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Accident inMedan

(StephanieJoice)

A 16yearoldPadangBulanmanwaskilled thismorningwhenhiscar

collidedwithanempty schoolbutatMarindalstreet.Thefirst,typeofdriverthatI

findannoyingarethespeeders,that’swhy thatPadangBulanman,namedRiowanto

diedat7p.m.atPirngadiHospital,wherehehadbeentakenfollowingtheAccident.

Iwasshockbythebadnewsyesterdaybecauseofmanypeopleareinjureinroad

accidenteveryday.

A passengerinRiowanto’scar,Darwin,16,wasinjured.Heisinsatisfactory

conditionatthehospital.Also injuredwas RuthLiana,42.Thewas hurtafter

Riowanto’scarskiddedintohers.Policehasaskedmany peoplearoundtokeepthe

proveabouttheaccident,includeme.IjustarrivedandIsawbadboysarebeing

questionbythepoliceofficer,whilehe alreadyfinishaskedherunawaylikeinrush. WhenI

can’tkeepmyeyesofftheaccident,mybikewasstoleinthataccident.I run to police and

Isaid itwasthebad boysstole mine.

Policerun to find outthatbad boys.Iasked to calmdown atpolicestation,

finallyafter hours, theyfound them. Iwasveryangryto him, outhewastremblingin rage

and said itwasn’thim. Hekepthis words, butI’msurehe is. Thepolice took

out thegun and hewas startingfreakingand said thatmybikewasin hisfriend house.

Hepromised willgivemybike atthepolicestation in frontofall tomorrow, so I will

meethimon 12 p.m. tomorrow.Well theaccidentseems wason me, notthe car accident

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OurVacation

(Sarah Israilia)

I wenttoWaltDisneyinOrlando,Floridawithmyfamily.Itwasmyfavorite

vacationbecauseIspenttimewithmy family.Wereachedattheairporton09.00pm

becausewearebusy atall.Weplannedtogotoairportearlier.Afterwearrived,we

atedinnerandfeltasleep.Afterhours,I realizeditwasalready morning,wemissed

theplaneandonedayvacation.“Whatisthetimeinyourwatch?”,my dadsaid.It

was08.00am, so wedecide traveled bytrain.

Nevermind,becauseIhavetoarrivedtoWaltDisneythisvacation.About

09.30am,wearrivedinFloridaandwecurrentlystayingatHotelforcoupleofdays.

IrealizedthatIhavetospentmy timeinthisvacationbecausethisismy firsttime sawFlorida

and things.

Theday beforewewenthome,wedecidedtoplayedtoWaltDisney.Sowe

spentlotstimetorelax,visitedmany buildingandboughtstuff.Iwentonattractions

inthethemepark andIhad lotsoffun.Therewerehundreds ofpeopleon thepark,

whilesome arereading book,feeding birds,listening music,playinggamewith pets,

andsoon.Itwassunsetandwewentbacktohotel,wentdinnershowcalled Jolly

Holidayathotel.

Inthesecondday atFlorida,Iandmydadwentandspenttimetosawa baseballgame.

Wewentbyrides with rental motorcycle. Wereallyenjoyed thegame

untilweforgottoatelunch.Webacktohotelandfoundmy momandsisterwereslept almost

alldaylong.

Atlastdayourvacation,allofussawdifferentDisneycharactersatthe

themeparks.Wesplitbyourselves,whereItookapicturewithsomedifferent Disney

characters,likeCinderella,TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles,IronMan,and many.I forgot

mytime,sowhendaywentdark,I waspanic,I phoned myfamilybut neithermymother

andmysister return their phonecalls. Iwascryingand circleback

againandagaintofindoneofthem.FinallyImetmy dad,sister,andmymomweresittingto

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MySchool

(NoviSinaga)

Eachstudentdefinitelyhasaplacetolearn,anywhereintheworldwhose

namestudentsneedaplace thatwasyes,yes!Thatplace iscallschool.

MyschoolissituatedinasuperlocationintheeliteareaofMedan.My school has a lot

of ground that is quite nice and well maintained including a

basketballcourt,futsalfield,sportstadiumforswimming, and tennis courts badmintonand

muchmore.

Atmyschoolmoststudentsarechildrenoftherich,especially fromtheclass

ofbusinessandofficials.Inaddition,theyarealsosmart.Saraistheonly oneofthe

studentswhoalwaysanswercorrectly.Many teacherloveher.Sheisthebeautifulest girl in

myclass. Shehasmanyfriendin theschool.

