ABSTRACT
THE USE OF AUTHENTIC MATERIAL IN TEACHING PROCEDURE TEXT WRITING AT THE SECOND YEAR STUDENTS OF SMAN 8 BANDAR
LAMPUNG
By
Alexander Sitinjak
This research was aimed to find out whether the use of authentic material can
improve students’ procedure writing achievement and to find out what are the aspects of writing skill that can be improved by using authentic material.
This research was conducted at SMAN 8 Bandar Lampung in academic year 2013/2014. This research took place in class XI Science I which consist of 29 students. The instruments used to gather the data were writing test (pretest and posttest).
The result showed that the students’ mean score of the pretest was 60.48 and their
mean score of the posttest after the implementation by using authentic material was 78.17, in which the improvement was 17.69.Specifically, authentic material can improve five aspects of writing namely content, organization, vocabulary, language use and mechanic. The highest improvement was achieved by language use (25.43%) from 13.88 up to 18.38. There was organization aspect 12.55 up to 16.64, then followed by content aspect from 18.67 up to 22.67. Behind them there were vocabulary aspect from 12.48 up to 16.22 and mechanic from 2.90 up to 4.26 (7.69%). It was proven by the result of Paired Sample T-Test, which showed that the value of two tail significant was less than α (0.00 < 0.05).
Based on the result above, it can be concluded that authentic material can improve
students’ procedure writing achievement.
THE USE OF AUTHENTIC MATERIAL IN TEACHING
PROCEDURE TEXT WRITING AT THE SECOND YEAR
STUDENTS OF SMAN 8 BANDAR LAMPUNG
A Script
By
ALEXANDER SITINJAK
ENGLISH EDUCATION STUDY PROGRAM
LANGUAGE AND ARTS EDUCATION DEPARTMENT
TEACHER TRANING AND EDUCATION FACULTY
UNIVERSITY OF LAMPUNG
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Understanding the meaning of written monologue text in form of procedure in the context of daily life.
B. Basic Competence
Understanding the rhetorical steps to write text essay accurately, and acceptably in the context of daily life in the form of procedure.
C. Indicators
Constructing procedural text based on its rhetorical steps. Giving information in the procedure text.
Using the procedure text in communicative function.
D. Specific Objective
Students are able to construct procedural text based on its rhetorical steps. Students are able to give information in the procedure text.
Students are able to use the procedure text in communicative function.
E. Instructional step/ Procedure 1. Pre-Activity
Teacher greets student.
Teacher checks the students’ attendance list.
Teacher asks the students some questions relate to the topic which is going to be learnt. For example
Teacher introduces the material which is going to be learnt.
2. While – Activity
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Students are showed the easy steps to make procedure.
Students are showed the authentic printed material by the teacher.
Students are showed the authentic visual material by the teacher.
Students are showed the authentic listening viewing material by the teacher.
Students watch the teacher when the teacher practiced how to make something in front of the class.
Students are asked by the teacher to make an outline.
Students compose their outline into a good procedure text.
Students revise their task and collect only the revise one.
3. Post Activity.
Teacher asks the student about what they have learnt today.
Teacher closes the meeting.
F. Material
Procedure text is a text which tells us how something is accomplished through a sequence of actions or steps.
The generic structure Usually it consists of:
Goal (often indicated in the main heading)
Materials (listed in order of use)
Method (steps oriented towards achieving the goal)
Language feature
Use of the simple present tense
Usually in imperative sentence
Linking words to do with time (first, time, when, then, next)
Mainly action verbs (put, hold, cut, stick)
Detailed, factual description of materials (shape, size, color, amount, etc)
Detailed information on how, where, and when.
Examples of procedure test:
Recipes
Game rules
Science experiment instruction
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Aspect Criteria Score
Content - Excellent to very good: Knowledge able, substantive, through development of thesis, relevant theory.
- Good to average: Some knowledge of subject, adequate range, limited development of thesis, mostly relevant to topic but lacks detail.
- Fair to poor: Limited knowledge of subject, little substance, inadequate development of topic. - Poor: Does not show knowledge of subject, non-
substantive, not pertinent, not enough to evaluate.
30-27 26-22
21-17 16-13 Language Use - Excellent to very good. Effective complete constructions, 25-22
The examples of authentic materials:
Authentic printed material
Authentic listening viewing material
Video how to make gado gado: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RbNciZhEXNY
Video how to make a kite: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hP0jFnmMAIA
Realia (real things) : water, strawbery, blender, sugar, glass, spoon, ice
H. References
Modul Bimbel English Service Pringsewu. 2003.
Nainggolan, Flora.2010. Modul 14 Pendalaman Materi Bahasa Inggris SMA. Bandar Lampung: University of Lampung.
I. Evaluation
Teacher gives students a task about how to make or to do something (they can choice one). Teacher will measure students’ work based on the content, organization, vocabulary, language use and mechanic. To ensure the score and to avoid the subjectivity, there are two raters to evaluate students’ task, so the score is valid.
Procedure : written
Type : open- ended and miscellaneous items.
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few error of agreement, tense, number, word order, function, pronouns, and preposition.
- Good to average. Effective but simple construction, minor problem in complex construction, several error of
agreement, preposition but seldom obscured/ - Fair to poor. Major problem in simple construction,
frequent error of negation, agreement, tense. Number, word, pronoun. Meaning confused.
- Very poor, virtually no mastery of sentence construction rules, dominated errors, does not communicate, not enough to evaluate.
- Good to average. Somewhat choopy, loosely organized but main ideas stand out, limited support, logical but incomplete sequencing.
words/idioms and usage, word form mastery, appropriate register.
- Good to average. Adequate range, occasional errors of idiom choice, usage but meaning not obscured.
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Appendix 2
Nama :
Kelas :
PRE WRITING TEST
INSTRUCTION:
You are writing an information leaflet for public explaining step by step about
how to do or to make the following things (choose only one topic to write), be
sure that your text includes complete information of the topic and has proper
organization. Make it at least one peice of paper.
1. How to plant a flower/tree.
2. How to operate an electrical device (television, computer, radio,
handphone, tape).
