WRITING ABILITY OF RECOUNT TEXT
(A Quasi-experimental Study at the Eighth Grade of SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat in Academic Year 2016/2017)
“SKRIPSI”
Presented to Faculty of Educational Sciences
in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of S.Pd. (S-1) in English Education at the Department of English Education
By:
Tias Sil Romansyah 1111014000098
DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION FACULTY OF EDUCATIONAL SCIENCES
SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY JAKARTA
A Skripsi
Presented to Faculty of Educational Sciences in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of S.Pd. (S-l)
in English Education at the Department of English Education
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Writing Ability of Recount Text (A Quasi-experimental Study ut the Eighth Grade of SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat in Academic Year 2016/2017)" written
by Tias Sil Romansyaho students' registration number: 1111014000098, was
examined by the Committee on January 23'd,2017.The skripsi has been accepted
and declared to have fulfilled one of the requirements for the degree of S.Pd. (S-1)
in Engtish Education.
Jakarta, January 23'd 2077
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Department of English Education, The Faculty of Educational Sciences, Syarif Hidayatullah State Islamic University Jakarta, 2017.
Key Words: Picture Series, Writing, Recount Text
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2016/2017), Skripsi, Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris, Fakultas Ilmu Tarbiyah dan Keguruan, Universitas Islam Negeri Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta, 2017.
Key Words: Gambar Berseri, Tulisan, Teks Recount
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blessing to finish his last assignment in his study, skripsi. Peace and salutation be
upon to the prophet Muhammad SAW, his family, his companion and his adherents.
It is a pleasure to acknowledge the help and contributions to all of lecturers,
institutions, family and friends who have contributed in the different ways hence this
skripsi is processed until it becomes a complete writing which will be presented to
Faculty of Educational Sciences in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the
degree of S.Pd. (S-1) in English Education at the Department of English Education.
The first, he would like to express his great honor and deepest gratitude to his
beloved father Zauli, his beloved mother Sarina, his sisters Tiassil Haviana, S.T.,
Nurtias Jumiatul Rohmah and Nurtias Sil Isromi, and all families who always give
support, motivation and moral encouragement to finish his study.
He would like to give thanks to his advisors Mr. Dr. Alek, M.Pd. and Mr. Zaharil
Anasy, M.Hum. who have given his precious help, guidance and advices patiently
during the completion and the development of the study. Also his greatest gratitude
and honor to Dr. Ratna Sari Dewi, M.Pd. as his academic advisor who always gave
support and advice during his study.
He also realized that he would never able to finish this skripsi without help and
support from people around him. Therefore, he would like to give his gratitude and
appreciations to:
1. Prof. Dr. Ahmad Thib Raya, MA, as the Dean of Faculty of Educational
Sciences Syarif Hidayatullah State Islamic University Jakarta.
2. Dr. Alek, M.Pd., as the Head of Department of English Education
3. Zaharil Anasy, M.Hum., as the Secretary of Department of English Education
4. All lecturers of Department of English Education who always gave motivation
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SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat who have given their time for sharing.
7. The eighth grade students of SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat in Academic Year
2016/2017, as the participant of this research.
8. All of friends in the Department of English Education academic year 2011,
especially C class who always supported him.
9. His best friends Farras Labieb Ahmad, S.Pd., Shendy Pratama, S.Pd., Wildan
Ahdiyat, S.Pd., and Muhammad Kahfianan who always supported and helped
him. Thank you for the best friendship ever after.
10.All of members of ―LOL‖ who always helped and gave the writer support,
time and love to remind him in accomplishing the research.
11.His special mate Hidayana Putri who always stood by him in finishing this
skripsi.
12.All of his friends and all the people who contributed in this study that he
could not mention one by one who always gave motivation to the writer in
finishing this skripsi.
The words are not enough to say any appreciation for their help and contribution
in this skripsi. May Allah, the Almighty bless them all. Moreover, the writer also
realized that this skripsi is far from perfect. It is a pleasure for him to get critiques and
suggestion to make this skripsi better.
Jakarta, 11 January 2017
The Writer
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ACKNOWLEDGMENT ... iii
TABLE OF CONTENTS ... v
LIST OF TABLES ... viii
LIST OF FIGURES ... ix
LIST OF APPENDICES ... x
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION ... 1
A. The Background of the Study ... 1
B. The Identification of Problems ... 5
C. The Limitation of Problem ... 6
D. The Formulation of Problem ... 6
E. The Objective of the Study ... 6
F. The Significance of the Study... 6
CHAPTER II THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK ... 7
A. Writing ... 7
1. The Nature of Writing ... 7
2. The Process of Writing ... 7
3. The Purpose of Writing ... 8
B. Recount Text ... 9
1. The Definition of Recount Text ... 9
2. The Purposes of Recount Text ... 10
3. The Types of Recount Text ... 10
4. The Generic Structure of Recount Text ... 11
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2. The Kinds of Picture ... 13
3. The Function of Picture ... 14
4. Picture as Media in the Writing Process ... 15
5. Picture Series ... 17
6. Application of Using Picture Series in Teaching Writing of Recount Text ... 18
7. The Example of Picture Series ... 18
D. Previous Related Studies ... 19
E. Conceptual Framework ... 21
F. Theoritical Hypothesis ... 21
CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHODOLOGY ... 22
A. Place and Time of the Study ... 22
B. Method and Research Design ... 22
C. Population and Sample ... 23
D. The Research Instrument ... 23
E. The Technique of Data Collection ... 23
F. The Technique of Data Analysis ... 27
G. Statistical Hypothesis... 29
CHAPTER IV RESEARCH FINDING AND DISCUSSION ... 31
A. Research Finding ... 31
1. Data Description ... 31
2. Data Analysis ... 37
3. The Hypothesis Testing ... 41
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Table 4.1 The students’ score of pre-test of experimental class (VIII-1) and
controlled class (VIII-2) ... 31
Table 4.2 The students’ score of post-test of experimental class (VIII-1) and
controlled class (VIII-2) ... 33
Table 4.3 The students’ gained score comparison between pre-test and post-test in
experimental class (VIII-1) and controlled class (VIII-2) ... 35
Table 4.4 Statistical calculation of gained score both the experimental and
controlled class ... 37
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Figure 2.2 The example of picture series 2 ... 19
Figure 2.3 The example of picture series 3 ... 19
Chart 4.1 The students’ score of pre-test of experimental class and
controlled class ... 33
Chart 4.2 The students’ score of post-test of experimental class and
controlled class ... 35
Chart 4.3 The students’ gained score of experimental class and controlled
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Appendix 3 Sample of Students’ Pre-test in Writing Recount Text
(Experimental Class & Controlled Class) ... 74
Appendix 4 Sample of Students’ Post-test in Writing Recount Text (Experimental Class & Controlled Class) ... 78
Appendix 5 Surat Permohonan Izin Penelitian ... 82
Appendix 6 Surat Keterangan telah Melaksanakan Penelitian ... 83
Appendix 7 Surat Bimbingan Skripsi ... 84
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A.