Inmyschoolalsohavetwinsbuteachtimeshavesomeunusualhabits.InJuly,wehave

examination.Theteacheraswellasherstudiesthatpracticemakes

perfect.Asstudentwehaveresponsibility forourtask.Attaskpreparingforthe report,

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MyCat Zedva

(PinceSitanggang)

Zedvaismy beautifulgray Persiancat.Hewalkswithprideandgrace,

performingadanceofdisdainasheslowly liftsandlowerseachpawwiththe

delicacyofaballetdancer.Hispride,however,doesnotextendtohisappearance, for

hespendsmostof histime indoors watchingtelevision and growingfat.

HeenjoysmovieinTelevision,especially chanelthoseforvichaneland

cinemas24.almosteverydayofmycatzedvaAlwayswatchtelevision,afterthe feed and

Sometimesheatewhilewatchingtelevision.

Zedvaisasfinickyaboutvisitorsasheisaboutwhatheeats,befriending

someandrepellingothers.Hemay snuggleupagainstyourankle,beggingtobe

petted,orhemay imitateaskunkandstainyourfavoritetrousers.Zedvadoesnotdo

thistoestablishhisterritory,asmany catexpertsthink,buttohumiliatemebecause he

isjealousof myfriends.

Aftermy guestshavefled,I lookat theoldfleabag snoozing andsmiling to himself

in frontof the television set, and Ihave to forgivehimfor hisobnoxious, but endearing,

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MyBest Friend

(HaryadiSyahputra)

My bestfriendisErnestoandheismy

classmate.Wegotoschooltogether.Ernestocomes fromaneducatedfamily.His fatheris

aschoolprincipalandhis mother isalso a teacher.

Heispunctual,well-educated,andhasgoodmanners.Heisreally hard

working.Healways does his homework.Heis alsowell-dressedandwell-behaved. All

teachershaveahigh opinion of him.

Ernestohasawell-builtbody.Heisgentlebutfearless.Hetakespartin all

sports,scout,trekkingandmountaineeringactivities.Hehas agoodheart.Heis truthful,

honestand obedient.

Healsoplaystheguitar,andhemakeshisparentsveryproudofhim.He

securesgoodmarksandisusuallytopofhisclassinexaminations.Heinspiresme to

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Bukit Lawang

(Alvin Ratuliu)

BukitLawangisreferredtoasthegateway toSumatraForest.Whenyou

explorethisjungle,thenyouwillfeelatruly amazingexperience.Itisahillthathas

aslipperyfieldandmuddyslopes.ThejourneythroughtheBukitLawangwillbe thrillingand

unforgettable.

Whenyou’veenteredBukitLawang, thenyouwillgetto theforests of

Sumatra.Thisdenseforestisthemainattractionthatisindemandby bothdomestic

andforeigntourists.Whatistheattraction? Orangutanisaspeciesthatisable tobe a

magnetfortourists.Youcaneasilyseeorangutanswingingintheforest,andthere

areatleast5000species whichbelongstothebiggestorangutanconservationin Indonesia.

Theconservationhas beenoperatedsince1973 anduntilnow, ithas attracted

alotoftourists aroundtheworld.Nevertheless,thenumberoforangutaninthewild

continuestodeclineovertimeduetothehuntingdoneby peoplewhodonothavea

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Sembilang National Park

(Jemario MestikaG.)

Sembilang nationalpark isawetland thathasawiderangeofforest

ecosystems.Inthisnationalpark, thereareatleastfourdistinctecosystemsinclude

peatswamps, mangroveforests, freshwater swamps, and mud land. Administratively,

thisisanareathatbecamepartofthedistrictBanyuasinandhasbeennamedasa nationalpark

since19 March 2003.

ThisareaiscalledtheSembilangbecausetherearesomanySembilangfish

orplotosus canius called inLatin.InBanyuasinpeninsula, thereis theeastcoastof

SouthSumatraandthisistheriverwhichisreally suitableforwaterbirds.Wetsoil

conditionsandborderedbymangroveforestaretheperfectlocationfortheworm

likemolluscs,andcrustaceans.Thatiswhytherearemanywaterbirdslivingin there.

Somebirdspecies includetheKuntulCina(EgrettaEulophotes),Trinil

Lumpur-Asia(LimnodromusSemipalmatus),danPedendang Topeng (Heliopais Personata).They

aresomekindof30birdsmigratingfromtheirmainhabitat.Those

birdsliveintheBanyuasinpeninsulainorderto avoidthewinter at their main location in

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Tanjung Setia Beach

(Margaretha)

Thebeachisprobably youdon’tknow, butthewaveonthebeachinTanjung

Setiaarereferredasoneofthebestwavesintheworld by internationalsurfers.You need to

knowthat thewaveon thisbeachisequalwith thewavesin Hawaii.

