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Sekolah Teknik Elektro dan InformatikaGood Paper
• Proper language
• Clear contribution
• Timely
• Good references
• Good figures and tables
Distribution Network Reconfiguration Using Binary
Particle Swarm Optimization for Optimizing Losses
and Voltage Stability Index
• Authors: first, second, and third
• Too long key words
• Based on abstract and introduction, I couldn’t find the main
contribution of this paper. Particle Swarm Optimization can be
obtained in somewhere else. It looks that this work is still in “napak tilas” stage.
Simulation Design of Trajectory Planning Robot
Manipulator
• The English is difficult to understand
• Optimal manipulator robot control to achieve the desired trajectory points requires a research. Simulation is one of the solutions to
represent robot performance research that will be made without using hardware.
An Approach for Risk Estimation in Information
Security Using Text Mining and Jaccard Method
• You can not put this sentence in the abstract “Nowadays, information becomes important asset for enterprises to support their business.”
• If not really necessary, don’t put any figure in the introduction.
• I couldn’t find the description of the main contribution in the
introduction.
Features for Cross Spectral Image Matching : A
Survey
• You can not put this sentence in the abstract “In the recent years, cross spectral matching has been gaining attention in various biometric systems for identification and verification purposes.”
• Many researchers are focused to propose new robust feature extraction method. Feature extraction is a process to obtain information or
characteristic of an image. The matching accuracy depends on the features or descriptors used in the systems. Therefore various studies were
developed to find a robust feature [9-10]. A survey on state of the art feature descriptor in cross spectral matching that is used in image
recognition is carried out in this paper. In this paper, we describe several feature extraction methods based on the representation of VL and thermal image features. What your contribution?
Developing Corpora using Word2vec and
Wikipedia for Word Sense Disambiguation
• Authors : first and second
• You cannot have only one sentence in one paragraph
A Real-time Application Framework for Web-Based
Speech Recognition Using HTTP/2 and SSE
• Very good paper
LBtrans-Bot: A Latin-to-Balinese Script
Transliteration Robotic System based on Noto Sans
Balinese Font
• Too long abstract
• The content looks good but I couldn’t find the description about the
The Business Elements for SMEs Sector
Manufacture
Comparison of Multiscale Entropy for Lung Sound
Classification
• If not really necessary, don’t put a figure in the introduction.
• I did not find a clear contribution of this paper
• The performance comparison of multiscale entropy for various entropy
measurement techniques has never previously been done. In this study, we compared the use of multiscale entropy for various entropy measurement
techniques for lung sound classification. Entropy measurement method in this study included Shannon entropy [18], spectral entropy [18], Renyi entropy [19], wavelet entropy [20], approximate entropy [21], sample entropy [22],
permutation entropy [23], and Tsallis entropy [24]. Those eighth entropies measurements are a representation of two kind entropy measurement
techniques: spectral entropy and embedding entropy. Embedding entropy was calculated directly from the signal in the time domain, and the spectral entropy was calculated from the signal amplitude in the frequency domain. This research is expected to obtain the best multiscale entropy techniques for sound
Eigenvalue of Analytic Hierarchy Process as
The Determinant for Class Target on
Classification Algorithm
• The English is not good. “Data Mining has the characteristics in its process to achieve a desired result.” What the meaning?
• I couldn’t find the clear contribution: This research tries to simulate case study based on dataset from field observation, interview and data acquisition process from several
experts. The main objective is to collect unsupervised learning data into supervised learning as a prediction model. Based on the results of data collection, variables and observations, there are 7 variables and 38 sub variables used in determining the
prediction of Timely Graduation of Students in UIN Sultan Syarif Kasim Riau Indonesia. The problem is that there is no target class variable in the data set which is used to do the prediction. While one of the conditions of supervised learning is the existence of
target class [11]. Nevertheless, in the research conducted, there are several assumptions which can be done to determine the target variable such as by using pairwise
comparison from all variable used.
Comparison GLCM and LBP Methods for
Authenticity Rupiah Currency
• Kata kunci: Comparison, K-NN, Matrix, Pattern, Rupiah Currency
• You cannot have only one sentence in one paragraph.