The Background of the Study
Language is a means of communication. To be easy in a language, people
must acquire the language skills like writing. Writing is one of the language skills
that must be mastered by students at Junior High School. Writing becomes a
means and important part of communication that is the most used by many people
around the world to interact and share information in English language for many
purposes, beside listening, speaking, and reading. Writing involves transferring a
message from our thoughts using language in the written form and it is called
communicative competence. According to Brown, he stated that communicative
competence is relative, not absolute, and depends on the cooperation of all the
participants. Communicative competence enables one to convey and interpret
messages and to negotiate meanings interpersonally within specific context.1 In
addition, Canale and Swain stated that communicative competence consists of
grammatical competence, discourse competence, sociolinguistic competence, and
strategic competence.2 The grammatical competence and discourse competence
reflect the use of linguistic system itself. The sociolinguistic competence and
strategic competence reflect the functional aspects of communication. By
acquiring communicative competence, the students are expected to have
knowledge of grammar and vocabulary of the language; to have knowledge of
rules of writing and to be able to apply it in real communication appropriately.
Writing is an important part of language learning. The main purpose of
writing is to make the writer creates or expresses ideas into a written form to give
information to the reader. It is the same as the purpose of communication. That is
to deliver information from sender to receiver, like writer to reader and speaker to
listener. In writing, when the reader can understand what the writer writes, it
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H. Douglas Brown, Principles of Language Learning and Teaching, (New York: Pearson Education Inc., 2007), Fifth Edition, p. 219.
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means that communication happened and got success. Thus, writing is also called
as a written communication. Meanwhile, for junior high school students, writing
is not only a crucial written communication, but also a crucial language skill that
must be learnt in the school. They have to master writing for some purposes like
academic, job applications, applying scholarship, and future carriers. Hence,
writing is very suitable for their educational, social, and professional field.
Writing is an activity where the students write and share what they think.
The students usually use writing as a tool to make notes, to do assignments and
exercises, to summarize lessons, to record the teacher’s explanations, and to write
diaries. According to Urquhart and McIver, they stated writing is about expressing
knowledge and you want your students express their knowledge as thoughtfully
and clearly as they can.3 Through writing, teachers are able to identify students’
ability in using the language, because the writing does not only deal with list of
vocabularies and knowledge of grammar, but also ability to organize thoughts into
series of paragraph.
Writing is a productive skill. It is very useful for students because it is able
to convey their message through their minds in written form. It is placed at the last
stage among the four skills (listening, speaking, reading, and writing). Writing is
the production of the written word in text form and it must be read and
comprehended in order to communicate to take place. To write well, people must
have good capabilities in writing. Moreover, someone who wants to write story or
essay must know the writing process and the aspects of writing ability. People
must be able to organize ideas, to construct sentences, to use spellings and
punctuations well. Besides, they must be able to arrange their writings into
cohesive and coherent paragraphs and texts. However, people could not develop
their ideas if they do not master the use of grammatical sentence well and they are
lack of vocabulary. According to Jack C. Richards, he stated that writing is the
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most difficult skills for second learner to master of putting together strings of
grammatically correct sentences.4
Writing is not a natural skill because one can’t acquire this ability automatically and easily. It needs a lot of practice to be mastered. Writing skill
differs from other skills like listening and speaking. The two other skills can be
gained through natural processes. Since one was born, he has got considerable
experiences of listening and speaking. In writing, he must recognize and
understand new symbols. Therefore, writing is a sophisticated skill combining a
number of different elements that must be grammatically connected.
Writing is considered the most difficult to be learned and mastered
because it involves some language components such as spelling, language use,
vocabulary, and punctuation. Writing requires the rules of English grammar and
mechanics like the correct use of verbs and pronouns, as well as commas and
other marks of punctuation and it also involves many aspects such as paragraph
development, organization of content and it demands standard form of grammar,
syntax, and vocabulary. Writing involves more than just producing words and
sentences, but in writing activity the students should be able to combine words
and sentences grammatically into written text.
In Junior High School, writing in English is a competency that should be
achieved by students, like writing simple functional text in descriptive text,
procedure text, narrative text, recount text, and report text. Especially, recount text
and narrative text learned by the students in the eighth grade of Junior High
School. In recount text, students usually asked by teacher to write a story based on
the themes.
Based on the syllabus of KTSP (School-based curriculum), the writing
ability is taught in junior high school. It is one of the language skills that must be
mastered by students. Based on the situation above, the writer did an observation
in SMP Nusantara Plus. Based on the observation conducted between the
researcher and the students in the school, it was found that the students’ ability in
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writing was still far from what was expected. On the writing test, the students
were asked to write a recount text based on the topic that was given by the
researcher. The score of students’ writing test was bad. It means many students
have problems in writing ability. That was happened because of some factors.
First, the students have difficulties in expressing their ideas in written form. On
the other word, they do not have many ideas to write. Second, the students have
the lack of interest and low motivation in learning writing. So, it made writing
becomes a boring and hard activity for them. Third, the students have difficulty in
develop their ideas in order to get unity and coherence sentence. Fourth, the
students have limited vocabulary mastery. It made the students wrote difficultly.
Also, the lack of English grammar mastery. And the last, the students are still low
in understanding of mechanical writing. Because of these they got difficulties in
writing and the result of their writing were still far from what were expected.