Ifyouwanttovisit,youhavetotravelinabout273kmoratleast6hours

fromthecityofBandarLampung.ThisbeachislocatedinthevillageofTanjung

SetiaWestLampung,anddirectlyadjacenttotheIndianOceansothisincredible

placehasasuchgreatwave.Nevertheless,despitethisbeachhaswaveswithheight up to 7

meters, but itisnotpopularlyknown asabeach in Bali andLombok.

WhenyouarriveatTanjungSetia,thenyouwillseeavery longbeachwith

blueseaandbigwaves.Attheshore,therearemanylodgingsoyoudonotneedto

beconfusedtostay ifyouwantto.Infact,therearemany foreignerswhoaresurfers from

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Benefitsof Dieting

(AyuPandiniL.)

Dietingissomethingthatisfearedbyall.Youcanfitintothatbathingsuit,

butsacrificesthelastpieceofcheesecake.Iknowexactlyhowyoufeeladietnot only

thin,butis.It’salsoabouthealthier.Thereareseveralwaysthatapersoncan

benefitfromadiet.Canreducetheriskofdisease.Ahealthy dietcanincrease

endurance.Itcanalsohelpyouroverallmentalhealth.Forthisreason,ahealthy diet

isverybeneficial.IfIstartadiet,youshouldkeepinmindwhatyou’reavoiding.

Obesityputsyoumoreatriskfordiabetes,heartattack,highcholesterol,andhigh

bloodpressure.Diabetescan makeyouloseyourlegs,ifnotprevented.Heartattacks

orstrokescausedbyhighcholesterollevelsandhighbloodpressure.Shewouldbe

theprevention of thesediseases with aproper diet.

Anotheradvantageofpropernutritionisendurance.Ahealthy dietcan

toleranceandincreaseinstrength.You’llseethatyoucanmoreeasily engagewitha healthy

diet.Fatigueandshortnessofbreatharelesslikely duringtheexercise.

Flexibilityincreasewith exercise and proper nutrition. Ahealthydiet isbeneficialfor

your endurance.

Finally, dietingbenefits willhelpyour stateofmind.Aproperdietisa healthier

body,causing moreconfidence. Ifyouformare mostproud whoyouare.

Youwillfind,areyouhappierand muchmore,thenwho.Ahealthierbody givesyou

ahealthierattitude.

Healthy eatingisnotjustaboutweightloss.Therefore,healthierandless likely

toreceiveweightitssimilardiseases.Aproperdietgivesyoumorephysical

resistance.So,youcancontinuewithyourchildren.She isalsoahealthierstate of

mind.Youwillbemoreconfidentandbehappy whenyou’rehealthy.Sobeneficial,

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Memoriesof MyChilhoodDays

(AyuImelda)

MyfirstrecollectionofmychildhoodisthedayItoppleddownthestairs

whenIwasthreeyearsold.I wassoupsetthatI criedandcriedfornearlyanhourin spiteof

myparents'attemptsat comfortingme.Finally,I quietened down when I was given

ice-creamand chocolates.Luckily,I wasnothurt.

My dayswerehappy onesbeforeIstartedgoingtoschool,asIhadgood

neighbourstoplay withfrommorningtillevening.Weplayedgamesoutdoors, dressed as

cowboys andRedIndians androdeaboutonour tricycles happily. There were also other

gamesto occupyour time.

Attheageoffiveyears,Ihad to attendkindergarten and this turnedouttobe

quiteanordealforme.Tobeginwith,I feltvery sadhavingtoleavemy motherand

gooffeachmorningtobeamongststrangers.Icriedandwantedmy motheraround,

muchtomy teacher'sdispleasure.Asthedayswentby,however,Imadefriends easilyin

classand found company. I becamehappyagain and actuallylooked forward to

leavingthehouse each morning.

IstillrememberthosedayswhenIwaslearning torideabicycle.I felland

bruisedmyselfseveraltimesbutI nevergaveup.Finally,Iwasabletojoinmy

friendsgoingaround theneighbourhood on mybike.

Anotherfondmemoryistheend-of-yearconcertheldatthekindergarten.I

waschosentoplaytheroleofJackintheplay,'JackandtheBeanstalk',andI

becameacelebrityovernightreceivinglotsof complimentsfor myperformance.