3. How to make your favorite food or drink.
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Appendix 3
Nama :
Kelas :
POST WRITING TEST
INSTRUCTION:
You are writing an information leaflet for public explaining step by step about
how to do or to make the following things (choose only one topic to write), be
sure that your text includes complete information of the topic and has proper
organization. Make it at least one peice of paper.
1. How to keep a garden beautiful.
2. How to make a kite or a cup of coffee.
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Appendix 5
Students’ Score in Pretest and Posttest from Two Raters
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Appendix 6
Students’ Score in Pretest from the Two Raters
N
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’ Score in Posttest from the Two Raters Students
22.67 16.64 16.22 18.38 4.26 78.17 78.
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Appendix 8
Hypotheses Testing
Paired Samples Statistics
Mean N Std. Deviation Std. Error Mean
Pair 1 Pretest 60.48 29 5.470 1.016
Posttest 78.17 29 6.187 1.149
Paired Samples Correlations
N Correlation Sig.
Pair 1 Pretest & Posttest 29 .807 .000
Paired Samples Test
Paired Differences
t df Sig. (2-tailed)
Mean Std. Deviation Std. Error Mean
95% Confidence Interval of the
Difference
Lower Upper
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To measure of two raters, the researcher used Spearman Rank-Correlation which formula can
be described as follows:
r = 1-
∑r = 1-
r = 1-
r = 1-0.13
r =
Note:
r : coefficient of rank correlation
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Total 2264 2270 435 435 92 638
Appendix 10
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To measure of two raters, the researcher used Spearman Rank-Correlation which the formula
can be described as follows:
r =1-
∑r = 1-
r = 1-
r =
r = 0.85
Note:
r : coefficient of rank correlation
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
All praises to The Lord Jesus Christ, the almighty God, for His abundant mercy
and blessing that enables the writer to finish his script. This script entitled “The
Use of Authentic Material in Teaching Procedure Text Writing at the Second Year
Students of SMAN 8 Bandar Lampung” is submitted as a compulsory fulfillment of the requirement for S-1 Degree at the Language and Arts Education Department of Teacher Training and Education Faculty of University of Lampung.
Gratitude and honor are addressed to all people who have helped and supported the writer until the completion of this research. Since it is necessary to be known that this research will never have come into its existence without any supports, encouragements and assistances by several outstanding people and institutions, the writer would like to express his sincere gratitude and respect to:
1. Prof. Dr. Patuan Raja, M.Pd. as the first advisor who have contributed and given his invaluable evaluations, comments, and suggestions during the completion of this script.
2. Drs. Huzairin, M.Pd. as the second advisor, for his assistance, ideas,
guidance and carefullness in correcting the writer’s script.
3. Prof. Dr. Cucu Sutarsyah, M.A. as the examiner, for his support encouragement, ideas, suggestion and in supporting the writer.
4. Dr. Ari Nurweni, M.A. as the Chief of English Education Study Program and all lecturers of English Education Study Program who have contributed their guidance during the completion process until accomplishing this script.
5. Dra. Noveria, M.Pd. as the Headmaster of SMAN 8 Bandar Lampung for giving the writer permit to conduct the research.
6. Martha Linda, S.Pd. as the English teacher of SMAN 8 Bandar Lampung who has allowed to do the research there. Also all the students of XI Science I year of 2013/2014, for their participation as the subject of this research.
7. The writer’s parents (Mr. G. Sitinjak, S.Pd and Mrs. Manalu), the wonderful brothers (Briyan Sitinjak, Christian Ignatius Sitinjak) and my beautiful sister (Dinayra Fransiska Sitinjak), for their love, support, motivation and prayer.
9. All of the members of ED 2010 and 45’s Boarding house (Dani Erfan Saputro, Lucky Nugroho, Abdul Haris Adnan, and all of my futsal team) and Elsye Bujang Yetti Frida.
10.Nadia Nachan Sabrina, S.Pd., my third advisor.
11.Little brothers and lovely sisters in campus; Anggun Kemala Sari, Nidia Putri (ED’11), Rangga Cakil Aditya, Nugraha Adigit Pratama, Ara Imanda
Puah Putri, Syafira Kokom Riani (ED’12), Anindya Sekarini, Sahaja Talenta, Adys Anggun, Rissa, Rani, Dio Sleepy, Aldo Adja, Deny Vespa
(ED’13).
12.Gerobak Pasir; Jusuf Purba, S.H., Sanggam Simanulang, S.H., Ivo Juntak, S.H., Edo Sitorus, S.H., Saut Lumban Gaol, S.H., dr. Wiliam Sihombing, Marcel Cio, S.H.
13.DOTA; Dimas Wibowo, S.H., Rubi Priaegar, S.P., Tri Atmaja, S.P. and all
my friends that I can’t mention one by one.
Finally, the writer believes that his writing is still far from perfection. There may be weakness in this research. Thus, comments, and suggestions are always welcome for better research. Somehow, the writer hopes this research can give a positive contribution to the educational development, the readers and those who want to accomplished further research.
Bandar Lampung, June 30th 2014
The writer,
MOTTO
Commit you work to the Lord and your plans will be established
(Proverbs 16:3)
3.5 Procedure of Data Collecting Technique. ... 31 3.6 Instrument of the Research ... 33 3.6.1 Validity . ... 33 3.6.2 Reliability... 34 3.7 Data Analysis ... 36 3.8 Data Treatment ... 37 3.8.1 Normality Test. ... 37 3.9 Hypotheses Testing.... ... ...38
IV. RESULTS AND DISCUSSION
4.1. Result ... 40 4.1.1 Experiment Implementation. ... 40 4.1.2 Results of Pretest ... 42 4.1.3 Result of posttest ... 42 4.2. Hypothesis Testing ... 45 4.4. Discussion ... 47
V. CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS
5.1. Conclusions ... 57 5.2. Suggestions ... 58
REFERENCES . ... 59
APPENDIXES
TABLES
Tables Page
3.5 Procedure of Data Collecting Technique. ... 31 3.6 Instrument of the Research ... 33 3.6.1 Validity . ... 33 3.6.2 Reliability... 34 3.7 Data Analysis ... 36 3.8 Data Treatment ... 37 3.8.1 Normality Test. ... 37 3.9 Hypotheses Testing.... ... ...38
IV. RESULTS AND DISCUSSION
4.1. Result ... 40 4.1.1 Experiment Implementation. ... 40 4.1.2 Results of Pretest ... 42 4.1.3 Result of posttest ... 42 4.2. Hypothesis Testing ... 45 4.4. Discussion ... 47
V. CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS
5.1. Conclusions ... 57 5.2. Suggestions ... 58
REFERENCES . ... 59
APPENDIXES
CURRICULUM VITAE
The writer’s name is Alexander Sitinjak. He was born on December 13th, 1991 in Bandar Lampung. He is the first son of Mr. Sitinjak, S.Pd. and Mrs. Manalu (the late).