In this case, the researcher wants to conduct the research about recount
text because it is the most common text used rather than others. Recount is a text
which consists of three aspects and it tells about people’s experience in the past. Recount text gives the description of events of someone’s past experience for the reader, which is to give the information or to entertain. Based on the researcher’s experience when teaching students, they would be enthusiastic when they were
asked to tell about their experience or story, especially about amusing story.
Students remembered their story and wanted to share their story to other people. It
seems that they wanted others to feel what they feel.
There are aspects which were scored in scoring the students recount text
writing. They were content, text organization of recount, and usage. Considering
the importance of writing ability for students, it needs a media to help the students
in creating ideas, writing correct and appropriate sentences. One of media that can
be used to help the students in writing recount text is by using picture. Pictures
have an excellent device for providing both a purpose and content for writing. It
also provides students with information about object, actions, events, and a
relationship. Pictures can stimulate and motivate students to express themselves.
students will not find a difficulty to write and explore their ideas because what
they will write is focused on the pictures. Picture series have a lot of fun and can
be adapted to a variety of writing types. Picture series also have pictures with full
color. It makes the students are attracted to explore their ideas in writing recount
text. They have some imaginations when they saw pictures. The pictures inspire
the students in expressing their ideas into paragraph. The students are expected to
be more interested in following English subject, especially in the aspects of writing and the students’ writing ability of recount text also increased because the students have motivation to increase their potential in writing recount text after
they have imagination about the pictures.
Based on the explanation and problems above, the writer was interested in
finding out the factors from the observation above which made the students were
so far from what were expected in writing test. The factor is media to make a
good paragraph in writing recount text. It is hoped that the media can improve the students’ ability in writing, especially in recount text.
Finally, the writer intended to conduct quasi-experimental study entitled, “The Effect of Picture Series on Students’ Writing Ability of Recount Text (A Quasi-experimental Study at the Eighth Grade of SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat in Academic Year 2016/2017)”
B.
The Identification of Problems
Based on the background of the study above, the problems that can be
identified as follows:
1. Students have difficulty in expressing their ideas in written form.
2. Students have the lack of interest and low motivation in learning writing.
3. Students have difficulty in develop their ideas in order to get unity and
coherence sentence.
4. Students have limited vocabulary mastery and the lack of grammar
mastery.
5. Students are still low in understanding of mechanical writing.
C.
The Limitation of Problem
Based on the problems were identified above, the problem of the research
was limited on the effect of picture series on students’ writing ability of recount
text. In addition, the writer focused on the students at the eighth grade of SMP
Nusantara Plus.
D.
The Formulation of Problem
Based on the limitation of problem above, the problem of this study can be
formulated as follows: Is there any effect of picture series on students’ writing
ability of recount text for the eighth grade students of SMP Nusantara Plus?
E.
The Objective of the Study
Based on the formulation of the problem above, the objective of this study
was to get the empirical evidence about the effect of picture series on students’
writing ability of recount text.
F.
The Significance of the Study
The result of this study was expected to be useful for:
1. The teachers
The teacher, especially the English teacher would get information and
description about the effect of picture series on the students’ writing
ability of recount text as a media to produce better writing.
2. The students
After the students were researched, they had motivation in writing recount
text using picture series as a media to writing; and write correct and
appropriate sentences.
3. The writer
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A.
Writing
1. The Nature of Writing
Learning language means learning to communicate with each other, to
interact with them, to talk to them, to understand them, to read what they have
written, to write to them. One way to create communication is through writing.
Writing is one of four language skills in learning English, beside listening,
speaking, and reading. It is one of the important skills to be mastered, especially
by the students in Junior High School. According to Zemach, writing is an
important element of daily life communication, especially in secondary school
and university. However, writing is one difficult skill to be mastered for the first
language and the second language both. It challenges students to find ideas in
their writing. Each student has different style to organize their academic writing
based on their culture.1 Another expert, Hyland defined, ―Writing is a way of
sharing personal meanings and writing courses emphasize the power of individual
to construct his or her own views on a topic‖.2 In conclusion, writing is a medium
for the writer to express his or her ideas in written form.
2. The Process of Writing
There are many ideas about writing process. According to Oshima and
Hogue, they stated that there are four steps in writing process: pre-writing,
organizing, writing, and polishing: revising and editing.3 Harmer mentioned that
the stages of writing process included: planning, drafting, editing (reflecting and
1
Dorothy E. Zemach and Carlos Islam, Writing in Paragraph, (England: MacMillan, 2006), p. IV.
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Ken Hyland, Second Language Writing, (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 2003), p. 9.
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revising), and final draft.4 Langan also explained the process of writing as
follows:5
a. Prewriting, as a starting point in writing activity to develop the topic that
will be discussed by the writer in his/her writing. There are five techniques
in prewriting stage that can be applied by the writer such as free writing,
questioning, making a list, clustering and preparing a stratch outline.
b. Writing a first draft, the writer is just focused on what he/she wants to
write about, keeps on the fluency of his/her writing and does not worry yet
about grammatical and writing mechanic.
c. Revising, the writer rewrite his/her paper based on what has already been
written by him/her. The goal is to make his/her writing be stronger.
d. Editing, as the last stage in writing process. The writer will identify and
correct his/her writing for mistakes and errors in grammatical and
mechanic of writing that covering punctuation and spelling.
In summary, all the experts’ explanations above have similar ideas dealing
with the process of writing. In producing a writing product, there are some steps
that should be done by writer as explained above. The writer will go through those
steps until he/she finished his/her final draft.
3. The Purpose of Writing
There are many experts who explain about the purpose of writing, among
them Penny Ur, Halliday, and Ann Raimes. The first, Penny Ur said that ―The
purpose of writing, in principal, is the expression of ideas, the conveying of a
message to the reader; so the ideas themselves should arguably be seen as the
most important aspect of the writing‖.6 The second, according to Halliday in
Nunan, the written language is used for: action (for example, public signs, product
labels and instructions, recipes, maps, television and radio guides, bills, menus,
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Jeremy Harmer, How to Teach Writing, (United Kingdom: Pearson Education Limited, 2004), pp. 4–6.
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John Langan, College Writing Skills with Readings, (New York: McGraw-Hill, 2005), Six Edition, pp. 23–34.