InowrealisewhatawonderfulchildhoodIhavehadandattimeswishI

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IndonesianFood

(FrengkySinuhaji)

MostIndonesianseatrice asthe maindish forbreakfast,lunch, anddinner.In

factsomeIndonesiansfeelthey don'teatamealunlessitisrice.Thereisajokethat says,even

ifyou have eaten a loaf of bread, youarestillhungry.It'sgottaberice!

OtherIndonesiansarefinewithbreadornoodles.ForthoseIndonesianswhohave been

abroad,they gotused havingbreakfastwith bread.

Indonesians eatricealot.Lunch,for example,you'llseepeoplewithaplate

fullwithriceandapieceofchicken,orfish,oreggs and"sambal" (chilliesouce).

Indonesiansliketoeathot(asinspicy)food.ImeanreallyreallyreallyHOT.I would sayit

ishotter than Mexican food. Even weput chillie in pizza!!!(It'swierd to

me.Butthenagain,I amthewierdone... I cannoteatspicy/hotfood!.)Ifyouorder

food,makesureyousay nochilly ornospicy.Otherwise,thedefaultisHOT! There was

afriendfromNetherlandwho thinkthathecanhandlehotfood.(TheDutchlike

spicyfoodtoo.)Boy,hewaswrong.Hespenttwodaysinhishoteltorecoverthe stomachache.

EachareainIndonesiahasitsowntraditionalfoodandcustom.Hereisalist of someof

them.

• Sundanese("orangSunda")inWestJavalikestoeatfreshvegetablesand sambal.

Thereis ajokethatsaysyoucanleavethemin thegardenand they willbe

fine.Sundanese like todrinktea withoutsugar.Sodon'tbesurprised when

theyofferyou teabutnotsweat. Ask for sugar.

• Javanese likesto eatsweet.Teawillbesweet.

• Padang (WestSumatra)likestoeathot/spicyfood.They arefamousfortheir spicy

foodandfastdelivery.Thewaitercanbringdozensofplateswith various dishes

withhis twohands(likejuggling) inonetrip.You'lleat

whateveryoulikeandattheendofmeal thewaiterwill calculatetheprice.

You'llfind"RumahMakanPadang" (Padangrestaurant)everywherein Indonesia.

We think that theremustbeaPadangrestaurantonthe moon.

Mostoftheabovefoodareavailablefromrestaurants.Theyarecheapcomparedto western

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What isthe Meaning of Love

(PutriPratiwi)

Loveiscompleteacceptance:Whenweallowsomeonetobeexactlyastheyare,

withoutanybeliefthattheyaren’tgoodenough,withoutanybeliefthattheywould be

“better” if theyweredifferent,thisislove.

Loveiscompletelyunconditional:Lovehasnoconditions.Whenwetruly love

someone,wecan’tstoplovingthem,regardlessofwhatthey doorsay.Ifourloveis

dependentupontheotherpersonactingandspeakinghowwewant,thenthis loveis

completely conditional.Weoftenconfusethistobelove,butthisisjustpositive

thoughtsaboutsomeone.Thisisjust lovingwhatapersonsaysordoes,notloving them.

Positive thoughts or the thought “I love you” isn’t necessary to love. Sometimesit

even getsin theway.

Loveisselfless:Truelovedoesn’twantanythinginreturn,becausethereisnothing itneeds.

We just lovefor thesakeof love. When we lovesomeone, wedon’t look for

themtofillourneeds,loveusback,andallthosetypesofthings.Ifthatiswhatwe are looking

for,then we are justusing theotherperson.Whatisthe meaning oflove? Love

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Family

(SautSimorangkir)

MynameisSaut.IwasbornatMedan.Ihaveagreatfamily.Ihavetwo

brothersandonesister.oneofmybrothersbwereinAtlantalastweekend.Yesterday,

aletterwaswroteby my sister.Shelikeswriting andreading.Shealwaysreads

newspaperatthemorning.Shedoesn’tlikewatchingTVsoshecontinuetoread,

besidesbeingmore informed about theworld. She also spend her timeprofitablytoo.

WhileIamgoodindrawingaportraitandIamnotinterestedingambling.Myotherhob

byisplayingcrickettoobutIhaveplayedcricketsincealongtime.

WhenIhaveleisuretimeIwatchTVinmy roomandsometimestherewasan

interestingshowat TV.

My roomismorebrightthanmy sisterroom.I alsohaverefrigeratorinmy

room.Insidemy refrigeratorisacanofDietPepsiandanoldEnglishMuffin.Inmy

window’sroomIcan see thereisalotof treeson our block.