He began his formal educational institution for the first time at TK Dharma Wanita in 1995 and graduated in 1997. He continued his study at SD Xaverius 1 Teluk Betung, Bandar Lampung and graduated in 2004. Then he continued his study at SMP Xaverius 1 Bandar Lampung and graduated in 2007. After that he continued his study at SMAN 8 Bandar Lampung and graduated in 2010. At the same year, in 2010 he was registered as a student of English Education Study Program, in Language and Art Education Department of Teacher Training and Education Faculty at Lampung University.
DEDICATION
This paper would proudly be dedicated to:
My Beloved Parents
My Brothers and Sister
English Education Study Program 2010
I. INTRODUCTION
This chapter tells about the problem of this research. It consists of background of
the problem, research problem, objectives, uses, scope and definition of terms that
are used in this research.
1.1 Background
English plays an important role in the world because it is the most widely spoken
language. English is a spoken for most international events and as a medium of
information in science, culture and technology. So we can call that English is the
first (international) language. Besides, it must realize that most scientific books
are written in English. Accordingly, in order to be able to comprehend the books
for getting knowledge, everyone must adequate mastery of English and so must
the Indonesian students.
Furthermore, to achieve the communicative function, we need not only
knowledge, but also skills of English and its components. According to the
curriculum, English has been taught from elementary school until university level
(KTSP, Depdiknas: 2006). The students have to master the four basic language
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Writing is the most difficult skill for students in Senior High School. Teaching
english which has been done in the school is specialized in reading
comprehension and grammatical structure. Writing skill has not got serious
attention. However the problem is the curriculum 2006, which is now used in the
system of Indonesian education, demands the students of Junior High School and
Senior High School to reach communicative function that is being able to
communicate in oral and in written form to solve their daily problem.
The use of existing material has been considered to have some weaknesses
(Crawford, 2002). Firstly, it does not present the real language model in real
context, it also reduces teacher’s role in the classroom from the classroom managers to the teachers who rely on other people ideas (Crawford, 2002). In
addition, it does not accommodate local materials and brings about local culture.
Martinez (2002) states that the existing materials have burdened students and
teachers due to the difficult vocabularies covered and the preparation could be
time consuming. They rarely offer real language example used in real life context
(Jacobson, 2003). In the meantime, authentic materials support EFL learning
environment in which exposure to the target language is needed as in the first
language acquisition (Krashen, 1986). Furthermore, they help teacher provide
their student opportunity to learn according to their need and interest (Jacobson,
2003).
In history media and technology had influence towards education. There are so
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media is authentic material. One of the important principles of communicative
language teaching is that authentic language should be used in instruction
whenever possible (Omaggio-Hadley, 1993). But some of the problems are
determining what authentic materials are, why is it important to use authentic
material in the classroom, and what are the sources for authentic materials? Taken
from Peacock (1997), the definition of authentic materials is the materials that
have been produced to fulfill some social purpose in the language community.
Martinez (2002) defines that “Authentic would be material designed for native
speakers of English used in the classroom in a way similar to the one it was
designed for.
Teacher nowadays, provide material that can encourage students’ interest in writing. In relation to the statement above, the researcher used authentic materials
in the classroom to overcome the problem above. Authentic materials are
considered as alternative materials that provide benefit for students from the
exposure to real language being used in a real context. The other reason why
authentic materials, because the students are highly motivated in giving a sense of
achievement when understood and encourage further writing. Then, the main
reason for using authentic materials in the classroom is that the learner did not
encounter the artificial language of the classroom and how they are really used.
The role of the teacher is not to delude the language learner but to prepare him,
giving the awareness and necessary skills so as to understand how the language is
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There are some types of texts that can be taught by using authentic material for
developing students’ writing achievement in their school. Procedure text is one of
them. It is very crucial to learn more about procedure text both its generic
structure and its language features. Students who are writing certain genre also
need to consider a number of the topics, the convention and style of the genre, and
the context in which the writing will be read (Harmer, 2001:206). But the reality
is, many students feel that writing is a hard work to do. Based on the researcher’s pre observation the reason for their inability to write is caused by several factors.
i.e 1). Poor vocabulary, 2). Difficulty in generating their idea, and 3). Poor
grammar. Besides, they do not have attention to the material given, or they also do
not know such a convenient way that can help them in writing process.
Regarding the factors above, the researcher would like to purpose one of the
alternative media that can be used to help the teacher solve the teaching writing
problem. This media is authentic material. By using authentic material, it will
make the students learn how to choose words carefully and construct sentences in
logical and concise manner, because authentic material can help students to be
familiar with new vocabulary and make them easy to remember the new
vocabulary (Siti, 2001). Besides, it makes the students learn writing in enjoyable
way.
1.2Research Question
Considering the background presented above, the researcher formulated following
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1. Is there difference of students’ writing achievement after the
implementation by using authentic materials?
1.3Objective
The objective of the research was:
1. To find out whether there is difference of students’ writing achievement
after the implementation by using authentic materials.
1.4Uses
The use of this research was:
1. Practically, the result of this research can be used as information sharing
for English Teachers in Senior High School that this media is applicable or
not.