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telephones directories, ballot papers, computer manuals), information (for
example, news and current affairs magazines, hobby magazines, nonfiction books,
public notices, advertisement, political pamphlets, reports), entertainment (for
example comic strips, fiction books, poetry and drama, newspaper features, film
subtitles, games). The third, Raimes mentioned the purpose of writing as belows: ―Writing helps our students to learn. How? First, writing reinforces the grammatical structures, idioms, and vocabulary that we have been teaching our
students. Second, when our students write, they also have a chance to be the
adventurous with the language, to go beyond what they have just learned to say, to
take risks. Third, when write they necessarily become very involved with the new language.‖7
In conclusion, the purposes of writing are to give a message, to express
ideas, to get things done, to provide information and entertainment, and to give a
chance to our students for applying the language in written form.
B. Recount Text
1. The Definition of Recount Text
Recount text is one of common text types that used in writing. It is the
unfolding of a sequence of events over time and reconstruct past experience.
Many experts propose the definition of recount text but their words lead to the
same meaning. Anderson defines recount text as a piece of text that retells past
events, usually in the order in which they happened.8 The purpose of recount text
is to give the audience a description of what occurred and when it occurred.
Hyland, in other word, said that recount text is a text that reconstructs past
experiences by retelling events in original sequence.9 The social function of
recount text is to retell events for the aims of informing or entertaining. Some
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Ann Raimes, Techniques in Teaching Writing, (New York: Oxford University Press, 2001), p. 3.
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Mark Anderson and Kathy Anderson, Text Types in English, (South Yarra: Macmillan Education Australia Pty Ltd, 2003), p. 48.
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examples of recount text can be found in the types of journal, diary, newspaper,
article, historical recount, letter, log, and timeline.
Based on the explanation above, it can be concluded that recount text is a
simple text represents the past events that experienced in daily life. Its purpose is
either to inform or to entertain the audience. On the other word, the main purpose
of recount writing is as a medium for the writer to share events, activities, and
experiences that occurred in the past related to his/her daily life in written form.
2. The Purposes of Recount Text
According to Hyland, the purpose of recount text is ―To reconstruct past experiences by retelling events in original sequence‖.10
On the other word, the
purpose of recount text is as a medium for the writer to share activities, events,
and experiences that happened in the past related to his/her daily life in written
form.
3. The Types of Recount Text
In common there are three types of recount text. The types of recount text
according to Anderson are:11
a. Personal recount: Retelling of an activity that the writer/speaker has been
personally involved in (e.g., oral anecdote, diary entry). This type is also
used in this research.
b. Factual recount: Recording the particulars of an incident (e.g., report of a
science experiment, police report, news report, historical account).
c. Imaginative recount: Taking on an imaginary role and giving details of
events (e.g., A day in the life of a Roman save; how I invented)
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Hyland, op. cit.
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4. The Generic Structure of Recount Text
Anderson & Anderson explained the generic structures of recount text as
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a. Orientation: Provides some basic information related to the event such as
who, what, where and when.
b. Events: Tells the events that happened in a chronological sequence.
c. Re-orientation: A conclusion of the story.
5. The Language Features of Recount Text
The language features of recount text are as follows:
a. Introducing personal participant, e.g., I, my group, etc.
b. Use of chronological connection, e.g., then, first, etc.
c. Use of linking verb, e.g., was, were, saw, heard, etc.
d. Use of action verb, e.g., look, go, change, etc.
e. Use of simple past tense.
6. The Example of Recount Text Here is the example of recount text.
MY FOOTBALL EXPERIENCE
Orientation
I really loved football. Every Saturday afternoon I practiced in school field with
my team and my coach.
Event 1
They were strong and smart players. My coach, Mr. Phillips was a kind person.
But, while he was coaching us, he was very discipline. He would grounded anyone who came late and not obeyed the team’s rules.
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Event 2
With Phillips, our team won many tournaments in many big cities. Our team
named Treble Maker because we had so many trophies and we had so many fans
too. Now, I still love football and have a team too.
Re-orientation
But, my parents warn me to play attention more to study, football just for hobby.
C.
Picture
1. The Nature of Picture
Picture is a drawing object and it is visual aids that are very useful for
teaching, especially for English teaching. Picture can really help the learners to
ease them in comprehending the meaning of a word, a sentence, or a paragraph.
By using picture, the learners can get the imagination about the objects or the
situations. Picture consists of lines and shapes which are drawn, painted, or
printed on a surface. It also shows a person, thing, or scene.
According to Wright, he stated that, ―pictures are not just an aspect of method, but through their representation of places, objects, and people they are
essential part of the overall experiences, we must help students to cope with.‖13 It
means that pictures can help the learners to understand the meaning of a word
because it represents the meaning of it. Through picture, students can see people,
places, and things from out of their own experiences.
From the explanation above, it can be concluded that picture is one of a
media in study which is able to be used to help the teacher in delivering a material
which is given to the students. This media is used to stimulate the participation of
the student in learning process. It is needed to make the learning process more
attractive and makes the material become easier to be accepted by the student.
One of media in learning process, picture series is also intended to increase student’s motivation. Through picture, language learners get both of it because
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they can directly see the object or the situation of the material. So, they can
remember it much longer from the sight.
2. The Kinds of Picture
According to Andrew Wright, there are 21 kinds of picture based on the
form, they are:
a. Checkchart for pictures
b. Pictures of a single objects
c. Pictures of one person
d. Pictures of famous people
e. Pictures of several people
f. Pictures of people in action
g. Pictures of places
h. Picture from history
i. Picture with a lot of information
j. Pictures of the news
k. Pictures of fantasies
l. Pictures of maps and symbols
m. Pairs of pictures
n. Pictures and texts
o. Sequence of picture (Picture series)
p. Related pictures
q. Single stimulating pictures
r. Ambiguous pictures
s. Bizarre pictures
t. Explanatory pictures
u. Student and teacher drawings14
As mentioned above, it can be concluded that there are so many kinds of
pictures. They can be useful for teachers and students to help them in mastering
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English. Those kinds of pictures also can be applied in teaching and learning
activities.