Today either my mother or my father is coming to the meeting, and

sometimesI don’thavetimetosharemy problemwiththem.I feelnobodyknowthe

troubleI’veseen.ButasIgrowupIreleasethey releasepressureandteachusskills

ofsurvivinginyhisthroughlife.Also,they provideentertainmentandpleasureand help

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Modern Airports

(Ryan Syahputra)

Therearemany transportation’sfacilitiesthatavailableinourenvironment.

Oneofthefacilitiesisairport.Theterminalisthelargestbuilding atanairport.All

passengersmustpassthought itwhen theystartor end their trip.

Inairportwefindplanthatallowsmanyaircraftparknexttothebuilding.

However,itcreateslongwalkingdistanceforpassengersbutwecanusebusfrom airport to

get in aplan. If busesareuse, thepassengersmust climb aflightof stairsto

boardtheaircraft.Ifmobileloungesareuse,thecanlinkupdirectly withtheaircraft and

perfectpassengersfrom theweather.

Thetransporter plan employssomesystemof transportfor movepassengers

fromtheterminalbuilding oftheaircraft.Inthesatelliteplan,passengersboard

aircraftsmallterminalsthat areseparatefromthemainterminals.Inthesatelliteplan,

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Arewetoo dependentoncomputers?

(HarlintongSitumorang)

Yes, becausewerelyon themwaytoo much.

They kindoftakeoverkids'everydaylives.Kidsarealwaysplaying uneducated

gameson them. Assoon astheyget home from school, theyhead

straightforthecomputer.Wesavetoomuchimportantinformationonthemaswell.

Ifthecomputercrashes,wewillnolonger haveallof thatinformation.And,wecan't

learncursivewritinganymore.Whenkidsgrowup,they'regoingtohavejobsand

willneedtosignforthings.Theyaren'tgoingtobeabletosignforthosethings becausethey

won'tknowtheirsignature!Eventhoughcomputersarevery usefulfor allplacearound

theworld, westillshouldn'tbeso dependenton them.

Wearetoodependentoncomputerstodoeverythingforusandsoonwe

won'tbedoinganything butusing ourcomputersorcellphonestodoeverything insteadof

just trying itourselves.SoI clearlystatedyeswedependoncomputerstoo much and Ithink

weneed to takeabreak from themeveryonce in awhile.

People might think we arenotoverlydependenton computersbutwe are. We

usecomputersalotoftimestodownload games,downloading apps,andalsoforlots ofother

thingslikeusingFacebook.Whenthe computeror the internetgodown,

peoplefreakoutwhichshowsweareentirelytoodependentbecausewecan'tdo

anythingwithout computers.For exampleif wewant to paywewillpayfrom thenet,

ifwewanttobuywewillbuyfromnet.Humansaregettinglazybecauseofthis

computer.Computers aretobeused ingoodway,butsomechildrenused inwrong way.

Haveyoueverbeeninaroomwithsixpeopleandnoonewastalking?No

onewassittingupstraight,noonehadtheirheadsup,itwaskindofasulky ,sad, depressing

atmosphereright? Thatwouldbea typicalAmericanhouseholdin the

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nevereverplanongettingoffofit..Theonly thingthey wanttodoisUPGRADEit.

WhenItsat15%battery life,someonewillcry out"OH NOWHERESMY

CHARGERIGOTTA CHARGEMYPHONEITSGOING TODIE"-youseethat

justhitmerightthere.Theanxietyandfearandpanicofasmeeslylittlephoneis

goingto"Turnoff"butwesubstituted itas"ItsDEAD",which clearlymakespeople

feellikeTHEYAREDEAD.They feelliketheyarenothing,liketheyareworthless.

Whensomeonesphonedoesdiethey areinstantly sadandboredandangry andthey

complainabouthowthey'rephoneisdeadandtheywishithadbattery percentage.

Whyarethey feelingthisdownoveraphonewhenthereare10otherpeopleinthe roomthey

canconversewith?Thesayings"ICANTLIVEWITH OUTMY PHONE!"

justmindbogglesme...WeALLLIVEDONCE.WeALLLIVEDwhen

therewasn'tacellularphoneorcomputerinsight!I amsothankfultohavebeen able tolivemy

10yearsoflifetoknowing exactly whatlifewaslikewithoutacomputer orcellphone.I

rememberhaving realgenuinefeelingsandemotionstowardsothers andfor

thoserealandgenuinefeelings cameinreturn tome.Howevernow italljust feels

scripted.ThetoneandthedialoguebetweenapersonandIis always thesame.

Timehasgonepassed anditsbeenyearsofthesame conversationsonline.Who wantsto live

likethat? Whatmemoriescanyou remember onlineallday?

