ATOM INDONESIA JOURNAL
Referee’s Report
Article No. : # 916
Title of Paper:
Assessment of Ionizing Radiation Effect on the Hematological Parameters of Radiation-Exposed Workers
Comment on Descriptions 1. The Title is Appropriate*
[ X ] Completely correct [ ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
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2. Abstract
The Content and Length of the abstract are appropriate*
[ X ] Completely correct [ ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
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3. Main Text
The results are important to be reported*
[ ] Completely correct [X ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
Several paragraphs still need improvement (attached).
The paper is of high scientific quality (scientifically sound)*
[ X ] Completely correct [ ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
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The paper is well organized (experimental/theory/results/conclusion)*
[ ] Completely correct [ X ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
The length of the paper is appropriate to the content*
[ X ] Completely correct [ ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
The references are adequate in complete / consist of 85% primary references and recent journals*
[ X ] Completely correct [ ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
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The English is alright*
[ X ] Completely correct [ ] Partly correct [ ] not Correct at all
Comment :
Final Comments To the Author*
Line Number Comment :
104-120
Information about several government hospitals should be stated in more detail how many hospitals and where is the location (located in a big city on Java or outside Java?)
Explain how controls are chosen and what are the criteria.
122-131
Explain how to store the samples.
133-147
It would be very good if this paragraph explains whether the laboratory used for analysis of all these parameters has been accredited in implementing ISO 17025.
188-200
Compare the results obtained with the results of other related research.
219
Compare the trend of equivalent dose with RBC obtained from this research with the results of other related research.
326-328
Add the correlation RBCs level with the length of time working using Figures Confidential Comments to the EIC:
Comment :
This article has been well prepared and in accordance with the scope of the Atom Indonesia Journal. However, this article still requires several improvements according to the suggestions above.
This paper is recommended to be [ ] Accepted without further revision [ X ] Accepted with minor revision [ ] Major Revision is required [ ] Rejected