3. The Function of Picture
After identifying the definition and the kinds of pictures, it is also
necessary to know the functions of pictures are. Here are some functions of
picture for the teaching and learning activity. According to Andrew Wright, here
are some functions of pictures:15
a. Structures and Vocabulary
Pictures are very useful for presenting new grammatical and
vocabulary entries. They also help to provide the situations and the
contexts that light up the meaning of words or utterances, help the teachers
to avoid giving a long translation that might the learners become confuse.
b. Function and Situation
Pictures can be used for the revision from one lesson to another.
Pictures also can be used as the basis of the written work, for example
question writing. Pictures also can increase the learners’ motivation and
provide a useful practice material.
c. Skills
Pictures can be useful to give the learners a chance to practice the
language in real context or in the situations in which they can use it to
communicate their ideas.
Based on the statements above, it can be concluded that pictures can be
used by teachers and students whatever the emphasis of the syllabus they are
following. Pictures have some functions that related to structure and vocabulary,
function and situation, and skills.
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4. Picture as Media in the Writing Process
Pictures as media play important roles in the writing skill learning:16
1. Pictures can motivate the student and make him or her want to pay
attention and want to take part. This means using pictures can gain students’ interest to the material brought by their teacher. Motivating students will also give good result in class participation in gaining
their frequency to express their ideas from everything they can see in
the pictures.
2. Pictures contribute to the context in which the language is being
used. They bring the world into the classroom (a street scene or a
particular object). Pictures play big role in supplying ideas to
students mind because the world is depicted clearly through pictures.
This clear depiction brings language context to students because they
also can see the situation when the language can be use, the
participants, and also the purpose of using the utterance.
3. The pictures can be described in an objective way („This is a train.’)
or interpreted (It’s probably a local train.) or responded to
subjectivity (I like travelling by train.). The expansion of the ideas depends on students’ imagination and sensitivity in observing the pictures. In describing the pictures, students can be guided by their
teacher.
4. Pictures can cue responses to questions or cue substitutions through
controlled practice. In relationship to writing skill, students need
words to build a sentence, and sentences to build a paragraph, and
paragraphs to build a text. To assist pictures, a controlled practice
through guided task can be a good choice for teacher.
5. Pictures can stimulate and provide information to be referred to in
conversation, discussion, and storytelling. Ideas in form of words can
be obtained from pictures. After students got their ideas, teacher can
guide students to use their words in form of writing product.
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Pictures as media directly help students in writing by giving them
opportunities to produce their text. The opportunities given by pictures in writing
are classified by Wright as the following explanation:17
1. Opportunities to express their opinion. These opportunities are given
to students so they can write their ideas from the picture in the range
of opinion. For example, if objects in the pictures are jobs, students
can express their ideas about the payment of the job whether it is
well paid or not, whether it is outdoor or indoor job, and other
opinion related to the job.
2. Opportunities to express experience and feelings. Pictures can be
used to lure students’ memories about past experiences and their
feelings about them. The ideas are obtained by saying what the
experience is, their feeling whether it is bad or god, and also the
implication for their future after learning from past experience.
3. Opportunities to express speculation and opinions. After seeing
objects in pictures, students can make some speculations about the
information related to the object. If the object is people, the
information can be about age, family background feeling, and other
speculation about the people. When a thing is used as an object in the
picture, students can speculate about the use of the thing, the price,
the belongings, and any other speculations in the range of the picture.
A teacher must not have any fixed interpretation of the pictures so
that students will have wider opportunities in speculating.
4. Opportunities to express and debate opinions. Since every student
may have different opinions toward a picture, teacher can facilitate
them to conduct debate to get ideas to write. Every student can
enrich each other ideas by conducting debates.
5. Opportunities to dramatize. Picture can show an event. Prediction on
what is going to happen after the event, the cause of the event, can be
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dramatized. Every student can be given opportunities to predict it
based on their ability to dramatize the event to gather their ideas.
Based on the explanation above, it can be concluded that picture is one of
media to give opportunities to the students to reveal or express more than their
writing before, picture helps them to recall their past, to think critically, and to
bring them to their imagination about the idea of the pictures.
5. Picture Series
Betty Morgan defines a picture sequence as a series of pictures of a single
subject. Its function is to tell a story or a sequence of events.18 It means picture
sequence is a kind of picture which presents a chronological order. In this type, it
is presented in a series of picture that tells a story in some events. It usually tells
experience, legend, or fable story, etc. From this picture series, learners will be
easier to understand the meaning of a word, a sentence or event or a paragraph
after they saw the picture itself.
The definition of picture series above gives a clearly understanding that
this picture series is usually used to tell a story by telling the sequence of events
that happen in it. It is a series picture tells of one idea of story.
According to Wright, he states that picture series consists of cartoon strips
and instruction strips. Carton strips and instruction strips are potentially useful.
Experience will show the teacher which strips are the most useful. The strips can
be kept as they are and used to contextualize a story on description of a process.19
It means that picture series need to use by the teacher to make students think
chronologically on their writing based on which describe of a process. This
cartoon strips were the most found in daily life to represent picture sequences. It
can be used to contextualize a story, therefore learners can know the sequence of
events happen in that story to find out the relation between the picture and the
appropriate words to use.
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Betty Morgan Brown. Look here! Visual Aids in Language Teaching, (London: Language Teaching Series, 1973), p. 28.
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All of the explanation above, it can be concluded that a picture series is a
kind of pictures that has a series of an object or a situation is explained by some
pictures. This picture usually tells about a story, or an event about something that
happened. The sequence must be presented in chronological order.
6. Application of Using Picture Series in Teaching Writing of Recount Text Most of the students are lazy to write because they regard it as a complex
and difficult English language skill. In their thought, it needs a long process to
write something. They also are often having no idea about the topic that will be
written on their paper. Moreover, they are always getting stuck to tell and describe
the next plot of story after writing the introductory paragraph. Therefore, the
teacher can use picture series to help them develop their ability in writing from the
pictorial story.
In the classroom, the teacher can apply it to teach writing recount text.
After explaining about recount text, he/she can distribute the picture series to each
student, and then ask them to retell and rewrite the story into paragraph in
English. This method is very easy to be conducted by the teacher in the classroom,
and it will make the students feel fun in writing. Hence, teaching writing of
recount text by using picture series is an appropriate and recommended method
for the teachers to apply in the classroom in the teaching-learning activity.
