ATOM INDONESIA JOURNAL
Editor’s Report
Article No. : #835
Title of Paper :
Ordered Structure Analysis of Mesoporous Silica Using Small Angle X-Ray Scattering
Comment on Descriptions 1. The Title is Appropriate*
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Comment :
Change into: Ordered Structure Analysis of Prepared Mesoporous Silica Using Small Angle X-Ray Scattering.
2. Abstract
The Content and Length of the abstract are appropriate*
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Comment :
Your analysis results should be informed in the Abstract.
3. Main Text
The results are important to be reported*
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Comment :
The paper is of high scientific quality (scientifically sound)*
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Comment :
State of the art of the sample preparation method should be added
The paper is well organized (experimental/theory/results/conclusion)*
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Comment :
The length of the paper is appropriate to the content*
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Comment :
Your results should be presented together with original SBA-15 and SBA-16 data or that prepared by other researchers for comparisons.
The references are adequate in complete / consist of 85% primary references and recent journals*
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The English is alright*
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Final Comments To the Author*
Line Number Comment :
157
.... the sample code P is prepared using ....
174
SAXS (Small Angle X-ray Scattering)
178-179
No state of the art on selecting the variables. Please state
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Please combined Figs 1(a) and 1(b) into one figure. Also Figs. 2(a) and 2(b), Figs.
4(a) and 4(b).
291-292
No description for pictures depicted in Figs. 3(a) and (b)>
332
N8? There is no information about sample code N8.
324-347
There is no scientific explanation about the increase/decrease pore volume due to the varied composition and or preparation.
Please compared your results with the original SBA-15 and SBA-16 or results by other researchers.
Confidential Comments to the EIC:
Comment :
This paper is recommended to be [ ] Accepted without further revision [ ] Accepted with minor revision [√] Major Revision is required [ ] Rejected