1.5Scope
This research was conducted at the second year of SMAN 8 Bandar Lampung of
academic year 2013/2014. In this case the researcher used one class only that was
class XI science one which consisted of 29 students. This research was focused on
the implementation of authentic material (the researcher chose to use instant coffee
packages and instant fried noodle packages as the authentic printed material, videos
as the authentic listening viewing material, picture as the authentic visual materials,
and water, strawberry, blender, sugar, glass, spoon, ice as realia or real things) in
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writing measured in this research they were content, organization, vocabulary,
language use and mechanic (Harris, 1979: 68)
1.6Definition of Terms Writing
Writing is the representation of language in a textual medium through the use of a
set of sign or symbols (known as a writing system). Writing is a process of
composition in the sense of making or building which involves constant
reconstruction.
Materials
The word materials can be defined as the substances out of which something is or
can be made. The term can also be used to refer to the properties that someone
who is qualified or suited for a particular position or activity has.
Authentic Material
Authentic material is the material that has been produced to fulfill some social
purpose in the language community, and it has been made not for teaching and
learning activity.
Procedure Text
Procedure text is a kind of text about how to do task or to make something. It can
II. LITERATURE REVIEW
This chapter deals with the following topics: writing, aspects of writing, text,
procedure text, teaching writing, teaching procedure text writing, authentic
material, authentic material in teaching procedure text writing, advantages and
disadvantages, theoretical assumption and hypotheses.
2.1 Writing
Writing is one of the skills of language that is studied in the classroom. Writing is
the activity requiring the ability to make the word become sentence. It is also
activity of constructing sentence into a text. Writing is not easy. It is the most
difficult subject in the school since the students have to produce a text by using
English. It takes series of practices to develop this skill, it cannot be learnt only
one time. The students have to write what they think in their mind and state it on a
paper by using correct procedure. Learning to write either in the last year of Junior
High School or even in Senior High School is one of the most difficult tasks a
learner encounters and one that few people can master.
Writing is a means of communication, to convey message, ideas, and feeling in a
written form. Raimes (1983: 76) states that writing is a skill in which we express
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paragraph. Writing is also reinforces the use of sentence’s structure and tenses,
idiom and vocabulary correctly in order to make the reader get the idea clearly.
Writing, according to Barton (2000: 5) is a complicated and often mysterious
process. Although the writers may think of it as little more than arranging letters
and words on a page, a few moments’ reflection reveal that it is much more than
that. Furthermore, Harmer (2004: 86) states that writing is a process and what we
write is often heavily influenced by constraint of genre, then these elements have
to be present in learning activities. Writing is a powerful tool to organize the out
of order and events make them manageable. Writing is really a form of thinking
using the written words.
Meanwhile, Meyers (2005:2) states that writing is a way to produce language that
the writers do naturally when they speak. Writing is speaking to other on paper or
on computer screen. Writing is also an action or a process of discovering and
organizing ideas, putting them on a paper and reshaping and revising them.
Palmer (1994: 5) states that writing is recursive. It goes back and forth we plan a
little, put words on paper, stop plan when we want to say next, go back and
change a sentence, or change their minds altogether. Boardman (2002: 11) states
that writing is a continuous process of thinking and organizing, rethinking, and
reorganizing.
Nation (1990:84) describes that the process of writing is a way of bringing about
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process instead of focusing only on the finished product. This statement implies
that writing, as a process, needs a kind of technique to enable the students to
improve their writing achievement. Hence, the existence of certain technique is
needed to make the writing process valuable.
Writing enables the students to describe their ideas in sequence and
communicative way. Raimes (1983: 3) states that writing also involves thinking.
In addition, the close relationship between thinking and writing makes writing as
a valuable part of any other skills. People generally write to either communicate
something to other people (the writing is meant to be read by others) or to be used
for their own personal use (the writing is not usually meant to be read by others).
From the opinion above, it can be said that writing is a significant skill since it
involves a process of communication to express feeling, ideas, thought in written
form. Finally, writing process needs a certain technique that can make it
communicative in order to send a message to others.
2.2. Aspects of Writing
In writing, there are several aspects which should be considered by students in
order to write well. Brown (2001) proposes six major aspects of writing that have
to be required by a writer in producing a written text namely content,
organization, discourse, syntax, vocabulary, and mechanics. Content deals with
thesis statement, related ideas, development ideas, and the use of description.
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conclusion, and appropriate length. Discourses include topic sentence, paragraph
unity, transition, discourse maker, cohesion, rhetorical convention, reference,
fluency, economy, and variation. Mechanics include the use of spelling,
punctuation, citation of reference, and appearance.
Another explanation, Harris (1979: 68) proposes five aspects of writing namely
content (the substance of writing), form (the organization of content), grammar
(the employment of grammatical form and syntactic pattern), and style (the
choices of structure and lexical items to give a particular tone or flavor to the
writing). Similarly, Jacobson (2003) mentions that in order to be effective, a piece
of composition should meet the following qualities:
1. Content
Content refers to the substance of writing, the experience of main idea.
i.e., group of related statements that a writer presents as unit in
developing a subject. Content of the paragraph do the work of conveying
ideas rather that fulfilling special function of transition, restatement, and
emphasis.
2. Organization
Organization refers to the logical organization of content. It is scarely
more than attempt to piece together all collection of fact and jumble
ideas. Even in early drafts it may still be searching for order, trying to
make out patterns in its materials and working to bring particulars of its
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3. Vocabulary
Vocabulary refers to the selection of words those are suitable with the
content. It begins with the assumption that writer wants to express the
ideas as clearly and directly as he/she can. Choosing words that express
his/her meaning is precisely rather than skews it or blurs it.
4. Language use
Language use refers to the use of correct grammatical form and synthetic
pattern of separating, combining, and grouping ideas in words, phrases,
clauses, and sentences to bring out logical relationship in paragraph
writing.
5. Mechanic
Mechanic refers to the use graphic convention of the language, i.e., the
step of arranging letters, words, paragraphs by using knowledge of
structure and some others related to one another.
Based on the categories of writing aspects above, it can be concluded that
generally the aspects of the writing are classified into five aspects, namely,
content, organization, vocabulary, language use, and mechanic. Students can
make a well-organized text by those aspects.
