thing that a student gets from an online business is that it can increase creativity in terms of editing. Learning ability can increase day by day. Because online business competition will always exist. So that a student will always learn or look for new ideas so that the promotion of goods sold can attract the attention of consumers. The ability that can be developed is editing in making online brochures. Making online brochures is not easy because it requires deep understanding and creativity in its manufacture. A student will look for information on how to make an attractive brochure on you tube. Making brochures is not just one time. However it will be changed from time to time so that consumers don't get tired of seeing the same brochure over and over again. Students' creativity will be formed by themselves because of the many things they learn.
In conclusion, there are many things that are the benefits of online business for students. because online business opens up many business opportunities for students who want to earn while studying. There are many things that can be sold in an online business.
Name : By : Nasrudin Class : BG.3A
Online learning
online learning is a distance learning method using a network. For example online learning is a solution during the covid-19 pandemic as it is now. Since its appearance in 2019, this virus has affected almost all aspects of human life, including education. The learning process that used to be offline, now has to be switched to online. Online learning is considered to be the right solution during this pandemic because it prevents the spread of the Corona virus among students. Of course the transition to learning variations is not as easy as turning the palm of the hand,, many problems are experienced by students because of online learning. Therefore, I believe that online learning is not effective because of three reason.
The first reason is bad network. when the network is bad then of course it can interfere with the online learning process. Why did it happen? as we all know that online learning uses a network, when the network is bad then it can interfere with the online learning process. good and bad networks determine the smoothness of online learning, but there are still areas in Indonesia today with inadequate networks so that the application of online learning is not the right solution for education in Indonesia. If this is implemented, it is feared that it will create gaps between students, especially between students in cities and in remote areas. the quality of the network will be important in online learning because the quality of the network will be a benchmark for understanding whether or not a student understands the material presented by their teacher.
The second reason is that online learning makes students bored and stressed. we all know that online learning is through a network and can be done at home. when they want to go to college they don't have to go to campus but can be done at home, although online learning makes it easy for students because,. In fact, this will create problems for students because activities that are carried out repeatedly will cause bored. every day they have to look at their cellphones when carrying out the learning process and they cannot meet their friends directly. In addition, a lot of assignments will make the situation worse, students will feel stressed and can interfere with their education. they may decide to drop out of college because of this situation.