7. The Example of Picture Series
Picture 2.1
Picture 2.2
The example of picture series 2
Picture 2.3
The example of picture series 3
D.
Previous Related Studies
The first previous study is a skripsi entitled Improving Students’ Ability in
Writing Recount Text Through Picture Sequences (A Classroom Action Research
at X Grade MA Darul Ma’arif Cipete) written by Puji Astuti, (Department of
English Education, Faculty of Tarbiyah and Teachers’ Training, UIN Syarif
Hidayatullah Jakarta 2011). From her research can be taken a conclusion that
using picture sequences can improve the students’ ability in writing recount text.
students in experimental class is higher than the mark of students in control
class.20
The second previous study is The Use of Real Picture Series in Teaching
Recount Text Writing written by Desy Yunita Sari Widarti et al. (English
Education Study Program, Language and Art Education Department, Teacher
Training Education Faculty of Tanjungpura University, Pontianak). The purpose
of this research is to know whether the use of real picture series is effective or not
in teaching recount text writing to the tenth year students of SMA Negeri 2 Sungai
Ambawang Kab. Kubu Raya, West Kalimantan Province in academic year
2013/2014. This research applied a pre-experimental research design in one group
pre-test post-test design. The sample of this research is the students of class XB
that consisted of 26 students. The instrument that used to collect the data is
written test. The pre-test was given by the researcher before the treatment while
post-test was given after the treatment. The data analyzed statistically. To prove
the effectiveness of using the real picture series in teaching recount text writing
the researcher applied the ES (Effect Size) formula. The result of the data shows
that the effect size is 2.6. Therefore, it can be concluded teaching writing recount
text through the real picture series is strong effective.21
From the two of the previous related studies above, there is similiarity in
this study that is discussing about the effect/effectiveness of using picture series on students’ ability in writing recount text. Meanwhile, the differences between this study and the previous study are this study is not Classroom Action Research
(CAR) and this study used t-test formula to find the result of the data. Also, the
method used in those studies is one group pre-test and post-test while this study
used quasi-experimental study with experimental class and controlled class as the
sample.
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Puji Astuti et al., Improving Students’ Ability in Writing Recount Text through Picture Sequences, 2011.
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E.
Conceptual Framework
Based on theoritical above, the writer synthesize that writing is one of four
basic skill that can not be mastered as easy as speaking. Writing is not just
combining some words or sentences, it has forms and rules that not equal with
something we use in conversation. We need a lot of practice and have interesting
techniques in order to make the students accustome to learn english. One of those
technique is the using of picture series in the teaching of recount text writing. The
writer assumes that picture series can be adapted in teaching learning English,
especially writing recount text. It works well for stories process and sequences of
events and it will help students more focus on the story that they will write. Then,
the use of picture series is more efficient and practice than words, they will be
easier to recall and to remember because those picture series will be exposed in
real life situation.
In addition, the writer assumes that the use of picture series can stimulate the student’s interest and motivation in writing, especially in recount text. It can help them to build up their ideas in writing the story by creating a topic and then
developing into some paragraphs. They will also learn how to write the story
grammatically to make a good composition in writing.
F.
Theoretical Hypothesis
The theoretical hypothesis of the study is as follows:
1. Alternative Hypothesis (Ha): There is effect of picture series on students’
writing ability of recount text.
2. Null Hypothesis (Ho): There is no effect of picture series on students’ writing
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A.
Place and Time of the Study
This research was held on 20th Nov up to 2nd Des 2016. This research was
conducted at SMP Nusantara Plus. It is located at Jl. Tarumanegara Dalam No. 1
Ciputat, Kota Tangerang Selatan, Banten.
B.
Method and Research Design
The method of this study was quantitative method. The researcher used in
this study was a experimental design. According to Creswell,
quasi-experimental design seeks to determine if a specific treatment influences an
outcome. The researcher assesses this by providing a specific treatment to one
group and with holding it from another and then determining how both groups
scored on an outcome. Experiments include true experiments, with the random
assignment of subjects to treatment conditions, and quasi-experiments that use
nonrandomized assignments. Include within quasi-experiments are single subject
design.1
In this research, the students in the experimental class were taught by
using Picture Series and the students in the controlled class were taught without
using Picture Series. The research was done for five meetings, including giving
the pre-test, treatment, and post-test. Pre-test was done to collect the data by measuring students’ performance before they received a treatment.
Meanwhile, post-test was done to measure students’ performance after a
treatment. There were two variables which involved in this research. They were
Picture Series as the independent variable and recount text as the dependent
variable.
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C.
Population and Sample
The population of this research was the eighth grade students of SMP
Nusantara Plus which consists of four classes. The total number of population was
104 students. Class VIII–1 consists of 25 students, class VIII–2 consists of 25
students, class VIII–3 consists of 27 and class VIII–4 consists of 27 students.
In selecting the sample, the researcher used purposive sampling technique.
Purposive sampling is also known as judgmental, selective or subjective sampling
is a sampling technique in which researcher relies on his or her own judgment
when choosing members of population to participate in the study. This technique
was used to determine the sample with certain consideration.2 There were two
classes as the sample. The first class was VIII–1 as the experimental class and the
second class was VIII–2 as the controlled class. The researcher chose VIII–1 and
VIII–2 as the sample, because the researcher was suggested by the English teacher
of SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat to do the research at both classes.
D.
The Research Instrument
The research instrument used in this research was a writing test. The
researcher gave the writing test in pre-test and post-test. Pre-test was given to the
students to measure their writing ability of recount text before the treatment while
the post-test was given to the students to measure their writing ability of recount
text after getting the treatment. The topic that was given to the students both in
experimental and controlled class is the same. The topic of pre-test is about ―My
Experience that Happened in My Life‖ and the topic of post-test is about ―My Unforgettable Moment/Event/Experience that Happened in My Life‖.
E.
The Technique of Data Collection
The technique of collecting data in this research used quantitative data. The quantitative data obtained from the students’ score in pre-test and post-test. In
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analyzing and assessing the students’ writing test in pre-test and post-test, the analytic scale was used as described in table 3.1.3
Table 3.1
Scale for assessing the students’ writing test
Categories Score Criteria
Content 30—27 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD:
Knowledge. Substantive. Thorough
development of thesis. relevant to assigned
topic.