2.3 Teaching Writing
Teaching writing is to teach the students how to express the idea or the
imagination in written forms. It is very important for the teacher to provide the
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states that teaching is showing or helping someone to learn how to do something
providing with knowledge, causing to know or to understand. It means that in
teaching, teacher helps the students and guides them to learn the material easily.
Furthermore, Raimes (1983: 27) mentions that teaching writing is a unique way to
reinforce learning. It means teaching writing is very important in order to build
students’ language skill. Therefore, teacher should know the problems faced by
the students during teaching learning process in order to know appropriate way to
overcome the writing problem in writing class.
Raimes (1983) also states that in order to be successful in writing, an English
teacher should guide the students in writing, in which the material presented are
relevant to their interest, needs, capacities and age until they are able to make
composition with few or no error. Since teaching writing is to teach the students
how to express the idea or the imagination in writing form, it is very important for
teacher to provide the materials which are relevant to the students’ interest and
needs.
In writing, the writer might have enough time to express their idea in written
form. There are some element of writing skills that are needed in teaching writing
such as content, grammar, form/organization, vocabulary, and mechanic. These
elements cannot be separated from each other. Teacher needs it to take account
into them while teaching writing. In other words, teaching writing guides the
students not only to write sentences in text, but also to recognize ideas in written
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From the statement above, there are three steps of writing that by Edelstein and
Pival (1988):
1. Pre-writing
Pre-writing is concerning to select the general subject, restricts the subject,
generates the ideas, make the outline and organize the ideas.
2. Writing
Writing is to set on the paper the ideas in her or his mind into words,
sentences, paragraph and so on.
3. Rewriting
Re-writing concerns with evaluating her/his writing, deals mainly with:
a) Concerning the content and form.
b) Correcting the vocabulary, punctuation, and grammar.
c) Correcting writing errors, word duplications and omission.
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In conclusion, the English teachers have to guide the students when composing
their writing. Interesting activities can motivate the students and make them enjoy
in learning, in this case by authentic material.
2.4 Text
Text is a semantic unit that is realized in the form of word, clause, and sentence. It
is not only a group of words or sentences. Hyland (2004: 6) states that the text is
an autonomous object which can be analyzed and described independently of
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words, clauses, and sentences by following the principles which guides the correct
of element.
There are two main categories of text namely literary and factual. Literary texts
are text that constructed to appeal emotion and imagination. For example: stories,
movies, scripts, folktales, novels, and lyrics’ song. There are three main text types
in this category: narrative, poetic and dramatic. Factual text presents information
or ideas and aim to show, tell or persuade the audience. The main text types in this
category are narrative, procedure, recount, exposition, explanation and discussion.
Not all the texts are same. Some factors which accounts for the differences in
texts are the purpose of which the text is being used and the language features.
Each kind of text is structured in different ways to achieve its purpose. It is
important to understand each type of text. Besides it is needed as an academic
purpose, text is also required in students’ real social life.
2.5 Procedure Text
Procedure text describes how to do or make something. Many types of procedure
text, such as recipes, repair manuals, or assembly instructions, are commonplace.
Procedures are used by scientists as they conduct investigations and experiments.
Procedure text has some characteristics, such as:
a. Tells how to do or to make something.
b. Has a title.
c. List the material at the beginning.
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e. Include specific measurements.
f. Includes detail that can help the reader know exactly what to do.
g. Uses command verbs.
Delpech (2008) states that procedure text is a finite sequence of instructions.
Instruction execution may be conditional, associated with preferences or advices.
Instructions may contain continuous processes, loops and may be organized as a
cluster in a loop, till some result is reached.
Procedure texts consist of a sequence of instructions designed with some accuracy
in order to reach an objective (e.g. how to use a computer). In our perspective,
procedure texts range from apparently simple cooking recipes to large
maintenance manuals (whose paper versions are measured in tons e.g. for aircraft
maintenance). They also include documents as diverse as teaching texts, medical
notices, social behavior recommendations, direction for using something,
assembly notices, itinerary guides, and advice texts.
In most types of procedural texts, in particular social behavior, procedural
discourse has two dimensions: an explicative component, constructed around
rational and objective elements (goals and plans), and a seduction component
whose goal are:
1. To encourage the user.
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3. To enrich the goals and the purposes, by outlining certain properties or
qualities or consequences of a certain action or prevention.
There are three definitions of procedure text:
1. Text that explain how something works or how to use instruction/
operation manual e.g. how to use the video, the computer, the tape
recorder, and the fax.
2. Text that instruct how to do a particular activity e.g. recipe, rules of game,
science experiment, road safety rules.
3. Text that deal with human behavior, e.g. how to life happily, and how to
succeed.
In this case the researcher used the second type.
The generic structure of the procedure text are:
1. Goal.
2. Material needed.
3. Method or steps.
The purpose of the procedure text is to tell the reader how to do or make
something. The information is presented in logical sequenced of event which is
broken up into small sequenced steps. These texts are usually written in present
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Example of the procedure text:
How to make a plate of fried rice.
Ingredients: 350 gr long grain rice, 2 tbs. vegetable oil, 3 eggs, 1 onion, 2 green chilies, sambal ulek, 1 garlic clove, 1 leek, 1 teaspoon ground cumin, 250 gr chicken meet, 250 gr shield prawns, 3 tbs. Sweet sauce.
The procedure:
Beat the eggs and make into an omelet, slice into strips and set aside. Hit the oil in a wok or large frying pan. Blended the chopped onion, leek, garlic and chilies. Fry until the onion is soft. Mix the coriander and cuming, slice chicken into strips and add with the prawn to the onion and mixture and cook, stirring occasionally until they are well mixed. Add the rice, soya sauce and omelet strips and cooks a further five minutes. Decorated with some of the leek and serve hot. Enjoy.