Therearesomany reasonwhy computersarebeingusedway toomuch,

peopleDRIVESwhileontheircomputers/cellphones.They EATatdinnerwith

theirfamilywhileontheircellphones.PeopleWATCH TVandareontheircell phonesor

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My Favorite Place

(SamuelFladynova)

My favoriteplaceisthebeach.I loveitmorethananyplaceintheworld. l

nevergettiredoflookingatthebeautiful,brightbluesea.EverytimeIfeelsad,I

drivetotheoceantoenjoy thecoolbreezeblowingagainstmyscarf,smellthefresh salty

air,andhearthesoundofwavescrashing ontheshore.Afterwards,I feellike

mytroubleshavegoneaway.MyfriendsandIalsolovetogoonpicnicsonthe beach.Webring

lotsoffoodsuchastunasandwiches,juice,andpizza.Weplay volley-ball in thesand and

when weget tired, we jump in thesea. It isalwaysa lotof fun.Many ofmy

bestmemoriesarethetimesthatIhadby thebeachinmy hometown. Iwillgo back again

oneday.

TheplacewhereIfeelmostcomfortableisaplacewhereI amcalm.A place that

ispeaceful in itsown ways.It istheplaceto go to get awayfrom all mytroubles. It

istheoneplacewhereI could sitforever, and neverget tired of juststaringinto the

deepestblueIhaveeverseen.ItistheplacewhereIcansitandthinkthebest.A

placewherenothing mattersbutwhatisinthatlittlemoment.Theoneplacecapable of

sendingmysensesinto an overload.Thisplaceistheocean.

JustasI sitdownonthesandmymindstarttounwind. The manyspectacular

sightsjumpatmy eyes.AsfarasIcanseethereisturquoisewaterinfrontofme. Surfers

wearing their bright colored suits grab their boards and head for the unknown.Light

colored sailboatsdisappear in thedistance.Lookingfarther out, I see dolphinspeakoutof

thewater.I cannothelpbutto thinkhowitwouldfeeltobeso

freeandcareless.Theirgrayishbluecolorshimmersinthefiery orangeskymaking

mefeelhappy thatIgottoseethem,evenforasplitmoment.Couplesdecoratedin

theirbeachattirebriskly paceinfrontofme.Icannothelpbuttowonderwhattheir

rushcouldbe.Childrenfeverishly dancearoundmoundsofsandthatwithinashort amountof

timewillyield the mostimpressivesandcastles.

Relaxing abit more,I become more awareof thesoundsaround me. The

seagullsseemtobetalking toeachother intheirownlanguagewhilethey skimthe

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ImportanceandBenefitsofSports

(DanielR. Siahaan)

Haveyoueverthoughtwhy peopledosports?Absolutely,many peopleseem

nottoknowthereasons.Asaanectode,thereismany peoplewhodosportsfor

nothingaroundus.Everyday wecanencounterwiththesepeople.They regularlydo

sports;however,noneofthemrealizes thebenefits andimportanceofsports.Infact,

viceversa, somepeoplewant to befit andattractive, look smart. Unfortunately, these

people can’t consider other benefitsofsports. In myopinion, there are several

benefitsofsportsthatpeopleoftendonotconsider: sportsarerequiretobehealthy people,

areneed for enjoyment, and aregreatmarketfor countries’ economies.

Thefirstadvantageofsportsforpeopleisthattheyhelppeoplebehealthy,and befit.

Throughouthistory, people can’tgiveuptheir interest at their body.I

believethatnowmany peoplelovethemselvesnomatterhowbeautifulorugly they

are.Naturally,people’sfirstaimshouldbehealthyandfitwiththebenefitsofsports.Duetothis

factthatSportskeepourbody healthy.Asapossibleexample, imagine

thatthereisacarwhichhasnotworked foryears.Ifyoutry torunthemotorengine,

itwillnotwork anymoresince ithasbeenrusted and itsengine maybebroken

down.Asaresult,peopleissimilar toenginesandmotors.Ifwedon’tdosports,wewillbe

forcedtorust,inotherwords,decompositionofourbody;afterwards,wemay have

someproblemswithourbody whenweevenneedtosmallwalk.Inaddition,sports

balanceourbody’sbloodpressureandcirculation.Accordingtomany researchs

whichhavebeendoneby scientists,wecanprovetheimportanceofsportsforour

healthbecause70%middle agedpeople whodidnotdosportsintheiryoutharenow

strugglingwith theproblems such as high tension, troublewithblood circulation,

easilybecome tired due tothelack of sports.