26—22 GOOD TO AVERAGE:
Some knowledge of subject. Adequate range.
Limited development of thesis. Mostly
relevant to topic, but lacks detail.
21—17 FAIR TO POOR:
Limited knowledge of subject. Little
substance. Inadequate development of topic.
16—13 VERY POOR:
Does not show knowledge of subject.
Non-substantive, non pertinent, or not enough to
evaluate.
Organization 20—18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD:
Fluent expression. Ideas clearly
stated/supported. Succinct. Wellorganized.
Logical sequencing. Cohesive.
17—14 GOOD TO AVERAGE:
Somewhat choppy. Loosely organized but
main ideas stand out. Limited support.
Logical but incomplete sequencing.
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Categories Score Criteria
Organization 13—10 FAIR TO POOR:
Non-fluent. Ideas confused or disconnected.
Lacks logical sequencing development.
9—7 VERY POOR:
Does not communicate. No
organization.or not enough to evaluate.
Vocabulary 20—18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD:
Sophisticated range. Effective word/idiom
choice and usage. Word form mastery.
Appropriate register.
17—14 GOOD TO AVERAGE:
Adequate range. Occasional errors of
word/idiom form, choice, usage but meaning
not obscured.
13—10 FAIR TO POOR:
Limited range. Frequent errors of
word/idiom form, choice, usage. Meaning
confused or obscured.
9—7 VERY POOR:
Essentially translation. Little knowledge of
English vocabulary, idioms, word form. Or
not enough to evaluate.
Language Use 25—22 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD:
Efffective complex constructions. Few errors
of agreement, tense, number, word
order/function, articles, pronouns,
Categories Score Criteria
Language Use 21—18 GOOD TO AVERAGE:
Effective but simple constructions. Minor
problems in complex constructions. Several
errors of agreement, tense, number, word
order/function, articles, pronouns, prepositions
but meaning seldom obscured.
17—11 FAIR TO POOR:
Major problems in simple/complex
constructions. Requent errors of negation,
agreement, tense, number, word order/function,
articles, pronouns, prepositions and/or
fragments, run-ons, deletions. Meaning confused
or obscured.
10—5 VERY POOR:
Virtually no mastery of sentence construction
rules. Dominated by errors. Does not
communicate. Or not enough to evaluate.
Mechanic 5 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD:
Demonstrates mastery of conventions. Few
errors of spelling. Punctuation. Capitalization.
Paragraphing.
4 GOOD TO AVERAGE:
Occasional errors of spelling. Punctuation.
Capitalization. Paragraphing. Meaning not
obscured
3 FAIR TO POOR:
Frequent errors of spelling. Punctuation.
Capitalization. Paragraphing. Poor handwriting.
Categories Score Criteria
Mechanic 2 VERY POOR:
No mastery of conventions. Dominated by errors
of spelling. Punctuation. Capitalization.
Paragraphing. Handwriting illegible. Or not
enough to evaluate.
F.
The Technique of Data Analysis
The researcher analyzed the data by using statistical analysis. In analyzing the
data, the t-test was used to find out the effect of pictures series on students’
writing ability of recount text. The formula of t-test is as follows:4
Mx : Mean of the score of experimental class
My : Mean of the score of controlled class
SEᴍx : Standard error of experimental class
SEᴍy : Standard error of controlled class
The steps that must be done in calculation are:
1. Determining mean of variable X, with the formula as follows:
Mx : Mean of the score of experimental class
x : Sum of the students’ score of experimental class
N : Number of the students of experimental class
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2. Determining mean of variable Y, with the formula as follows:
My : Mean of the score of controlled class
: Sum of the students’ score of controlled class N : Number of the students of controlled class
3. Determining standard of deviation score of variable X, with formula as follows:
√
SDx : Standard deviation score of experimental class
4. Determining the standard deviation score of variable Y, with formula as
follows:
√
Sdy : Standard deviation score of controlled class
5. Determining standard errors of mean of variable X, with the formula as
follows:
√ SEMx : Standard error of experimental class
6. Determining standard errors of mean of variable Y, with the formula as
follows:
√
7. Determining of standard errors of different mean variable X and variable Y,
with the formula as follows:
√
8. Determining
t
o, with the formula as follows:
Mx : Mean of the score of experimental class
My : Mean of the score of controlled class
SEMx : Standard error of experimental class
SEMy : Standard error of controlled class
9. Determining
t-
table with the degree of freedom (df) in significant level 5% and1% with the formula as follows:
Df : Degree of freedom
N : Number of students of experimental class
N : Number of students of controlled class
G.
Statistical Hypothesis
The hypothesis of statistic that used in this research is:
H0 : μ1 = μ2
Ha : μ1 μ2
H0 :Null Hypothesis
Ha : Alternative Hypothesis
μ1 : The students’ achievement in writing recount text, who are taught by using
picture series.
μ2 : The students’ achievement in writing recount text, who are taught without
The assumption of the hypothesis as follows:
1. If t-test > t-table in significant level of 5% and 1%, the null hypothesis is
rejected and the alternative hypothesis is accepted. It means that there is significant difference between the students’ score in learning writing recount text by using picture series and the students’ score in learning writing recount
text without using picture series at SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat (μ1 μ2).
There is effect of picture series on students’ writing ability of recount text.
2. If t-test < t-table in significant level of 5% and 1%, the null hypothesis is
accepted and the alternative hypothesis is rejected. It means that there is no significant difference between the students’ score in learning writing recount text by using picture series and the students’ score in learning writing recount
text without using picture series at SMP Nusantara Plus Ciputat (μ1 = μ2).
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A.
Research Finding
The part shows the general description of the students’ scores in both the experimental class and controlled class. The description is divided into some
sections: pre-test, post-test, gained score, and data analysis.