2.6 Teaching Procedure Text Writing
Teaching Writing is the most important factor in writing exercises is that students
need to be personally involved in order to make the learning experience of lasting
value. Encouraging student participation in the exercise, while at the same time
refining and expanding writing skills, requires a certain pragmatic approach. The
teacher should be clear on what skills he/she is trying to develop. Next, the
teacher needs to decide on which means (or type of exercise) can facilitate
learning of the target area. Once the target skill areas and means of
implementation are defined, the teacher can then proceed to focus on what topic
can be employed to ensure student participation. By pragmatically combing these
objectives, the teacher can expect both enthusiasm and effective learning.
Procedure text is a text that shows sequence of ways in making or doing
something, therefore as visual aids in teaching process. In writing, there are many
kinds of genre; recount, report, narration, description, explanation, exposition,
procedure, news item. Procedure is a text form in which found instruction of
action sequence concerning something, contain a procedure sequence treatment
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how it is finished. Language feature use of simple present tense (imperative
sentence), mainly temporal conjunctions, material process and focus on
generalized human agents.
2.7 Authentic Material
An authentic text commonly is a stretch of real language, produced by a real
speaker or writer for a real audience and designed to convey a real message of some
sort of information. This assumption is supported by Day and Bamford (1998: 54)
who state that an authentic material is one written language is considered,
unabridged text that is written for native speaker.
Furthermore, Martinez (2002) defines that authentic materials are sometimes called
authentic or contextualized, real-life materials are those that a student encounter in
everyday life but that were not created for educational purposes. They include
newspapers, magazines and websites, as well as driver’s manuals, utility bills, pill
bottles and clothing labels. From, these assumption it can be said that authentic
texts is made by using authentic language (a language that is only used by native
speaker for the conversation activity with native speaker without any facilitator for
second language learner. These texts are used to transfer ideas, information and
messages from the author to his readers. Besides, this text is made not for teaching a
language. It is made without making its language components (vocabulary and
grammar) to be able to understand easier by second language learner, it is made
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Although authentic text is not for language learning program, it is important for
language learners or students who want to broaden their knowledge about the way
of using the foreign language in the real life. Authentic materials offer real language
that is contextually rich and culturally pertinent. They also provide insight into the
adult learners’ new community and the services and opportunities offers.
It can be said that authentic text or material is important to learn, because it is full of
language insight and related to the culture. Most of them contain a large variety of
structures and vocabularies that has never been found in the school textbook.
Although authentic text uses original language (language in which its sentence’s
structure and the use of vocabulary is not simplified) that is hard for students to
comprehend, it can improve students’ writing achievement.
In addition, Peacock (1997) points out that material that has been produced to fulfill
some social purposes in the language community. The source of authentic material
are newspaper, magazines, internet, TV program, movies, CDs, song, brochures,
literature (novel, poems and short stories), catalogues, tickets, bills, receipts,
wrappings, business cards, labels, stamps and stamps.
Authentic material has some characteristics that must be known by the researcher
before getting it. These criteria are important for the researcher to know, with
knowing the criteria of authentic material, the researcher able to differentiate
whether the text is authentic material or not.
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same with the language used in the text. Or, it can be said that this type of
the text is made for native speakers. Widdowson (1983) in Martinez (2002:
1) defines that authentic would be material designed for native speakers of
English used in the classroom in away similar to the one it was designed for.
It means that a text will be authentic if it is written for readers that has the
same first language with the writer of the text.
2. Authentic material is a text in which its content is appropriated to the
readers’ world. It presents a lot of information appropriated to the readers’
in comprehending writing achievement. Spelleri (2002: 4) notes that the
material reflects a reality that is economically feasible for the learners. From
the statement it can be said that the content of the authentic text or material
is always adapted to the learners’ world, learners’ interest, need and ability
in comprehending writing achievement.
3. Authentic material gives reliable information, in order words it can be
trusted. It provides real information, not fictional information. Spelleri
(2002: 4) says that the material respects the immigration status of the
learner, whether documented or undocumented. The undocumented
immigrant should not find himself in trouble for attempting to make use of
knowledge gathered from the authentic material. From the statement it can
be said that authentic material contain understandable news and information
that can be trusted its truth and do not mislead the learners.
4. Authentic materials contain a lot of vocabularies appropriated to the
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authentic materials contain non-complex vocabulary. A large amount of
printed matter marketed to the general public is written at the fifth grade
level while the language of items produced by public safety and social
welfare offices is sometimes even simpler. And at least on the following:
a. The authentic item features picture, diagrams, and tables.
b. The material uses bullet, titling, subtitles or other clear separation of
text.
c. The material allows some learner interaction: a form to fill out, a
recording to listen, to check list, and questions to think about.
From those statements, it can be said that authentic materials use language that can
be understood by the public or society. It also completed by some interesting
pictures, tables, and other things that can facilitate the readers in comprehending it.
Besides that, it is usually illustrated by a few of advertisements and cleared by
placing a title and some subtitles in the right place. Sometimes, authentic text gives
some chance for readers to interact with the author of the text or the editorial staffs
who publish that text; giving some quiz with a gift and chances for expressing mind
and feeling to the learners. From the statement above, we can conclude that;
a. Authentic material is a material that is attractive for learners and
well-organized. Nuttal (1996: 177) states that authentic material not only
motivates students but also exhibits the characteristics of true discourse:
having something to say, being coherent and clearly organized.
b. Sometimes authentic material contains a language that cannot be understood
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vocabularies and the other. The text may contain vocabularies that exceed
the learners’ vocabulary limitation. Spelleri (2002: 2) explains that true
authentic materials are not edited and simplified in anyway. They require
the researcher to act as a filter, releasing the language in manageable
quantities, raising or allowing the filter as needed, and ensuring the
comprehensibility of the material through selection of learning objective, the
task to be accomplished, and the way of the material approached. From the
statement it can be said that the content of the authentic material can be
understood easily.
The example of authentic material that the researcher gave in this research were;
instant coffee packages and instant noodle packages (also involved pictures, realia
or real things, demonstration as the part of teaching learning process) in first
meeting, and in the second meeting the researcher used two videos; how to make
gado gado (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RbNciZhEXNY) and how to make
a kite (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hP0jFnmMAIA). The researcher also
practiced how to make a glass of strawberry juice in front of the class.