Thesecondadvantageofsportsforpeopleisthattheyarerequiredforour

dailylivesandcompetingattheinternationalareabecauseofenjoymentofsports.

Formanyyears,sportshavebeendonebypeople.Forexample,haveyouever

thoughtwhypeoplewanttoplay footballorothergames? Theanswermay beeasy

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maybeunfairandmakeusunhappy.However,ifthereisasportactivitywhenwe

areunhappy,wewillprobablybemotivatedandberefreshedagainafterthesport

activity.Thisshouldbethemostimportantbenefitofsportsbecausemanypeopledo

sportsforthisreason.Inaddition,haveyoueverthoughtwhy millionsofpeople

watchWorldCupmatchwithoutbreathing? Theremightbesomereasonsbehindthe

actionof watching footballmatch.Themostimportantone mightbethe excitement

andenjoymentofsport.Footballmatch isexhilating becauseitgivesuspleasureto

watch.Inthepitchandnearthepitch,therearemorethan18men,andthey arethe

representativeofoursportculture.Comfortableshoesandloosefitting clothing was

recommendedby theinvestor.Withintheexcitmentofsports,countriesareableto

competeintheinternationalarea.Duetothisfactpeoplelikesportssincethey and

theircountriesare ableto competeandbeatopponentcountriesandthisisthemost

importantreason totakepleasurefromsports.

Thefinalandleastadvantageofsportsisthattheyarethehugemarketfor

countrieseconomy.Firstofall,ifwelookatonly footballindustry.Therearemore

thanthousandprofessionalteamandatleasttheseteamhave25players.Ifthisis

calculated,thereareapproximately 25000playerswithoutworkingstaff,scouts,

coachesand managers.Thisshouldbethelargestindustry whichemploysmany

peopleinTurkey.Theplayers,aswellasthecaptain,wantstowin.They also,teach

youhowtoacceptloosingandhowtry againandagaintillachievingyourgoals.In

addition,countriesandclubshavetoestablishnewfacilitiesforsportsgame.Some

ofthemarethelargestbuildingsintheentirecountrythatrepresentcountries,for

exampleAtaturkOlympicStadiuminTurkey.Supplyingfundsforthisbuildings may

bethepublicity ofcountriessinceconstructingwelldesignedstadiumshelp country

prepareororganizebigcompetitionssuchasWorldCup,Olympics,and Tennis

Tournaments. Finally, sportsallow advertisement companies to make

publicityofstrongbrands.

Allinall,wecan concludethatthereareseveraladvantagesandbenefitsof

sports.First,sportsarerequiredbypeopletobefit,smart,and goodlooking.Second,

sportsareentertainingduetomany facts.Third,sportsarethehugemarketfor

countries’economies.Inmy opinion,despitesports’advantages,many peoplecan’t

believethatsportsareusefulandbeneficial.Ihopethatinthefuturethesepeople will tendto

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My Favorite PlaceintheWorld

(MestikaPasaribu)

Thesunshines. Thewaterglistens in thebrightlight. Thewindswirls around

me,unsettlingthehotsandbeneathmy feet.Iruntotheocean,disturbingthecalm waterasI

divein.Thewatersurroundsme,engulfing meinitswarmth.I amnowat

peace.Forrightnow,atthismoment, I amonewiththewater andthesalt andthe

sand,andeverythingisokay.Allmy problemsarewashaway withthetide.It’sjust me and

theocean.Just meand thebeach.Just meand myfavoriteplace intheworld.

I cannotdescribehowmuchtheoceanmeanstome.Thewaves,thesand,the

sun,thewater,theworlddeepbeneaththesurfacethatnohumantruly understands,

everything aboutitjustconnectswithme.Igrewupwiththeocean;itwasonthe

shoresthatItook myfirststeps, learned to swim, and grewfamiliar with all thesmall

creaturesthedwellnear theshore.No,I didn’tentirely growuponthebeach, though

IwishIhad.I’velivedsincebirth,intheChicagolandarea.However,onceayear my family

hasgatheredinabeachhouseinNorthCarolina,rightontheocean,fora weeklong reunion.I

treasuredthoseprecioussevendaysI hadwithmy familyonthe

beach,forthatisallIgot;sevendaysofpurehappiness,andthenI wentbackto my

normal,beach-lesslife.Don’tgetmewrong;I lovedgrowing upinthecity, but

somethingaboutthoseweeksatthebeachcapturedmy heartandmademeyearnfor more.

