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Some corrections INTRODUCTION Line 43
The structural heart disease procedures in the US has also been growth with more than 10,000 procedures in 2013 within to years after approval,……
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The structural heart disease procedures in the US have also been growing with more than 10,000 procedures in 2013 within two years after approval, ….
RESULTS AND DISCUSSION Line 219 -244
In Poland, PCI procedure (113928) was the second most performed procedure after CAG (208842) [16], whereas in Thailand the average number of PCI and CAG cases per year was 700-800 and 1300, respectively [17].
Please indicate the measurement period in Poland. Is it in the same year (2015 – 2018) as for in Indonesia.
PCI procedure (113928), CAG (208842). (113928), (208842) what does it mean?
number of measurement Line 230
… actually perfumed by resident ….
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… actually performed by resident …..
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Primary references: 19 out of 22 = 86% and 91% in recent journals (<5 years) and 9% is journal between 5 to 10 years.
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This article is written in excellent English, and the content is important to be published since it contains the information on the radiation-risk of interventionists who perform
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Article No. : 1012
Title of Paper : Eye Lens Doses Received By Radiation Workers In Interventional Medical Procedures
Comment on Descriptions 1. The Title is Appropriate*
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2. Abstract
The Content and Length of the abstract are appropriate*
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3. Main Text
The results are important to be reported*
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Comment : Some corrections INTRODUCTION Line 43
The structural heart disease procedures in the US has also been growth with more than 10,000 procedures in 2013 within to years after approval,……
Change to
The structural heart disease procedures in the US have also been growing with more than 10,000 procedures in 2013 within two years after approval, ….
RESULTS AND DISCUSSION Line 219 -244
In Poland, PCI procedure (113928) was the second most performed procedure after CAG (208842) [16], whereas in Thailand the average number of PCI and CAG cases per year was 700-800 and 1300, respectively [17].
Please indicate the measurement period in Poland. Is it in the same year (2015 – 2018) as for in Indonesia.
PCI procedure (113928), CAG (208842). (113928), (208842) what does it mean? number of measurement
The paper is of high scientific quality (scientifically sound)*
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The paper is well organized (experimental/theory/results/conclusion)*
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The length of the paper is appropriate to the content*
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Comment :
The references are adequate in complete / consist of 85% primary references and recent journals*
[ x] Completely correct [ ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
Primary references: 19 out of 22 = 86% and 91% in a recent journal (<5 years) and 9% is journal between 5 to 10 years.
The English is alright*
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Final Comments To the Author*
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This article is written in excellent English, and the content is important to be published since it contains the information on the radiation-risk of interventionists who perform the interventional medical procedures. However, the manuscript still needs to be revised in some parts. Please revise the manuscript according to the reviewer's comment or suggestion.
This paper is recommended to be [ ] Accepted without further revision [X ] Accepted with minor revision [ ] Major Revision is required [ ] Rejected