2.8 Authentic Material in Teaching Procedure Text Writing
The use of existing material has been considered to have some weaknesses
(Crawford, 2002). Despite it does not present the real language model in real
context, it also reduces the researcher role in the classroom from the classroom
managers to the researchers who rely on other people ideas (Crawford, 2002). In
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Martinez (2002) states that the existing materials have burdened students and the
researchers due to the difficult vocabularies covered and the preparation could be
time consuming. They rarely offer real language example used in real life context
(Jacobson, 2003). At the meantime, authentic materials support EFL learning
environment in which exposure to the target language is needed as in the first
language acquisition (Krashen, 1986). Furthermore, they help the researcher
provide their student opportunity to learn according to their need and interest
(Jacobson, 2003).
Brown (2001) mentions that teaching first language writing is different from
teaching second language writing. In helping the students procedure good writing,
the researcher has important duties (Brown, 2001). Besides, playing role as
facilitator, resource, and demonstrator of writing types, language uses, and purpose,
the researcher also acts as an assistant in helping the students difficulties along
writing process, and responder to content and construction and as evaluator, the
researcher can provider notes as feedback and suggestion along students writing,
therefore they can improve their writing product (Brown, 2001).
Dealing with the role as a resource of materials, despite many authentic materials
available in real life context, the researcher should consider some factors in
selecting, designing and providing the students with authentic material (Cook,
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In relation to School-based Curriculum implemented in Indonesia, one of the texts
that should be taught to students is procedural text. It becomes as an important
genre because it enables someone to get things done and it is common in oral and
written mode (Derewianka, 2004). It is intended for individual and it influences
behavior of individuals. The aim of this text is to make readers follow instructions
easily, therefore certain elements in procedure text are considered important.
1. A tittle showing the aim of doing particular activity (Anderson and
Anderson 1997; Derewianka, 2004).
2. A context covering the list of ingredients and tools needed with detailed
factual description (size, color, amount, and shape) (Anderson and
Anderson, 1997; Derewianka, 2004).
3. Methods covering a sequence of steps to be done. The steps usually begin
with a command such as add, stir, or push; the usage word connectors to
make a clear transition between steps such as firstly, secondly, then, next,
after that and last; number also can be used to show first, second, third and
so on (Anderson and Anderson, 1997; Derewianka, 2004).
4. A visual format that makes the steps easy to follow (space, diagram, and
picture).
Based on the theory above the researcher chose to use instant noodles packages and
instant coffee packages as the authentic printed material, videos as the authentic
listening viewing material, picture as the authentic visual materials, and vegetables,
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The researcher decided to use all of the things above because those things could
make the children more creativity in enjoyable ways, helped children to explore and
fully developed the ideas and it would be easier for them to learn writing procedural
text.
In this research, the researcher gave the example of procedure text by using
authentic material. The first authentic material that the researcher used was instant
coffee packages and instant noodle packages (also involved pictures, realia (real
things), and demonstration as the part of teaching learning process) in first
meeting. The researcher also used two videos; how to make gado gado
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RbNciZhEXNY) and how to make a kite
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hP0jFnmMAIA). The researcher also practiced
how to make a glass of strawberry juice in front of the class.
2.9 The Advantages and Disadvantages
There were some advantages that can be obtained from using authentic texts or
materials in teaching writing.
a. Authentic material can provide many chances for the researcher and
students to understand about how to use the target language (in this case
English) in the real life.
b. Authentic material provides a large amount of the ways of using English
(target language) in the real world. This text supplies a lot of ways of
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c. Authentic material contains a lot of information from all aspects of life.
This advantage is very important for the student to increase their
knowledge
d. Authentic material provides a lot of happiness for students.
e. Authentic material keeps students informed about what is happening in
the world, so to have an intrinsic educational value.
f. Students are exposed to real discourse, as in videos of interview with
famous people where intermediate students listen for gist. They provide
exposure to real language.
There were some disadvantages that can be obtained from using authentic texts or
materials in teaching writing.
a. Some authentic listening materials have so many different accents that it is
very hard for the learner to understand.
b. Some authentic printed materials can become outdated easily, such as
news in newspapers or magazines.
c. Authentic materials may contain items, particularly vocabulary, which is
of strange and difficult for some students.
d. In learning contexts where authentic target-language materials are not
readily available, obtaining them can be time consuming and frustrating.
In the teaching learning activities, every single method or media always have the
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more advantages then disadvantages. Because of that the researcher used this
media in this research.
2.10 Theoretical Assumption
Writing is one of language skill that should be mastered by the students. In this
case the researcher used authentic material in procedure text writing. Through
authentic material, the students would be guided and involved to write the
procedure text based on the fact, especially to let them learn to make the
procedure text in writing. By using authentic material, the students are expected to
improve their written production, so that they could produce better writing than
before. The quality of good (effective) writing was not only defined by its
correctness on grammatical structure and vocabulary. There are other aspects
which also determined its quality: content, organization and language use.
2.11 Hypothesis
Based on the theoretical assumption above, the researcher formulated the
following hypothesis:
There is difference of students’ procedure writing achievement after the
III. METHODS
This chapter discusses some aspects. They are classifying like the following:
research design, population and sample, data collecting technique, validity and
reliability, scoring criteria, procedure of data collecting technique, data treatment,
data analysis and hypotheses test.
3.1 Research Design
In this research, the researcher conducted the research by using one class and
applied pre-experimental design that was one group pretest posttest design.
According to Hatch and Farhady (1982: 20), the research design could be
represented as follows:
T1: Pretest
X: Treatment/ Experiment
T2: Post test
3.2 Population and Sample
The population of this research was the second year students of SMAN 8 Bandar
Lampung in academic year of 2013/2014. The researcher used one class as the
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The researcher used lottery technique to choose the treatment class. So that those
all classes got same chance to be sample.
3.3 Data Collecting Technique
In collecting data, the researcher used the following stages:
1. Pretest
The researcher administered the pretest in order to find out the students’ basic ability. It required 90 minutes for the pretest. In this test, the
researcher provided some topics to be chosen by the students to write. The
topic in this test was how to make your favorite food or drink. The
students have been asked to write a procedure text.