Somany ofmybestchildhoodmemoriesarecenteredontheshoresofNorth

Carolina.Surroundedbyallmyfavoritepeopleandthings,therewasneveradull

moment.Thoughlookingbackitseemslikewespentevery wakingmomentonthe

beachandinthewater,wealsoplayedgamesinsidethebeachhouse,orjusthung

outandtalkedwhilesittingontheporch,lookingoutatabeautifulbeachsunset.

WhenIwasyounger,noolder than maybesixyears old,I loved thewaves.My

cousinswouldbe tooscared togonearthebig ones,preferring tostayneartheshore.

Butasforme, thedaredevil,I looked downuponthewimpywaves,wanting onlythe

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jointhembattle thesea.However,mymotherwouldnotlet megoin.Soinstead,my

cousinsandI stayedontheporchwatching,amazedathowthecalmandpeaceful ocean of

thedaytime could turn into such a monster. But thenext morning, thesound

ofthecalmwavescrashingonthesandyshoregreetedmeasIfirstopenedmyeyes

tothenewdayinparadise.ThepeacefulwaterIknewandlovedhadreturned, waitingfor me

to go back in.

Thereareotherdownsidestobeing

atthebeach,butnoneofthembothermeanymore.For example,no matterhow

muchsunscreenyourub intoyourskin,you always

seemtogetsunburnsomewhere.Orhowitdoesn’tmatter ifyouaredripping

withbugsprayatnight,themosquitoesattackyouanyway.Butevensunburnand

mosquitobitescan’truin mytripstothebeach.Afterall,I am atmyfavoriteplacein

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My Hobby

(RominaTinambunan)

Myhobbyisreading.Ireadstorybooks,magazines,newspapersandany kindof

materialthatI findinteresting.Thishobby gotstartedwhenI wasa littleboy. I

hadalwayswantedmy parentstoreadfairytalesandotherstoriestome.Soonthey

gotfedupandtiredofhavingtoreadtomecontinually.SoassoonasIcould,I

learnedtoread.IstartedwithsimpleABCbooks.SoonIcouldreadsimplefairy talesand other

stories. NowIread just about anythingthat isavailable.

Readingenablesmetolearnaboutsomany thingsthatIwouldotherwisenot know.I

learnedabouthowpeoplelivedin bygonedaysofmagicandmystery.I learned about

thewondersof theworld,space travel,humanachievements,gigantic whales, tiny

virusesand other fascinatingthingsof our world.

ThewonderfulthingaboutreadingisthatIdonothavetolearnthingsthe

hardway.Forexample,Idonothavetocatchadiseasetoknowingthatitcankill me.I

knowthedangersoI canavoidit.AlsoI donothavetogodeepintothejungle to learningabout

thetiger. Ican read allabout it inabook.

Booksprovidethereaderwithsomuchinformationandfacts.They have certainly

helpedmeinmy daily life.Iambetterequippedtocopewithliving. OtherwiseIwouldgo

about ignorantlylearningthingsthehard way.

SoIcontinuetoread.Besidesbeingmoreinformedabouttheworld,Ialso spend

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My Mother

(YukiSembiring)

My mother'snameisKhodijah.Shewasborn49yearsago.Sheisshort,but

nottooshort.Sheislittlefat.Andsheisold.Shehasgotshortwhitestraighthair.

Shehavegotbrownskin.Sheisbeautiful.Herhandissosoft,thehandthathave

taughtmetobekindperson.Sheneverstoptosupportme.She alwaystellsmetonot

giveupsoeasily.ShealwaysgivesmesomefinesolutionwhenI havesome problems.

Theimportanceof her isneverdenied.

She isaverynice, afriendly, and apatientwoman. Mymom lovesher family

somuch.Sheisthebestmotherintheworld.Sheplaysherroleasahousewife

nicely.Sheneverforgetsherresponsibilitiesasamother.Althoughsheisverybusy

atwork,sheneverforgetsherfamily.Mymomreally lovescleanliness.Shealways

keepsherhomecleanandhealthy.Besidesbeingagoodmom,sheisthegreatest

chefwhoeverexisted.Sheisverysmarttomakeatasty food.Ilovedfoodmadeby her

especiallyher fried chicken.

My momisalsogoodwithothers.Sheishappytohelpfriendsandneighbors

whoareintrouble.Becauseshehasavery highsocialsoul,my momalwaystakes pity

onpeoplewhoneedhelp.My motherissodisciplinedwithreligion.Sheisvery

diligentinworshipandalwaysremindsustocontinueprayingtogod.Therearestill

alotofthingsthatIcouldnotsay aboutmy motherbecauseIthinkmy motherisa

perfectsmomformyselfandmy family.IwishIcouldfindamotherlikeherformy childrenin

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