And it is the data were collected from the results of students’ scores of pre -test and post--test in both experimental class and controlled class. The followings
are the description:
1. Data Description
[image:45.595.108.515.228.763.2]Table 4.1
The students’ scores of pre-test of experimental class (VIII-1) & controlled class (VIII-2)
No. Experimental Class Score Controlled Class Score
1 Student 1 76 Student 1 65
2 Student 2 77 Student 2 76
3 Student 3 73 Student 3 74
4 Student 4 70 Student 4 76
5 Student 5 73 Student 5 78
6 Student 6 71 Student 6 75
7 Student 7 73 Student 7 78
8 Student 8 79 Student 8 79
9 Student 9 73 Student 9 76
10 Student 10 72 Student 10 65
11 Student 11 76 Student 11 76
12 Student 12 68 Student 12 75
13 Student 13 65 Student 13 80
14 Student 14 73 Student 14 68
16 Student 16 77 Student 16 81
17 Student 17 69 Student 17 76
18 Student 18 70 Student 18 80
19 Student 19 77 Student 19 75
20 Student 20 77 Student 20 76
21 Student 21 68 Student 21 75
22 Student 22 77 Student 22 77
23 Student 23 65 Student 23 70
24 Student 24 71 Student 24 74
25 Student 25 72 Student 25 80
Total Score 1808 1880
Mean 72.32 75.2
As mentioned of scores in pre-test in the table, it can be clarified that the
mean score of pre-test in experimental class was 72.32, while the mean score of
pre-test in controlled class was 75.2. And from the scores of both classes, it means that there was a difference between the students’ achievement of scores in pre-test (experimental class and controlled class), the controlled class got the higher mean
Chart 4.1
The students’ score of pre-test of experimental class & controlled class
Table 4.2
The students’ scores of post-test of experimental class (VIII-1) & controlled class (VIII-2)
No. Experimental Class Score Controlled Class Score
1 Student 1 74 Student 1 79
2 Student 2 85 Student 2 78
3 Student 3 81 Student 3 80
4 Student 4 82 Student 4 75
5 Student 5 81 Student 5 75
6 Student 6 84 Student 6 73
7 Student 7 83 Student 7 75
8 Student 8 86 Student 8 81
9 Student 9 79 Student 9 74
10 Student 10 77 Student 10 73
11 Student 11 82 Student 11 80
12 Student 12 82 Student 12 72
13 Student 13 81 Student 13 85
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4 9
7 8
14
0 2 4 6 8 10 12 14 16
X Class Y Class
Pre-Test Score
14 Student 14 79 Student 14 75
15 Student 15 81 Student 15 83
16 Student 16 86 Student 16 83
17 Student 17 79 Student 17 80
18 Student 18 81 Student 18 84
19 Student 19 79 Student 19 80
20 Student 20 81 Student 20 79
21 Student 21 79 Student 21 77
22 Student 22 79 Student 22 79
23 Student 23 79 Student 23 69
24 Student 24 82 Student 24 78
25 Student 25 79 Student 25 84
Total Score 2021 1951
Mean 80.84 78.04
The table 4.2 above informs that the mean score of post-test in
experimental class was 80.84, and the mean score of post-test in controlled class
was 78.04. It is means that there was a significant score of experimental class and
controlled class in post-test, controlled class was increased in post-test session
than in pre-test. But, for this session, the experimental class got the higher score
than the controlled class. It proves that there is effect of picture series on students’
Chart 4.2
The students’ score of post-test of experimental class and control class
After showing the comparison of students’ pre-test and post-test scores, the table shows the gained score among those two classes/the gained score can be seen from the increasing score of students’ pre-test scores compared with students’ post-test scores.
Table 4.3
The students’ gained scores comparison between pre-test and post-test in experimental class (VIII-1) and controlled class (VIII-2)
Gained Score
No. Experimental Class Score Controlled Class Score
1 Student 1 -2 Student 1 14
2 Student 2 8 Student 2 2
3 Student 3 8 Student 3 6
4 Student 4 12 Student 4 -1
5 Student 5 8 Student 5 -3
6 Student 6 13 Student 6 -2
0 2 4 6 8 10 12 14 16
X Class Y Class
Post-Test Score
7 Student 7 10 Student 7 -3
8 Student 8 7 Student 8 2
9 Student 9 6 Student 9 -2
10 Student 10 5 Student 10 8
11 Student 11 6 Student 11 4
12 Student 12 14 Student 12 -3
13 Student 13 16 Student 13 5
14 Student 14 6 Student 14 7
15 Student 15 15 Student 15 8
16 Student 16 9 Student 16 2
17 Student 17 10 Student 17 4
18 Student 18 11 Student 18 4
19 Student 19 2 Student 19 5
20 Student 20 4 Student 20 3
21 Student 21 11 Student 21 2
22 Student 22 2 Student 22 2
23 Student 23 14 Student 23 -1
24 Student 24 11 Student 24 4
25 Student 25 7 Student 25 4
Total Gained Score 213 71
Mean 8.52 2.84
The table 4.3 showed that the minimum gained score of experimental class
was -2 and the minimum score of controlled class was -3. The highest score of
experimental class is 16 and controlled class is 14. The average gained score of
Chart 4.3
The students’ gain score of experimental class and controlled class
2. Data Analysis
The data of the students’ was analyzed by using t-test to prove whether there was any significant different between the students’ writing ability of recount
text in experimental class as the X variable and controlled class as the Y variable.
But, before using the formula of t-test, the students’ score in the experimental and
controlled class were tabulated to calculate the gained score of each class. It can
[image:51.595.108.518.110.550.2]be seen as follows:
Table 4.4
Statistical Calculation of Gained Score Both the Experimental and Controlled Group Class
No.
X Y X-MX Y-MY
(X-MX)² (Y-MY)²
1 -2 14 -11 11 121 121
2 8 2 -1 -1 1 1
3 8 6 -1 3 1 9
4 12 -1 3 -4 9 16
0 5 10 15 20 25
X Class Y Class
Gain Score
5 8 -3 -1 -6 1 36
6 13 -2 4 -5 16 25
7 10 -3 1 -6 1 36
8 7 2 -2 -1 4 1
9 6 -2 -3 -5 9 25
10 5 8 -4 5 16 25
11 6 4 -3 1 9 1
12 14 -3 5 -6 25 36
13 16 5 7 2 49 4
14 6 7 -3 4 9 16
15 15 8 6 5 36 25
16 9 2 0 -1 0 1
17 10 4 1 1 1 1
18 11 4 2 1 4 1