Efficient Implementation of Mean, Variance and
Skewness Statistic Formula for Image Processing
Using FPGA Device
• The English is bad
Speaker Recognition in Content-Based Image
Retrieval for a high degree of accuracy
• I couldn’t find the main contribution “Problem formulation in this research was on concluding the result of speaker recognition for a high degree of accuracy. The system of speaker recognition consists identification system and verification, identification system using fuzzy Mamdani method, and then verification system uses Manhattan distance method. The speaker
recognition was compared voice of human recording with human recording voice on the database.Therefore, the result of this research is to build
speaker recognition system using extraction of feature row mean image with consideration of feature vector size using kekre transform as the transformation method. Therefore, the result of this research is to build speaker recognition system using extraction of feature row mean image with consideration of feature vector size using kekre transform as the transformation method.”
An Artificial Neural Network Approach for
Detecting Skin Cancer
• I couldn’t find the main contribution “Based on the above
explanation, this study aims to present diagnose of melanoma skin cancer at an early stage. It applies feature extraction method of the first order for feature extraction based on texture in order to get high degree of accuracy with method of classification using artificial neural network (ANN). The method used is training and testing phases
Wireless Power Transfer using the Concept of
Magnetic Coil Resonant System
• No contribution can be found.
Development Fuzzy Inference System Trail of
Albireo Star Using Surface Meteorological
Parameter over ITERA Astronomical Observatory
(IAO)
• You have to clarify better the contribution “Many researchers have used FIS application to controlling quadcopter in dynamical
movement and optimization of tank irrigation System to improve
conventional irrigation system [6, 7] due to FIS have the capability to develop the model with the highest accuracy [8, 9]. Thus, in this study the FIS development of trail Albireo (β Cyg) star using meteorological data were combined by Artificial Neural Network (ANN) in near future to estimate seeing star value namely the seeing star modelling based Adaptive Neuro-Fuzzy Inference System (ANFIS) using surface
Increasing the Detail and Realism in Web3D
Distributed World
• Don’t put a figure in the introduction
• I couldn’t find the contribution “The purpose of this research is to find out the effects of intensive use of polygons to create large scale high-detail models in order to build an online representation of campus structures using Web3D technology. Primary requirement for the site was that it has to be able to be traveled by visitors in high detail as if they actually cruised inside it, without too much noticeable
degradation in visual performance caused by intensive use of polygons and their visual effects. The previous experimental research has developed a world which relied heavily on images to create impression of shapes on low-poly base models. The world has quick loading time and fast response due to its minimum use of polygons. However, responses of the visitors were far from expectations because the display of model with minimal detail has failed to make the visitors felt like they are visiting and interacting in the campus building complex that they have known. Further research need to be done to increase the visual quality which will in turn enhancing the overall experience of visitors, by using more detailed polygons as the primary objects representing the campus buildings. Additional details must not slow down the transfer of files from server to
Development of Low-Cost Fiber Optic Based
Ammonia Detector for Fishpond Application
• The English is bad
• I don’t know the contribution. “Many researchers have used FIS application to controlling quadcopter in dynamical movement and optimization of tank irrigation system to improve conventional
irrigation system [6, 7] due to FIS have the capability to develop the model with the highest accuracy [8, 9]. Thus, in this study the FIS development of trail Albireo (β Cyg) star using meteorological data were combined by Artificial Neural Network (ANN) in near future to estimate seeing star value namely the seeing star modelling based Adaptive Neuro-Fuzzy Inference System (ANFIS) using surface
Implementation of Marker-Based Augmented
Reality on Elementary School Geometry Textbook
• The English is bad. “Geometry is one of material that is learned in mathematic.” What do you mean by material?
• What is the main contribution. “On this research will be implemented marker based tracking method on application and geometry learning for elementary school. With this research is expected geometry
application based augmented reality with this marker based tracking method can show 3 dimension geometry then it can add elementary
student’s interest and understanding which learn it.”
AHP-TOPSIS for Analyze Job Performance with
Factor Evaluation System and Process Mining
• What is the main contribution? “This paper is a continuation of
Anomaly Detection Based on Control-flow Pattern
of Parallel Business Processes
• I don’t understand what is the main contribution. “To conduct process discovery, a graph database is used in this research. At present need, enterprises do not only need to manage larger data volumes, but also
generate information from existing data. Therefore, the relations between data are becoming more important. Database technology is required to
store information of interconnected activities. Therefore, a graph database is flexible to be applied in business needs [15]. A graph database is used to store data and show relations between the data [16]. Not only to store
Electromagnetic Interference Shielding in
Unmanned Aerial Vehicle for Lightning Strike
• What is the main contribution? “This paper focus on application of
TEMPERATURE AND HUMIDITY MONITORING ON
HYDROPONIC FARMING BASED ON ARDUINO UNO
• It is not clear the background and the main contribution.