2. Posttest
Posttest administrated after treatments to find out what are the aspects of
writing skills are improved by using of authentic material. It could be seen
from the average scores of pretest and posttest.
3.4 Scoring Criteria
Five aspects of evaluated by the researcher were content, language use, form/
organization, vocabulary and mechanic. The researcher used computation as
follows:
1. Content scored as much as 30% from the total sentences support the main
idea (unity).
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3. Language use evaluated as much as 25% from the total sentences are
written in chronological order (coherence).
4. Vocabulary scored 20% as much as from vocabularies is used correctly.
5. Mechanic evaluated as much as 5% from use punctuation, spelling and
capitalization correctly.
The scoring criteria above based on Jacobs et al (1981: 90).
Table 1. The criteria of evaluation for writing test (Jacobs et. al., 1981: 90)
Aspect Criteria Score
Content - Excellent to very good: Knowledge able, substantive, through development of thesis, relevant theory.
- Good to average: Some knowledge of subject, adequate range, limited development of thesis, mostly relevant to topic but lacks detail.
- Fair to poor: Limited knowledge of subject, little substance, inadequate development of topic. - Poor: Does not show knowledge of subject,
non-substantive, not pertinent, not enough to evaluate.
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21-17 16-13 Language Use - Excellent to very good. Effective complete constructions,
few error of agreement, tense, number, word order, function, pronouns, and preposition.
- Good to average. Effective but simple construction, minor problem in complex construction, several error of
agreement, preposition but seldom obscured/ - Fair to poor. Major problem in simple construction,
frequent error of negation, agreement, tense. Number, word, pronoun. Meaning confused.
- Very poor, virtually no mastery of sentence construction rules, dominated errors, does not communicate, not enough to evaluate. stated/supported, well-organized, logical sequencing, cohesive.
- Good to average. Somewhat choppy, loosely organized but main ideas stand out, limited support, logical but incomplete sequencing. Vocabulary - Excellent to very good. Sophiscated range, effective
words/idioms and usage, word form mastery, appropriate register.
- Good to average. Adequate range, occasional errors of idiom choice, usage but meaning not obscured.
- Fair to poor. Limited range, frequent errors of
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idiom/words, meaning confused or obscure.
- Very poor. Essentially translation, little knowledge of English vocabulary, not enough to evaluate
9-7
text writing based on the content, grammar, form/ organization, vocabulary and
mechanic. The lowest score was 0 and the highest score was 100.
3.5 Procedure of Data Collecting Technique
The collecting the data the researcher made some steps:
1. Determining the population and sample
In this stage, the researcher chose SMAN 8 Bandar Lampung as the
population sample of this research. There were eight classes in the second
year level. The researcher took one class as the sample, and the class was
XI Science I that consist of 29 students.
2. Finding and selecting the materials.
In this stage, the researcher found some topics for the pretest. The topics
have been taken from the students’ handbook and based on the teaching and learning syllabus.
3. Administrating the pretest and getting the result.
The researcher conducted the pretest before giving the treatments and it
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students’ ability about procedure text writing text. The students chose one
topics (how to plant a flower, how to operate a television, how to
withdraw money via ATM, and how to serve a plate of fried rice) to be
written in their text writing. They should write their task at least one piece
of paper. Before the meeting was over, the researcher asked the students to
revise their text.
4. Conducting treatment by using authentic material.
After giving the pretest to the students, the experimental class has been
given treatments two times. The time of the treatments was 90 minutes.
The experimental class has been given the treatment by using authentic
material as the media and has been explained about the procedure text. In
the first meeting the researcher used instant coffee packages and instant
noodle packages. In the second meeting the researcher used two videos
(how to make a kite and how to make gado-gado) and the researcher
practiced how to make a glass of strawberry juice in front of the class. The
treatment also involved pictures, realia (real things), and demonstration as
part of teaching learning process.
5. Administering the posttest.
The posttest was conducted after treatment. The researcher gave the same
topics to the students (how to send message via email, how to kept a pet,
how to make your favorite food or drink) and the students chose one from
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6. Analyzing the data.
After scoring students’ work, the researcher compared the result of the
pretest and posttest to find out the improvement and what the aspects of
writing skill are improved by using authentic material. The score of
posttest was better than pretest, it means there was improvement on
students’ writing achievement.
3.6 Instrument of the Research
To gain the data, the researcher applied one kind of instrument:
Writing Test
The Instrument of this research was procedure text writing test. The researcher
was conducted writing test to find out how far teaching procedure text writing by
using authentic material improved students’ writing achievement and what aspects
of writing skill that could be improved by using authentic material. The students
are asked to write procedure text by the researcher. The students had been given a
chance to make writing for about 90 minutes.
3.6.1 Validity
Content validity is concern with whether or not the content of the test is
sufficiently representative and comprehensive for the test to be valid measure it is
supposed to measure. In content validity, the materials would be given by the
curriculum used. In this case, the researcher gave procedure text that supposed to
comprehend by the second year students of senior high school.To get the content
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objective of teaching in syllabus for second grade of senior high school students,
and the students were making a procedure text writing based on teacher
instruction (how to make your favorite food or drink).
Construct validity is concern with the teacher the test is actually in line with the
theory of what it means to know the language that is being measured, it would be
examine whether the test questions actually reflect what it means to know a
language. If a test has construct validity, it is capable of measuring certain specific
characteristic in accordance with a theory of language behavior and learning. This
type of validity assumes the existence of certain learning theories or constructs
underlying the acquisition of abilities and skill. In this case, to find out the
construct validity of the test, the researcher formulated the test by the concept of
writing skill.
Because the researcher arranged the materials based on the objective of teaching
in syllabus for second grade students of senior high school, and the researcher
formulated the test by the concept of writing skill, so the test is valid.
3.6.2 Reliability
Reliability is measure of accuracy consistency, dependability, or fairness of scores
resulting from administration of particular examination. Here, the researcher used
inter-rater reliability. Inter-rater reliability used when score in test was